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** Another thing that Taylor (briefly) summons from "yesterday" with the gnurr-pfeife is described as "flying tennis balls with teeth". This may be a reference to the Stephen King story ''Literature/TheLangoliers''.
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** When it goes into its BlueScreenOfDeath over the implications of Papa's creations and Anton's abilities, Lisa's Shard throws out the lines "everything is made of onions" and "is that a lizard", referencing the author's ''Fanfic/TaylorVarga''.
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** When it goes into its BlueScreenOfDeath HeroicBSOD over the implications of Papa's creations and Anton's abilities, Lisa's Shard throws out the lines "everything is made of onions" and "is that a lizard", referencing the author's ''Fanfic/TaylorVarga''.
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** The letter Mayor Christner receives, along with the box of files detailing the previous administrations' corruption, starts with, "[[MissionImpossible Your mission, should you choose to accept it]]..." After reading it, the Mayor even remarks on how at least it didn't self-destruct after five seconds.
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** The letter Mayor Christner receives, along with the box of files detailing the previous administrations' corruption, starts with, "[[MissionImpossible "[[Series/MissionImpossible Your mission, should you choose to accept it]]..." After reading it, the Mayor he even remarks on how at least it didn't self-destruct after five seconds.
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** The letter Mayor Christner receives, along with the box of files detailing the previous administrations' corruption, starts with, "[[MissionImpossible Your mission, should you choose to accept it]]..." After reading it, the Mayor even remarks on how at least it didn't self-destruct after five seconds.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40531458/chapters/101543163 Great Grand-Uncle Schimmelhorn's Toolbox]]'' (Website/SpaceBattles thread [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/great-grand-uncle-schimmelhorns-toolbox.1029587/ here]]) is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/8886156/mp3-1415player mp3.1415player]], where Danny finds Taylor attempting to fix the damage to her mother's flute, and directs her to the toolbox and journals of an ancestor of hers in their attic to help. They soon discover that said items are more than what they seem...
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It is posted on Platform/FanFictionDotNet ([[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14112990/ here]]), Platform/ArchiveOfOurOwn ([[https://archiveofourown.org/works/40531458/chapters/101543163 here]]), Platform/SpaceBattlesDotCom ([[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/great-grand-uncle-schimmelhorns-toolbox.1029587/ here]]), and Platform/SufficientVelocityDotCom ([[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/great-grand-uncle-schimmelhorns-toolbox.106361/ here]]).
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* ButterflyOfDoom: As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying when one of her attempts to bust a dog-fighting ring gets her shot]].
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** The major divergence point here is that when Taylor recovers her mother's flute, Danny finds out and directs her to the titular ancestor's toolbox and journal in the attic in the quest to repair it. Soon, with Danny's help and Schimmelhorn's tools, Sophia's bullying is exposed, [[spoiler:Coil's plans to force Tattletale to work for him fail]], and [[spoiler:Piggot and the [=PRT=] discover Coil's infiltration and subterfuge]].
** As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying when one of her attempts to bust a dog-fighting ring gets her shot]].
** The major divergence point here is that when Taylor recovers her mother's flute, Danny finds out and directs her to the titular ancestor's toolbox and journal in the attic in the quest to repair it. Soon, with Danny's help and Schimmelhorn's tools, Sophia's bullying is exposed, [[spoiler:Coil's plans to force Tattletale to work for him fail]], and [[spoiler:Piggot and the [=PRT=] discover Coil's infiltration and subterfuge]].
** As Coil gets captured before he can start the Undersiders, [[spoiler:Rachel remains a runaway struggling to survive in Brockton Bay, which leads to her almost dying when one of her attempts to bust a dog-fighting ring gets her shot]].
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* PokeInTheThirdEye: [[spoiler:Thanks to QA, foreign Thinkers trying to get a read on Taylor get blocked, or even forget that they even tried. For Dinah, whenever she gets asked a question involving the Bay, it gives her a result saying that the probability is ''-1%''. She doesn't really mind though, since it makes her power much easier to handle, as the failed questions don't cause Thinker headaches.]]
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* PointOfDivergence: The major divergence point here is that when Taylor recovers her mother's flute, Danny finds out and directs her to the titular ancestor's toolbox and journal in the attic in the quest to repair it. Soon, with Danny's help and Schimmelhorn's tools, Sophia's bullying is exposed, [[spoiler:Coil's plans to force Tattletale to work for him fail]], and [[spoiler:Piggot and the [=PRT=] discover Coil's infiltration and subterfuge]].
* PokeInTheThirdEye: [[spoiler:Thanks to QA, foreign Thinkers trying to get a read on Taylor get blocked, or even forget that theyeven tried. For Dinah, whenever she gets asked a question involving the Bay, it gives her a result saying that the probability is ''-1%''. She doesn't really mind though, since it makes her power much easier to handle, as the failed questions don't cause Thinker headaches.]]
* PokeInTheThirdEye: [[spoiler:Thanks to QA, foreign Thinkers trying to get a read on Taylor get blocked, or even forget that they
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* FullNameUltimatum: Amy chastises her raven with "Don't you talk back to me, Edgar Dallon-Poe!" and then realises a moment later that she hadn't meant to admit to naming him that in her head. Vicky and Mark promptly LaughThemselvesSick.
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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent even by raven standards, doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her. Later, he gets enough other ravens to go to her for healing that she suspects that she's seen most of the ravens in the ''city'' before too long, and several scientists are ''very'' interested in studying the phenomenon.
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* CleverCrows: Edgar, a raven that Amy healed and who decided to [[TheThingThatWouldNotLeave stick around despite several attempts to make him leave]], is noted several times to be rather intelligent even by raven standards, standards (which is implied in Chapter 47 to be at least in part because he drank some glowing liquid), doing things like changing the TV channel to the news when it's on a show he doesn't like and no one else is watching, using tools, and even understands when Amy tells him to bite Dennis's ear for teasing her. Later, he gets enough other ravens to go to her for healing that she suspects that she's seen most of the ravens in the ''city'' before too long, and several scientists are ''very'' interested in studying the phenomenon.
