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* IfOnlyYouKnew: Elise actually theorized a long time ago that [[spoiler:Garon was jumped and replaced by his evil redneck twin brother]]. Corrin and Azura are astonished at how close she is to the truth.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: The second half of Chapter 11 is narrated by Shura. The trope is even namedropped.


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* DemotedToExtra: After Shura's plot to rob the Nohrians is foiled, he is thrown overboard instead of being recruited.

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* OfficialCouple: Camilla hooks up with Niles offscreen before Cyrkensia.

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** Corrin successfully confesses to Flora in Chapter 11.

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* AdaptationDeviation: Anna is a DLC unit in canon ''Fates''; she gets to join as a storyline party member at Fort Dragonfall.

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Anna is a DLC unit in canon ''Fates''; she gets to join as a storyline party member at Fort Dragonfall.Dragonfall.
** Azura wasn't the singer who tried to kill Garon in Cyrkensia, the role being split off to an imposter.
* AdaptationExpansion: Gunter's backstory, relegated to ''Revelation'' in the original game, is recounted here upon his return.



* BreakingTheFourthWall: After explaining what happened to Garon, Azura states that if they want elaboration, they should "Go ask someone else if you want another ''revelation''." She then winks at the reader.



* OfficialCouple: Camilla hooks up with Niles offscreen before Cyrkensia.



* ShoutOut: [[VideoGame/SuperMario64 Effie picks up Kagero, spins her around, and tosses her away before quipping "So long-y ninja!"]]

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[[VideoGame/SuperMario64 Effie picks up Kagero, spins her around, and tosses her away before quipping "So long-y ninja!"]]ninja!"]]
** After the opera at Cyrkensia, two men who bear a suspicious resemblance to JustForFun/StatlerAndWaldorf mock the show and the subsequent battle.
** During the fight against Kumagera, Leo hits Kumagera with a bunch of branches made to resemble a fist, causing "[[Webcomic/OnePunchMan ONE PUUUUUUUUUUNCH!"]] to play. Bonus points for both Leo and Saitama being voiced by Creator/MaxMittelman.

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* InSpiteOfANail: A couple of details in Cheve happen the exact same way in both ''Storm'' and ''Fire''.
** Reina and Orochi have an awkward and failed bonding attempt. They are accosted by Selena and Beruka, and Kaze and Silas jump in to help their teammates.
** Corrin, Takumi, and Hans get into a fight, with the nail being whose side Corrin is on.



* ShoutOut: Mokushu plays out like a level of ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros''. Kotaro thinks he's Bowser (complete with eight children, kidnapped woman, and death by pit of lava), the main heroes are a pair of brothers associated with red and green, said brothers jump on enemies' heads, and Saizo eats a mushroom.

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Mokushu plays out like a level of ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros''. Kotaro thinks he's Bowser (complete with eight children, kidnapped woman, and death by pit of lava), the main heroes are a pair of brothers associated with red and green, said brothers jump on enemies' heads, and Saizo eats a mushroom.mushroom.
** At Nestra, Kaden turns into a giant fox and declares he intends to fight Garon [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros "Just me! No items! Final Destination!"]]
** At Cheve, [[WesternAnimation/CourageTheCowardlyDog a cranky old man demands dinner from his wife Muriel]].
** When Camilla challenges the injured Hinoka to a fight, Jakob says "[[WesternAnimation/CodenameKidsNextDoor Lady Corrin's servants! Battle stations!]]" Bonus points for both Jakob and Numbuh One being voiced by Creator/BenDiskin.


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* TooDumbToLive: Zola confronts Garon to tell him right up to his face that he's quitting to focus on his rap career. The results are predictably bloody.

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** Kotaro thinks he's [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Bowser]].



* AdaptationDeviation: Mozu is recruited in a paralogue in canon ''Fates''; she pops up at Izumo and joins the party here.

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** Instead of a legitimate major figure of the four tribes, Rinkah is a crazy homeless woman that Ryoma took in out of pity.
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Mozu is recruited in a paralogue in canon ''Fates''; she pops up at Izumo and joins the party here.


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* ItsAllMyFault: Sakura tells Corrin she blames herself for Corrin's abduction, leading to the hilarious mental image of a small infant orchestrating her father's death and sibling's kidnapping.


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* ShoutOut: Mokushu plays out like a level of ''Franchise/SuperMarioBros''. Kotaro thinks he's Bowser (complete with eight children, kidnapped woman, and death by pit of lava), the main heroes are a pair of brothers associated with red and green, said brothers jump on enemies' heads, and Saizo eats a mushroom.

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* PaintingTheMedium: Takumi's dialogue is bolded whenever [[spoiler:Anankos is directly influencing his actions]].



* PaintingTheMedium: Takumi's dialogue is bolded whenever [[spoiler:Anankos is directly influencing his actions]].
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** Kotaro thinks he's [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Bowser]].
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* HypocriticalHumor:
-->'''Silas:''' It wouldn't be prudent to befriend fallen Nohrian commanders and allow them to travel with us.\\
''Everyone stopped what they were doing and stared at Silas, a fallen Nohrian commander whom was befriended and allowed to travel with them.''


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* DontMakeMeDestroyYou: Flora warns Scarlet that laying down her weapons and negotiating with Corrin is the only chance she has for her rebellion to end without her own death. Scarlet concedes Corrin seems like a nice girl, but maintains that Garon will never negotiate and fights to the last. The results aren't pretty.


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* OddlyNamedSequel2ElectricBoogaloo: Chapters where Corrin fights Takumi are named in such a manner; Dia is named "Takumi", Cheve is named "Takumi II: Night of Takumi", and the Great Wall of Suzanoh is named "Takumi III: The Reckoning".
* PaintingTheMedium: Takumi's dialogue is bolded whenever [[spoiler:Anankos is directly influencing his actions]].
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* ShoutOut: [[VideoGame/SuperMario64 Effie picks up Kagero, spins her around, and tosses her away before quipping "So long-y ninja!"]]
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** The Rainbow Sage speaks in the style of [[WesternAnimation/KingOfTheHill Jeff Boomhauer]].
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* RealityEnsues: When Takumi trips the Dragon Vein at Port Dia and evaporates the water, he is blinded by the steam and becomes easy pickings for Camilla and her retainers.
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* AdaptationDeviation: All three stories have Felicia join Corrin alongside Jakob during the initial battle between Hoshido and Nohr.

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All three stories have Felicia join Corrin alongside Jakob during the initial battle between Hoshido and Nohr.Nohr.
** The Astral Plane has reduced presence, futzing with the recruitment times of characters who join through it.



* AscendedExtra: Due to the Astral Plane having an extremely reduced presence, Lilith directly accompanies and fights alongside Corrin.
* {{Cloudcuckoolander}}: '''Garon.''' He speaks like a redneck, can't remember his children's names, and generally acts like a senile old idiot (when he isn't being TheCaligula).



* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Izana joins after Izumo, 10 chapters before his recruitment in canon ''Birthright''.



* AdaptationalVillainy: The real Izana is responsible for attempting to have Corrin and Sakura executed this time around; the heroes walk in on Zola before he can take Izana's place.
* AdaptationDeviation: Mozu is recruited in a paralogue in canon ''Fates''; she pops up at Izumo and joins the party here.



* EverybodyWasKungFuFighting: Subverted in Izumo; the trope is name-dropped, but then the heroes realize they all have perfectly good weapons.



* TheLeader: Unlike canon ''Birthright'', Hinoka calls the shots in Corrin's party from her recruitment to Ryoma's.



* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Flora joins after the Ice Tribe rebellion is dealt with, 11 chapters before her recruitment in canon ''Conquest''.
* AdaptationDeviation: Anna is a DLC unit in canon ''Fates''; she gets to join as a storyline party member at Fort Dragonfall.
* BluntYes: When Corrin accepts aid in dealing with the Ice Tribe rebellion, Garon asks her if she thinks she's going to avoid execution. Her response is a blunt "Yes."



* PungeonMaster: Kilma likes him his ice puns.

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* MediumAwareness: Anna is aware that she is a character in a video game.
* PungeonMaster: Kilma likes him his ice puns. [[GotMeDoingIt He occasionally tricks Flora into making a few as well.]]
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* AdaptationalJerkass: In both ''Storm'' and ''Fire'', Fuga attacks the heroes for not wanting to tour the Wind Tribe.



* IncrediblyLamePun: Rinkah's dialogue is peppered with flame puns.



* PungeonMaster: Rinkah's dialogue is peppered with flame puns.



* VerbalTic: Iago elongates his "m"s when speaking.



* EvilGloating: Iago's stupid ass ruins his plan to turn Corrin and the Wind Tribe against each other when he teleports in to gloat ''before'' executing said plan.



* ImmediateSelfContradiction: Lilith denies being a pet, only to immediately display pet-like behavior like drinking water from a bowl or chasing a squirrel.



* TemptingFate: During the trip up the Eternal Staircase, Corrin says, "Well, at least we didn't run into monsters or anything." After a pregnant pause... [[SubvertedTrope nothing happens]].



* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga attacks the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga attacks DarkAndTroubledPast: Niles has one, PlayedForLaughs.
-->'''Odin:''' ''[narrating]'' His past is an incredibly dark one!\\
'''Young Niles:''' Who turned out
the Nohrians lights?\\
'''Odin:''' It was uncommon
for a day to go by where Niles did not wanting have to tour kill...\\
''[Young Niles steps on a bug]''\\
'''Odin:''' Steal...\\
''[Young Niles takes a cookie from
the wind tribe.cookie jar]''\\
'''Odin:''' And lie, just to survive!\\
'''Niles' Mother:''' Niles, does this dress make me look fat?\\
'''Young Niles:''' No, Mother.\\
'''Odin:''' That was every day of his life, before Lord Leo found him.\\
'''Leo:''' Hey wanna be my retainer?\\
'''Young Niles:''' M'kay.
* PungeonMaster: Kilma likes him his ice puns.
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* AdaptationDeviation: All three stories have Felicia join Corrin alongside Jakob during the initial battle between Hoshido and Nohr.


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* FakeDefector: Ryoma assumes this is Azura's intention when she leaves with Corrin. [[SureLetsGoWithThat Azura smiles and nods.]]
* LoopholeAbuse: Jakob circumvents the Valla curse by writing a note about the kingdom of "Holla" inside Vallite territory and bringing it with him when he leaves.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Instead of fighting Ryoma and Xander's forward commanders, Corrin and co. opt to just leave.
* {{Seers}}: Corrin gains the ability to see briefly into the future, helping to expedite character interactions. (It also serves as a meta-representation of how most players going into the ''Revelation'' route are already aware of what happens in the ''Birthright'' and ''Conquest'' routes.)
* TimedMission: Corrin and co. have one month to assemble the Hoshidan and Nohrian armies before the portal to Valla is closed and their chance to defeat Anankos is lost.
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* RunningGag: Mounted units lose their horses all the time.

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This series has examples of
* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't betray Corrin in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Garon. This ends as well as you might expect.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in ''Fire'', attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.

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* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't betray Corrin
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in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Garon. This ends as well as you might expect.
* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in ''Fire'', attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: In ''Storm'', Xander tries to claim Corrin betraying Nohr is this. Corrin retorts, quite sensibly, that [[AvertedTrope turning against a man who murdered her father in cold blood right in front of her, kidnapped her for 16 years, tried to have her killed twice, and invaded another nation in a blatant war of aggression is perfectly proportionate]].



* IHaveNoSon: Or sister, in this case; Xander disowns Corrin at the beginning of ''Storm''.



* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Mikoto took in a small cat and named it Kamui after her daughter was abducted by Nohr.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't betray Corrin in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Garon. This ends as well as you might expect.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Xander tries to claim Corrin betraying Nohr is this. Corrin retorts, quite sensibly, that [[AvertedTrope turning against a man who murdered her father in cold blood right in front of her, kidnapped her for 16 years, tried to have her killed twice, and invaded another nation in a blatant war of aggression is perfectly proportionate]].
* IHaveNoSon: Or sister, in this case; Xander disowns Corrin after she sides with Hoshido.



* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Mikoto took in a small cat and named it Kamui after her daughter was abducted by Nohr.

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* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Mikoto took in a small cat and named it Kamui after her daughter was abducted by Nohr.AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga attacks the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.
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* DisproportionateRetribution: In ''Storm'', Xander tries to claim Corrin betraying Nohr is this. Corrin retorts, quite sensibly, that [[AvertedTrope turning against a man who murdered her father in cold blood right in front of her, kidnapped her for 16 years, tried to have her killed twice, and invaded another nation in a blatant war of aggression is perfectly proportionate]].


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* IHaveNoSon: Or sister, in this case; Xander disowns Corrin at the beginning of ''Storm''.
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''The Grey Whirlpool'' series is a trio of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of them are completed while the other is on hiatus. The stories include:

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''The Grey Whirlpool'' series is a trio of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' AffectionateParody fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of them are completed while the other is on hiatus. The stories include:



* AffectionateParody



* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in Fire, attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in Fire, ''Fire'', attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.tribe.
* AffectionateParody: The story plays most of the story beats of ''Fates'' for comedy.
* AmbiguousSyntax
-->'''Gunter:''' Lady Corrin will marry and meet her own child barefoot, if she can help it.\\
'''Corrin:''' I can still hear you. And why would I meet ''and'' marry my own child?



* HulkSpeak: Hans speaks in this manner.
* IncrediblyLamePun: Rinkah's dialogue is peppered with flame puns.



* MythologyGag: During the climatic choice, Corrin idly wonders if she can run off to [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU join a tournament]].
* NeverTrustATitle: Chapter 4 of the prologue is named "Kaze Dies at the End". Spoiler alert: [[spoiler:he doesn't die]].
* NotNowWereTooBusyCryingOverYou: Kaze suffers this as a RunningGag.



* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze.

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* ShoutOut:
** During Chapter 3 of the prologue, Jakob hits two enemy pegasi with his daggers, but misses a third. [[VideoGame/DuckHunt A dog appears and laughs at him.]]
** When Corrin seizes the fort after defeating Omozu, [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros she clears world 1-3 and gets a 4-up]].
** During Chapter 5 of the prologue, a man named Guy Fujito appears and acts like an over-the-top parody of real-life celebrity chef Guy Fieri.
** When Corrin gets the Yato, Yukimura tells her to [[Franchise/TheLegendOfZelda equip it to her B button and hack bushes to make money]].
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze.Kaze.
* WeNamedTheMonkeyJack: Mikoto took in a small cat and named it Kamui after her daughter was abducted by Nohr.
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''Gray Whirlpool: Storm'' tells the story of ''Birthright''.

''Gray Whirlpool: Fire'' tells the story of ''Conquest''.

''Gray Whirlpool: Flow'' is the adaptation of ''Revelation''.

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''Gray ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11997587/1/Gray-Whirlpool Gray Whirlpool]]'' serves as the prologue to the series, and covers the build-up to the route split.

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12041517/1/Birthright-Gray-Whirlpool-Storm Gray
Whirlpool: Storm'' Storm]]'' tells the story of ''Birthright''.

''Gray ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12041525/1/Conquest-Gray-Whirlpool-Fire Gray Whirlpool: Fire'' Fire]]'' tells the story of ''Conquest''.

''Gray ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12349838/1/Revelation-Gray-Whirlpool-Flow Gray Whirlpool: Flow'' Flow]]'' is the adaptation of ''Revelation''.



* DeepSouth: Garon acts like a stereotypical southern redneck. It MakesJustAsMuchSenseInContext.



* EarlyBirdCameo: Shura can be seen being beaten during Chapter 2 of the prologue.



* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze.
* LighterAndSofter: Than the canon stories.



* ShipTease: Leo and Sakura.

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* LighterAndSofter: Than the canon stories.
* ShipTease: Leo and Sakura.Sakura.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze.
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The Grey Whirlpool series are A trio of Fire emblem Fates fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of which are completed the other is on hiatus. The Stories include:

Gray Whirlpool: Storm tells the story of Birthright

Gray Whirlpool: Fire tells the Conquest

While Gray Whirlpool : Flow is the adaptation of Revelation

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The ''The Grey Whirlpool Whirlpool'' series are A is a trio of Fire emblem Fates ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'' fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of which them are completed while the other is on hiatus. The Stories stories include:

Gray ''Gray Whirlpool: Storm Storm'' tells the story of Birthright

Gray
''Birthright''.

''Gray
Whirlpool: Fire Fire'' tells the Conquest

While Gray Whirlpool : Flow
story of ''Conquest''.

''Gray Whirlpool: Flow''
is the adaptation of Revelation
''Revelation''.



AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in Fire, attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.
* DenserAndWackier: These stories bread and butter. There CAN be serious moments, but the stories are still comedic
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Corrin's crush on Flora
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze
* LighterAndSofter: Than the canon stories
* LampshadeHanging: Almost constatly
* ShipTease: Leo and Sakura

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* AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in Fire, attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.
* DenserAndWackier: These stories stories' bread and butter. There CAN be serious moments, but the stories are still comedic
comedic.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Corrin's crush on Flora
Flora.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze
Kaze.
* LighterAndSofter: Than the canon stories
stories.
* LampshadeHanging: Almost constatly
constantly.
* ShipTease: Leo and SakuraSakura.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't Betray Corrin in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Baron. This ends as well as you might expect.

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* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't Betray betray Corrin in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Baron.Garon. This ends as well as you might expect.


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* DenserAndWackier: These stories bread and butter. There CAN be serious moments, but the stories are still comedic
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The Grey Whirlpool series are A trio of Fire emblem Fates fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of which are completed the other is on hiatus. The Stories include

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The Grey Whirlpool series are A trio of Fire emblem Fates fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of which are completed the other is on hiatus. The Stories includeinclude:


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The Grey Whirlpool series are A trio of Fire emblem Fates fanfictions written by P.T Piranha. Two of which are completed the other is on hiatus. The Stories include
Gray Whirlpool: Storm tells the story of Birthright
Gray Whirlpool: Fire tells the Conquest
While Gray Whirlpool : Flow is the adaptation of Revelation
This series has examples of
* AffectionateParody
* AdaptationalHeroism: Zola doesn't Betray Corrin in Crykensia, instead opting to quit working for Baron. This ends as well as you might expect.
AdaptationalJerkass: Fuga is this in Fire, attacking the Nohrians for not wanting to tour the wind tribe.
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Corrin's crush on Flora
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Keaton and maybe Kaze
* LighterAndSofter: Than the canon stories
* LampshadeHanging: Almost constatly
* ShipTease: Leo and Sakura

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