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* EldritchLocation: Black Space is depicted as this. Nothing in it makes sense, there's some very disturbing things in there, and staying there for too long messes with a person's emotional state. {{Justified}} {{Justified|Trope}} as Black Space is part of Sunny's dream world.
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* AdaptationalSexuality: Aubrey had a crush on Sunny in canon, but in this story she's dating Kim.
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* BlackBugRoom: The entirety of Black Space is this. At the start of the Black Space arc, Kel, Aubrey and Hero are separated and then broken down mentally by being sent through specific rooms and made to see specific things.
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: The entire plot could arguably be this, as [[spoiler:Sunny himself takes a very long time to actually show up in Headspace even though it's his dream world]].
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: In this fanfiction, Omori is characterized as this. He's not actively trying to hurt anyone, but he also was completely fine with actions such as pointing a knife at Basil.
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* HisNameIs: [[spoiler:As usual, poor Basil can't have nice things trying to talk about Omori, as everyone but him is immediately teleported out of Black Space the instant he tries to talk about it.]]
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* DisproportionateRetribution: Omori points a knife at Basil for barging into White Space without asking.
* EasilyForgiven: Kel immediately forgives Sunny and Basil for what happened four years ago. Downplayed with Aubrey, who actually is angry at first but doesn't take long to also forgive those two. Averted with Hero, who takes longer to forgiveSunny.Sunny and doesn't understand why the others were so fast to forgive him.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: It's not explained how or why Omori exists even though he allegedly disappeared at the end of the game's True Ending. Not even the prequel explains it.
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* WaterIsAir: It is repeatedly noted by real characters InUniverse that Deep Well's logic makes no sense whatsoever; justified by the fact that it's a dream.
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* CatharsisFactor: InUniverse, when Aubrey finds herself in Headspace, she notices that [[ItMakesSenseInContext her bat is no longer de-nailed]], and then she proceeds to destroy almost everything around her, making her feel Ecstatic
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* InvisibleToNormals: Basil's Something looks like a dying flower crown to other people when it's worn as a flower crown.
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* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Aubrey is unconvinced that Basil is the real Basil upon meeting up in Headspace, so she teases Basil about having a crush on Sunny, causing him to sputter.
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* AdapationalSexuality: Aubrey had a crush on Sunny in canon, but in this story she's dating Kim.
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* LamePunReaction: Hero is not impressed by the existence of a zebra turkey fish.
* NoPokerFace: Kel. Kel sucks at card games.
* OffscreenRomance: Aubrey is dating Kim, something which happened offscreen and never becomes relevant to the actual story.
* OffscreenRomance: Aubrey is dating Kim, something which happened offscreen and never becomes relevant to the actual story.
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* SkewedPriorities: When Kel starts talking about his weird dreams over a card game, causing Basil to drop his cards in surprise, Aubrey is more concerned with the fact that Basil had a winning hand.
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoilers:Dream Basil]] has been dead since [[spoiler:the end of the game.]] [[spoiler:That guy that looks like him? That's actually the real Basil.]]
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* DeadAllAlong: [[spoilers:Dream Basil]] has been dead since [[spoiler:the end of the game.]] [[spoiler:That guy that looks like him? That's actually the real Basil.]]
* GoshDangItToHeck: Aubrey has to watch her mouth around the younger counterparts of herself and her friends because they are twelve.
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** In Chapter 8, Aubrey's cheerful property destruction rampage on Sweetheart's Castle is brought to an abrupt end when she encounters a weird-feeling key and then the Boring Room, both of which creep her out immensely. Later at the end of the chapter the mood is reversed just as quickly when Dream Aubrey excitedly shouts about getting pink hair.
** In Chapter 8, Aubrey's cheerful property destruction rampage on Sweetheart's Castle is brought to an abrupt end when she encounters a weird-feeling key and then the Boring Room, both of which creep her out immensely. Later at the end of the chapter the mood is reversed just as quickly when Dream Aubrey excitedly shouts about getting pink hair.
* RetGone: [[spoiler:Dream Basil]] isn't just dead, [[spoiler:the other characters don't remember that he exists]].
* SickeninglySweethearts: Dream Aubrey and Omori are so sappy with each other that it annoys real Aubrey to no end.
* SirSwearsALot: Aubrey doesn't swear a lot in canon, but in this fic she swears quite a bit more than the other characters.
* SirSwearsALot: Aubrey doesn't swear a lot in canon, but in this fic she swears quite a bit more than the other characters.
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* UnexplainedRecovery: It's not explained how or why Omori exists even though he allegedly disappeared at the end of the game's True Ending. Not even the prequel explains it.
* UnexplainedRecovery: It's not explained how or why Omori exists even though he allegedly disappeared at the end of the game's True Ending. Not even the prequel explains it.
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* OldFlameFizzle: Sunny and Aubrey liked each other as kids, but they don't like each other like that anymore now.
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* EasilyForgiven: Kel immediately forgives Sunny and Basil for what happened four years ago. Downplayed with Aubrey, who actually is angry at first but doesn't take long to also forgive those two.
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* RecurringDream: [[spoiler:Basil has been dreaming about Headspace for months prior to everyone else coming to Headspace.]]
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* InexpliciblyPreservedDungeonMeat: Kel lampshades this trope when he goes to the Junkyard.
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* BotanicalAbomination: Basil's Something is depicted as a dying, thorny plant with teeth and eyes that feeds off of negative emotions.
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* DreamLand: Headspace is this.
* EasilyForgiven: Kel immediately forgives Sunny and Basil for what happened four years ago. Downplayed with Aubrey, who actually is angry at first but doesn't take long to also forgive those two.
* EasilyForgiven: Kel immediately forgives Sunny and Basil for what happened four years ago. Downplayed with Aubrey, who actually is angry at first but doesn't take long to also forgive those two.
* InexpliciblyPreservedDungeonMeat: Kel lampshades this trope when he goes to the Junkyard.
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Something is no more than an annoyance that watches the other characters. They don't like it, and it creeps them out, but it's no more threatening than a hairball.
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* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Something is no more than an annoyance that watches the other characters. They don't like it, and it creeps them out, but it's no more threatening than a hairball.hairball.
* UncannyValley: InUniverse, the real-life characters think Omori is a little creepy.
* UncannyValley: InUniverse, the real-life characters think Omori is a little creepy.
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* AmazingTechnicolorWorld: Headspace is this, with its purple sky, mint green grass, dark blue leaves and pink wood on trees. The third chapter spends a paragraph describing how colorful the Vast Forest is.
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* FutureBadass: Dream Kel and Dream Aubrey both hold this opinion of their older selves.
* HairRaisingHare: Downplayed. The forest bunnies aren't monstrous, but Kel is caught off-guard by how vicious the bunnies in Headspace are.
* IHatePastMe: Inverted. Aubrey thinks her younger self is better than her because she was such a bully when she grew up.
* HairRaisingHare: Downplayed. The forest bunnies aren't monstrous, but Kel is caught off-guard by how vicious the bunnies in Headspace are.
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* EyepatchAfterTimeSkip: The story starts with a time skip, and one of the first things established is that Sunny has an eyepatch.
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* MyGodYouAreSerious: Kel's initial reaction to the truth is to think that Sunny is joking, before realizing that Sunny isn't joking at all.
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* ArcWords: "I have to tell you something."
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* ThePasswordIsAlwaysSwordfish: The hangman puzzle solution, which readers easily guessed, is [["I have to tell you something."]]
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* ButYouWereThereAndYouAndYou: Headspace and Black Space are shown to always be changing and evolving based on Sunny's mental state. For example, the presence of a swimming school is heavily implied to be related to the fact that he's learning to swim in real life.
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* IKnowYoureInThereSomewhereFight: Happens when [[spoiler: Sunny's friends get lost in Black Space and lose control of their emotions]].
* MartyrWithoutACause: [[spoiler:Basil and Omori]] get into an argument over this late in the story, as ''both'' of them are trying to sacrifice themselves for Sunny and won't take no for an answer.
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* RealityIsOutToLunch: Justified, as Headspace and Black Space are Sunny's dream world.
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''Friends By Your Side, Within And Without'' is a completed ''VideoGame/Omori'' fanfiction on [=Ao3=] written by Blueberry_Muffin_Massacre as part of the ''Headspace Over Time'' series. It takes place post-canon and is about Sunny's friends finding themselves in Headspace. The story can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29282565/chapters/71908806 here]].
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''Friends By Your Side, Within And Without'' is a completed ''VideoGame/Omori'' ''VideoGame/{{Omori}}'' fanfiction on [=Ao3=] written by Blueberry_Muffin_Massacre as part of the ''Headspace Over Time'' series. It takes place post-canon and is about Sunny's friends finding themselves in Headspace. The story can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29282565/chapters/71908806 here]].
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''Friends By Your Side, Within And Without'' is a completed ''VideoGame/Omori'' fanfiction on [=Ao3=] written by Blueberry_Muffin_Massacre as part of the ''Headspace Over Time'' series. It takes place post-canon and is about Sunny's friends finding themselves in Headspace. The story can be read [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29282565/chapters/71908806 here]].
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* EldritchLocation: Black Space is depicted as this. Nothing in it makes sense, there's some very disturbing things in there, and staying there for too long messes with a person's emotional state. {{Justified}} as Black Space is part of Sunny's dream world.
* FisherKingdom: When Basil is in Headspace, he looks like his dream world counterpart.
* MundaneSolution: Discussed. Real Aubrey handles the statue in Sweetheart's garden by just knocking it over instead of using the password, much to the amazement of the dream characters.
-> Dream Kel: Why didn't we just do this earlier?!
* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Inverted. HS Aubrey thinks her older self is cool, but real Aubrey disagrees because she was such a big bully.
* RealDreamsAreWeirder: Black Space is this when it's not being creepy.
* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Something is no more than an annoyance that watches the other characters. They don't like it, and it creeps them out, but it's no more threatening than a hairball.
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* EldritchLocation: Black Space is depicted as this. Nothing in it makes sense, there's some very disturbing things in there, and staying there for too long messes with a person's emotional state. {{Justified}} as Black Space is part of Sunny's dream world.
* FisherKingdom: When Basil is in Headspace, he looks like his dream world counterpart.
* MundaneSolution: Discussed. Real Aubrey handles the statue in Sweetheart's garden by just knocking it over instead of using the password, much to the amazement of the dream characters.
-> Dream Kel: Why didn't we just do this earlier?!
* OtherMeAnnoysMe: Inverted. HS Aubrey thinks her older self is cool, but real Aubrey disagrees because she was such a big bully.
* RealDreamsAreWeirder: Black Space is this when it's not being creepy.
* TheThingThatWouldNotLeave: Something is no more than an annoyance that watches the other characters. They don't like it, and it creeps them out, but it's no more threatening than a hairball.
