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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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Check ''Fanfic/AdviceAndTrust'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Manga/{{Evangelion 303}}'', ''Fanfic/HigherLearning'', ''Fanfic/TheIkaris'', ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'' and ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'' ''Fanfic/NobodyDies'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', or ''Fanfic/MobileFighterEvangelion'' to see other AU Eva fics. Check ''Fanfic/ACrownOfStars'', ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'', ''Fanfic/ScarTissue'' and ''Fanfic/WalkingInTheShadowOfDreams'' to see other Eva continuation fics. Check ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Manga/ReTake'', ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'' or ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation'' to see PeggySue Eva stories. Go to ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod'', ''Fanfic/GodsAngelsAndKings'', ''Fanfic/LastChildOfKrypton'', ''Fanfic/ShinjiAndWarhammer40K'', ''Fanfic/SOE2LoneHeirOfKrypton'' and ''Fanfic/ThousandShinji'' if you are interested in crossovers.
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* AdaptationInducedPlothole: [[spoiler:Kaoru]] manages to synch with [[spoiler:Unit 04]]. This should be impossible due to how the Evas work.
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* BeneathTheMask: Asuka was actually a nice, caring girl underneath her harsh mask. After opening up to Shinji she lets her real self out more often, and it annoys Shinji that his classmates think they have a chance with her now they’ve realized she’s not a complete bitch.
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* HeroicBSOD:
** After her MindRape, Asuka was broken and subdued for a long while.
** Shinji had several nervous breakdowns throughout the history, the final one happening right before Third Impact.
** After her MindRape, Asuka was broken and subdued for a long while.
** Shinji had several nervous breakdowns throughout the history, the final one happening right before Third Impact.
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* OldFlame: Kaji and Misato. They were playing the WillTheyOrWontThey game for a while until they got together after [[spoiler:Kaji got almost assassinated.]]
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: [[spoiler:Pen Pen]]. Yes, he returned to the past and he remembered everything.
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* WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The final scene happens several years after [[spoiler:Third Impact]], and explains what happened to the characters and the world in the meantime.
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A new teacher called Kaoru Miyazaki starts to work in Shinji, Asuka and Rei’s school. His lessons and advice motivate the Children to look at things differently and consider other possibilities, and help them to mature and be slightly readier to face their future trials. At the same time, someone is influencing Gendo’s scenario in little ways, making subtle changes. And Gendo is determined to find out who is and put a stop to that person’s interference.
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A new teacher called Kaoru Miyazaki starts to work in Shinji, Asuka and Rei’s school. His lessons and advice motivate the Children to look at things differently and consider other possibilities, and help them to mature and be slightly readier to face their future trials. At the same time, someone is influencing Gendo’s scenario in little ways, making subtle changes. And Gendo is determined to find out who it is and put a stop to that person’s interference.
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A new teacher called Kaoru Miyazaki starts to work in Shinji, Asuka and Rei’s school. His lessons and advices advice motivate the Children to look at things differently and consider other possibilities, and help them to mature and be slightly readier to face their future trials. At the same time, someone is influencing Gendo’s scenario in little ways, making subtle changes. And Gendo is determined to find out who is and put a stop to that person’s interference.
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* BrokenAce: Asuka was her team's ace pilot and was also more heavily traumatized than her teammates due to being an orphan with abandonment and self-esteem issues. Kaoru tried to encourage her to reach out to others, and his adviced helped her for a while, but the final battles broke her very badly.
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* CanNotSpitItOut: Shinji was afraid of confessing Asuka because he is a shy kid who did not think she liked him. Asuka was frightened of confessing Shinji because she is afraid of opening up to other people, and he had ignored all hints she dropped. It took a bottle of sake for them reaching each other out and blurting their feelings out.
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* TheMenInBlack: NERV's Section-2 agents. They were seen escorting Gendo when he went to have "words" with Kaoru. Their role and modus operandi was explored a bit when [[spoiler:Shinji left NERV for a short while.]]
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* LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain: After their accidental kiss, [[spoiler:Asuka and Kaoru]] apologize to each other and agree that it never happened and they will not speak about it ever again.
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* ThatDidntHappen: During a scene where Kaoru is consoling a severely distraught and emotionally devastated Asuka, she kissed him on impulse. She regretted it straight after, got scared and ran away. The next time they met they apologized each other and agreed it was a stupid mistake and it did not happen.
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* LighterAndSofter: To canon. A new teacher starts teaching the Children. Their lessons help the three traumatized pilots to consider new possibilities and open up, leading to a better ending.
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* HesBack: After the dummy plugs were tested successfully Shinji believed he was no longer needed and he was free to start his own life far from NERV, so he left. However, when Zeruel came along and started to blast Tokyo-3, Shinji returned to fight it.
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* HesBack: HesBack:
** After the dummy plugs were tested successfully Shinji believed he was no longer needed and he was free to start his own life far from NERV, so he left. However, when Zeruel came along and started to blast Tokyo-3, Shinji returned to fightit.it.
** In chapter 48 Asuka finally recovers from her breakdown. When she emerges with her giant robot and faces her enemies, she says:
--->"I'm back."
** After the dummy plugs were tested successfully Shinji believed he was no longer needed and he was free to start his own life far from NERV, so he left. However, when Zeruel came along and started to blast Tokyo-3, Shinji returned to fight
** In chapter 48 Asuka finally recovers from her breakdown. When she emerges with her giant robot and faces her enemies, she says:
--->"I'm back."
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* CombatPragmatist: Invoked and reinforced in chapter forty-eight's prologue: "Bring a bat to a fist fight. Bring a knife to a bat fight. Bring a gun to a knife fight. Run the hell away from a gun fight."
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* WillTheyOrWontThey: Shinji and Asuka danced around each other for several months, not daring to confess or acknowledge their feelings. Boldened by their new teacher's advice -and a bottle of sake- they finally opened up to each other.
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* {{Robeast}}: The cast fights the giant aliens called Angels per canon. Unlike canon, though, [[spoiler:Bardiel]] got killed [[spoiler:before having the chance to seize Unit-03,]] and the pilots never met it.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Asuka and Shinji were this for a long time. They were always together, and Asuka was the hot-headed, enthusiastic Red Oni and Shinji the quiet, meek Blue Oni. This changed after [[spoiler:Asuka's MindRape,]] and she became silent and gloomy.
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* ConvenientlyAnOrphan: All Eva pilots (Shinji, Asuka, Rei and [[spoiler:Touji]]) lost their mothers a while before becoming pilots. [[spoiler:Kaoru's]] parents also died a while before the beginning of the story.
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* HopelessSuitor:
** Asuka to Kaji at the beginning. After the fifth chapter she and Shinji became a couple and she forgot about her crush.
** Kaoru to Misato. He pursued Misato for a while, but it was soon clear that she would only love Kaji.
** Asuka to Kaji at the beginning. After the fifth chapter she and Shinji became a couple and she forgot about her crush.
** Kaoru to Misato. He pursued Misato for a while, but it was soon clear that she would only love Kaji.
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* TheyDo: Shinji and Asuka got together in chapter 5, in which the consumption of a whole bottle of sake led to a mutual LoveConfession. Between the final scene and the epilogue they got married.
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* NoSocialSkills: Neither of the three main characters -Shinji, Asuka and Rei- has social skills whatsoever. And their new teacher Kaoru is determined to change that.
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* HurtingHero: Although Kaoru's lessons helped the three pilots to try to get over their past pains and open up, they still endured plenty trauma throughout the War. In particular, Asuka was so broken after getting mind-raped that she clung to Shinji because she thought he was the only thing that she had left.
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* MistakenForCheating: After partially overhearing a conversation between Asuka and their teacher where he apologises for overstepping his boundaries and she replies it was not his fault, Shinji thinks Asuka is cheating on him. In reality nothing happened between them.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: In chapter 15 Shinji and Asuka are about to have sex in the tube... and Misato comes home right when Shinji is about to enter the bathroom, leading both teenagers to hurriedly pretend that nothing was happening.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: In chapter 15 16 Shinji and Asuka are about to have sex in the tube... and Misato comes home right when Shinji is about to enter the bathroom, leading both teenagers to hurriedly pretend that nothing was happening.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: In chapter 15 Shinji and Asuka are about to have sex in the tube... and Misato comes home right when Shinji is about to enter the bathroom, leading both teenagers to hurriedly pretend that nothing was happening.
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* ShipTease: In the first chapter Pen Pen ponders that, not matter how much Shinji complains about Asuka, he would never want her to leave. There were a good number of other hints between Shinji and Asuka before getting together in chapter 5.
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* GratuitousJapanese: Asuka -and some other characters- uses "baka" ("idiot") ''the whole time''. Sometimes she even adds an honorific to the word (such as when she calls Shinji her "baka-chan" or "baka-kun").
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* IMissMom: This came up during [[spoiler:Instrumentality, when Shinji and Asuka met their mothers again and they got to tell them]] how much they had missed them.
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If you want to read other classics of its time go to ''Fanfic/{{HERZ}}'', ''Fanfic/TheChildOfLove'', ''Fanfic/TheOneILoveIs'', ''FanFic/NeonGenesisEvangelionR'' or ''Fanfic/ChildrenOfAnElderGod''. If you are interested in other Peggy Sue Eva fics read ''Fanfic/TheSecondTry'', ''Fanfic/OnceMoreWithFeeling'', ''Fanfic/NGEMitigation'' or ''Fanfic/DoingItRightThisTime''.
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* TalkingInBed: After Asuka got Mind Raped by Arael, Shinji and she talked about her feelings and their relationship while they lay on bed and Shinji tried to reassure her.
