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* Forgiveness: Very important to [[spoiler:Sky]], because [[spoiler:he feels guilty for his actions as a Changeling]]. Luckily for [[spoiler:him]], the Equestrians are rather forgiving as a culture.
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* Forgiveness: {{Forgiveness}}: Very important to [[spoiler:Sky]], because [[spoiler:he feels guilty for his actions as a Changeling]]. Luckily for [[spoiler:him]], the Equestrians are rather forgiving as a culture.
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* RealityEnsues: Sky's job search. He is only able to find either very part-time or physically-exhausting work. Just because Ponyville is a friendly place doesn't mean that they have much work for him.
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[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45720/fragments Fragments]] is a MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic novel about a mysterious Pegasus who awakes one day, alone and injured, in the forest with absolutely no idea how he got there or who he is. With the help of the Mane Six he finds the answer to these questions. Can he face the truth?
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* SecretKeeper: [[spoiler:The Mane Six and Spike after Sky is revealed as a Changeling]].
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* YouDidntAsk: This is why Pinkie didn't tell anypony that [[spoiler:she'd figured out that Sky was a Changeling]], she thought they knew already.
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** Crucially, [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna]] forgive [[spoiler:Sky]] for being part of the [[spoiler:invading army]] in the first place. This is vital because it means that [[spoiler:Sky]] can build a future for [[spoiler:himself]]] in Equestria.
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** Crucially, [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna]] forgive [[spoiler:Sky]] for being part of the [[spoiler:invading army]] in the first place. This is vital because it means that [[spoiler:Sky]] can build a future for [[spoiler:himself]]] [[spoiler:himself]] in Equestria.
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* NonHumanLoverReveal: Only marginally less painful for [[spoiler:both Sky and Rainbow Dash]] because [[spoiler:they hadn't actually yet declared their love]].
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* NonHumanLoverReveal: [[NonhumanLoverReveal Non-Equine Lover Reveal]]: Only marginally less painful for [[spoiler:both Sky and Rainbow Dash]] because [[spoiler:they hadn't actually yet declared their love]].
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* Forgiveness: Very important to [[spoiler:Sky]], because [[spoiler:he feels guilty for his actions as a Changeling]]. Luckily for [[spoiler:him]], the Equestrians are rather forgiving as a culture.
** [[spoiler:Sunflower]] forgives him for nearly killing her during the [[spoiler:attack on Canterlot]].
** Crucially, [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna]] forgive [[spoiler:Sky]] for being part of the [[spoiler:invading army]] in the first place. This is vital because it means that [[spoiler:Sky]] can build a future for [[spoiler:himself]]] in Equestria.
** [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] mostly forgives [[spoiler:Sky]] for [[spoiler:courting her under false pretenses]] though not enough to make her want to [[spoiler:resume the relationship]].
** [[spoiler:Sunflower]] forgives him for nearly killing her during the [[spoiler:attack on Canterlot]].
** Crucially, [[spoiler:Celestia and Luna]] forgive [[spoiler:Sky]] for being part of the [[spoiler:invading army]] in the first place. This is vital because it means that [[spoiler:Sky]] can build a future for [[spoiler:himself]]] in Equestria.
** [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] mostly forgives [[spoiler:Sky]] for [[spoiler:courting her under false pretenses]] though not enough to make her want to [[spoiler:resume the relationship]].
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* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: Sky gets a makeover at the spa [[spoiler:in his ''Changeling'' form]]. The result is surpringly handsome.
-->"Oh, wow," Twilight said.
-->Fluttershy peered at him. "You look so..."
-->"Shiny," Applejack said.
-->"Oh, wow," Twilight said.
-->Fluttershy peered at him. "You look so..."
-->"Shiny," Applejack said.
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* InterspeciesRomance: One seems to be building between [[spoiler:Sky]] and [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]], though neither realize that it is [[spoiler:"interspecies"]] at the time. The [[spoiler:NonHumanLoverReveal Non Equine Lover Reveal]] comes before things get too far.
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* InterspeciesRomance: One seems to be building between [[spoiler:Sky]] and [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]], though neither realize that it is [[spoiler:"interspecies"]] at the time. The [[spoiler:NonHumanLoverReveal [[spoiler:[[NonHumanLoverReveal Non Equine Lover Reveal]] Reveal]]]] comes before things get too far.
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-->She looked like crap. Her mane and tail were all frazzled, her coat mussed. Even her eyes were red. Either she hadn't been able to sleep well, or she'd been crying. He was guessing the former. She didn't seem the crying type.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The state of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] after she has learned [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]]. Specifically, it demonstrates that her feelings for him were very real.
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* PowderKegCrowd: One forms in Ponyville when [[spoiler:Sky's identity as a Changeling is revealed]]. The Mane Six successfully calm them by pointing out that [[spoiler:Sky isn't hostile]].
* PowderKegCrowd: One forms in Ponyville when [[spoiler:Sky's identity as a Changeling is revealed]]. The Mane Six successfully calm them by pointing out that [[spoiler:Sky isn't hostile]].
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The state of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] after she has learned [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]].
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The state of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] after she has learned [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]]. Specifically, it demonstrates that her feelings for him were very real.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The state of [[spoiler:Rainbow Dash]] after she has learned [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]].
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-->She looked like crap. Her mane and tail were all frazzled, her coat mussed. Even her eyes were red. Either she hadn't been able to sleep well, or she'd been crying. He was guessing the former. She didn't seem the crying type.
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* BrutalHonesty: From exactly who you would expect to do this.
-->'''Applejack''': "So, lemme get this straight ... Yah got all upset because yah felt like you were trickin' everypony, and then got all tripped up on somepony else's emotions, so yah decided to drop the disguise and fly right into the middle of town? ... [[long pause]] ... "Yah know that was pretty dumb, right?"
-->'''Applejack''': "So, lemme get this straight ... Yah got all upset because yah felt like you were trickin' everypony, and then got all tripped up on somepony else's emotions, so yah decided to drop the disguise and fly right into the middle of town? ... [[long pause]] ... "Yah know that was pretty dumb, right?"
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* HeelRealization: Sky is horrified when he realizes that he [[spoiler:nearly ''killed'' Sunflower during the invasion of Canterlot]].
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* HeelRealization: Sky is horrified when Multiple ones, for [[spoiler:Sky. His feelings of guilt are not much mitigated by the fact that in the first case he was the enemy and in the second he didn't know himself that he was leading her on.]]
** When [[spoiler:he]] realizes thathe [[spoiler:nearly [[spoiler:he nearly ''killed'' Sunflower during the invasion of Canterlot]].Canterlot]].
** Regarding [[spoiler:his pursuit of Rainbow Dash, when he realizes how betrayed she feels by the discovery that he was a Changeling all along]].
** When [[spoiler:he]] realizes that
** Regarding [[spoiler:his pursuit of Rainbow Dash, when he realizes how betrayed she feels by the discovery that he was a Changeling all along]].
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* NonHumanLoverReveal: Only marginally less painful for [[spoiler:both Sky and Rainbow Dash]] because [[spoiler:they hadn't actually yet declared their love]].
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* GeniusDitz: Pinkie Pie instantly realizes that [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]] because of [[spoiler:the strange lacunae in his knowledge and the way his energy levels shift depending on whether or not he's around strong emotional affect]]. This is ''very'' consistent with her characterization on the show: Pinkie has repeatedly demonstrated her possession of a powerful, though extremely strange, intellect (for instance, she ''personally knows'' and ''can remember salient details about'' the roughly 2000 residents of Ponyville).
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* GeniusDitz: Pinkie Pie instantly realizes that [[spoiler:Sky is a Changeling]] because of [[spoiler:the strange lacunae in his knowledge and the way his energy levels shift depending on whether or not he's around strong emotional affect]]. This is ''very'' consistent with her characterization on the show: Pinkie has repeatedly demonstrated her possession of a powerful, though extremely strange, intellect (for instance, she ''personally knows'' and ''can remember salient details about'' the roughly 2000 residents of Ponyville). Also in character for Pinkie, it doesn't occur to her to tell anypony else, because she assumes that they can all see it too.
