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--> '''Shirou:''' ''Sacrifice and save, blade of the cursed hero.'' '''Kitsurugi!'''
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--> '''Shirou:''' ''Sacrifice and save, blade of the cursed hero.'' '''Kitsurugi!''''''Kiritsugu!'''
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*BadassCreed: Not finished yet, but he's close to [[FieldOfBlades Unlimited Blade Works]]:
--> ''I am the bone of my sword...Fire is my blood… and Glass is my heart...Through countless battles I forever wait, alone on the hill of blades…… For Hell's hands to bear…… For Heaven's hands to temper…''
--> ''I am the bone of my sword...Fire is my blood… and Glass is my heart...Through countless battles I forever wait, alone on the hill of blades…… For Hell's hands to bear…… For Heaven's hands to temper…''
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* BlastingItOutOfTheirHands: Rin doing this to Louvre, which several characters stating they couldn't believe it actually worked...
--> ''"… I can't believe that actually worked…" Rin, Bazett, Shirou, and Waver muttered under their breaths in relief and or mild disbelief.''
--> ''"… I can't believe that actually worked…" Rin, Bazett, Shirou, and Waver muttered under their breaths in relief and or mild disbelief.''
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--> '''Shirou:''' ''Sacrifice and save, blade of the cursed hero.'' '''Kitsurugi!'''
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* [[spoiler: ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Shirou skewering Louvre with his whole arsenal of weapons, arsenal which count is measured in hundred's if not in thousands.]]
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* [[spoiler: ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Shirou [[HumanPincushion skewering Louvre with his whole arsenal of weapons, weapons]], arsenal which count is measured in hundred's if not in thousands.]]
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* SoulCuttingBlade: Kiritsugus intended function was to cripple magus' magic circuits, but when that effect is reinforced by the curse of Angra Manyu, the effect goes way further, all the way to the soul.
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* BlackSwordsAreBetter: Shirou's most dangerous sword, Kiritsugu is black long sword with blood red stains and [[TaintedVeins brown veins]] on it.
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* StormOfBlades: Like his canon counterpart, Shirou is completely capable of this. [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven when during Shirous fight with Louvre when he traces practically his whole arsenal simultaneously]]
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* StormOfBlades: Like his canon counterpart, Shirou is completely capable of this. [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven when during Shirous fight with Louvre when he traces practically his whole arsenal simultaneously]]
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* StormOfBlades: Like his canon counterpart, Shirou is completely capable of this. [[spoiler: Taken UpToEleven when during Shirous fight with Louvre when he traces practically his whole arsenal simultaneously]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans [[HaveANiceDeath Tiger Dojo]]), and the life of the Shirou that became a Counter Guardian.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans [[HaveANiceDeath Tiger Dojo]]), and the life of the Shirou that became a Counter Guardian. Guardian.
* FlamingSword: Louvre's son has one with blue flame that drains od on contact.
* FlamingSword: Louvre's son has one with blue flame that drains od on contact.
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* [[spoiler: ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Shirou skewering Louvre with his whole arsenal of weapons, arsenal which count is measured in hundred's if not in thousands.]]
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* IndirectKiss: Rin didn't realize she was feeding a still recovering Shirou using the same chopstick she was eating with until Sakura pointed it out to her.
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* IndirectKiss: Rin didn't realize she was feeding a still recovering Shirou using the same chopstick chopsticks she was eating with until Sakura pointed it out to her.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7207791/1/From_Fake_Dreams From Fake Dreams]]'' is a FateStayNight AlternateUniverseFic written by Third Fang, author of the [[{{Doorstopper}} incredibly long]] ''[[YetAgain Yet again, with a little extra help]]'' FanFic. The story follows the Magus Killer as he seeks to have Shirou properly trained in skills for the upcoming war, and then Shirou as he tries to make sense of the world of Magi he's been thrust deep into.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7207791/1/From_Fake_Dreams From Fake Dreams]]'' is a FateStayNight AlternateUniverseFic written by Third Fang, author of the [[{{Doorstopper}} incredibly long]] ''[[YetAgain ''[[Fanfic/YetAgain Yet again, with a little extra help]]'' FanFic. The story follows the Magus Killer as he seeks to have Shirou properly trained in skills for the upcoming war, and then Shirou as he tries to make sense of the world of Magi he's been thrust deep into.
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* AccidentalInnuendo: A ridiculous amount from Shirou in chapter 15.
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* DeaderThanDead: The final fate of anything hit by Kiritsugu Origin Blade.
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* DeaderThanDead: The final fate of anything hit by Kiritsugu Origin Blade. [[spoiler:The souls can't even go through {{reincarnation}}.]]
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans Tiger Dojo), and the life of the Shirou that became a Counter Guardian.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans [[HaveANiceDeath Tiger Dojo), Dojo]]), and the life of the Shirou that became a Counter Guardian.
* IAmNotMyFather: Shirou insist it is not his intent to become like his father, despite how he has the potential to become the next Magus Killer.
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** Which Rin is forced to realise when she [[spoiler: learns of his Reality Marble.]]
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** [[JerkassRealization Which Rin is forced to realise when she she]] [[spoiler: learns of his Reality Marble.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After [[FateHollowAtaraxia Bazette]] saves Shirou by killing Louvre's daughter, she pretty much says this in regards to him making a {{Geas}} with Louvre's son in order to protect Rin and Sakura.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After [[FateHollowAtaraxia Bazette]] [[BigDamnHeroes saves Shirou Shirou]] by killing Louvre's daughter, she pretty much says this in regards to him making a {{Geas}} with Louvre's son in order to protect Rin and Sakura.]]
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** [[spoiler: [[AssholeVictim Not that anyone actually complained…]]]]
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** Natalie: Can cut through anything with magic resistance lower than C+ rank and if it's a living thing, B rank, if he just touches them with it. Otherwise it's an AbsurdlySharpSword.
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** Natalie: Natalia: Can cut through anything with magic resistance lower than C+ rank and if it's a living thing, B rank, if he just touches them with it. Otherwise it's an AbsurdlySharpSword.
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* BigBadEnsemble: Louvre, Zouken Matou, Kirei Kotomine & Gilgamesh. For now, anyway.
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* BigBadEnsemble: Louvre, Zouken Matou, Kirei Kotomine & Gilgamesh. For now, anyway.anyway..
* [[CoolSword Cool Swords]]: The Origin Swords are GameBreaker material to be blunt, to the point that Shirou could easily become TheDreaded for other Magus. [[CoolBigSis Bazett]] has told him upfront she'd kill him if he ever made her list before he could use them.
** Natalie: Can cut through anything with magic resistance lower than C+ rank and if it's a living thing, B rank, if he just touches them with it. Otherwise it's an AbsurdlySharpSword.
** Maiya: Can bind things, including alterations and souls improperly, effectively screwing over anything that can split itself apart or adding something to their very core.
** Kiritsugu: This blade...well, it Severs and Binds like the Origin Bullets, but combined with the curse...it hits the very soul. If it hits someone's magic, they could literally lose the memory of the spell, and if it hit them...let's say that [[{{Tsukihime}} Roa]] wouldn't escape it.
* [[CoolSword Cool Swords]]: The Origin Swords are GameBreaker material to be blunt, to the point that Shirou could easily become TheDreaded for other Magus. [[CoolBigSis Bazett]] has told him upfront she'd kill him if he ever made her list before he could use them.
** Natalie: Can cut through anything with magic resistance lower than C+ rank and if it's a living thing, B rank, if he just touches them with it. Otherwise it's an AbsurdlySharpSword.
** Maiya: Can bind things, including alterations and souls improperly, effectively screwing over anything that can split itself apart or adding something to their very core.
** Kiritsugu: This blade...well, it Severs and Binds like the Origin Bullets, but combined with the curse...it hits the very soul. If it hits someone's magic, they could literally lose the memory of the spell, and if it hit them...let's say that [[{{Tsukihime}} Roa]] wouldn't escape it.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Shinji]] bites it after running into Lourve's son.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: Shinji]] bites it after running into Lourve's Louvre's son.
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* MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Part of Kiritsugu's plan include making Origin Swords from his bones for Shirou, which only occurs after his death.]]
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* MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Part of Kiritsugu's plan include includes making Origin Swords from his bones for Shirou, which only occurs after his death.]]
** MeaningfulName: [[spoiler: [[ContinuityNod Like Kiritsugu himself]], the name reflects both Origins: Severing ("kiri") and Binding ("tsugu").]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After [[FateHollowAtaraxia Bazette]] saves Shirou by killing Lourve's daughter, she pretty much says this in regards to him making a {{Geas}} with Lourve's son in order to protect Rin and Sakura.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After [[FateHollowAtaraxia Bazette]] saves Shirou by killing Lourve's Louvre's daughter, she pretty much says this in regards to him making a {{Geas}} with Lourve's Louvre's son in order to protect Rin and Sakura.]]
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* AmbiguouslyAutistic: Shirou, who doesn't seem to realise that Rin has feelings for him and consistently takes her at her word. This [[PoorCommunicationKills causes]]... a [[{{Understatement}} little friction]].
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* AmbiguouslyAutistic: AmbiguousDisorder: Shirou, who doesn't seem to realise that Rin has feelings for him and consistently takes her at her word. This [[PoorCommunicationKills causes]]... a [[{{Understatement}} little friction]]. Being "distorted" (as in canon), this is unsurprising.
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* AmbiguouslyAutistic: Shirou, who doesn't seem to realise that Rin has feelings for him and consistently takes her at her word. This [[PoorCommunicationKills causes]]... a [[{{Understatement}} little friction]].
* BigBadEnsemble: Louvre, Zouken Matou, Kirei Kotomine & Gilgamesh. For now, anyway.
* DarkIsNotEvil: [[spoiler: Shirou's swords]] may turn out to be this.
* BigBadEnsemble: Louvre, Zouken Matou, Kirei Kotomine & Gilgamesh. For now, anyway.
* DarkIsNotEvil: [[spoiler: Shirou's swords]] may turn out to be this.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Shinji [[spoiler: Shinji]] bites it after running into Lourve's son.
* ForWantOfANail
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* PoorCommunicationKills: When the {{Tsundere}} nature of Rin clashes with "just want to be helpful to anyone" nature of Shirou. [[YouKnowWhatYouDid Shirou doesn't even know what he did wrong when Rin cuts off all contact for some time.]]
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* PoorCommunicationKills: When the {{Tsundere}} nature of Rin clashes with "just want to be helpful to anyone" nature of Shirou. [[YouKnowWhatYouDid Shirou doesn't even know what he did wrong when Rin cuts off all contact for some time.]]time]].
** Which Rin is forced to realise when she [[spoiler: learns of his Reality Marble.]]
* PosthumousCharacter: Kiritsugu is dead after 3 years of raising Shirou, by the end of Chapter 5.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Kiritsugu dies even sooner than in canon due to [[spoiler: giving Shirou his magic circuits]], but his actions here set the new plot entirely into swing.
** Which Rin is forced to realise when she [[spoiler: learns of his Reality Marble.]]
* PosthumousCharacter: Kiritsugu is dead after 3 years of raising Shirou, by the end of Chapter 5.
* SmallRoleBigImpact: Kiritsugu dies even sooner than in canon due to [[spoiler: giving Shirou his magic circuits]], but his actions here set the new plot entirely into swing.
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* MyDeathIsOnlyTheBeginning: [[spoiler:Part of Kiritsugu's plan include making Origin Swords from his bones for Shirou, which only occurs after his death.]]
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* ThanatosGambit: [[spoiler:Part of Kiritsugu's plan include making Origin Swords from his bones for Shirou.]]
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: When Shirou is returning a prana-filled jewel to Rin, Taiga finds Shirou got himself a new girlfriend.
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* NotWhatItLooksLike: When Shirou is returning a prana-filled jewel to Rin, Taiga finds thinks Shirou got himself a new girlfriend.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans Tiger Dojo), and the life of the Shirou that became ad Counter Guardian.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, {{Bad End}}s (sans Tiger Dojo), and the life of the Shirou that became ad a Counter Guardian.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, BadEnds (sans Tiger Dojo), and the life of the Shirou that became ad Counter Guardian.
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* DreamingOfThingsToCome: Basically what kicks off the story. Kiritsugu basically sees all three routes, the MultipleEndings, BadEnds {{Bad End}}s (sans Tiger Dojo), and the life of the Shirou that became ad Counter Guardian.
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* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:After [[FateHollowAtaraxia Bazette]] saves Shirou by killing Lourve's daughter, she pretty much says this in regards to him making a {{Geas}} with Lourve's son in order to protect Rin and Sakura.]]
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* NamedWeapons: [[spoiler: The two curved blades of Severing and Binding were named Natalia and Maiya respectively, while the longsword that contains both Origins was named after Kiritsugu himself.]]
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* OriginalCharacter: Sirius McGinty, crafter of Mystic Codes, including Kiritsugu's Thompson Contender.
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* OriginalCharacter: Sirius McGinty, [=McGinty=], crafter of Mystic Codes, including Kiritsugu's Thompson Contender.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[{{Tsukihime}} Louvre]], whose desire for Mystic Codes and Conceptual Weapons has him kidnapping Sirius, which leads to the chain of events that exposes the existence of Shirou and his abilities to the Mage Association, but worse of all, to Kotomine, Zouken, and Gilgamesh.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: [[{{Tsukihime}} Louvre]], whose desire for Mystic Codes and Conceptual Weapons has him kidnapping Sirius, which Sirius. This leads to the chain of events that exposes the existence of Shirou and his abilities not just to the Mage Association, but worse of all, to Kotomine, Zouken, and Gilgamesh.
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'''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7207791/1/From_Fake_Dreams From Fake Dreams]]''' is a FateStayNight AlternateUniverseFic written by Third Fang, author of the [[Doorstopper incredibly long]] '''[[YetAgain Yet again, with a little extra help]]''' FanFic. The story follows the Magus Killer as he seeks to have Shirou properly trained in skills for the upcoming war, and then Shirou as he tries to make sense of the world of Magi he's been thrust deep into.
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