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* CloudCuckoolander: Felicity is one. And apprently, she's so much of one that, according to the narration, she could be brainwashed by even the lowest frequency mind control wave.
** In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and 'coolness'.
** In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and 'coolness'.
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* CloudCuckoolander: {{Cloudcuckoolander}}:
** Felicity is one. And apprently, she's so much of one that, according to the narration, she could be brainwashed by even the lowest frequency mind control wave.
** In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and'coolness'. 'coolness'.
* CreatorProvincialism: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
** Felicity is one. And apprently, she's so much of one that, according to the narration, she could be brainwashed by even the lowest frequency mind control wave.
** In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and
* CreatorProvincialism: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Happens to every character, whether or not they're canon. Most glaring of all of the Flanderizations is Romano, however, as it is shown that he can be scared away from Germany's house by ''a scarecrow dressed up as France'' and coerced to run errands for people if bribed with pizza.
** Another example is highlighted in story when Allison and Prussia having an arguement consisting of Allison saying "The cool hero says ''yes''!" and Prussia rebutting "The awesome me says ''no''!", which goes to show just how Flanderized both characters have become.
** Another example is highlighted in story when Allison and Prussia having an arguement consisting of Allison saying "The cool hero says ''yes''!" and Prussia rebutting "The awesome me says ''no''!", which goes to show just how Flanderized both characters have become.
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* {{Flanderization}}: Happens to every character, whether or not they're canon. canon.
** Most glaring of all of the Flanderizations is Romano, however, as it is shown that he can be scared away from Germany's house by ''a scarecrow dressed up as France'' and coerced to run errands for people if bribed with pizza.
**Another example is highlighted in story when Allison and Prussia having an arguement argument consisting of Allison saying "The cool hero says ''yes''!" and Prussia rebutting "The awesome me says ''no''!", which goes to show just how Flanderized both characters have become.
** Most glaring of all of the Flanderizations is Romano, however, as it is shown that he can be scared away from Germany's house by ''a scarecrow dressed up as France'' and coerced to run errands for people if bribed with pizza.
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who [[spoiler:nearly killed a thirteen year old girl with her bare hands]] and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'', with no remorse]]. Despite all of this,however, she managed to get off scott-free because she [[spoiler:cried over it all]] and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia forced her to commit any crimes against her will; in fact, she was displayed to be ''quite pleased'' with her actions on numerous occasions and made her enjoyment of her evil tendencies quite clear. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's [[spoiler:rightfully despised by Robynne]] and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who [[spoiler:nearly killed a thirteen year old thirteen-year-old girl with her bare hands]] and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'', with no remorse]]. Despite all of this,however, she managed to get off scott-free because she [[spoiler:cried over it all]] and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia forced her to commit any crimes against her will; in fact, she was displayed to be ''quite pleased'' with her actions on numerous occasions and made her enjoyment of her evil tendencies quite clear. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's [[spoiler:rightfully despised by Robynne]] and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
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* ManChild: Evidently, America is one, as he childishly--and most OOC-ly--shouts 'NOT IT!' when the question of whose room the new gender swaps will be staying in arises at the end of Chapter 12.
* MotorMouth: In the very first chapter, the author points out how unusual it is that Italy never said anything throughout the entire chapter due to how much of a MotorMouth he is in canon. And, unsurprisingly, Felicity takes after him.
* MotorMouth: In the very first chapter, the author points out how unusual it is that Italy never said anything throughout the entire chapter due to how much of a MotorMouth he is in canon. And, unsurprisingly, Felicity takes after him.
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* ManChild: {{Manchild}}: Evidently, America is one, as he childishly--and most OOC-ly--shouts 'NOT IT!' when the question of whose room the new gender swaps will be staying in arises at the end of Chapter 12.
*MotorMouth: MotorMouth:
** In the very first chapter, the author points out how unusual it is that Italy never said anything throughout the entire chapter due to how much of a MotorMouth he is in canon. And, unsurprisingly, Felicity takes after him.
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** In the very first chapter, the author points out how unusual it is that Italy never said anything throughout the entire chapter due to how much of a MotorMouth he is in canon. And, unsurprisingly, Felicity takes after him.
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* RetCon: Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot. Meanwhile, Prudence's name was changed in the context of the story from Prudence to Gillian ''in the very last chapter''.
** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison ''did'' need the glasses.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one most commonly quoted, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison ''did'' need the glasses.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one most commonly quoted, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
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* RetCon: RetCon:
** Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot. Meanwhile, Prudence's name was changed in the context of the story from Prudence to Gillian ''in the very lastchapter''.
chapter''.
** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison ''did'' need theglasses.
glasses.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one most commonly quoted, though there are numerous more egregious examples. \n* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
** Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot. Meanwhile, Prudence's name was changed in the context of the story from Prudence to Gillian ''in the very last
** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison ''did'' need the
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one most commonly quoted, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The naming theme of the chapters, which results in some...''strange'' names (most notably "Kidnappers and Kids", "Hamburgers and Hurt", "Ice Cream and Ill-Humor", "Belarus and Blankets", "Aliens and Automobiles", and "Six-Thirty and Swords").
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: AlliterativeTitle: The naming theme of the chapters, which results in some...''strange'' names (most notably "Kidnappers and Kids", "Hamburgers and Hurt", "Ice Cream and Ill-Humor", "Belarus and Blankets", "Aliens and Automobiles", and "Six-Thirty and Swords").
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''Genderswapped Nations'' is an Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia fanfic written by Fanfiction.Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012. The fanfiction can be found here.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7806991/1/Genderswapped-Nations]]
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''Genderswapped Nations'' is an Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia Webcomic/HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic written by Fanfiction.Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012. The fanfiction can be found here.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7806991/1/Genderswapped-Nations]]
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''Genderswapped Nations'' is a HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic written by Fanfiction.Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012. The fanfiction can be found here.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7806991/1/Genderswapped-Nations]]
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''Genderswapped Nations'' is a HetaliaAxisPowers an Webcomic/AxisPowersHetalia fanfic written by Fanfiction.Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012. The fanfiction can be found here.[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7806991/1/Genderswapped-Nations]]
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
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* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The threatening phone call in Chapter 4 in which Prussia threatens to conquer the UK is never mentioned again for the rest of the story.
** The ''entirety'' of Chapter 7 contributed nothing to the plot and only served to give Ariana a 'tragic' backstory. And on that note, Chapter 8 was also a throwaway chapter in which nothing happened.
* ButtMonkey: Mattie is often put at the butt of ''every'' joke, to the point where almost every other line in Chapter 12 was a jab at how forgettable and invisible she is. She was randomly assaulted numerous times in Chapter 7, skipped during Sealand's run to give all of the genderbends ice cream in Chapter 6, whapped in the violently in the face with a stick in Chapter 13, among other things.
* TheChrisCarterEffect: The real main plot didn't come in until very late into the fanfic, with general shenanigans and small disconnected evil acts by Prussia thrown in for dramatic effect in the meantime.
** The ''entirety'' of Chapter 7 contributed nothing to the plot and only served to give Ariana a 'tragic' backstory. And on that note, Chapter 8 was also a throwaway chapter in which nothing happened.
* ButtMonkey: Mattie is often put at the butt of ''every'' joke, to the point where almost every other line in Chapter 12 was a jab at how forgettable and invisible she is. She was randomly assaulted numerous times in Chapter 7, skipped during Sealand's run to give all of the genderbends ice cream in Chapter 6, whapped in the violently in the face with a stick in Chapter 13, among other things.
* TheChrisCarterEffect: The real main plot didn't come in until very late into the fanfic, with general shenanigans and small disconnected evil acts by Prussia thrown in for dramatic effect in the meantime.
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** The ''entirety'' of Chapter 7 contributed nothing to the plot and only served to give Ariana a 'tragic' backstory. And on that note, Chapter 8 was also a throwaway chapter in which nothing happened.
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* CriticalResearchFailure: Most egregiously is how the author had literally no knowledge of Prussia or Canada's human names when making the story, so she gave the Canadian swap a random name and gave the Prussian swap a name with 'Pru' in the beginning.
** It's pointed out by the author in the final author's note that the Baltic States should no longer be living under Russia's roof, as the Soviet Union had fallen long before the fic's story begins.
** Not only this, but Yiesha's weapon should be a butcher's knife, not a wok like her counterpart wields.
** Failing to realize that Prussia should be living under the same roof as Germany and not in some big house in a wasteland, the author quickly formulated the excuse that Prussia had purchased an entire apartment building out in the middle of nowhere just for this plan.
** At the time of writing the fic, the author didn't even have any idea that ''Axis Powers Hetalia'' already had official gender bends of the main characters, called 'Nyotalia', and thus her descriptions of the characters and their personalities were very incongruent with the canon and more or less inferior.
* DesignatedHero: Allison, specifically in Chapter 12, wherein she heroically sets out to save Ariana and Francisca from Prussia but ends up getting involved in an ego-spurred argument while Mattie does all of the rescuing. Not to mention, before this, Allison abused, insulted, and undermined Mattie on the way to Prussia's place and even went as far as to steal her credit card and use it for the remainder of the entire fic. She even strands Mattie millions of miles away from home with no money by the end of the chapter. ''That'' is not a heroic act by any stretch of the imagination.
** It's pointed out by the author in the final author's note that the Baltic States should no longer be living under Russia's roof, as the Soviet Union had fallen long before the fic's story begins.
** Not only this, but Yiesha's weapon should be a butcher's knife, not a wok like her counterpart wields.
** Failing to realize that Prussia should be living under the same roof as Germany and not in some big house in a wasteland, the author quickly formulated the excuse that Prussia had purchased an entire apartment building out in the middle of nowhere just for this plan.
** At the time of writing the fic, the author didn't even have any idea that ''Axis Powers Hetalia'' already had official gender bends of the main characters, called 'Nyotalia', and thus her descriptions of the characters and their personalities were very incongruent with the canon and more or less inferior.
* DesignatedHero: Allison, specifically in Chapter 12, wherein she heroically sets out to save Ariana and Francisca from Prussia but ends up getting involved in an ego-spurred argument while Mattie does all of the rescuing. Not to mention, before this, Allison abused, insulted, and undermined Mattie on the way to Prussia's place and even went as far as to steal her credit card and use it for the remainder of the entire fic. She even strands Mattie millions of miles away from home with no money by the end of the chapter. ''That'' is not a heroic act by any stretch of the imagination.
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* RonTheDeathEater: No matter which canon you believe in, there is not a single one in which Prussia would kidnap teenage girls, use them to blackmail the other countries, and eventually [[spoiler:plan to murder them all just to get them out of the way]]. And speaking of which, his gender bend has literally no reason to go along with his plans and has been Ron The Death Eatered, too.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 5 is meant to be this for Allison, and Chapter 12 is supposed to be one for Mattie.
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* AbortedArc: The author admits in the final author's note that there was supposed to be an storyline in the beginning where Prussia attempts to take over Europe but is stopped by the swaps that was quickly scrapped. Even the author admitted that this plot would have been silly.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 5 is meant to be this for Allison, Chapter 7 is this for Iscah, and Chapter 12 is supposed to be one forMattie. Mattie.
* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: The naming theme of the chapters, which results in some...''strange'' names (most notably "Kidnappers and Kids", "Hamburgers and Hurt", "Ice Cream and Ill-Humor", "Belarus and Blankets", "Aliens and Automobiles", and "Six-Thirty and Swords").
* ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 5 is meant to be this for Allison, Chapter 7 is this for Iscah, and Chapter 12 is supposed to be one for
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* DullSurprise: Mattie, in exchange from Chapter 18:
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: The threatening phone call in Chapter 4 in which Prussia threatens to conquer the UK is never mentioned again for the rest of the story.
**The ''entirety'' of Chapter 7 contributed nothing to the plot and only served to give Ariana a 'tragic' backstory. And on that note, Chapter 8 was also a throwaway chapter in which nothing happened.
* ButtMonkey: Mattie is often put at the butt of ''every'' joke, to the point where almost every other line in Chapter 12 was a jab at how forgettable and invisible she is. She was randomly assaulted numerous times in Chapter 7, skipped during Sealand's run to give all of the genderbends ice cream in Chapter 6, whapped in the violently in the face with a stick in Chapter 13, among other things.
* TheChrisCarterEffect: The real main plot didn't come in until very late into the fanfic, with general shenanigans and small disconnected evil acts by Prussia thrown in for dramatic effect in the meantime.
*CloudCuckoolander: Felicity is one. And apprently, she's so much of one that, according to the narration, she could be brainwashed by even the lowest frequency mind control wave.
**In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and 'coolness'.
*CriticalResearchFailure: Most egregiously is how the author had literally no knowledge of Prussia or Canada's human names when making the story, so she gave the Canadian swap a random name and gave the Prussian swap a name with 'Pru' in the beginning.
**It's pointed out by the author in the final author's note that the Baltic States should no longer be living under Russia's roof, as the Soviet Union had fallen long before the fic's story begins.
**Not only this, but Yiesha's weapon should be a butcher's knife, not a wok like her counterpart wields.
**Failing to realize that Prussia should be living under the same roof as Germany and not in some big house in a wasteland, the author quickly formulated the excuse that Prussia had purchased an entire apartment building out in the middle of nowhere just for this plan.
**At the time of writing the fic, the author didn't even have any idea that ''Axis Powers Hetalia'' already had official gender bends of the main characters, called 'Nyotalia', and thus her descriptions of the characters and their personalities were very incongruent with the canon and more or less inferior.
*DesignatedHero: Allison, specifically in Chapter 12, wherein she heroically sets out to save Ariana and Francisca from Prussia but ends up getting involved in an ego-spurred argument while Mattie does all of the rescuing. Not to mention, before this, Allison abused, insulted, and undermined Mattie on the way to Prussia's place and even went as far as to steal her credit card and use it for the remainder of the entire fic. She even strands Mattie millions of miles away from home with no money by the end of the chapter. ''That'' is not a heroic act by any stretch of the imagination.
* DistressBall: Francisca and Ariana are kidnapped out of nowhere just so that Kameron, Nathaniel, Robynne, and Elliot can be introduced into the plot, and also so the author could write a chapter where Mattie and Allison have to embark on a journey to save them.
* DullSurprise: Mattie, in this exchange from Chapter 18:
**The ''entirety'' of Chapter 7 contributed nothing to the plot and only served to give Ariana a 'tragic' backstory. And on that note, Chapter 8 was also a throwaway chapter in which nothing happened.
* ButtMonkey: Mattie is often put at the butt of ''every'' joke, to the point where almost every other line in Chapter 12 was a jab at how forgettable and invisible she is. She was randomly assaulted numerous times in Chapter 7, skipped during Sealand's run to give all of the genderbends ice cream in Chapter 6, whapped in the violently in the face with a stick in Chapter 13, among other things.
* TheChrisCarterEffect: The real main plot didn't come in until very late into the fanfic, with general shenanigans and small disconnected evil acts by Prussia thrown in for dramatic effect in the meantime.
*CloudCuckoolander: Felicity is one. And apprently, she's so much of one that, according to the narration, she could be brainwashed by even the lowest frequency mind control wave.
**In addition, Allison, whose entire life is dominated primarily by food and 'coolness'.
*CriticalResearchFailure: Most egregiously is how the author had literally no knowledge of Prussia or Canada's human names when making the story, so she gave the Canadian swap a random name and gave the Prussian swap a name with 'Pru' in the beginning.
**It's pointed out by the author in the final author's note that the Baltic States should no longer be living under Russia's roof, as the Soviet Union had fallen long before the fic's story begins.
**Not only this, but Yiesha's weapon should be a butcher's knife, not a wok like her counterpart wields.
**Failing to realize that Prussia should be living under the same roof as Germany and not in some big house in a wasteland, the author quickly formulated the excuse that Prussia had purchased an entire apartment building out in the middle of nowhere just for this plan.
**At the time of writing the fic, the author didn't even have any idea that ''Axis Powers Hetalia'' already had official gender bends of the main characters, called 'Nyotalia', and thus her descriptions of the characters and their personalities were very incongruent with the canon and more or less inferior.
*DesignatedHero: Allison, specifically in Chapter 12, wherein she heroically sets out to save Ariana and Francisca from Prussia but ends up getting involved in an ego-spurred argument while Mattie does all of the rescuing. Not to mention, before this, Allison abused, insulted, and undermined Mattie on the way to Prussia's place and even went as far as to steal her credit card and use it for the remainder of the entire fic. She even strands Mattie millions of miles away from home with no money by the end of the chapter. ''That'' is not a heroic act by any stretch of the imagination.
* DistressBall: Francisca and Ariana are kidnapped out of nowhere just so that Kameron, Nathaniel, Robynne, and Elliot can be introduced into the plot, and also so the author could write a chapter where Mattie and Allison have to embark on a journey to save them.
* DullSurprise: Mattie, in this exchange from Chapter 18:
* {{Flanderization}}: Happens to every character, whether or not they're canon. Most glaring of all of the Flanderizations is Romano, however, as it is shown that he can be scared away from Germany's house by ''a scarecrow dressed up as France'' and coerced to run errands for people if bribed with pizza.
**Another example is highlighted in story when Allison and Prussia having an arguement consisting of Allison saying "The cool hero says ''yes''!" and Prussia rebutting "The awesome me says ''no''!", which goes to show just how Flanderized both characters have become.
* FlatCharacter: Most all of the characters can be described with one word or character trait, but the character who especially falls victim to this is Nathaniel, whose only character trait is an action, which is to stalk and scare Iscah for no funny or plot-relevant reason. It just sort of...''happens''.
* TheGenericGuy: Elliot becomes this because apparently 'the author didn't pay attention to the episodes with Hungary in them' and slowly becomes a generic forced love interest for Robynne, who in and of herself is pretty generic.
* TheGhost: Oddly enough, Yiesha--China's swap--turns into this by the end, save for a few useless lines that could have easily been said by anyone else. Hell, even Mattie, whose characterizing trait is her forgetableness, has a more prominent and memorable role than Yiesha.
**Another example is highlighted in story when Allison and Prussia having an arguement consisting of Allison saying "The cool hero says ''yes''!" and Prussia rebutting "The awesome me says ''no''!", which goes to show just how Flanderized both characters have become.
* FlatCharacter: Most all of the characters can be described with one word or character trait, but the character who especially falls victim to this is Nathaniel, whose only character trait is an action, which is to stalk and scare Iscah for no funny or plot-relevant reason. It just sort of...''happens''.
* TheGenericGuy: Elliot becomes this because apparently 'the author didn't pay attention to the episodes with Hungary in them' and slowly becomes a generic forced love interest for Robynne, who in and of herself is pretty generic.
* TheGhost: Oddly enough, Yiesha--China's swap--turns into this by the end, save for a few useless lines that could have easily been said by anyone else. Hell, even Mattie, whose characterizing trait is her forgetableness, has a more prominent and memorable role than Yiesha.
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* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency.
** When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on.
** Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
** Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheap reason for Robynne to be incapacitated than as a real attempt at horror.
** When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on.
** Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
** Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheap reason for Robynne to be incapacitated than as a real attempt at horror.
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* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader ManChild: Evidently, America is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the one, as he childishly--and most time of all of OOC-ly--shouts 'NOT IT!' when the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' question of whose room the bends and new gender swaps will be staying in arises at the most competent and capable end of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency.Chapter 12.
** When * MotorMouth: In the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding very first chapter, the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with author points out how unusual it is that Italy never said anything throughout the sort entire chapter due to how much of mission the two had embarked on.a MotorMouth he is in canon. And, unsurprisingly, Felicity takes after him.
** Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also **Allison and America both fit into this trope, too. In fact, a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one lot of the best sword-wielders time, the only difference between Allison and Felicity most of the time is in the group dialect. Otherwise, they are the exact same character.
* RonTheDeathEater: No matter which canon you believe in, there is not a single one in which Prussia would kidnap teenage girls, use them to blackmail the other countries, and eventually [[spoiler:plan to murder them all just to get them out ofnowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
** Kierra, who was also handedthe POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves way]]. And speaking of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not which, his gender bend has literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheapreason for Robynne to be incapacitated than as a real attempt at horror.go along with his plans and has been Ron The Death Eatered, too.
* RonTheDeathEater: No matter which canon you believe in, there is not a single one in which Prussia would kidnap teenage girls, use them to blackmail the other countries, and eventually [[spoiler:plan to murder them all just to get them out of
** Kierra, who was also handed
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheap
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* RetCon: Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot.
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* RetCon: Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot. Meanwhile, Prudence's name was changed in the context of the story from Prudence to Gillian ''in the very last chapter''.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one commonly quoted by the author self-deprecatingly, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
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* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one most commonly quoted by the author self-deprecatingly, quoted, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: Evidently, the gender bends of personified countries all hail from the United States and were simply brainwashed into speaking the accents their counterparts have.
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who [[spoiler:nearly killed a thirteen year old girl with her bare hands]] and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'', with no remorse]]. Despite all of this,however, she managed to get off scott-free because she [[spoiler:cried over it all]] and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia forced her to commit any crimes against her will; in fact, she was displayed to be ''quite pleased'' with her actions on numerous occasions and made her enjoyment of her evil tendencies quite clear. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's [spoiler:rightfully despised by Robynne]] and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who [[spoiler:nearly killed a thirteen year old girl with her bare hands]] and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'', with no remorse]]. Despite all of this,however, she managed to get off scott-free because she [[spoiler:cried over it all]] and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia forced her to commit any crimes against her will; in fact, she was displayed to be ''quite pleased'' with her actions on numerous occasions and made her enjoyment of her evil tendencies quite clear. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's [spoiler:rightfully [[spoiler:rightfully despised by Robynne]] and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
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* AntiClimax: And ''how''. Essentially, [[spoiler:Prudence has a HeelFaceTurn, and Kierra helps her find Prussia so she can tell him how much of a douche he's being and tell him to stop. And surprisingly, ''Prussia accepts this'' and gives up right then and there. ''Prussia'', whose main character trait is being egocentric, ends the conflict because he admits quite uncharacteristically that he's a douche. Everything just dissolves after that, meaning that there was never a great final fight between Prussia or Prudence and any of the swaps. It just sort of...dissolved.]]
* ArtisticLicensePhysics: HOW IN GOD'S NAME CAN YOU ''TRIP OVER A COUCH''!?
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Allison is stabbed and killed right at the beginning of the final battle and brought back to life by Ariana, though the black magic she uses causes a curse to affect all of the swaps. If any of them were to die after that, ''every person in their home country would keel over and die''.]]
* ArtisticLicensePhysics: HOW IN GOD'S NAME CAN YOU ''TRIP OVER A COUCH''!?
* BackFromTheDead: [[spoiler:Allison is stabbed and killed right at the beginning of the final battle and brought back to life by Ariana, though the black magic she uses causes a curse to affect all of the swaps. If any of them were to die after that, ''every person in their home country would keel over and die''.]]
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who nearly killed a thirteen year old girl with her bare hands and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'' with no remorse]]. Despite all of this, she managed to get off scott-free because she cried over it all and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia was forcing her to commit any crimes against her will, and in fact, she was displayed to be quite pleased with her actions on numerous occasions. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's rightfully despised by Robynne and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
** Allison, who essentially tortured and abused and undermined and stole from Mattie throughout Chapter 12 and continued doing so until the end. Her only comeuppance was having to give Mattie's credit card back after she'd ''stole it and used it to buy numerous plane tickets''.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
** Allison, who essentially tortured and abused and undermined and stole from Mattie throughout Chapter 12 and continued doing so until the end. Her only comeuppance was having to give Mattie's credit card back after she'd ''stole it and used it to buy numerous plane tickets''.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Prudence/Gillian has one at the end]], which essentially ends the conflict right there because [[spoiler:Prussia suddenly has one too and begins rambling on about how stupid the conflict was to begin with]].
* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, whonearly [[spoiler:nearly killed a thirteen year old girl with her bare hands hands]] and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'' girl'', with no remorse]]. Despite all of this, this,however, she managed to get off scott-free because she cried [[spoiler:cried over it all all]] and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia was forcing forced her to commit any crimes against her will, and will; in fact, she was displayed to be quite pleased ''quite pleased'' with her actions on numerous occasions. occasions and made her enjoyment of her evil tendencies quite clear. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets being that she's rightfully [spoiler:rightfully despised by Robynne Robynne]] and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she ''killed'']].
** Allison, who essentiallytortured tortures and abused abuses and undermined and stole steals from Mattie throughout Chapter 12 and continued doing continues to do so until the end. end of the fic. Her only comeuppance was is having to give Mattie's credit card back after she'd ''stole ''stolen it and used it to buy numerous plane tickets''.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When
**When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarkedon. Not to mention, Robynne--who on.
**Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl herage. And Kierra, age.
**Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who
** Allison, who essentially
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency.
**When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked
**Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her
**Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
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** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison 'did' need the glasses.
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** Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison 'did' ''did'' need the glasses.
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'Genderswapped Nations' is a HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic written by Fanfiction.Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012.
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A sequel fanfiction, titled 'Triple Swap', was created as a tie-in/sequel to this fanfiction, but it has yet to be finished and has not been updated since December 19th, 2012 and is unlikely to be finished anytime soon. Evidently, the author of 'Genderswapped Nations' has said that the fanfiction will be reworked now that she has grown to be a better writer, but this has not officially been confirmed and no straightforward remake has been posted as of yet.
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A sequel fanfiction, titled 'Triple Swap', ''Triple Swap'', was created as a tie-in/sequel to this fanfiction, but it has yet to be finished and has not been updated since December 19th, 2012 and is unlikely to be finished anytime soon. Evidently, the author of 'Genderswapped Nations' ''Genderswapped Nations'' has said that the fanfiction will be reworked now that she has grown to be a better writer, but this has not officially been confirmed and no straightforward remake has been posted as of yet.
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who nearly killed a fourteen year old girl with her bare hands and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:literally killed the youngest of all of the group, Allison]] and managed to get off scott-free because she cried over it all and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia was forcing her to commit any crimes against her will, and in fact, she was displayed to be quite pleased with her actions on numerous occasions. Even in the sequel story, the most comeuppance she gets is being rightfully despised by Robynne and openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she killed]].
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And evidently, Kierra managed to dance through the final battle, 'through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, 'Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless'. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And evidently, Kierra managed to dance through the final battle, 'through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, 'Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless'. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
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* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who nearly killed a fourteen thirteen year old girl with her bare hands and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:literally killed the youngest of [[spoiler:killed Allison, a ''twelve year old girl'' with no remorse]]. Despite all of the group, Allison]] and this, she managed to get off scott-free because she cried over it all and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is no proof whatsoever that Prussia was forcing her to commit any crimes against her will, and in fact, she was displayed to be quite pleased with her actions on numerous occasions. Even in the sequel story, she was shown to be friends with the gender swaps, with the most comeuppance she gets is being that she's rightfully despised by Robynne and yet openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she killed]].
''killed'']].
**Allison, who essentially tortured and abused and undermined and stole from Mattie throughout Chapter 12 and continued doing so until the end. Her only comeuppance was having to give Mattie's credit card back after she'd ''stole it and used it to buy numerous plane tickets''.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. Andevidently, Kierra Kierra, who was also handed the POV for a brief time, managed to dance through the final battle, 'through ''through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' enemies'' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. ''completely unharmed''. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in canon, 'Kierra ''Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless'.regardless''. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
**Allison, who essentially tortured and abused and undermined and stole from Mattie throughout Chapter 12 and continued doing so until the end. Her only comeuppance was having to give Mattie's credit card back after she'd ''stole it and used it to buy numerous plane tickets''.
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And
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*ADayInTheLimelight: Chapter 5 is meant to be this for Allison, and Chapter 12 is supposed to be one for Mattie.
* DullSurprise: Mattie, in exchange from Chapter 18:
-->[''A piercing shriek sounds.'']
-->'''Felicity:''' "Oh no! Is somebody hurt?
-->'''Mattie:''' "Probably."
-->[''A piercing shriek sounds.'']
-->'''Felicity:''' "Oh no! Is somebody hurt?
-->'''Mattie:''' "Probably."
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* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And evidently, Kierra managed to dance through the final battle, 'through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in t
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* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And evidently, Kierra managed to dance through the final battle, 'through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in tcanon, 'Kierra is not literally Japan as a girl and shouldn't be able to do this regardless'. Besides, even Japan himself would not be capable of such a feat, much less a little girl with little to no sword training and no relation to him at all besides looking and acting the same.
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* RetCon: Canada's gender bend's name was unceremoniously changed from Alexis to Mattie at the beginning of Chapter 5. The author originally claimed that this is because 'she forgot Canada's human name', but she later admitted that it was because she had no knowledge of what Canada's human name actually was and made up her name on the spot.
**Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison 'did' need the glasses.
**Another retcon occurs when it is revealed at the end that Allison never needed her glasses, even though it was proven in Chapter 2 that Allison 'did' need the glasses.
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'Genderswapped Nations' is a Hetalia: Axis Powers fanfic written by Fanfiction.net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012.
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'Genderswapped Nations' is a Hetalia: Axis Powers HetaliaAxisPowers fanfic written by Fanfiction.net Net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012.
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!! [Genderswapped Nations] contains examples of:
. Big Bad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing and Stories", was bent on conquering the world at first but later changed his mind and decided that he only wanted to be a country again.
. Self-Insert Fic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
. Mary-Sue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is made to act like a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of these proficiencies. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
. Big Bad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing and Stories", was bent on conquering the world at first but later changed his mind and decided that he only wanted to be a country again.
. Self-Insert Fic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
. Mary-Sue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is made to act like a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of these proficiencies. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
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!! [Genderswapped Nations] 'Genderswapped Nations' contains examples of:
. Big Bad:of:
* AlphaBitch: For a majority of the story, Francisca is portrayed to be one, although she quickly becomes somewhat less-so after she and Ariana get kidnapped for a second time.
* BigBad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing andStories", was Stories"--was bent on conquering the world at first but later changed his mind and decided that he only wanted to be a country again.
. Self-Insert Fic: Thisagain.
* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who nearly killed a fourteen year old girl with her bare hands and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:literally killed the youngest of all of the group, Allison]] and managed to get off scott-free because she cried over it all and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There isrevealed no proof whatsoever that Prussia was forcing her to commit any crimes against her will, and in fact, she was displayed to be one quite pleased with her actions on numerous occasions. Even in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that sequel story, the story is based on a common fantasy most comeuppance she had of secretly gets is being the gender bend of England.
. Mary-Sue:rightfully despised by Robynne and openly trusted by everyone else, [[spoiler:including Allison, who she killed]].
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through ismade to act like a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of these proficiencies.this proficiency. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age. And evidently, Kierra managed to dance through the final battle, 'through troves of armed, dangerous enemies' while killing many of her adversaries and coming out 'completely unharmed. It doesn't matter how proficient Japan may be with a sword in t
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheap reason for Robynne to be incapacitated than as a real attempt at horror.
* SelfInsertFic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one commonly quoted by the author self-deprecatingly, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
. Big Bad:
* AlphaBitch: For a majority of the story, Francisca is portrayed to be one, although she quickly becomes somewhat less-so after she and Ariana get kidnapped for a second time.
* BigBad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing and
. Self-Insert Fic: This
* KarmaHoudini: Prudence, who nearly killed a fourteen year old girl with her bare hands and attempted to have a group of twelve other teens brutally murdered by hired warriors and assassins and [[spoiler:literally killed the youngest of all of the group, Allison]] and managed to get off scott-free because she cried over it all and claimed that Prussia made her do it. There is
. Mary-Sue:
* MarySue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is
* NightmareFuel: Prudence's mutilation of Robynne was meant to be Nightmare Fuel--as explicitly stated by the author--but it comes off more as a cheap reason for Robynne to be incapacitated than as a real attempt at horror.
* SelfInsertFic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: "Now that I've traduced myself" is the one commonly quoted by the author self-deprecatingly, though there are numerous more egregious examples.
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'Genderswapped Nations' is a Hetalia: Axis Powers fanfic written by Fanfiction.net user Pandapika. Its first chapter was uploaded to the website on February 5th, 2012, and continued onward for eighteen chapters since then until its nineteenth chapter, an author's note relaying information to the readers about the future of the project, was uploaded on August 19th, 2012.
In short, the plot centers around a girl named Ariana Kirkland, an American girl who is kidnapped from her home by mysterious men. She soon finds out that she, along with the seven other girls who were kidnapped, is a gender bend of the countries, though as young children instead of adults. It is also revealed that Prussia is the one responsible for this incident, as he wants to become a country again by blackmailing the countries whose gender bends he's kidnapped into making him an official country again. From there on, the plot follows Ariana and the other gender bends as they attempt to thwart Prussia's plans for world domination however they can.
A sequel fanfiction, titled 'Triple Swap', was created as a tie-in/sequel to this fanfiction, but it has yet to be finished and has not been updated since December 19th, 2012 and is unlikely to be finished anytime soon. Evidently, the author of 'Genderswapped Nations' has said that the fanfiction will be reworked now that she has grown to be a better writer, but this has not officially been confirmed and no straightforward remake has been posted as of yet.
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!! [Genderswapped Nations] contains examples of:
. Big Bad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing and Stories", was bent on conquering the world at first but later changed his mind and decided that he only wanted to be a country again.
. Self-Insert Fic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
. Mary-Sue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is made to act like a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of these proficiencies. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
In short, the plot centers around a girl named Ariana Kirkland, an American girl who is kidnapped from her home by mysterious men. She soon finds out that she, along with the seven other girls who were kidnapped, is a gender bend of the countries, though as young children instead of adults. It is also revealed that Prussia is the one responsible for this incident, as he wants to become a country again by blackmailing the countries whose gender bends he's kidnapped into making him an official country again. From there on, the plot follows Ariana and the other gender bends as they attempt to thwart Prussia's plans for world domination however they can.
A sequel fanfiction, titled 'Triple Swap', was created as a tie-in/sequel to this fanfiction, but it has yet to be finished and has not been updated since December 19th, 2012 and is unlikely to be finished anytime soon. Evidently, the author of 'Genderswapped Nations' has said that the fanfiction will be reworked now that she has grown to be a better writer, but this has not officially been confirmed and no straightforward remake has been posted as of yet.
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!! [Genderswapped Nations] contains examples of:
. Big Bad: Prussia, who, as Word of God states in the author's note and as he exposits in Chapter 17--the aptly named "Stabbing and Stories", was bent on conquering the world at first but later changed his mind and decided that he only wanted to be a country again.
. Self-Insert Fic: This is revealed to be one in the author's note, where Pandapika admits that the story is based on a common fantasy she had of secretly being the gender bend of England.
. Mary-Sue: Generally, whomever's point of view the reader is seeing through is made to act like a Mary-Sue in the context of the story. Ariana, the character who has the most time of all of the bends, is constantly shown to be 'the leader' of the bends and the most competent and capable of them all in any capacity, though England, her counterpart, shows little to none of these proficiencies. When the POV switched to Mattie (formerly known as Alexis) in Chapter 12, "Heroes and Helicopters", she was shown to somehow 'also' possess these abilities, as she was more than capable of finding the imprisoned gender swaps with minimal effort and capable of doing more to help than Allison, who was easily more experienced with the sort of mission the two had embarked on. Not to mention, Robynne--who only had the POV once--was also a major Mary-Sue, as she was apparently suddenly one of the best sword-wielders in the group out of nowhere and was able to go toe to toe with Prudence for an unrealistic amount of time until she was defeated...and even then, she somehow managed to live through injuries that would otherwise be more than fatal if inflicted on a girl her age.
