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Taylor gets trapped in the locker, but the turning point is that she desires for others to "walk in her shoes". The result? She triggers not with the power to control bugs, but the power to swap bodies with other people, and finds herself in Sofia's body.
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Taylor gets trapped in the locker, but the turning point is that she desires for others to "walk in her shoes". The result? She triggers not with the power to control bugs, but the power to swap bodies with other people, and finds herself in Sofia's Sophia's body.
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* AmazonianBeauty: When Taylor gets a good look at herself (in Sofia's body) in the mirror, she can't help but marvel at how muscular and attractive her former bully's body is.
* AssholeVictim: Sofia ends up suffering from Taylor's canon fate, only dying from it. Very few people seem to care though, as the Wards are more concerned with helping Taylor out and consider her to be far more preferable to Sofia anyway. In other words, Taylor accidentally committed a KillAndReplace, but who she's replacing is so bad that no one cares.
* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become'' Sofia to hide her true identity and powers. [[spoiler:It starts to work a little too well, as Taylor begins to exhibit some of Sofia's trademark aggression the longer she stays in her body]].
* AssholeVictim: Sofia ends up suffering from Taylor's canon fate, only dying from it. Very few people seem to care though, as the Wards are more concerned with helping Taylor out and consider her to be far more preferable to Sofia anyway. In other words, Taylor accidentally committed a KillAndReplace, but who she's replacing is so bad that no one cares.
* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become'' Sofia to hide her true identity and powers. [[spoiler:It starts to work a little too well, as Taylor begins to exhibit some of Sofia's trademark aggression the longer she stays in her body]].
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* AmazonianBeauty: When Taylor gets a good look at herself (in Sofia's Sophia's body) in the mirror, she can't help but marvel at how muscular and attractive her former bully's body is.
* AssholeVictim:Sofia Sophia ends up suffering from Taylor's canon fate, only dying from it. Very few people seem to care though, as the Wards are more concerned with helping Taylor out and consider her to be far more preferable to Sofia Sophia anyway. In other words, Taylor accidentally committed a KillAndReplace, but who she's replacing is so bad that no one cares.
* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become''Sofia Sophia to hide her true identity and powers. [[spoiler:It starts to work a little too well, as Taylor begins to exhibit some of Sofia's Sophia's trademark aggression the longer she stays in her body]].
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* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become''
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** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well where as in canon, she's still alive post-Golden Morning.
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** Because Sofia Sophia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well where as in canon, she's still alive post-Golden Morning.
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** All of New Wave except Brandish and Glory Girl, as an extension/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge result]] of the above.
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** All of New Wave except Brandish and Brandish, Glory Girl, Laserdream and Shielder as an extension/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge result]] of the above.
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* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: Taylor almost has a HeroicBSOD when she's informed of the fact that Sophia's mother and big brother had to be informed that their daughter and baby sister won't never come back home.
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* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Taylor almost has a HeroicBSOD when she's informed of the fact that Sophia's mother and big brother had to be informed that their daughter and baby sister won't never come back home.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: The premise of the fic is Taylor's power being this.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Two in quick succession alert the Protectorate of Taylor's FreakyFridayFlip powers.
** Dragon notices Taylor-As-Sophia's erratic flight patterns, lack of Breaker State, raw panic, and confusion over Armsmaster's threat of electric restraints to counter the aforementioned Breaker State.
** Immediately after Taylor jumps from Sophia's body to Armsmaster's, Armsmaster-as-Sophia begins ranting about Master/Stranger Protocols and berating the PRT for their incompetence.
** Dragon notices Taylor-As-Sophia's erratic flight patterns, lack of Breaker State, raw panic, and confusion over Armsmaster's threat of electric restraints to counter the aforementioned Breaker State.
** Immediately after Taylor jumps from Sophia's body to Armsmaster's, Armsmaster-as-Sophia begins ranting about Master/Stranger Protocols and berating the PRT for their incompetence.
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** Othalla is the only Healer in Brockton Bay; this gives Empire 88 disproportionate influence in the city.
** Brandish has gone full KnightTemplar in her pursuit of justice, having [[MeaningfulRename rebranded as "Judge"]], being TheAtoner over Amy and her teammates being killed.
** Burnscar was extracted from the Slaughterhouse Nine and recruited into the Justice Brigade (this fic's equivalent of New Wave) on the grounds of mitigating circumstances.
** A literal example of this trope involves a rusty nail in the locker, that contributes to the deaths of Taylor's home body and Sophia's consciousness as much as a lack of Panacea does.
** Brandish has gone full KnightTemplar in her pursuit of justice, having [[MeaningfulRename rebranded as "Judge"]], being TheAtoner over Amy and her teammates being killed.
** Burnscar was extracted from the Slaughterhouse Nine and recruited into the Justice Brigade (this fic's equivalent of New Wave) on the grounds of mitigating circumstances.
** A literal example of this trope involves a rusty nail in the locker, that contributes to the deaths of Taylor's home body and Sophia's consciousness as much as a lack of Panacea does.
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* KlingonPromotion: Downplayed; Taylor's KillAndReplace of Sophia is treated like this by the Protectorate.
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** Brandish also got one in the backstory, as the KnightTemplar cape known as Judge.
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** All of New Wave except Brandish and Glory Girl, as an extension/[[RoaringRampageOfRevenge result]] of the above.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: After the Brockton Bay Brigade accidentally killed his daughter, Marquis discarded his "don't hurt women" rule and killed everyone in the Brigade except for Brandish before he was killed by a mortally wounded Lightstar.
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** One of the major cruxs for the story is that Amy was killed during the Brockton Bay Brigade's attack on Marquis's home.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well.
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** One of the major cruxs for the story is that Amy was killed during the Brockton Bay Brigade's attack on Marquis's home.
home while her canon counterpart lived to the end.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead aswell.well where as in canon, she's still alive post-Golden Morning.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as
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* KillAndReplace: Accidental version. By switching bodies with Sophia when hers was at a point of near death, Taylor winds up killing her bully by accident and is now stuck with her identity as her primary body.
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* RequiredSecondaryPowers: Taylor can swap bodies with anyone and even use their powers while in that body. The main power that she keeps is the ability to switch from body-to-body regardless of who she is. The power to switch bodies would be pretty useless of it was isolated to her body, which is now dead.
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* EvenEvilCanBeLoved: Taylor almost has a HeroicBSOD when she's informed of the fact that Sophia's mother and big brother had to be informed that their daughter and baby sister won't never come back home.
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* AssholeVictim: Sofia ends up suffering from Taylor's canon fate, only dying from it. Very few people seem to care though, as the Wards are more concerned with helping Taylor out and consider her to be far more preferable to Sofia anyway. In other words, Taylor accidentally committed a KillAndReplace, but who she's replacing is so bad that no one cares.
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* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become'' Sofia to hide her true identity and powers.
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* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become'' Sofia to hide her true identity and powers. [[spoiler:It starts to work a little too well, as Taylor begins to exhibit some of Sofia's trademark aggression the longer she stays in her body]].
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* SpottingTheThread: Vicky is fully convinced that Taylor stole Sophia's body when she sees the proud, BookDumb Shadow Stalker cowering in front of her anger and understanding a mythological reference.
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* SpottingTheThread: Vicky is fully convinced that Taylor stole Sophia's body when she sees the proud, BookDumb Shadow Stalker cowering in front of her anger and understanding a mythological reference.reference.
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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Since Vicky was adopted and raised by the same person than Crystal and Eric, she considers them her siblings instead of her cousins.
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* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Since Vicky was adopted and raised by the same person than as Crystal and Eric, she considers them her siblings instead of her cousins.
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* ShoutOut: Taylor's "true" cape alias, Friday, is a direct reference to the movie.
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* ShoutOut: Taylor's "true" cape alias, Friday, is a direct reference to [[Film/FreakyFriday2003 the movie.movie]].
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* DoubleStandardAbuseFemaleOnMale: Lampshaded by a cringing Taylor when she sees Battery-as-Assault punching Assault-as-Battery. In the habitual circumstances, a small female hitting her invulnerable male partner is slapstick comedy. Genderswap the roles, and you have a well-built man flat-out hurting a more frail woman.
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* ManIFeelLikeAWoman: Right after being switched into his wife's body, a bemused Assault is seen fondling "his" boobies.
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* PowerPerversionPotential: Assault is quite happy to ''creatively'' use the time in which he and his wife are switching bodies.
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** Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
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** Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne"."Anne", after her deceased mother.
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more aggressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
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* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more aggressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]body]].
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* AmazonBeauty: When Taylor gets a good look at herself (in Sofia's body) in the mirror, she can't help but marvel at how muscular and attractive her former bully's body is.
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* AmazonBeauty: AmazonianBeauty: When Taylor gets a good look at herself (in Sofia's body) in the mirror, she can't help but marvel at how muscular and attractive her former bully's body is.
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* AmazonBeauty: When Taylor gets a good look at herself (in Sofia's body) in the mirror, she can't help but marvel at how muscular and attractive her former bully's body is.
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* CosmicMotifs: Taylor rebranding as ''Eclipse'' has this. To go with the StellarName, she uses several little drones orbiting around her as stars would do and a two-people tactic making use of a "Sun".
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* CosmicMotifs: Taylor rebranding re-branding as ''Eclipse'' has this. To go with the StellarName, she uses several little drones orbiting around her as stars would do and a two-people tactic making use of a "Sun".
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* MeaningfulRename: Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
** She also rebrands the "Shadow Stalker" persona with the new alias ''Eclipse'', since her existence ''eclipsed'' Sophia's.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more agressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
** She also rebrands the "Shadow Stalker" persona with the new alias ''Eclipse'', since her existence ''eclipsed'' Sophia's.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more agressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
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* MeaningfulRename: Two from Taylor.
** Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
** She alsorebrands re-brands the "Shadow Stalker" persona with the new alias ''Eclipse'', since her existence ''eclipsed'' Sophia's.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel moreagressive aggressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
** Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
** She also
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more
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* PreferableImpersonator: Taylor basically ''is'' Sophia, since she has to assume her body and identity. Downplayed with the Wards since they know that and as such like Taylor for her own merits, but civilians and media start to note "Shadow Stalker" having a change of character and they find her much more approchable and nice.
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* PreferableImpersonator: Taylor basically ''is'' Sophia, since she has to assume her body and identity. Downplayed with the Wards since they know that and as such like Taylor for her own merits, but civilians and media start to note "Shadow Stalker" having a change of character and they find her much more approchable approachable and nice.
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* CosmicMotifs: Taylor rebranding as ''Eclipse'' has this. To go with the StellarName, she uses several little drones orbiting around her as stars would do and a two-people tactic making use of a "Sun".
* DarkIsNotEvil: What Taylor hopes to become.
* DarkIsNotEvil: What Taylor hopes to become.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Since she was relentlessly bullied for more than a year, Taylor is very socially-anxious, and the circumstances in which she joins the Wards made her sure the other teens would hate her on sight. Dean's point-of-view immediately reveals the Wards are actually eager to meet her and make her feel at home.
* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Since Vicky was adopted and raised by the same person than Crystal and Eric, she considers them her siblings instead of her cousins.
* FamilyRelationshipSwitcheroo: Since Vicky was adopted and raised by the same person than Crystal and Eric, she considers them her siblings instead of her cousins.
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* GenderBender: The BodySurf isn't limited to same-sex people, so there's a lot of it but temporary.
* MeaningfulRename: Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
** She also rebrands the "Shadow Stalker" persona with the new alias ''Eclipse'', since her existence ''eclipsed'' Sophia's.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more agressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
* MeaningfulRename: Since she cannot be openly "Taylor" but doesn't want to be "Sophia", the protagonist decides to call her civilian identity "Anne".
** She also rebrands the "Shadow Stalker" persona with the new alias ''Eclipse'', since her existence ''eclipsed'' Sophia's.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: When a mind is swapped into another body, this mind will experience no gender dysphoria. [[spoiler:More concerning, Taylor starts to feel more agressive and angry the longer she uses Sophia's body.]]
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* DoppelgangerGetsSameSentiment: For Carlos and Dennis. They know Taylor is very different from Sophia, but Carlos still feels uneasy around a girl with the face of a former bully and Dennis still feels attracted to Sophia's body.
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: A slight deconstruction with Dennis. From his point of view, the hot girl he couldn't help but think attractive is now a sweeter person open to a more friendly relationship. Dean discreetly points it's actually weird and not really acknowledging Taylor as her own individual.
* DoppelgangerReplacementLoveInterest: A slight deconstruction with Dennis. From his point of view, the hot girl he couldn't help but think attractive is now a sweeter person open to a more friendly relationship. Dean discreetly points it's actually weird and not really acknowledging Taylor as her own individual.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Danny beat Alan within an inch of his life when he tried to convince him to cover Emma's involvement in Taylor's "death".
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Danny beat Alan within an inch of his life when he tried to convince him to cover Emma's involvement in Taylor's "death"."death".
* PreferableImpersonator: Taylor basically ''is'' Sophia, since she has to assume her body and identity. Downplayed with the Wards since they know that and as such like Taylor for her own merits, but civilians and media start to note "Shadow Stalker" having a change of character and they find her much more approchable and nice.
* ShoutOut: Taylor's "true" cape alias, Friday, is a direct reference to the movie.
* SpottingTheThread: Vicky is fully convinced that Taylor stole Sophia's body when she sees the proud, BookDumb Shadow Stalker cowering in front of her anger and understanding a mythological reference.
* PreferableImpersonator: Taylor basically ''is'' Sophia, since she has to assume her body and identity. Downplayed with the Wards since they know that and as such like Taylor for her own merits, but civilians and media start to note "Shadow Stalker" having a change of character and they find her much more approchable and nice.
* ShoutOut: Taylor's "true" cape alias, Friday, is a direct reference to the movie.
* SpottingTheThread: Vicky is fully convinced that Taylor stole Sophia's body when she sees the proud, BookDumb Shadow Stalker cowering in front of her anger and understanding a mythological reference.
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* BecomingTheMask: Calle tells Taylor that she's going to have to essentially ''become'' Sofia to hide her true identity and powers.
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/freaky-friday-worm-au-altpower.614651/ Freaky Friday]] is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' [[AdaptationalSuperpowerChange alt-power]] fanfic written by [=TheGreatestGimmick=] and hosted on [=SpaceBattles=] Forums.
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* ForWantOfANail: A lot of the changes that occur in the story can be tied back to Amy's death.
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* ForWantOfANail: A lot of the changes that occur in the story can be tied back to Amy's death.death.
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Danny beat Alan within an inch of his life when he tried to convince him to cover Emma's involvement in Taylor's "death".
* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Danny beat Alan within an inch of his life when he tried to convince him to cover Emma's involvement in Taylor's "death".
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[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/freaky-friday-worm-au-altpower.614651/ Freaky Friday]] is a ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' [[AdaptationalSuperpowerChange alt-power]] fanfic written by [=TheGreatestGimmick=] and hosted on [=SpaceBattles=] Forums.
Taylor gets trapped in the locker, but the turning point is that she desires for others to "walk in her shoes". The result? She triggers not with the power to control bugs, but the power to swap bodies with other people, and finds herself in Sofia's body.
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!!''Freaky Friday'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Taylor gains the power to swap bodies with people rather than control bugs. In addition, she can also use the powers of those she swaps minds with.
* BodySurf: Taylor can possess anyone on a "pseudo-line of sight" basis and swap bodies with them.
* DeathByAdaptation:
** One of the major cruxs for the story is that Amy was killed during the Brockton Bay Brigade's attack on Marquis's home.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well.
* ForWantOfANail: A lot of the changes that occur in the story can be tied back to Amy's death.
Taylor gets trapped in the locker, but the turning point is that she desires for others to "walk in her shoes". The result? She triggers not with the power to control bugs, but the power to swap bodies with other people, and finds herself in Sofia's body.
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!!''Freaky Friday'' provides examples of:
* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: Taylor gains the power to swap bodies with people rather than control bugs. In addition, she can also use the powers of those she swaps minds with.
* BodySurf: Taylor can possess anyone on a "pseudo-line of sight" basis and swap bodies with them.
* DeathByAdaptation:
** One of the major cruxs for the story is that Amy was killed during the Brockton Bay Brigade's attack on Marquis's home.
** Because Sofia and Taylor swapped bodies when she was on the verge of death in the locker, the former Ward/bully is dead as well.
* ForWantOfANail: A lot of the changes that occur in the story can be tied back to Amy's death.
