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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Talon Ted isn't respected even by his like-minded peers.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Talon Ted isn't respected even by his like-minded peers.peers, especially Miser.
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* RuthlessModernPirates: Pirates that are based on the modern pirates of Somalia plague the Crossing [[spoiler:and Miser plans to buy them off to gain power.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Talon Ted is on the receiving end of one, about how his pride in [[SmallNameBigEgo nothing]] matters to him more than the pride he could have in [[AwesomeEgo something]].
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* BadassInDistress: Shining Armor is captured by the villains. He still shows more dignity and competence than his captors.
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* BadassInDistress: Shining Armor is captured by the villains. He still shows more dignity and competence than all of his captors.
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Adding a link and commenting this out because I feel it needs more context on the "Not-So-Harmless" part.
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** Manny Collars is a serial rapist with connections.
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** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress, he's made to be a ''rapist''.
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** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress, he's made to be a ''rapist''.''{{serial rapist}}''.
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Fashion Victim Villain is a YMMV trope, so I'll move it to that page. I also fixed an indentation issue.
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* FashionVictimVillain: Strings's attire is nothing short of ridiculous, with the narration describing it as "a harlequin costume designed from sea-slugs". The moment Shining Armor sees it, he bursts out laughing.
--->'''Shining Armor:''' "You look you came to the costume ball dressed as a foreskin inflammation!"
--->'''Shining Armor:''' "You look you came to the costume ball dressed as a foreskin inflammation!"
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--->'''Strings:''' "It takes the death of an alicorn to make one... at least that's how it should work. Your daughter will die here, slowly, painfully, and you'll watch every minute!"
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* EntitledToHaveYou: Strings is obsessed with Cadance to such an unhealthy degree that he not only believes that Shining Armor "stole her from him" (when, in actuality, she ''chose'' to date Shining), but also believes that Flurry Heart should have been ''his child'' instead.
* FashionVictimVillain: Strings's attire is nothing short of ridiculous, with the narration describing it as "a harlequin costume designed from sea-slugs". The moment Shining Armor sees it, he bursts out laughing.
--->'''Shining Armor:''' "You look you came to the costume ball dressed as a foreskin inflammation!"
* FashionVictimVillain: Strings's attire is nothing short of ridiculous, with the narration describing it as "a harlequin costume designed from sea-slugs". The moment Shining Armor sees it, he bursts out laughing.
--->'''Shining Armor:''' "You look you came to the costume ball dressed as a foreskin inflammation!"
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* WouldHurtAChild: Neo-Starfleet's ultimate goal is to resurrect the Grand Ruler, a task which can only be accomplished by killing an alicorn. Therefore, they kidnap Flurry Heart to use her as a sacrifice.
--->'''Strings:''' "It takes the death of an alicorn to make one... at least that's how it should work. Your daughter will die here, slowly, painfully, and you'll watch every minute!"
--->'''Strings:''' "It takes the death of an alicorn to make one... at least that's how it should work. Your daughter will die here, slowly, painfully, and you'll watch every minute!"
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Talon Ted isn't respected even by his like-minded peers.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Talon Ted isn't respected even by his like-minded peers.
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** Manny Collars is a serial rapist with connections.
** Even the most pathetic of all antagonists, Talon Ted, could torment Twilight by posing as the Three Spirits of Hearth's Warming.
** Even the most pathetic of all antagonists, Talon Ted, could torment Twilight by posing as the Three Spirits of Hearth's Warming.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here, they are outright villainous, except one case, Talon Ted, who is merely stripped of his ProtagonistCeneteredMorality.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here, they are outright villainous, except one case, Talon Ted, who is merely stripped of his ProtagonistCeneteredMorality.ProtagonistCenteredMorality.
* LovingAShadow: Strings only loved the idea of Cadance, not her as a person.
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* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Talon Ted isn't respected even by his like-minded peers.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her. Now she works to bring him to justice.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her. Now she works to bring him to justice.
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Sure, he poses as the Three Spirits, but still.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here, they are outright villainous.villainous, except one case, Talon Ted, who is merely stripped of his ProtagonistCeneteredMorality.
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One of the most prolific deconstructions of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' is ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure''. However, due to the fanfiction itself being heavily criticized, it got a deconstruction itself.
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One of the most prolific deconstructions of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' is ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure''.''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' by Creator/DakariKingMykan. However, due to the fanfiction itself being heavily criticized, it got a deconstruction itself.
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* NotSoHarmlessVillain: Miser Stash is a tad more competent than the other antagonists.
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* NotSoHarmlessVillain: NotSoHarmlessVillain:
** Miser Stash is a tad more competent than the otherantagonists.antagonists. He even [[spoiler:nearly conquers a country.]]
** Strings might be a wimp, but because of some good acting, he succeeds at capturing Shining Armor with a cheap shot.
** Miser Stash is a tad more competent than the other
** Strings might be a wimp, but because of some good acting, he succeeds at capturing Shining Armor with a cheap shot.
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* SkewedPriorities: Applejack asks Talon Ted if his pride takes priority over not getting imprisoned. Talon merely replies [[FlatYes yes.]]
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* SkewedPriorities: Applejack asks Talon Ted if his pride {{pride}} takes priority over not getting imprisoned. Talon merely replies [[FlatYes yes.]]
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''Fanfic/FriendshipPrevails'' is the counterpart of ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'', except for ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' instead of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. The two recursive deconstructions even share the same universe, but not the same author.
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''Fanfic/FriendshipPrevails'' is the counterpart of ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'', except for ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' instead of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. The two recursive deconstructions even share the same universe, but not the same author.
author. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/447951/friendship-prevails here]].
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* SkewedPriorities: Applejack asks Talon Ted if his pride takes priority over not getting imprisoned. Talon merely replies [[FlatYes yes.]]
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* ActionPrologue: The story starts with zombies attacking the Crystal Empire.
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* NotSoHarmlessVillain: Miser Stash is a tad more competent than the other antagonists.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayedher.her.
* {{Yandere}}: Strings. He is the one who captures Shining Armor and plans to kill Flurry because, in his head, she should be his daughter.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed
* {{Yandere}}: Strings. He is the one who captures Shining Armor and plans to kill Flurry because, in his head, she should be his daughter.
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I made a few minor changes, including deleting a couple unneeded spaces.
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** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress, he's made to be a ''rapist.''
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** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress, he's made to be a ''rapist.''''rapist''.
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* ChekhovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
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* ChekhovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]Miser]].
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One of the most common deconstructions of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' is ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure''. However, due to the fanfiction itself being heavily criticized, it got a deconstruction itself.
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One of the most common prolific deconstructions of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' is ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure''. However, due to the fanfiction itself being heavily criticized, it got a deconstruction itself.
itself.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here they are outright villainous.
** Miser Stash becomes from a petty, but generous, hater of Hearth's Warming a thief who attempts to buy a country.
** Strings' obsession with Cadance makes him a threat not only to himself this time, but to Cadence and her family as well.
** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress he made to a ''rapist.''
** Miser Stash becomes from a petty, but generous, hater of Hearth's Warming a thief who attempts to buy a country.
** Strings' obsession with Cadance makes him a threat not only to himself this time, but to Cadence and her family as well.
** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress he made to a ''rapist.''
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* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here here, they are outright villainous.
** Miser Stashbecomes goes from a petty, but generous, hater of Hearth's Warming to a thief who attempts to buy a country.
**Strings' Strings's obsession with Cadance makes him a threat not only to himself this time, but to Cadence Cadance and her family as well.
** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for adress he dress, he's made to be a ''rapist.''
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** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a
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* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic Caribou caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her.
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* CheckovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
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* CheckovsSkill: ChekhovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
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* ChekovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
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* ChekovsSkill: CheckovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
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''FriendshipPrevails'' is the counterpart of ''FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'', except for ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' instead of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. The two recursive deconstructions even share the same universe, but not the same author.
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One of the most common deconstructions of ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' is ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure''. However, due to the fanfiction itself being heavily criticized, it got a deconstruction itself.
''FriendshipPrevails'' is the counterpart of ''FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'', except for ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' instead of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. The two recursive deconstructions even share the same universe, but not the same author.
!! This story contains examples of:
* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here they are outright villainous.
** Miser Stash becomes from a petty, but generous, hater of Hearth's Warming a thief who attempts to buy a country.
** Strings' obsession with Cadance makes him a threat not only to himself this time, but to Cadence and her family as well.
** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress he made to a ''rapist.''
* BadassInDistress: Shining Armor is captured by the villains. He still shows more dignity and competence than his captors.
* ChekovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
* HangingJudge: Manny's father favors his son for his framing of Rarity more than the prosecutor himself does.
* ImpostorForgotOneDetail: Strings makes several slip-ups while pretending to be one of Shining Armor's soldiers. Shining notices too late and beats himself for it.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic Caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her.
''FriendshipPrevails'' is the counterpart of ''FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'', except for ''Fanfic/FriendshipIsFailure'' instead of ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetMagic''. The two recursive deconstructions even share the same universe, but not the same author.
!! This story contains examples of:
* AdaptationalVillainy: While the protagonists of the original stories are jerks, here they are outright villainous.
** Miser Stash becomes from a petty, but generous, hater of Hearth's Warming a thief who attempts to buy a country.
** Strings' obsession with Cadance makes him a threat not only to himself this time, but to Cadence and her family as well.
** Manny Collars gets it the worst of all. From someone who acts petty because Rarity took credit for a dress he made to a ''rapist.''
* BadassInDistress: Shining Armor is captured by the villains. He still shows more dignity and competence than his captors.
* ChekovsSkill: Talon Ted effectively used his acting skills to act as [[spoiler:the Three Spirits that tormented Twilight for opposing Miser.]]
* HangingJudge: Manny's father favors his son for his framing of Rarity more than the prosecutor himself does.
* ImpostorForgotOneDetail: Strings makes several slip-ups while pretending to be one of Shining Armor's soldiers. Shining notices too late and beats himself for it.
* TokenHeroicOrc: A heroic Caribou was once Miser's partner in crime before he betrayed her.