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* WeakButSkilled: Vasir doesn't have the pure power of Exalted Shepard, but she has been a Spectre longer than Shepard has even been alive, with the experience and skill to match.
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-->'''Shepard:''' One of my magic powers is a bullshit detector. [[DoctorWho It goes ding when there's crap]].
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* CarCushion: Joker catches a falling Liara and Miranda (after they fell out of his car to start with...)
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-->'''Shepard:''' One of my magic powers is a bullshit detector. [[DoctorWho It goes ding when there's crap]].
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On the one side, we have MassEffect, with its grand space opera and omnicidal cthulhuan cuttlefish. On the other side, we have {{Exalted}}, with its superheroics and [[EverybodyWasKungFuFighting Kung-Fu Fighting]].
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On the one side, we have MassEffect, with its grand space opera and omnicidal [[OmnicidalManiac omnicidal]] [[EldritchAbomination cthulhuan cuttlefish.cuttlefish]]. On the other side, we have {{Exalted}}, with its superheroics and [[EverybodyWasKungFuFighting Kung-Fu Fighting]].
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* ShoutOut: Joker's maneuvering in the aircar chase is not unlike the "tunnel scene" from Film/MenInBlack.
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Vasir tries to give one to Shepard. [[spoiler:It doesn't work as intended.]]
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* IGotBetter: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of [=ME1=] as in canon...
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** Poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of [=ME1=] as in canon...
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* UnexplainedRecovery: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of [=ME1=] as in canon...
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[{{Understatement}} not so much]]).
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[{{Understatement}} not so much]]).much).
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->''"Judging from the car, I think he had another career planned out as the Kool Aid Man.”''
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* MagicVersusScience: Miranda insists that Shepard's newly-gained superpowers can be rationally explained.
-->'''Miranda:''' No, I've figured it out. It's just that it would take more eezo being jammed into you than the drive core of an Asari Dreadnought.
-->'''Miranda:''' No, I've figured it out. It's just that it would take more eezo being jammed into you than the drive core of an Asari Dreadnought.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their...''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are enhanced, as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their...''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are enhanced, [[BuxomIsBetter enhanced]], as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
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** And poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].
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** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm needs]]''.
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** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm needs]]''.needs]]''.
** And poor Wuffles tends to get used for target practice by people who freak out upon [[AlwaysChaoticEvil seeing a Geth]].
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* MartialMedic: Shepard cures [[spoiler:Thane's Kepral syndrome]] by ''punching it out of him''.
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* MartialMedic: How does Shepard cures cure [[spoiler:Thane's Kepral syndrome]] by ''punching syndrome]]? She ''punches it out of him''.
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* MartialMedic: Shepard cures [[spoiler:Thane's Kepral syndrome]] by ''punching it out of him''.
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[{{Understatement}} not so much]]).
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[{{Understatement}} not so much]]).much]]).
** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm needs]]''.
** Also, [[ADateWithRosiePalms everyone]] has ''[[TheImmodestOrgasm needs]]''.
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* HighAltitudeInterrogation: Exalt!Shepard's method of choice for turning [[spoiler:Nassana]] to her side.
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* IGotBetter: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of ME1 as in canon...
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* IGotBetter: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of ME1 [=ME1=] as in canon...
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Wuffles the Wonder Geth''
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Wuffles the Wonder Geth''Geth''.
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[Understatement not so much]]).
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[Understatement [[{{Understatement}} not so much]]).
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* [[RunningGag Punching Gag]]: Shepard's attempts to get off Alchera invariably end with her destroying the ship she planned to use to escape, occasionally with ClothingDamage ensuing (as while an ''Exalt'' is nigh-indestructible, her ''clothing'', [[Understatement not so much]]).
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What happens (asked Gregg Landsman of NobodyDies fame/infamy), fame/infamy) if a titular Exaltation from the latter wound up in Commander Shepard of the former?
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* MostCommonSuperpower: As an Exalt's Appearance score increases, their...''[[BoobsOfSteel assets]]'' are enhanced, as Shepard finds out. [[LampshadedTrope Lampshaded]] by Joker.
-->'''Joker:''' I've always wanted PowerGirl as a drinking buddy.
-->'''Joker:''' I've always wanted PowerGirl as a drinking buddy.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Fluffy the Wonder Geth''
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* FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Fluffy ''Wuffles the Wonder Geth''
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Can be read [http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/ here], along with pages upon pages of speculation, off-topic ranting, and hilarious omake scenes. Just check your sanity at the door.
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Can be read [http://forums.[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/ here], here]], along with pages upon pages of speculation, off-topic ranting, and hilarious omake scenes. Just check your sanity at the door.
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* CarFu: Shepard Shepard's fight with [[spoiler:Vasir]] starts off this way.
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->''"Judging from the car, I think he had another career planned out as the Kool Aid Man.”''
-->Joker, on Garrus' aircar
On the one side, we have MassEffect, with its grand space opera and omnicidal cthulhuan cuttlefish. On the other side, we have {{Exalted}}, with its superheroics and [[EverybodyWasKungFuFighting Kung-Fu Fighting]].
What happens (asked Gregg Landsman of NobodyDies fame/infamy), if a titular Exaltation from the latter wound up in Commander Shepard of the former?
And [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity Ensued]].
Can be read [http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/ here], along with pages upon pages of speculation, off-topic ranting, and hilarious omake scenes. Just check your sanity at the door.
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!!This fic contains examples of the following:
*CarFu: Shepard
*CoolCar: Garrus' aircar.
*FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Fluffy the Wonder Geth''
*HollywoodHacking:
-->"[[spoiler:Vasir Spectre.]] The cybersecurity suite of your personal vehicle requires updating."
*HolographicDisguise: How everyone's favourite Geth would infiltrate [[BandOfBrothels Azure]], except [[BlatantLies Geth do not infiltrate]].
*IGotBetter: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of ME1 as in canon...
-->Joker, on Garrus' aircar
On the one side, we have MassEffect, with its grand space opera and omnicidal cthulhuan cuttlefish. On the other side, we have {{Exalted}}, with its superheroics and [[EverybodyWasKungFuFighting Kung-Fu Fighting]].
What happens (asked Gregg Landsman of NobodyDies fame/infamy), if a titular Exaltation from the latter wound up in Commander Shepard of the former?
And [[HilarityEnsues Hilarity Ensued]].
Can be read [http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/mass-effect-glorious-shotgun-princess-me-exalted.224243/ here], along with pages upon pages of speculation, off-topic ranting, and hilarious omake scenes. Just check your sanity at the door.
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!!This fic contains examples of the following:
*CarFu: Shepard
*CoolCar: Garrus' aircar.
*FluffyTheTerrible: In Mass Effect canon, he was Legion, Terminal of the Geth. Here, he's...''Fluffy the Wonder Geth''
*HollywoodHacking:
-->"[[spoiler:Vasir Spectre.]] The cybersecurity suite of your personal vehicle requires updating."
*HolographicDisguise: How everyone's favourite Geth would infiltrate [[BandOfBrothels Azure]], except [[BlatantLies Geth do not infiltrate]].
*IGotBetter: Shepard doesn't ''quite'' die at the end of ME1 as in canon...
