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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518796/1/From-Beyond From Beyond]] is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' ForWantOfANail Fic by ''Creator/CoeurAlAran'' in which [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Jaune dies during initiation]]... [[YouCanSeeMe Only to stick around as a ghost only Blake can see]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11518796/1/From-Beyond From Beyond]] is a ''WebAnimation/{{RWBY}}'' ForWantOfANail WhatIf Fic by ''Creator/CoeurAlAran'' in which [[FirstEpisodeSpoiler Jaune dies during initiation]]... [[YouCanSeeMe Only to stick around as a ghost only Blake can see]].
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* ForWantOfANail: Pyrrha did not break Jaune's fall in this continuity (though not for lack of trying), resulting in his death when he hits the ground.
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* PointOfDivergence: Pyrrha did not break Jaune's fall in this continuity (though not for lack of trying), resulting in his death when he hits the ground.
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* AlternateUniverseFic: Jaune isn't saved by Pyrrha during the "landing strategy" scene from Volume 1's initiation, he dies from the fall without his Aura unlocked, and his disembodied spirit somehow gets anchored to Blake.
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** While the canon Pietro is a bit of an AbsentMindedProfessor, here he's a full-on BunnyEarsLawyer: incredibly literal minded, prone to go on bizarre tangents and make statements that have the bareness shred of logic. And that's when he ''isn't'' supposedly ObfuscatingInsanity.
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** While the canon Pietro is a bit of an AbsentMindedProfessor, here he's a full-on BunnyEarsLawyer: BunnyEarsLawyer, being incredibly literal minded, prone to go on bizarre tangents tangents, and make constantly making statements that have the bareness shred of logic. And that's when he ''isn't'' supposedly ObfuscatingInsanity.
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: How the story ends. [[spoiler:Jaune is now possessing Amber's body permanently and has the Fall Maiden's powers and he refuses to go into hiding as she did, not wanting to live a horrible, lonely life. Salem is still around and will need to be dealt with in the future]].
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* AndTheAdventureContinues: How the story ends. [[spoiler:Jaune is now possessing Amber's body permanently permanently, and by proxy, has her half of the Fall Maiden's powers and he refuses to go into hiding as she did, not wanting to live a horrible, lonely life. powers. However, Jaune must now join the fight against Salem and start training for a rematch against Cinder, who is still around and will need to be dealt on the loose with in the future]].Maiden powers herself.]]
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* DeathByIrony: Jaune's death is a result of evading Pyrrha's javelin. A boy with no combat experience managed to dodge a deadly weapon thrown at him from seemingly nowhere, that was thrown by a famous prodigy with the intent to save his life.
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* DeathByIrony: Jaune's death is a result of evading Pyrrha's javelin. A boy with despite having no combat experience experience, managed to dodge a deadly weapon thrown at him from seemingly nowhere, nowhere while in free fall, that was thrown by a famous prodigy no less. Unfortunately, Pyrrha threw her javelin with the intent to safely stop said free fall and save his life.
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* DemonicPossession: Jaune is capable of this. He can freely possess any inanimate object, though actually moving around as one is difficult if said object has nothing to facilitate it -- for example, he can only move around as Mr. Tiddles because the toy bear has stuffing. Meanwhile, possessing a human requires said person to either be unconscious or [[SymbioticPossession willingly give him control]], and grants him the memory, knowledge, and skills of the host for the duration of the possession.
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* DemonicPossession: Jaune is capable of this. He can freely possess any inanimate object, though actually moving around as one is difficult if said object has nothing to facilitate it -- for example, he can only move around as Mr. Tiddles because the toy bear has stuffing.stuffing he can manipulate. Meanwhile, possessing a human requires said person to either be unconscious or [[SymbioticPossession willingly give him control]], and grants him the memory, knowledge, and skills of the host for the duration of the possession.
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* DramaticIrony: Blake and Ruby both blame themselves for Jaune's death as both heard him screaming through the air but avoided where he landed to avoid partnering with him (Though Blake goes over when she realizes how callous that really is). The narration makes it clear he died instantly upon hitting the ground, so neither could have actually saved him.
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* DramaticIrony: Blake and Ruby both blame themselves for Jaune's death as both heard him screaming through the air but avoided where he landed to avoid partnering with him (Though him, though Blake goes over when she realizes how callous that really is).such a thought is. The narration makes it clear he died instantly upon hitting the ground, so neither could have actually saved him.
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* ForgottenFallenFriend: While Jaune is still the protagonist, no one else really remembers him after his death. Ruby never brings him up again after Blake passes on his "last words" despite crying over his death and her guilt. [[spoiler:Subverted much later, when Pyrrha confides in "Mr. Tiddles" how she wanted to know Jaune like in canon and she is still lonely and devastated by his death]].
* ForWantOfANail:
** Pyrrha did not break Jaune's fall in this continuity (though not for lack of trying), resulting in his death when he hits the ground.
** Jaune notes how he would never have become close friends with Blake if he hadn't died.
* ForWantOfANail:
** Pyrrha did not break Jaune's fall in this continuity (though not for lack of trying), resulting in his death when he hits the ground.
** Jaune notes how he would never have become close friends with Blake if he hadn't died.
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* ForgottenFallenFriend: While Jaune is still the protagonist, since most of the cast only knew him for a single day, no one else really remembers him after his death. Ruby never brings him up again after Blake passes dwells too deeply on his "last words" despite crying over or talks about his death after their initial shocked and her guilt.saddened reactions. [[spoiler:Subverted much later, when Pyrrha confides in "Mr. Tiddles" how much she wanted to get to know Jaune like in canon and she how is still lonely and devastated by his death]].
death after all this]].
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**ForWantOfANail: Pyrrha did not break Jaune's fall in this continuity (though not for lack of trying), resulting in his death when he hits the ground.
** Jaune notes how he would never have become close friends with Blake if he hadn't died.ground.
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** Jaune notes how he would never have become close friends with Blake if he hadn't died.
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* InternalReveal: Jaune learns that Pyrrha tried to save him in chapter 61 when she confides in what she thinks is an inanimate teddy bear.
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* InternalReveal: Jaune learns that Pyrrha tried to save him in chapter Chapter 61 when she confides in what she thinks is an inanimate teddy bear. While he does note that he and Blake most likely wouldn't have become friends if he did survive, and he wouldn't trade their relationship for anything at this point, his initial reaction is exactly what you'd expect.
-->'''Jaune''': Fuuuuuuuuuckkkkkk...
-->'''Jaune''': Fuuuuuuuuuckkkkkk...
* LastMinuteHookup: Blake and Jaune, naturally. Though technically, [[spoiler:due to him being permanently stuck in the woman's body, you could say that the fic ends with Blake and Amber instead]].
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* RiddleForTheAges: It is never revealed how Jaune became tethered to Blake in the first place.
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* RiddleForTheAges: It is never revealed really confirmed how Jaune Jaune's soul became tethered to Blake in the first place.place, with Pietro only being able to theorize that something about the way Blake's cloning semblance works combined with Jaune's will to live resulted in the phenomenon.
