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[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34945744/chapters/87025225 Now on Archive of Our Own.]]
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Both are now on Platform/ArchiveOfOurOwn with the main story [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34945744/chapters/87025225 Now on Archive of Our Own.]]here]] and the Side Story [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/37582597/chapters/93808810 here]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Several times this has played into the story due to the presence of others.
** Because Makoto was with Ben at the time, Ben did not end up turning into Cannonbolt and didn't start fighting anyone in Mr. Baumann's store.
** Due to Tsubaki and Makoto being with them, the Screegit isn't set loose [[spoiler:at first]] and Professor Hokestar, after Ben wants to buy his formula to gift to his mother, ends up becoming a rich man through selling his formula as a gardening aide.
** Because Makoto kept hitting Alien X, Bellicus put to vote to see what was going on out there and, as Makoto was being erased, her last words moved Serena to convince Bellicus to restore the universe by 'borrowing' from the world Makoto was from instead of making a brand new universe that was near-identical to the original.
** Ben realizes he accidentally broke up with Julie significantly earlier and sees her with Herve on one of her televised matches. As such, when he goes to meet with her while she's in Bellwood it's merely to clear the air, with no intentions of trying to get back together [[spoiler:especially since he is [[OfficialCouple dating Makoto]] by that point]].
** [[spoiler:Due to Tsukasa Kadoya doing the trial against the Celestialsapiens in Ben's place, Ben will not be able to master Alien X through the battle against the Celestialsapiens' chosen fighter.]]
** Because Makoto was with Ben at the time, Ben did not end up turning into Cannonbolt and didn't start fighting anyone in Mr. Baumann's store.
** Due to Tsubaki and Makoto being with them, the Screegit isn't set loose [[spoiler:at first]] and Professor Hokestar, after Ben wants to buy his formula to gift to his mother, ends up becoming a rich man through selling his formula as a gardening aide.
** Because Makoto kept hitting Alien X, Bellicus put to vote to see what was going on out there and, as Makoto was being erased, her last words moved Serena to convince Bellicus to restore the universe by 'borrowing' from the world Makoto was from instead of making a brand new universe that was near-identical to the original.
** Ben realizes he accidentally broke up with Julie significantly earlier and sees her with Herve on one of her televised matches. As such, when he goes to meet with her while she's in Bellwood it's merely to clear the air, with no intentions of trying to get back together [[spoiler:especially since he is [[OfficialCouple dating Makoto]] by that point]].
** [[spoiler:Due to Tsukasa Kadoya doing the trial against the Celestialsapiens in Ben's place, Ben will not be able to master Alien X through the battle against the Celestialsapiens' chosen fighter.]]
* PointOfDivergence: Several times this has played into the story due to the presence of others.
** Because Makoto was with Ben at the time, Ben did not end up turning into Cannonbolt and didn't start fighting anyone in Mr. Baumann's store.
** Due to Tsubaki and Makoto being with them, the Screegit isn't set loose [[spoiler:at first]] and Professor Hokestar, after Ben wants to buy his formula to gift to his mother, ends up becoming a rich man through selling his formula as a gardening aide.
** Because Makoto kept hitting Alien X, Bellicus put to vote to see what was going on out there and, as Makoto was being erased, her last words moved Serena to convince Bellicus to restore the universe by 'borrowing' from the world Makoto was from instead of making a brand new universe that was near-identical to the original.
** Ben realizes he accidentally broke up with Julie significantly earlier and sees her with Herve on one of her televised matches. As such, when he goes to meet with her while she's in Bellwood it's merely to clear the air, with no intentions of trying to get back together [[spoiler:especially since he is [[OfficialCouple dating Makoto]] by that point]].
** [[spoiler:Due to Tsukasa Kadoya doing the trial against the Celestialsapiens in Ben's place, Ben will not be able to master Alien X through the battle against the Celestialsapiens' chosen fighter.]]
** Because Makoto was with Ben at the time, Ben did not end up turning into Cannonbolt and didn't start fighting anyone in Mr. Baumann's store.
** Due to Tsubaki and Makoto being with them, the Screegit isn't set loose [[spoiler:at first]] and Professor Hokestar, after Ben wants to buy his formula to gift to his mother, ends up becoming a rich man through selling his formula as a gardening aide.
** Because Makoto kept hitting Alien X, Bellicus put to vote to see what was going on out there and, as Makoto was being erased, her last words moved Serena to convince Bellicus to restore the universe by 'borrowing' from the world Makoto was from instead of making a brand new universe that was near-identical to the original.
** Ben realizes he accidentally broke up with Julie significantly earlier and sees her with Herve on one of her televised matches. As such, when he goes to meet with her while she's in Bellwood it's merely to clear the air, with no intentions of trying to get back together [[spoiler:especially since he is [[OfficialCouple dating Makoto]] by that point]].
** [[spoiler:Due to Tsukasa Kadoya doing the trial against the Celestialsapiens in Ben's place, Ben will not be able to master Alien X through the battle against the Celestialsapiens' chosen fighter.]]
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* NotMeThisTime: Everyone assumes the above FreakyFridayFlip was another one of [[MadScientist Kajun's]] experiments, though when confronted she is confused and says she would have made countermeasures if she had. [[spoiler:It turns out it was Luna [[MagicMisfire miscasting some spells]].]]
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* NotMeThisTime: Everyone assumes the above FreakyFridayFlip was another one of [[MadScientist Kajun's]] experiments, though when confronted she is confused and says she would have made countermeasures if she had. [[spoiler:It turns out it was Luna [[MagicMisfire miscasting some spells]].a spell]].]]
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* TheSevenMysteries: This is the very first case of the new club created by Jenny that they took on. They solved all seven mysteries, [[spoiler:but the seventh one was actually a very real Horror that was taken down by Garo.]].
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* TheSevenMysteries: This is the very first case of the new club created by Jenny that they took on. They solved all seven mysteries, [[spoiler:but the seventh one was actually a very real Horror that was taken down by Garo.]].Garo]].
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* ThisExplainsSoMuch: The revelation that [[spoiler:Akane has some Apoplexian DNA helps explain several of her quirks, including her BigEater, BloodKnight and [[TheDitz easily distracted]] nature, to her friends astonishment]].
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* ThisExplainsSoMuch: The revelation that [[spoiler:Akane has some Apoplexian DNA helps explain several of her quirks, including her BigEater, BloodKnight BloodKnight, and [[TheDitz easily distracted]] nature, to her friends astonishment]].
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* SnapBack: At the end of ''Gwen 10'', Grandpa Max got the Omnitrix at the end of the episode. In this fic, Gwen still has it with it not being revealed how she got it back.
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* AdaptationalBadass: The Forever Knights under the leadership of [[WesternAnimation/Ben102016 the Forever Knight]] manage to stalemate Ben and co, a far cry from TheRemnant they were in canon.
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* AdaptationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass:
** The Forever Knights under the leadership of [[WesternAnimation/Ben102016 the Forever Knight]] manage to stalemate Ben and co, a far cry from TheRemnant they were incanon.canon.
** The Ben from ''Gwen 10'' has the Ultimatrix.
** The Forever Knights under the leadership of [[WesternAnimation/Ben102016 the Forever Knight]] manage to stalemate Ben and co, a far cry from TheRemnant they were in
** The Ben from ''Gwen 10'' has the Ultimatrix.
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** Although the setting uses WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated, it incorporates elements from both the IDW G1 comics(Overlord being very much his IDW self, references to the mythical Titans, the Decepticon Justice Division) and the Aligned continuity(Solus Prime being the source of female Cybertronians, Vector Prime having his normal name).
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** Although the setting uses WesternAnimation/TransformersAnimated, it incorporates elements from both the IDW G1 comics(Overlord comics (Overlord being very much his IDW self, references to the mythical Titans, the Decepticon Justice Division) and the Aligned continuity(Solus continuity (Solus Prime being the source of female Cybertronians, Vector Prime having his normal name).
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* AdaptationalNameChange: The Ormerowons who were mentioned in the ending of ''Secret of the Omnitrix'' are renamed Wrighthers.
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Currently stands at 103 chapters, alongside [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13674264/1/Galactic-Shift-Extend-Side-Stories a side story]] that currently has 29 chapters.
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Currently stands at 103 104 chapters, alongside [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13674264/1/Galactic-Shift-Extend-Side-Stories a side story]] that currently has 29 chapters.
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* TakeThat: In Chapter 57, Will Harangue mentions that Creator/FoxNewsChannel "gave [him] a segment after recognizing [his] [[BlatantLies plan to be a spy within the Incurseans' ranks]]".
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* TakeThat: In Chapter 57, Will Harangue mentions that Creator/FoxNewsChannel Fox News Channel "gave [him] a segment after recognizing [his] [[BlatantLies plan to be a spy within the Incurseans' ranks]]".
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Moving to Shout Out page.
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* ShoutOut:
** Several to WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged.
*** Similar to Freeza, Ragna keeps track of StockPhrases from people threatening him.
*** Makoto utters "I need an adult" whenever Animo expresses interest in her [[HalfHumanHybrid unique biology]].
** Chapter 92, "Stray Dog Strut", is one of ''Anime/CowboyBebop'''s second episode, complete with an altered Welsh Corgi with a German number for a name.
** The date that Makoto arrives in the past is the premiere date for Ben 10 Omniverse.
** Several to WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged.
*** Similar to Freeza, Ragna keeps track of StockPhrases from people threatening him.
*** Makoto utters "I need an adult" whenever Animo expresses interest in her [[HalfHumanHybrid unique biology]].
** Chapter 92, "Stray Dog Strut", is one of ''Anime/CowboyBebop'''s second episode, complete with an altered Welsh Corgi with a German number for a name.
** The date that Makoto arrives in the past is the premiere date for Ben 10 Omniverse.
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* TheSevenMysteries: This is the very first case of the new club created by Jenny that they took on. They solved all seven mysteries, [[spoiler:but the seventh one was actually a very real Horror that was taken down by Garo.]]
* ShoutOut: Danny runs into a trio of Ectonurites called the Spookie Sibs, who are expies of the [[WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMeetsTheBooBrothers Boo Brothers]], even mentioning they would've used that name if it wasn't copyrighted.
* ShoutOut: Danny runs into a trio of Ectonurites called the Spookie Sibs, who are expies of the [[WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMeetsTheBooBrothers Boo Brothers]], even mentioning they would've used that name if it wasn't copyrighted.
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* TheSevenMysteries: This is the very first case of the new club created by Jenny that they took on. They solved all seven mysteries, [[spoiler:but the seventh one was actually a very real Horror that was taken down by Garo.]]
* ShoutOut: Danny runs into a trio of Ectonurites called the Spookie Sibs, who are expies of the [[WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMeetsTheBooBrothers Boo Brothers]], even mentioning they would've used that name if it wasn't copyrighted.]].
* ShoutOut: Danny runs into a trio of Ectonurites called the Spookie Sibs, who are expies of the [[WesternAnimation/ScoobyDooMeetsTheBooBrothers Boo Brothers]], even mentioning they would've used that name if it wasn't copyrighted.
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Currently stands at 103 chapters, alongside [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13674264/1/Galactic-Shift-Extend-Side-Stories a side story]] that currently has 28 chapters.
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Currently stands at 103 chapters, alongside [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13674264/1/Galactic-Shift-Extend-Side-Stories a side story]] that currently has 28 29 chapters.
