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* GenderNeutralWriting: Averted. Bizarrely enough, Miho's killer is referred to as a man despite eventually being revealed as female.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Miho's death and [[spoiler:the arresting of Student Council]] force Ooarai to appoint a new captain. Not having Miho's tactical experience greatly demoralizes the team, and [[spoiler:Ooarai loses the final match, which means the school is getting closed down]].
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* SurprisingRealisticOutcome: Miho's death and [[spoiler:the arresting of Student Council]] force Ooarai to appoint a new captain. Not having Miho's tactical experience greatly demoralizes the team, and [[spoiler:Ooarai loses the final match, which means the school is getting closed down]].
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* SurprisingRealisticOutcome: SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: Miho's death and [[spoiler:the arresting of Student Council]] force Ooarai to appoint a new captain. Not having Miho's tactical experience greatly demoralizes the team, and [[spoiler:Ooarai loses the final match, which means the school is getting closed down]].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: Erwin's hope of Ooarai winning the tournament goes slimmer after Miho's death, and she decides to ditch Ooarai after [[spoiler:half of Ooarai's tank crews are either arrested or killed in a skirmish against Kuromorimine crews]]. Saemonza and Caesar both try to talk Erwin into changing her mind, to no avail.
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* SurprisingRealisticOutcome: Miho's death and [[spoiler:the arresting of Student Council]] force Ooarai to appoint a new captain. Not having Miho's tactical experience greatly demoralizes the team, and [[spoiler:Ooarai loses the final match, which means the school is getting closed down]].
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* BestServedCold: Arisa is expelled from Saunders senshadou team after a failed coup attempt to dethtrone the newly appointed captain. Turns out she spends six months in hiding (she does not even bother coming to school) to waith for a chance to [[spoiler:assassinate Naomi]].
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* BestServedCold: Arisa is expelled from Saunders senshadou team after a failed coup attempt to dethtrone the newly appointed captain. captain, [[spoiler:Naomi]]. Turns out she Arisa spends six months in hiding (she and does not even bother coming to school) school to waith wait for a chance to [[spoiler:assassinate Naomi]].Naomi. [[TheBadGuyWins On her second attempt, she succeeds]]]].
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* BestServedCold: Arisa is expelled from Saunders senshadou team after a failed coup attempt to dethtrone the newly appointed captain. Turns out she spends six months in hiding (she does not even bother coming to school) to waith for a chance to [[spoiler:assassinate Naomi]].
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, not long after the final match of 63rd National High School Sensha-Dō Tournament between Ooarai and Kuromorimine, Arisa is expelled from Saunders sendhadou team. The event is not thoroughly shown, but it is possibly caused by Arisa being jealous of Naomi's newly appointed role and her unsuccessful attempt of sabotaging Naomi's leadership.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, not long after the final match of 63rd National High School Sensha-Dō Senshadou Tournament between Ooarai and Kuromorimine, Arisa is expelled from Saunders sendhadou senshadou team. The event is not thoroughly shown, but it is possibly caused by Arisa being jealous of Naomi's the newly appointed role captain and her unsuccessful attempt of sabotaging Naomi's leadership.coup attempt.
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* NoodleIncident: Apparently, not long after the final match of 63rd National High School Sensha-Dō Tournament between Ooarai and Kuromorimine, Arisa is expelled from Saunders sendhadou team. The event is not thoroughly shown, but it is possibly caused by Arisa being jealous of Naomi's newly appointed role and her unsuccessful attempt of sabotaging Naomi's leadership.
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* CluelessMystery: There are no clues that conclusively point to the identity of Miho's killer. The culprit pretends to be shocked at Miho's death, lies to conceal her motive and isn't even suspected until she comes forward.
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* LoveTriangle: [[spoiler:Type 4. Miho and Erika love each other, but Yukari's love for Miho is unrequited.]]
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* DownerBeginning: The fic begins with Miho being murdered, [[FromBadToWorse and doesn't get any better from there]].
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* GenderNeutralWriting: Averted. Bizarrely enough, Miho's killer is referred to as a man despite eventually being revealed as female.
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* RedHerring: Erika is blatantly set up as the prime suspect for Miho's murder, due to her animosity toward Miho, having an apparent motive (sabotaging Oarai before the finals) and not having an alibi for the murder. The actual culprit is [[spoiler:Yukari, who also had a motive (albeit not one that was known at the time)]].
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* {{Jerkass}} facade: Erika was publicly hostile to Miho [[spoiler:to help conceal the fact that they were in a romantic relationship]].
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* {{Jerkass}} facade: JerkassFacade: Erika was publicly hostile to Miho [[spoiler:to help conceal the fact that they were in a romantic relationship]].
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* AgeLift: Miho, despite being a second-year in high school (junior/11th grader in America), is 18 at the time of her death.
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* AgeLift: Miho, despite being a second-year in high school (junior/11th grader in America), who would ordinarily be 16 or 17, is 18 at the time of her death.
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* {{Fauxshadow}}: The early chapters appear to imply that Erika is Miho's murderer. In addition to her canonical {{Jerkass}} personality and hostility toward Miho, she's suspiciously late to return on the night of Miho's death, and clashes with Miho's friends at the funeral. However, the real culprit is [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]].
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* {{Fauxshadow}}: The early chapters appear to imply that Erika is Miho's murderer. In addition to her canonical {{Jerkass}} personality and hostility toward Miho, she's suspiciously late to return on the night of Miho's death, and expresses the hope that Miho won't make it to the match (before Miho's body is discovered). Erika also clashes with Miho's friends at the funeral.funeral, and throws out wild accusations. However, the real culprit is [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]].
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per Trope Repair Shop, Jerkass Facade is being cut in favor of Hidden Heart Of Gold / Jerk With A Heart Of Gold.
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* JerkassFacade: Erika was publicly hostile to Miho [[spoiler:to help conceal the fact that they were in a romantic relationship]].
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* AintTooProudToBeg: Despite initially clashing with Miho's friends, Shiho begs to be allowed to stay at Miho's funeral and say goodbye to her daughter.
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* SpitefulSpit: Hana spits in Shiho's face, thinking that Shiho is responsible for Miho's murder.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13155017/1/Girls-Und-Panzer-hope-dies Girls und Panzer: hope dies]] is, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], a ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' fanfic by [=ShinHyuga90=]. On the eve of the final match against Kuromorimine, an unknown assailant enters Miho's apartment and murders her. As Oarai searches for its commander's murderer, a series of tragedies ensue, and things quickly get out of hand.
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* BigNo: Yukari lets off one after finding Miho's body.
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* DramaticDrop: Darjeeling drops her tea cup after hearing about Miho's death.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Shiho may not be a very nice person, but she's heartbroken to lose her younger daughter.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Shiho may not be a very nice person, but she's heartbroken to lose her younger daughter.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13155017/1/Girls-Und-Panzer-hope-dies Girls und Panzer: hope dies]] is, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], a ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' fanfic by [=ShinHyuga90=]. On the eve of the final match against Kuromorimine, an unknown assailant enters Miho's apartment and murders her. This sparks off a
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13155017/1/Girls-Und-Panzer-hope-dies Girls und Panzer: hope dies]] is, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], a ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' fanfic by [=ShinHyuga90=]. On the eve of the final match against Kuromorimine, an unknown assailant enters Miho's apartment and murders her. This sparks off a
As Oarai searches for its commander's murderer, a series of tragedies ensue, and things quickly get out of hand.
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* AgeLift: Miho, despite being a second-year in high school (junior/11th grader in America), is 18 at the time of her death.
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* MoodWhiplash: Shiho's apparent death is followed by Caesar and Carpaccio having sex. To quote one review:
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* MoodWhiplash: Shiho's apparent death is followed by Caesar and Carpaccio having sex.sex, which is then followed by [[spoiler:Erika being abducted]]. To quote one review:
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13155017/1/Girls-Und-Panzer-hope-dies Girls und Panzer: hope dies]] is, [[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin as the name implies]], a ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'' fanfic by [=ShinHyuga90=]. On the eve of the final match against Kuromorimine, an unknown assailant enters Miho's apartment and murders her. This sparks off a
!The fanfic contains examples of:
*AuthorVocabularyCalendar: On several occasions, when Character A responds to something Character B said to them, B will be described as A's "interlocutor." It's especially noticeable considering the author's poor command of the English language.
*DarkFic: Since no one dies, let alone gets murdered, in ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'', it's only natural that this is DarkerAndEdgier than canon.
*DeathFic: The fic begins with Miho's murder and explores the consequences of it.
*DownerEnding: Not only is Miho murdered, but [[spoiler:Erika is tortured, Oarai enters a brief war with Kuromorimine that results in many deaths, most of those involved with Erika's torture get 10-20 years in prison, Yukari is hanged for Miho's murder, Oarai shuts down, Anzu goes insane and Arisa apparently murders Naomi.]] It's not especially surprising because of the Tragedy genre.
*{{Fauxshadow}}: The early chapters appear to imply that Erika is Miho's murderer. In addition to her canonical {{Jerkass}} personality and hostility toward Miho, she's suspiciously late to return on the night of Miho's death, and clashes with Miho's friends at the funeral. However, the real culprit is [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]].
*FromBadToWorse: Miho being murdered is bad enough, but it quickly escalates to torturing an apparent culprit, [[spoiler:a tank attack on Oarai meant to rescue said culprit, the true killer coming forward, and various characters being imprisoned or even executed for their crimes]].
*IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler:Yukari's]] motive for murdering Miho is due to Miho choosing [[spoiler:to fall in love with Erika]] instead.
*InterrogatedForNothing: [[spoiler:Erika]] is brutally tortured in order to force her to confess to killing Miho, but she was not actually guilty.
*JerkassFacade: Erika was publicly hostile to Miho [[spoiler:to help conceal the fact that they were in a romantic relationship]].
*MoodWhiplash: Shiho's apparent death is followed by Caesar and Carpaccio having sex. To quote one review:
-->miho's mom died\\
...(10 seconds later)\\
... hot lesbian sex...\\
congratulations you just threw me off course
*ObligatorySwearing: The characters swear like sailors, often with very little provocation.
*PlotTriggeringDeath: Miho is murdered at the start of the fic.
*SecretRelationship: Miho had one with [[spoiler:Erika, from Kuromorimine]]. The relationship had to be kept secret, less because of social disapproval of same-sex relationships, but because of fears that one party might leak information to the other's school.
*ShoutOut:Two of the investigators are named Haruka and Michiru, after [[Anime/SailorMoon Sailors Uranus and Neptune]].
*SpitTake: Katyusha spits out her tea after being informed of Miho's death.
*SpoilerTitle: Chapter 12's title, "[[spoiler:Unrequited Love]]" spoils the motive of Miho's killer.
*TheStoolPigeon: [[spoiler:Kinuyo]] sells out the other members of the plot to [[spoiler:kidnap and torture Erika]] and gets the lightest sentence.
*WhamLine:
**Chapter 11 has [[spoiler:Yukari]] insist that [[spoiler:Erika]] is not Miho's killer, before saying "It was me!"
**Chapter 12 has a similar exchange when it's revealed that Miho had a secret relationship.
-->'''Hana''': One moment! Who is it that Miho loved in secret?\\
'''[[spoiler:Erika]]''': Me!
*WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The last chapter shows what the surviving cast members are up to. Some of them are trying to move on with their lives, others are in prison for kidnapping and torturing Erika, and [[spoiler:Yukari]] was convicted of Miho's murder and executed.
*YouAreInCommandNow: After the commanders of Oarai's former opponents [[spoiler:are arrested for their roles in the torture plot]], their deputies take over their teams.
!The fanfic contains examples of:
*AuthorVocabularyCalendar: On several occasions, when Character A responds to something Character B said to them, B will be described as A's "interlocutor." It's especially noticeable considering the author's poor command of the English language.
*DarkFic: Since no one dies, let alone gets murdered, in ''Anime/GirlsUndPanzer'', it's only natural that this is DarkerAndEdgier than canon.
*DeathFic: The fic begins with Miho's murder and explores the consequences of it.
*DownerEnding: Not only is Miho murdered, but [[spoiler:Erika is tortured, Oarai enters a brief war with Kuromorimine that results in many deaths, most of those involved with Erika's torture get 10-20 years in prison, Yukari is hanged for Miho's murder, Oarai shuts down, Anzu goes insane and Arisa apparently murders Naomi.]] It's not especially surprising because of the Tragedy genre.
*{{Fauxshadow}}: The early chapters appear to imply that Erika is Miho's murderer. In addition to her canonical {{Jerkass}} personality and hostility toward Miho, she's suspiciously late to return on the night of Miho's death, and clashes with Miho's friends at the funeral. However, the real culprit is [[spoiler:Yukari, of all people]].
*FromBadToWorse: Miho being murdered is bad enough, but it quickly escalates to torturing an apparent culprit, [[spoiler:a tank attack on Oarai meant to rescue said culprit, the true killer coming forward, and various characters being imprisoned or even executed for their crimes]].
*IfICantHaveYou: [[spoiler:Yukari's]] motive for murdering Miho is due to Miho choosing [[spoiler:to fall in love with Erika]] instead.
*InterrogatedForNothing: [[spoiler:Erika]] is brutally tortured in order to force her to confess to killing Miho, but she was not actually guilty.
*JerkassFacade: Erika was publicly hostile to Miho [[spoiler:to help conceal the fact that they were in a romantic relationship]].
*MoodWhiplash: Shiho's apparent death is followed by Caesar and Carpaccio having sex. To quote one review:
-->miho's mom died\\
...(10 seconds later)\\
... hot lesbian sex...\\
congratulations you just threw me off course
*ObligatorySwearing: The characters swear like sailors, often with very little provocation.
*PlotTriggeringDeath: Miho is murdered at the start of the fic.
*SecretRelationship: Miho had one with [[spoiler:Erika, from Kuromorimine]]. The relationship had to be kept secret, less because of social disapproval of same-sex relationships, but because of fears that one party might leak information to the other's school.
*ShoutOut:Two of the investigators are named Haruka and Michiru, after [[Anime/SailorMoon Sailors Uranus and Neptune]].
*SpitTake: Katyusha spits out her tea after being informed of Miho's death.
*SpoilerTitle: Chapter 12's title, "[[spoiler:Unrequited Love]]" spoils the motive of Miho's killer.
*TheStoolPigeon: [[spoiler:Kinuyo]] sells out the other members of the plot to [[spoiler:kidnap and torture Erika]] and gets the lightest sentence.
*WhamLine:
**Chapter 11 has [[spoiler:Yukari]] insist that [[spoiler:Erika]] is not Miho's killer, before saying "It was me!"
**Chapter 12 has a similar exchange when it's revealed that Miho had a secret relationship.
-->'''Hana''': One moment! Who is it that Miho loved in secret?\\
'''[[spoiler:Erika]]''': Me!
*WhereAreTheyNowEpilogue: The last chapter shows what the surviving cast members are up to. Some of them are trying to move on with their lives, others are in prison for kidnapping and torturing Erika, and [[spoiler:Yukari]] was convicted of Miho's murder and executed.
*YouAreInCommandNow: After the commanders of Oarai's former opponents [[spoiler:are arrested for their roles in the torture plot]], their deputies take over their teams.
