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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]]. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood characters ([[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] Reimu]]) [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]]. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]].
that]]. It also likes to avoid Flanderization, making Cirno rather bright and Meiling a competent gate guard, for example.
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* AnIcePerson: Cirno, [[CaptainObvious obviously.]]
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* CreepyGood: Abathur is creepy on so many levels, but he's not nearly as villainous here as he is in canon. In fact, he's TheHero here.
* DeadpanSnarker: Reimu snarks a lot. A couple of Abathur's snarkier moments are also described by the narration as him deadpanning.
* GenkiGirl: Aya's genkiness is pretty extreme here.
* IntrepidReporter: Aya researches for the Bunbunmaru by [[spoiler: going out and participating in resolving the Human Village Incident]].
* KnightInSourArmor: Reimu ''might'' be this. The story's not long enough to tell, yet.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: It's a fanfic of two different examples of the trope. It's rather obvious that this occurs.
* DeadpanSnarker: Reimu snarks a lot. A couple of Abathur's snarkier moments are also described by the narration as him deadpanning.
* GenkiGirl: Aya's genkiness is pretty extreme here.
* IntrepidReporter: Aya researches for the Bunbunmaru by [[spoiler: going out and participating in resolving the Human Village Incident]].
* KnightInSourArmor: Reimu ''might'' be this. The story's not long enough to tell, yet.
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: It's a fanfic of two different examples of the trope. It's rather obvious that this occurs.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology. Like the two series' that it is based on, the series has [[LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters a hell of a lot more characters than that]].
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[Main/Paparazzi Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[Main/Miko Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[Main/Paparazzi [[GenkiGirl Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[Main/Miko [[KnightInSourArmor Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[Paparazzi [[Main/Paparazzi Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[Miko [[Main/Miko Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology.
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The story revolves around four focus characters: [[CreepyGood Abathur]], [[Paparazzi Aya]] [[IntrepidReporter Shameimaru]], [[AnIcePerson Cirno]], and [[DeadpanSnarker Reimu]] [[Miko Hakurei]] as Abathur tries to collect essence and evolve the Swarm, while the other three help him get used to Gensokyo, and the strange effects it has on Zerg biology.
The story updates quite rapidly (even updating three times in one day at one point), and Antagonist claims that she wants the story to go on for a good long while.
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* FiveManBand: The Scarlet Devil Mansion seems to have one going for them.
** TheHero: Remilia.
** TheLancer: Sakuya.
** TheSmartGuy: Patchouli
** TheBigGuy: Flandre, Meiling
** TheChick: Koakuma
** TheHero: Remilia.
** TheLancer: Sakuya.
** TheSmartGuy: Patchouli
** TheBigGuy: Flandre, Meiling
** TheChick: Koakuma
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* FiveManBand: The Scarlet Devil Mansion seems to have one going for them.
** TheHero: Remilia.
** TheLancer: Sakuya.
** TheSmartGuy: Patchouli
** TheBigGuy: Flandre, Meiling
** TheChick: Koakuma
** TheHero: Remilia.
** TheLancer: Sakuya.
** TheSmartGuy: Patchouli
** TheBigGuy: Flandre, Meiling
** TheChick: Koakuma
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* RecapEpisode: Chapter five, the first intermission, covers the events of the first arc. It also contains an interview between Aya and Abathur.
** To a lesser extent, Chapter Nine, the second intermission, has Abathur recap the events of Starcraft (with the exception of Brood War), as well as the backstory of the Starcraft universe (such as the Xel'Naga life cycle) and the events leading up to his arrival in Gensokyo. He explains this all to Team Nineball ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Chen]]), as well as Keine and [[spoiler: Vampire Ultralisk]] who hear the latter end of the story.
** To a lesser extent, Chapter Nine, the second intermission, has Abathur recap the events of Starcraft (with the exception of Brood War), as well as the backstory of the Starcraft universe (such as the Xel'Naga life cycle) and the events leading up to his arrival in Gensokyo. He explains this all to Team Nineball ([[MyFriendsAndZoidberg and Chen]]), as well as Keine and [[spoiler: Vampire Ultralisk]] who hear the latter end of the story.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 5, the first intermission, is called, "[[Film/InterviewWithTheVampire Interview with the Evolution Master]]"
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* BreatherEpisode: While the story on its own isn't too dark, the Intermission chapters are notably more lighthearted and contain no action (the first one being a Bunbunmaru article about the events of the first arc, the second one being Abathur explaining how the Zerg work to [[FanNickname Team Nineball]]).
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** Chapters 1 and 8 both have Abathur saying, "Hmm?". Of course, he talks funny, so both times, the narration says (in these exact words): "For a creature with as much echo in their voice as him, the sound was very strange indeed."
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Kerrigan is much less sympathetic in this story than she is in ''[[VideoGame/StarCraftIIHeartOfTheSwarm Heart of the Swarm]].''
* BadBoss: Kerrigan seems to treat most of the Zerg well, but sees Abathur as nothing more than a tool (which is understandable, considering that he [[spoiler: designed the Queen of Blades]] in canon).
* BadBoss: Kerrigan seems to treat most of the Zerg well, but sees Abathur as nothing more than a tool (which is understandable, considering that he [[spoiler: designed the Queen of Blades]] in canon).
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* Retcon: Initially, the story took place in 2005. Antagonist ended up changing it RunningGag: People pointing out Abathur's strange speech, only for him to 2013.deny that he speaks any way but normally.
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** Downplayed again when a Hydralisk shoots a spine into Reimu's thigh. She outright says that it's excruciating, but mostly just gets even angrier than she already was.
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->''"It's a portal. It leads to a marvelous place, filled with fantastic creatures. Creatures that shape reality to their very will. Creatures that constantly fight and improve their tactics. ''Humanoid'' creatures. This place is called... Gensokyo."'' "''
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* BlatantLies: Aya's article on the 'Human Village Incident' is full of these. It claims that Reimu mindlessly attacked the Leviathan, when in reality Reimu was protecting ''Aya herself,'' that Cirno chewed Reimu out when Cirno has nothing but respect for the Miko, and that Abathur begged her for an interview when in reality it was the other way around.
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Antagonist outright says in one of the [[WordOfGod Author's Notes]] that she's writing Abathur different from how she normally interprets him.
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* VillainousFriendship: Kerrigan and Stukov's relationship is a Type II.
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* VillainousFriendship: Kerrigan and Stukov's relationship is a Type II.II.
* ZergRush: Being a fanfic of the [[TropeNamers Trope Namer,]] of course the Zerg pulled this in their attack against the Tal'Darim. When Kerrigan realized that Tal'Darim reinforcements were arriving, she took all the Zerg she had and invaded their base.
* ZergRush: Being a fanfic of the [[TropeNamers Trope Namer,]] of course the Zerg pulled this in their attack against the Tal'Darim. When Kerrigan realized that Tal'Darim reinforcements were arriving, she took all the Zerg she had and invaded their base.
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* ComicallyMissingThePoint: Subverted. When Reimu rescues Aya, Abathur initially seems more worried about the fact that [[ImprobablyFemaleCast nobody in Gensokyo is male]] than he is about Reimu actually ''destroying a Glaive Wurm.'' However, it's quickly clarified that it's the Glaive Wurm's destruction that he's more worried about, as it shows just how powerful Gensokyo's residents are.
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* MajorInjuryUnderreaction: Downplayed; Aya responds to Reimu slamming her into the Leviathan with teasing about how much she got bruised.
* VerbalTic: Marisa, just like in canon, adds 'ze' to the ends of many of her sentences (and, in one case, "Da Ze").
* VillainousFriendship: Kerrigan and Stukov's relationship is a Type II.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} and VideoGame/StarCraft crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} and VideoGame/Starcraft crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a VideoGame/{{Touhou}} and VideoGame/Starcraft VideoGame/StarCraft crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a [[ VideoGame/{Touhou} Touhou]] and [[ VideoGame/Starcraft Starcraft]] crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a [[ VideoGame/{Touhou} Touhou]] VideoGame/{{Touhou}} and [[ VideoGame/Starcraft Starcraft]] crossover fanfic written by Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a [[VideoGame/{Touhou} [[ VideoGame/{Touhou} Touhou]] and [[VideoGame/Starcraft [[ VideoGame/Starcraft Starcraft]] crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan.Antagonist Chan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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->''"It's a portal. It leads to a marvelous place, filled with fantastic creatures. Creatures that shape reality to their very will. Creatures that constantly fight and improve their tactics. Humanoid creatures. This place is called... Gensokyo."'' -Sarah Kerrigan
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a ''VideoGame/{Touhou}'' and ''VideoGame/Starcraft'' crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a ''VideoGame/{Touhou}'' and ''VideoGame/Starcraft'' crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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->''"It's a portal. It leads to a marvelous place, filled with fantastic creatures. Creatures that shape reality to their very will. Creatures that constantly fight and improve their tactics. Humanoid ''Humanoid'' creatures. This place is called... Gensokyo."'' -Sarah Kerrigan
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a''VideoGame/{Touhou}'' [[VideoGame/{Touhou} Touhou]] and ''VideoGame/Starcraft'' [[VideoGame/Starcraft Starcraft]] crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a
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->''"It's a portal. It leads to a marvelous place, filled with fantastic creatures. Creatures that shape reality to their very will. Creatures that constantly fight and improve their tactics. Humanoid creatures. This place is called... Gensokyo."'' -Sarah Kerrigan
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a ''VideoGame/{Touhou}'' and ''VideoGame/Starcraft'' crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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!! The fanfic, ''Gensokyo's Heart'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* VillainousFriendship: Kerrigan and Stukov's relationship is a Type II.
''Gensokyo's Heart'' is a ''VideoGame/{Touhou}'' and ''VideoGame/Starcraft'' crossover fanfic written by AntagonistChan. The premise revolves around Abathur, the Evolution Master of the Swarm, coming to Gensokyo to gather Youkai essence for use in the Swarm, but Gensokyo assimilates them, instead.
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!! The fanfic, ''Gensokyo's Heart'' contains examples of the following tropes:
* VillainousFriendship: Kerrigan and Stukov's relationship is a Type II.
