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The fic currently has two "seasons" which are complete, each consisting of 18 "episodes", the first season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", and the second season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 Becoming Heroes]]".
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The fic currently has two "seasons" which are complete, each consisting of 18 "episodes", the first season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", and the second season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 Becoming Heroes]]". There are also some side stories that can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 here]].
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The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a second season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 Becoming Heroes]]", in progress.
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The fic currently has two "seasons" which are complete, each consisting of 18 "episodes", the first "season", season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a and the second season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 Becoming Heroes]]", in progress.Heroes]]".
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is a ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]].
The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a second season in progress.
The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a second season in progress.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 org/series/1360765 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is a ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]].
The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a secondseason season, "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/24613621 Becoming Heroes]]", in progress.
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* TechnicolorFire: [[PlayingWithFire Huntress Wizard's magical flames]] are consistently green, as are [[spoiler: the flames she sees in a PropheticDream which resemble [[AncientEvil the lich's]] horns]].
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* TechnicolorFire: [[PlayingWithFire Huntress Wizard's magical flames]] are consistently green, as are [[spoiler: the flames she sees in a PropheticDream [[DreamingOfThingsToCome prophetic dream]] which resemble [[AncientEvil the lich's]] horns]].
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* {{Transgender}}: Although it's never explicitly stated, the use of neopronouns seems to indicate that {{Deuteragonist}} Robin is in fact nonbinary.
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* SignificantAnagram: Shortbelle and Jawffee's name is an anagram of [[Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff]], to which much of their aesthetic is a reference.
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* SignificantAnagram: Shortbelle and Jawffee's name is an anagram of [[Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff]], Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff, to which much of their aesthetic is a reference.
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* EscalatingWar: features a *romantic* version between the characters [[Deuteragonist Robin]] and [[AscendedExtra Penhaligon]], culminating in a haunted stairwell.
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* EscalatingWar: features a *romantic* version between the characters [[Deuteragonist [[{{Deuteragonist}} Robin]] and [[AscendedExtra Penhaligon]], culminating in a haunted stairwell.
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** Cragg Ambrosia, a HeroicWannabe like Macy who's a small water elemental. [[ElementalHair With blue highlights.]]
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** Cragg Ambrosia, a HeroicWannabe like Macy who's a small water elemental. [[ElementalHair [[ElementalHairColors With blue highlights.]]
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* ImagineSpot: Macy is subject to these, both of the nice and [[BadDreams not-so-nice]] varieties.
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* ImagineSpot: Macy is subject to these, both of the nice and [[BadDreams not-so-nice]] not-so-nice varieties.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is a completed ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is a completed ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]].Robin]].
The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a second season in progress.
The first "season", "[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Princess Pauper]]", is finished, with a second season in progress.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is an ongoing a completed ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.Robin]].
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* EscalatingWar: features a *romantic* version between the characters [[Deuteragonist Robin]] and [[AscendedExtra Penhaligon]], culminating in a haunted stairwell.
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* SignificantAnagram: Shortbelle and Jawffee's name is an anagram of [[Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff]], to which much of their aesthetic is a reference.
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* CynicIdealistDuo: Pugliacci and Bulcinella, a pair of mobsters from the Crystal Dimension, form one of these, with Bulcinella frequently exhibiting a lackadaisical attitude and attributing things to "the universe", much to Pugliacci's dismay.
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* PhraseCatcher: Bulcinella the mobster gets a lot of "Shut up about the universe"s due to his attribution of just about anything to some sort of universal intention, mostly from his [[CynicIdealistDuo long-suffering partner]] Pugliacci.
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* TheDividual:
** Pugliacci and Bulcinella, a CynicIdealistDuo of dog mobsters who go up against [[PrivateInvestigator T.V.]] in the Crystal Dimension.
** Shortbelle and Jawffee, a collective ''Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff'' reference [[SignificantAnagram (their names make an anagram)]] who haunt the staircase of Castle Jugland as part of a romantic [[EscalatingWar prank war]].
** Pugliacci and Bulcinella, a CynicIdealistDuo of dog mobsters who go up against [[PrivateInvestigator T.V.]] in the Crystal Dimension.
** Shortbelle and Jawffee, a collective ''Webcomic/SweetBroAndHellaJeff'' reference [[SignificantAnagram (their names make an anagram)]] who haunt the staircase of Castle Jugland as part of a romantic [[EscalatingWar prank war]].
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--> I didn’t know them, and the only interaction I had with them was trying to kill me. I don’t know if they had some goodness in their soul, or even if they had one in the first place. But now I never will. Wherever they are, if they’re anywhere, I hope someone [[DueToTheDead treats ‘em with the dignity]] they never got a chance to earn.
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--> '''Robin:''' I didn’t know them, and the only interaction I had with them was trying to kill me. I don’t know if they had some goodness in their soul, or even if they had one in the first place. But now I never will. Wherever they are, if they’re anywhere, I hope someone [[DueToTheDead treats ‘em with the dignity]] they never got a chance to earn.
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* ThePianoPlayer: PlayedForLaughs at the end of the Theatre/WestSideStory parody episode, ''Catbells'', when [[{{Deuteragonist}} Robin]] plays the piano dramatically during the final scene.
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* NoAntagonist: Any given chapter is as likely to have an antagonist as not. The closest thing to an antagonist in the first chapter is the Candy Corn Colonel, who enforces Princess Bubblegum's grudge against the Duke of Nuts, but that's only framed in opposition to Macy for one scene which he isn't there for. The third chapter doesn't even have that.
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* NoAntagonist: Any given chapter is as likely to have an antagonist as not. not.
** The closest thing to an antagonist in the first chapter is the Candy Corn Colonel, who enforces Princess Bubblegum's grudge against the Duke of Nuts, but that's only framed in opposition to Macy for one scene which he isn't therefor. for.
** The third chapter doesn't even havethat.that, the main source of tension coming from Macy's insecurity about her place in her adopted family, which she projects onto the new ambassador.
** The chapters ''Huntress Spirit'' and ''Natural Harmonies'' together form a sort of training montage for Macy, coming together into a single story about her [[spoiler:becoming a huntress]]. There is no antagonist in either chapter.
** The closest thing to an antagonist in the first chapter is the Candy Corn Colonel, who enforces Princess Bubblegum's grudge against the Duke of Nuts, but that's only framed in opposition to Macy for one scene which he isn't there
** The third chapter doesn't even have
** The chapters ''Huntress Spirit'' and ''Natural Harmonies'' together form a sort of training montage for Macy, coming together into a single story about her [[spoiler:becoming a huntress]]. There is no antagonist in either chapter.
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** The stated reason for this is not so much a typical FindOutNextTime as to prove that the story won't become a StillbornSerial.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'' is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'' Adventure]]'', full title ''Half Past Adventure with Macy and Robin'', is an ongoing ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.
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* DueToTheDead: A LonelyFuneral is thrown for [[spoiler:[[PlantMooks Shillelagh]] by Robin after they're killed by [[TeamKiller the Grass Dragon]]]] after the battle in the ravaged field.
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* LonelyFuneral: After the battle of the ravaged field, [[spoiler: Robin]] throws one for the deceased [[spoiler:{{Plant Mook|s}} Shillelagh,]] complete with a short eulogy.
--> I didn’t know them, and the only interaction I had with them was trying to kill me. I don’t know if they had some goodness in their soul, or even if they had one in the first place. But now I never will. Wherever they are, if they’re anywhere, I hope someone [[DueToTheDead treats ‘em with the dignity]] they never got a chance to earn.
--> I didn’t know them, and the only interaction I had with them was trying to kill me. I don’t know if they had some goodness in their soul, or even if they had one in the first place. But now I never will. Wherever they are, if they’re anywhere, I hope someone [[DueToTheDead treats ‘em with the dignity]] they never got a chance to earn.
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* PlantPerson: [[NatureHero Huntress Wizard]] and [[EvilWizard Forest Wizard]] appear to be something this-adjacent (the former is stated to be a goblin, but her hair is made of leaves), but the latter's PlantMooks definitely qualify.
* PlantMooks: Forest Wizard's mooks are a sight to behold. Cruel, efficient, and made entirely of holly booshes, they use their prehensile vines and magic-blocking nets to capture Macy and her friends with ease. [[spoiler:However, once they lose the element of surprise, they're taken down as easily as, well, plants.]]
* PlantMooks: Forest Wizard's mooks are a sight to behold. Cruel, efficient, and made entirely of holly booshes, they use their prehensile vines and magic-blocking nets to capture Macy and her friends with ease. [[spoiler:However, once they lose the element of surprise, they're taken down as easily as, well, plants.]]
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* BreathWeapon: The [[OurDragonsAreDifferent Grass Dragon]] has a powerful AcidAttack breath weapon, for some reason.
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* TeamKiller: A somewhat accidental example (although [[InvokedTrope orchestrated]] by the other side): In the climax of their fight, [[spoiler:the [[OurDragonsAreDifferent Grass Dragon]] lets loose a BreathWeapon AcidAttack attack against Macy, who positions herself so that the attack destroys the enemy {{Plant Mook|s}}, thus saving Robin]].
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* HappyAdopted: Macy is extremely happy to be adopted by [[spoiler:The Duke of Nuts]], settling into the family rather smoothly.
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* AcidAttack: The [[OurDragonsAreDifferent Grass Dragon]] possesses an acid BreathWeapon capable of making tree stumps looked burned. Eventually, [[spoiler:Macy tricks it into [[TeamKiller KO'ing its own]] {{Plant Mook|s}} using said attack.]]
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: ''Half Past Adventure'' inherits its weird dragons from ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime''.
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* BurningWithAnger: Flame King Phoebe is prone to this, as in [[WesternAnimation/AdventureTime the show]]; she's able to calm herself down pretty easily though, especially with [[BodyguardCrush Cinnamon Bun]]'s help.
* DelayedNarratorIntroduction: Although this hasn't technically happened yet, the LemonyNarrator's voice has slipped through in a couple of obvious ways, in particular going off on a tangent about the musical talents of Flame King Phoebe.
* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Thanks to ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'''s resident DreamWeaver, the Cosmic Owl, prophetic dreams are a thing in this universe — most notably Huntress Wizard's dream which she had several years before the start of the series, which she believes foretells [[spoiler:herself and Macy working together to defeat some threat which may or may not be connected to [[AncientEvil the Lich]] and/or TheMoon]].
* DrunkOnMilk: In the context of bars and social drinking (especially Helix's bar), soda seems to be a stand-in for alcohol.
* DrunkOnMilk: In the context of bars and social drinking (especially Helix's bar), soda seems to be a stand-in for alcohol.
* HappyAdopted: Macy is extremely happy to be adopted by [[spoiler:The Duke of Nuts]], settling into the family rather smoothly.
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* HeroicWannabe: Macy's goal is to become a hero [[HeroWorshipper like Finn]].
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* HeroicWannabe: HeroicWannabe:
** Macy's goal is to become a hero [[HeroWorshipper likeFinn]].Finn]].
** There's also “Cragg Ambrosia, future Hero of Ooo”, whom she meets in a Life-Sized Miniature Golf tournament.
** Macy's goal is to become a hero [[HeroWorshipper like
** There's also “Cragg Ambrosia, future Hero of Ooo”, whom she meets in a Life-Sized Miniature Golf tournament.
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* TechnicolorFire: [[PlayingWithFire Huntress Wizard's magical flames]] are consistently green, as are [[spoiler: the flames she sees in a PropheticDream which resemble [[AncientEvil the lich's]] horns]].
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* ArrowsOnFire: Huntress Wizard uses something between this and PlayingWithFire, shooting [[MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext an evil street sign]] and making it burst into [[TechnicolorFire green]] flames.
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* ConvectionSchmonvection: Huntress Wizard's fires rarely seem to let off as much heat as they should, especially since they're hot enough to [[TechnicolorFire burn green]].
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* ElementalEmbodiment: To varying degrees.
** Flame King Phoebe, the fire elemental, one of the four embodiments of the fundamental forces of reality and ruler of the Flame Kingdom (and golfer).
** Cragg Ambrosia, a HeroicWannabe like Macy who's a small water elemental. [[ElementalHair With blue highlights.]]
** Flame King Phoebe, the fire elemental, one of the four embodiments of the fundamental forces of reality and ruler of the Flame Kingdom (and golfer).
** Cragg Ambrosia, a HeroicWannabe like Macy who's a small water elemental. [[ElementalHair With blue highlights.]]
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* AnimalEyeSpy: Macy learns the mass version of this while training under [[spoiler:Huntress Wizard]].
--> She saw the clearing before her once again, but this time from all perspectives at once. She was the puma, the grass, a starling high in a tree, a crystal golem slumbering deep in the ground. Everything came together in a vast mosaic[…]
--> She saw the clearing before her once again, but this time from all perspectives at once. She was the puma, the grass, a starling high in a tree, a crystal golem slumbering deep in the ground. Everything came together in a vast mosaic[…]
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** Even more than him is his sons, both of whom appeared only in ''one'' episode, but who now have much bigger roles in the story.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/AdventureTime {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/18820774/chapters/44660608 Half Past Adventure]]'' is an ongoing WesternAnimation/AdventureTime ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' {{Fanfic}} by @/{{Pablo360}} set [[ExactlyExtyYearsAgo 30 years]] [[TimeSkip after the finale]], telling the story of original character [[HeroicWannabe Macadamia the Nut]] [[{{Deuteragonist}} and her friend Robin]]. Currently has ten chapters out, with additional updates every three weeks.
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* AscendedExtra: The Duke of Nuts, a character who appeared in all of three episodes of WesternAnimation/AdventureTime, is [[spoiler: Macy's adoptive father]].
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* AscendedExtra: AscendedExtra:
** The Duke of Nuts, a character who appeared in all of three episodes of WesternAnimation/AdventureTime, is [[spoiler: Macy's adoptivefather]].father]].
** In the latest arc, Macy acquires a mentor in the form of a minor character from the latter half of ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'', [[spoiler:Huntress Wizard]].
* AstralProjection: While many characters have dream-based abilities, including the {{deuteragonist}} Robin, [[spoiler:Charlie]] is the only one shown to possess this ability, which she uses to communicate with Robin in zhir dreams [[spoiler:while she's in a coma]].
** The Duke of Nuts, a character who appeared in all of three episodes of WesternAnimation/AdventureTime, is [[spoiler: Macy's adoptive
** In the latest arc, Macy acquires a mentor in the form of a minor character from the latter half of ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'', [[spoiler:Huntress Wizard]].
* AstralProjection: While many characters have dream-based abilities, including the {{deuteragonist}} Robin, [[spoiler:Charlie]] is the only one shown to possess this ability, which she uses to communicate with Robin in zhir dreams [[spoiler:while she's in a coma]].
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* HitSoHardTheCalendarFeltIt: The series finale of WesternAnimation/AdventureTime is apparently the basis for the new calendar of Ooo.
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* HitSoHardTheCalendarFeltIt: The series finale of WesternAnimation/AdventureTime ''WesternAnimation/AdventureTime'' is apparently the basis for the new calendar of Ooo.
