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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: Even many Christians have criticized certain aspects of the story's portrayal of Christian doctrine and the faith's character, the scope of prayer and miracles, etc. Many Catholics have furthermore stated that it misrepresents their faith (allegorized as Slytherin).
* AsTheGoodBookSays: In a variation, characters actually cite Biblical verses in their dialogue.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: Even many Christians have criticized certain aspects of the story's portrayal of Christian doctrine and the faith's character, the scope of prayer and miracles, etc. Many Catholics have furthermore stated that it misrepresents their faith (allegorized as Slytherin).
Slytherin) such as the author conflating an icon (an object that otherwise holds religious value by what it represents, such as a statue of Jesus Christ or a necklace bearing a Cross, but has no religious value on its own) vs an idol (an object that, in itself, is holy and worshipped and may even be considered a body for a godly entity).
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* ScienceIsWrong: This is basically Hagrid's argument against Petunia's evolutionist claims. She tells Hagrid that Evolution is real, and Hagrid fires back with "Prove it" and somehow this stops Petunia dead in her tracks and she has zero response. It comes up multiple times that Evolutionism is equivalent in sin to being addicted to drugs.
-->Aunt Petunia could only stare at him; and her big mouth hung open dumbly. Here she thought she was so educated; and always demanded that Christians prove what they believed in; but she couldn't even prove her own religion. It was then that Harry knew who the smart one here was!
-->Aunt Petunia could only stare at him; and her big mouth hung open dumbly. Here she thought she was so educated; and always demanded that Christians prove what they believed in; but she couldn't even prove her own religion. It was then that Harry knew who the smart one here was!
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* TheWarOnStraw: A kinda weird use of it. At first, especially within the first two chapters, it's used very obviously. Petunia is treated as an unreasonable atheist who believes solely in evolution, and she's given zero chance to defend her position despite claiming to know so much about it. However, in the final chapter this is weirdly flipped on its head where Voldermort, the defacto villain and atheist of the story, is the ''most'' reasonable character and tries to show he's not a bad guy while absolutely none of the religious cast give him even a moments thought, openly berating his atheism and supposed acts before basically trying to pray his evil away. Whether this was intential is entirely based on the YMMV argument of this being a TrollFic.
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** When Voldermort finally ''does'' reveal himself, he's not even evil. He's basically just an atheist and the characters shout angrily at him while refusing any of his explanations where he outright states he isn't doing what they insist he is. It becomes clear after some time that none of them will listen to reason, and he simply walks back to his car. Quite the farcry from canon Voldemort who would level a parking lot of people just because he was annoyed with an underling.
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* AffablyEvil: The BigBad of the story, Voldemort, is treated nothing like his canon counterpart. Instead, he's basically a lobbyist who is pushing for the separation of Church and State, and the only reason it's evil is because the main characters are stating that somehow he will make it legal to feed Christians to lions. We never actually see what bill it is that Voldemort is trying to pass through Congress, but he's hardly an evil warlock hellbent on condemnation of the muggle world and instead more of a hardcore atheist who is perfectly fine interacting with the United States Government.
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* ArtisticLicenseGeography: The story outright sets itself both at Privet Drive and Hogwarts castle, both of which are located in Europe (Hogwarts in Scotland and Privet Drive in England), however they make constant reference to the US Constitution, Congress, Freedom of Religion, and southern hospitality. The characters keep making a big deal out of Voldermort trying to pass a bill through Congress that would basically outlaw Christianity, but none of that would affect Harry or the school in any way ''given they don't even live in that country''. This would be the equivalent of a fanfiction about "Fantastic Beasts and Where They Live" being concerned about the unemployment problem plaguing England despite the film being placed in New York, USA.
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* {{Chickification}}: Minerva and Hermione become victims of this. Minerva goes from strict but kind teacher to Dumbledore’s placid blonde {{Housewife}} and Hermione is Harry’s SatelliteLoveInterest, who’s main attributes aside from that are [[PinkMeansFeminine loving pink]] and her constant offers to cook and clean.
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* AdaptationalAttractiveness: The notoriously greasy Severus Snape is now the "ruggedly handsome" "Mr. Snape." [[AuthorAppeal With chest hair. There are too many passages about his chest hair.]]
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* EasyEvangelism: Harry instantly converts Draco from a Ravenclaw Hat to a Gryffindor Hat by out-praying him.
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* FemaleMisogynist: Every "good" female character and, if it's not a TrollFic, the author. What else would you expect from someone using the username, "proudhousewife"?
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* HollywoodAtheist: Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading [[{{UsefulNotes/RichardDawkins}} "the Dawkins."]]
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** Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading [[{{UsefulNotes/RichardDawkins}} "the Dawkins."]]
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* InNameOnly: Basically every single character, but the Dursleys and Voldemort are some of the most glaringly obvious examples. The Dursleys are a nice, loving family, Petunia is a career-woman, and Voldemort is [[spoiler: an internet-troll mocking atheist stereotypes by deliberately posting exaggerated versions of them on his Reddit-account.]]
* InstantExpert: Harry somehow knows the Bible inside-out from the moment he converts to Christianity, referencing a specific passage as the reason why he won't hold the Dursleys' treatment of him against them despite the fact that the narrative leaves absolutely no time in which he could have read it. He is also shown time and time again to be a far better Christian than anyone else in the story and clearly understanding the will of God perfectly, as demonstrated in [[spoiler: Harry and Draco's "pray-off".]]
* InstantExpert: Harry somehow knows the Bible inside-out from the moment he converts to Christianity, referencing a specific passage as the reason why he won't hold the Dursleys' treatment of him against them despite the fact that the narrative leaves absolutely no time in which he could have read it. He is also shown time and time again to be a far better Christian than anyone else in the story and clearly understanding the will of God perfectly, as demonstrated in [[spoiler: Harry and Draco's "pray-off".]]
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* InNameOnly: Basically every single character, but the Dursleys and Voldemort are some of the most glaringly obvious examples. The Dursleys are a nice, loving family, Petunia is a career-woman, career woman, and Voldemort is [[spoiler: an internet-troll internet troll mocking atheist stereotypes by deliberately posting exaggerated versions of them on his Reddit-account.Reddit account.]]
* InstantExpert: Harry somehow knows the Bibleinside-out inside out from the moment he converts to Christianity, referencing a specific passage as the reason why he won't hold the Dursleys' treatment of him against them despite the fact that the narrative leaves absolutely no time in which he could have read it. He is also shown time and time again to be a far better Christian than anyone else in the story and clearly understanding the will of God perfectly, as demonstrated in [[spoiler: Harry and Draco's "pray-off".]]
* InstantExpert: Harry somehow knows the Bible
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** One can be found [[https://www.deviantart.com/storygirl000/gallery/65459979/Utter-Tripe-Reviews here]], courtesy of ''Fanfic/UtterTripeReviews''.
** One can be found [[https://www.deviantart.com/storygirl000/gallery/65459979/Utter-Tripe-Reviews here]], courtesy of ''Fanfic/UtterTripeReviews''.
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* AuthorAppeal: proudhousewife is quite fixated on "Mr. Snape" and his chest hair.
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* RedheadInGreen: All of the members of the redheaded Weasley family are in Slytherin, resulting in this trope.
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* RelatedInAdaptation: Hermione is Dumbledore's daughter in this fic.
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* FemaleMisogynist: Every "good" female character and, if it's not a TrollFic, the authorauthor. What else would you expect from someone using the username, "proudhousewife"?
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* EnemyMine: Dumbledore explains that there aren't enough Gryffindor Hats to defeat Voldemort and that's why they need to ally with the other Hats. The author apparently considers this a very iffy proposition that threatens to compromise Gryffindor Hat values.
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* KidHasAPoint: Sometimes, the child characters will raise points that the author clearly agrees with, but which the "good" adults are apparently too tactful to put so starkly. This is typically followed by the narration ruminating about the innocent wisdom of "little ones" (for some reason, the author refuses to say the word "children").
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* PositiveDiscrimination: The portrayal of Dean Thomas. It's subtle at first. The adverb "articulately" is often attached to his speaking, but it's easy to miss any meaning here because the story is so overloaded with {{Said Bookism}}s. It finally becomes blatant when the narration mentions that "not a single word was mispronounced" when he said, "that's right."
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* StrawMisogynist: Draco loudly and repeatedly declares his opinion that women are worse than men. Like many other StrawMisogynists, his purpose in the story isn't to make misogynists look bad, but to make the other characters, who are more realistic misogynists, look good in comparison.
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* StrawMisogynist: Draco loudly and repeatedly declares his opinion that women are worse than men. Like many other StrawMisogynists, StrawMisogynist characters, his purpose in the story isn't to make misogynists look bad, but to make the other characters, who are more realistic misogynists, look good in comparison.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10644439/1/Hogwarts-School-of-Prayer-and-Miracles Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles]]'' is an attempt at rewriting the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books from an American evangelical Christian standpoint. It was written by Grace Ann, also known by her username, "proudhousewife."
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10644439/1/Hogwarts-School-of-Prayer-and-Miracles Hogwarts School of Prayer and Miracles]]'' is an attempt at rewriting the ''Literature/HarryPotter'' books from an American evangelical Christian standpoint. It was written in 2014 by Grace Ann, also known by her username, "proudhousewife."
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* ReligionIsMagic: Dumbledore frequently uses prayer to do miracles, including preparing elaborate meals for Harry and his friends.
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* ReligionIsMagic: Dumbledore frequently uses prayer to do miracles, including preparing elaborate meals for Harry and his friends. In fact, "prayer" is basically used as a stand-in for magic in this story, which anyone could tell you is not the case. This is another reason it is often suspected to be a TrollFic.
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: even many Christians have criticized certain aspects of the story's portrayal of Christian doctrine and the faith's character, the scope of prayer and miracles, etc. Many Catholics have furthermore stated that it misrepresents their faith (allegorized as Slytherin).
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* ArtisticLicenseReligion: even Even many Christians have criticized certain aspects of the story's portrayal of Christian doctrine and the faith's character, the scope of prayer and miracles, etc. Many Catholics have furthermore stated that it misrepresents their faith (allegorized as Slytherin).
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* FlatEarthAtheist: God answers prayers all the time in this story, doing stuff that very clearly can't have been done by humans, like teleporting people around, conjuring up food on a table or [[spoiler: altering someone's entire personality]]. Taking this into account, the atheists in this story end up being this, as the existence of God is self-apparent.
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* FlatEarthAtheist: God answers prayers all the time in this story, doing stuff that very clearly can't have been done by humans, like teleporting people around, conjuring up food on a table or [[spoiler: altering someone's entire personality]]. Taking this into account, the atheists in this story end up being this, as the existence of God is self-apparent.self-evident.
** Voldemort also claims to be [[spoiler: using his Reddit account to parody this trope, but the "good guys" don't believe him...]]
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* InNameOnly: Basically every single character, but the Dursleys and Voldemort are some of the most glaringly obvious examples. (The Dursleys are a nice, loving family, Petunia is a carreer-woman, and Voldemort is [[spoiler: an internet-troll mocking atheist stereotypes by deliberately posting exaggerated versions of them on his Reddit-account.]])
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* InNameOnly: Basically every single character, but the Dursleys and Voldemort are some of the most glaringly obvious examples. (The The Dursleys are a nice, loving family, Petunia is a carreer-woman, career-woman, and Voldemort is [[spoiler: an internet-troll mocking atheist stereotypes by deliberately posting exaggerated versions of them on his Reddit-account.]])]]
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* MundaneUtility: Harry uses [[ReligionIsMagic prayer]] to ''open the door to his dormitory''. After reflecting how he should not make Hermione open said door when he was easily capable of doing it himself.
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* SettingUpdate: Rowling's original setting was ''very much'' British. This adaptation is clearly set in America- characters go on about the First Amendment and Hogwarts has lessons on constitutional history.
* StrawAtheist: Harry's godless foster parents Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading "the Dawkins."
** Voldemort also claims to be [[spoiler: using his Reddit account to parody this trope, but the "good guys" don't believe him...]]
* StrawAtheist: Harry's godless foster parents Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading "the Dawkins."
** Voldemort also claims to be [[spoiler: using his Reddit account to parody this trope, but the "good guys" don't believe him...]]
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* SettingUpdate: Rowling's original setting was ''very much'' British. This adaptation is clearly set in America- characters America-characters go on about the First Amendment and Hogwarts has lessons on constitutional history.
* StrawAtheist: Harry's godless foster parents Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading "the Dawkins."
** Voldemort also claims to be [[spoiler: using his Reddit account to parody this trope, but the "good guys" don't believe him...]]history.
* StrawAtheist: Harry's godless foster parents Uncle Vernon and Aunt Petunia, who believe God is dead from reading "the Dawkins."
** Voldemort also claims to be [[spoiler: using his Reddit account to parody this trope, but the "good guys" don't believe him...]]
