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* ImagineSpot: When Sokka first learns about Zuko's existence from Iroh, he tries to picture in his head what Azula's older brother would look like. He ends up with mental image of a gender-bent Azula with a more muscular body.
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* ImagineSpot: When Sokka first learns about Zuko's existence from Iroh, he tries to picture in his head what Azula's older brother would look like. He ends up with a mental image of a gender-bent Azula with a more muscular body.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20063656/chapters/47516917 Fractures]]'' is an AlternateUniverse FanFic of ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EvieNyx/pseuds/EvieNyx EvieNyx]][[note]]formerly known as good_eviening[[/note]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20063656/chapters/47516917 org/series/1533902 Fractures]]'' is an a series of AlternateUniverse FanFic of ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EvieNyx/pseuds/EvieNyx EvieNyx]][[note]]formerly known as good_eviening[[/note]].
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** Chapter 30 is about Aang and shows his thoughts as he recaps everything that has happened since the day Katara and Sokka freed him from the iceberg.
* Chapter 37 is about Piandao recounting his entire life up until the present, from when he was abandoned by his parents, to eventually being taken under the wing of a swordsmaster, to having students of his own and the events of the show, to [[spoiler:him, Toph, and Azula finally making it to the Fire Nation to meet with Zuko]].
* Chapter 37 is about Piandao recounting his entire life up until the present, from when he was abandoned by his parents, to eventually being taken under the wing of a swordsmaster, to having students of his own and the events of the show, to [[spoiler:him, Toph, and Azula finally making it to the Fire Nation to meet with Zuko]].
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** Chapter 30 is about Aang and shows his thoughts as he recaps everything that has happened since the day Katara and Sokka freed him from the iceberg.
*iceberg, ending with him and the others' coping with the revelation that [[spoiler:Toph has run away]].
** Chapter 37 is about Piandao recounting his entire life up until the present, from when he was abandoned by his parents, to eventually being taken under the wing of a swordsmaster, to having students of his own and the events of the show, to [[spoiler:him, Toph, and Azula finally making it to the Fire Nation to meet with Zuko]].
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** Chapter 37 is about Piandao recounting his entire life up until the present, from when he was abandoned by his parents, to eventually being taken under the wing of a swordsmaster, to having students of his own and the events of the show, to [[spoiler:him, Toph, and Azula finally making it to the Fire Nation to meet with Zuko]].
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:Iroh has this regarding Zuko. During his trip to the Spirit World, Koh the Face Stealer took Iroh's memories regarding Zuko.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler:Iroh has this regarding Zuko. During his trip to the Spirit World, Koh the Face Stealer took sealed Iroh's memories regarding Zuko.Zuko, causing him to experience terrible headaches if he tries to recall anything about the boy.]]
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* WhatIf:
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The canon tragic backstories apply, with Zuko going through [[AdaptationalAngstUpgrade so much more hell.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The canon tragic backstories apply, with Zuko going through [[AdaptationalAngstUpgrade so much more hell.hell]].
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** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
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** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.
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* HearingVoice: Aang starts hearing twisted versions of his past lives urging him to enter the Avatar State after he depowers Ozai.
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* HearingVoice: HearingVoices: Aang starts hearing twisted versions of his past lives urging him to enter the Avatar State after he depowers Ozai.
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Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace with a half-burnt face following his Agni Kai, only to be told he is banished until he can succeed on a SnipeHunt. Zuko decides to confront Ozai right then and there with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to a change of plans.
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Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail [[WhatIf Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace with a half-burnt face following his Agni Kai, only to be told he is banished until he can succeed on a SnipeHunt. Zuko decides to confront Ozai right then and there with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to a change of plans.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20063656/chapters/47516917 Fractures]]'' is an AlternateUniverse FanFic of ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn by fledgling author [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EvieNyx/pseuds/EvieNyx EvieNyx]][[note]]formerly known as good_eviening[[/note]].
Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace following his Agni Kai and was told he is banished. Zuko decides to confront Ozai right then and there with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to a change of plans.
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko spent the next three years hidden away to be trained in secret, assuming that they know or remember that Fire Lord Ozai even had a son. In reality, Zuko has been locked away and prisoned, never seeing sunlight and having barely any human contact outside of a few select guards. That is, until one day those guards happily open his cell door to let a Fire Sage in to address him with the first good news he's heard in a long, long time: his father has been defeated by the Avatar, so he is now the new Fire Lord. It's time to make up for his nation's many sins.
Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace following his Agni Kai and was told he is banished. Zuko decides to confront Ozai right then and there with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to a change of plans.
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko spent the next three years hidden away to be trained in secret, assuming that they know or remember that Fire Lord Ozai even had a son. In reality, Zuko has been locked away and prisoned, never seeing sunlight and having barely any human contact outside of a few select guards. That is, until one day those guards happily open his cell door to let a Fire Sage in to address him with the first good news he's heard in a long, long time: his father has been defeated by the Avatar, so he is now the new Fire Lord. It's time to make up for his nation's many sins.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/20063656/chapters/47516917 Fractures]]'' is an AlternateUniverse FanFic of ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'' on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn by fledgling author [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/EvieNyx/pseuds/EvieNyx EvieNyx]][[note]]formerly known as good_eviening[[/note]].
Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace with a half-burnt face following his AgniKai and was Kai, only to be told he is banished.banished until he can succeed on a SnipeHunt. Zuko decides to confront Ozai right then and there with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to a change of plans.
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko spent the next three yearshidden away to be trained training in secret, assuming that they know or remember that Fire Lord Ozai even had a son. In reality, Zuko has been locked away and prisoned, never seeing sunlight and having barely any human contact outside of a few select guards. That is, until one day those guards happily open his cell door to let a Fire Sage in to address him with the first good news he's heard in a long, long time: his father has been defeated by the Avatar, so he is now the new Fire Lord. It's time to rebuild his life and make up for his nation's many sins.
Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace with a half-burnt face following his Agni
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko spent the next three years
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Iroh isn’t a ParentalSubstitute to Zuko and in fact barely knows him because he’s been out of contact with the royal family since the Siege of Ba Sing Se. [[spoiler: Although it's revealed that Koh actually stole Iroh's memories of Zuko, which is why he can't feel close to his nephew.]]
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Iroh isn’t a ParentalSubstitute to Zuko and in fact barely knows him because he’s been out of contact with the royal family since the Siege of Ba Sing Se. [[spoiler: Although [[spoiler:Although it's revealed that Koh actually stole Iroh's memories of Zuko, which is why he can't feel close to his nephew.]]
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* BreakTheCutie: Zuko, primarily. The canon broken cuties also count to a lesser extent (Aang, Katara and Sokka).
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* BreakTheCutie: Zuko, primarily. The canon broken cuties also count Zuko to a lesser ''far'' greater extent (Aang, than in canon due to spending his teenage years locked in a cell and regularly tortured, though other characters such as Aang, Katara and Sokka).Sokka retain their existing canon baggage.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The canon tragic backstories apply, with the exception of Zuko though ([[AdaptationalAngstUpgrade who goes through so much more hell here]]).
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The canon tragic backstories apply, with the exception of Zuko though ([[AdaptationalAngstUpgrade who goes going through [[AdaptationalAngstUpgrade so much more hell here]]).hell.
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** When the Gaang first learns about Zuko, they assume that he’s evil like his father. Iroh even dismisses Toph's suggestion that Zuko could still the king boy that he remembered him as, stating that Zuko is likely already corrupted by Ozai. Of course, the very premise of the story stems from Zuko refusing to be anything like his father.
** The White Lotus theorizes that Zuko was being privately trained by Ozai and worry that Zuko is comparable in strength to his father by this point.
** The White Lotus theorizes that Zuko was being privately trained by Ozai and worry that Zuko is comparable in strength to his father by this point.
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** When the Gaang first learns about Zuko, they assume that he’s evil like just as vile as his father. Iroh even dismisses Toph's suggestion that Zuko could still be anything like the king kind boy that he remembered him as, confidently stating that Zuko is has likely already been corrupted by Ozai. Ozai's influence given how much he craved his father's approval. Of course, the very premise of the story stems from Zuko realizing he could never forsake his principles to receive that approval and outright refusing to be anything like his father.
** The White Lotus theorizes that Zuko was being privately trained by Ozai and worry that Zuko is comparable in strength to his father by this point. The story begins with Zuko being so weak and malnourished that he has to be pushed around by his guards in a wheelchair.
** The White Lotus theorizes that Zuko was being privately trained by Ozai and worry that Zuko is comparable in strength to his father by this point. The story begins with Zuko being so weak and malnourished that he has to be pushed around by his guards in a wheelchair.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Upon hearing that Zuko is scarred, wheelchair-bound, and frighteningly thin, the Gaang and White Lotus assume it's an ObfuscatingDisability.
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* DramaticallyMissingThePoint: Upon hearing that Zuko is scarred, wheelchair-bound, and frighteningly thin, the Gaang and White Lotus automatically assume it's an ObfuscatingDisability.
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler:After Kya helps Zuko recover from an assassination attempt, the end of the chapter reveals that Jet and the Freedom Fighters are headed to the Fire Nation to kill him. Then two chapters later, Zhao is also revealed to be alive and is planning on using the knowledge from the Spirit Library to restore Ozai’s bending. As if that wasn’t bad enough, Zuko then gets poisoned during dinner.]]
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* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler:After Kya helps Zuko recover from an assassination attempt, HearingVoice: Aang starts hearing twisted versions of his past lives urging him to enter the end of the chapter reveals that Jet and the Freedom Fighters are headed to the Fire Nation to kill him. Then two chapters later, Zhao is also revealed to be alive and is planning on using the knowledge from the Spirit Library to restore Ozai’s bending. As if that wasn’t bad enough, Zuko then gets poisoned during dinner.]]Avatar State after he depowers Ozai.
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* InternalReveal: Downplayed. In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Kya, Hakoda, Suki, Mai and Ty Lee]] all become privy to just how damaged Zuko's body is. Chapter 17 sees Zuko finally explain the full story about the previous three years to [[spoiler:Kya, Ty Lee and Mai]], which is the first time the reader also gets the complete details beyond the fic's synopsis.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Iroh has this regarding Zuko. During his trip to the Spirit World, Koh the Face Stealer took Iroh's memories regarding Zuko.]]
* LaserGuidedAmnesia: [[spoiler: Iroh has this regarding Zuko. During his trip to the Spirit World, Koh the Face Stealer took Iroh's memories regarding Zuko.]]
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* InternalReveal: Downplayed. InternalReveal:
** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Kya, Hakoda, Suki, Mai and Ty Lee]] all become privy to just how damaged Zuko's bodyis. is.
** Downplayed in Chapter17 17, which sees Zuko finally explain the full story about the previous three years to [[spoiler:Kya, Ty Lee and Mai]], which is Mai]]. The audience already knew the first time the reader also gets the complete details beyond broad strokes by way of the fic's synopsis.
synopsis, but this is the point where we receive all the actual details.
* LaserGuidedAmnesia:[[spoiler: Iroh [[spoiler:Iroh has this regarding Zuko. During his trip to the Spirit World, Koh the Face Stealer took Iroh's memories regarding Zuko.]]
** In Chapter 15, [[spoiler:Kya, Hakoda, Suki, Mai and Ty Lee]] all become privy to just how damaged Zuko's body
** Downplayed in Chapter
* LaserGuidedAmnesia:
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** [[spoiler:Kya gave herself up for her daughter, as in canon, but was actually literally taken away by the Southern Raiders and imprisoned, rather than killed. Upon being freed, she deduces Zuko's predicament through a few simple questions and is well on her way to becoming a surrogate mother for him, even going so far as to scold Hakoda for being too harsh and judgmental with the boy]].
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** [[spoiler:Kya gave herself up for her daughter, as in canon, but though unlike canon, was actually literally taken away imprisoned by the Southern Raiders and imprisoned, rather than killed. Upon being freed, she deduces Zuko's predicament through a few simple questions and is well on her way to becoming quickly becomes a surrogate mother for him, even going so far as to scold Hakoda for being too harsh and judgmental with the boy]].
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* ManipulativeBastard: Ozai is an absolute master of manipulating others into doing what he wants. With just a single sentence, he tricks Iroh and the Gaang into believing that Zuko is loyal to him and turns them against his son. He also allowed a rumor to go around that Zuko was being privately mentored by him, causing Azula to get jealous of her father's "favoritism" towards her brother and making her into an even bigger WellDoneDaughterGal than in canon.
* MundaneLuxury: PlayedForDrama. After spending three years in a dungeon, Zuko can't comfortably sleep on a bed nor eat most foods as his body has long since adjusted to making do without.
* MundaneLuxury: PlayedForDrama. After spending three years in a dungeon, Zuko can't comfortably sleep on a bed nor eat most foods as his body has long since adjusted to making do without.
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* ManipulativeBastard: Ozai is an absolute master of manipulating others into doing what he wants. With just a single sentence, he tricks Iroh and the Gaang into believing that Zuko is loyal to him and turns them against his son. He Prior to this, he also allowed a the rumor to go around that Zuko was being privately mentored by him, him to circulate, causing Azula to get jealous of her father's "favoritism" towards her brother and making her into an even bigger WellDoneDaughterGal than in canon.
* MundaneLuxury: PlayedForDrama. After spending three years in a dungeon, Zuko can't comfortably sleep on a bed nor eat mostfoods foods, as his body has long since adjusted to making do without.
* MundaneLuxury: PlayedForDrama. After spending three years in a dungeon, Zuko can't comfortably sleep on a bed nor eat most
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: [[spoiler:In the Toph Interlude, Toph and Piandao break Azula out of prison to get her the psychiatric help she so obviously and desperately needs]].
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: [[spoiler:In In the first Toph Interlude, Toph [[spoiler:Toph and Piandao break Azula out of prison to get her the psychiatric help she so obviously and desperately needs]].
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** To many a reader's surprise and elation, [[spoiler:Lu Ten and Kya are revealed to be alive. Lu Ten survived the assassination attempt ordered by Ozai, and Kya was imprisoned in the Fire Nation prison for waterbenders.]]
** As of Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Jet is revealed to have survived the events of the show as well]].
** [[spoiler: Chapter 19 reveals that somehow Admiral Zhao survived the Siege of the North. WordOfGod says that he was dragged by La into the Spirit World and escaped through unknown means.]]
** As of Chapter 17, [[spoiler:Jet is revealed to have survived the events of the show as well]].
** [[spoiler: Chapter 19 reveals that somehow Admiral Zhao survived the Siege of the North. WordOfGod says that he was dragged by La into the Spirit World and escaped through unknown means.]]
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** To many a reader's surprise and elation, Unlike in canon, where they are {{Posthumous Character}}s, [[spoiler:Lu Ten and Kya Kya]] are revealed to be alive. Lu Ten The former survived the an assassination attempt ordered by Ozai, Ozai and Kya was has been hiding under a pseudonym, while the latter turns out to have been imprisoned in the Fire Nation prison for waterbenders.]]
rather than killed.
**As of In Chapter 17, it is revealed that [[spoiler:Jet is revealed to have survived the events of the show as well]].
Lake Laogai]].
**[[spoiler: Chapter 19 reveals that somehow Admiral [[spoiler:Admiral Zhao survived the Siege of the North. WordOfGod says that he was dragged by La into the Spirit World as opposed to drowned, and escaped through unknown means.]]
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* TailorMadePrison: The Fire Nation prison for waterbenders, named "The Water's Wail". Zuko is disturbed by the name, and even more disturbed to find [[spoiler:Kya as the sole prisoner inside]].
* TaughtByExperience: Zuko's servants are often able to help him with his trauma due to experience with somewhat similar cases, such as helping him sleep by singing to him like their children or recognizing that Zuko likely won't speak all day due to a former soldier friend who used to do the same.
* TaughtByExperience: Zuko's servants are often able to help him with his trauma due to experience with somewhat similar cases, such as helping him sleep by singing to him like their children or recognizing that Zuko likely won't speak all day due to a former soldier friend who used to do the same.
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* TailorMadePrison: The Fire Nation prison for waterbenders, named "The Water's Wail". Zuko is disturbed by the name, and even more disturbed to find [[spoiler:Kya as the sole prisoner inside]].
that [[spoiler:it only holds a single prisoner, Kya]].
* TaughtByExperience: Zuko's servants are often able to help him with his trauma due to experience with somewhat similar cases, such as helping him sleep by singing to him like their children or recognizingthat when Zuko likely won't speak all day due to a former soldier friend who used to do the same.
* TaughtByExperience: Zuko's servants are often able to help him with his trauma due to experience with somewhat similar cases, such as helping him sleep by singing to him like their children or recognizing
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* WarIsHell: Hammered home effectively each chapter with descriptions of how each character feels and has been affected by the war.
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* WarIsHell: Hammered home effectively each Each chapter is filled with descriptions of how each character feels and has been affected by the war.
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-->''Toph knew that she should be thinking the way her friends were, that this was the right choice, that this kept people safe, but she couldn’t help but think about how…\\She couldn’t help but think about how Azula was only ''fourteen years old''.''
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-->''Toph knew that she should be thinking the way her friends were, that this was the right choice, that this kept people safe, but she couldn’t help but think about how…\\She how…\\
She couldn’t help but think about how Azula was only ''fourteen years old''.''
She couldn’t help but think about how Azula was only ''fourteen years old''.''
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Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace following his Agni Kai and was told he is banished. Unfortunately, he's never been a patient one, and decides to confront his father right then and there about what he's going to do. As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko would spend the next three years hidden away to be trained in secret, assuming that they remember Ozai even had a son. In reality, the young man has been locked away and prisoned, never seeing sunlight and having barely any human contact outside of a few select guards. That is, until one day those guards happily open his cell door to let a Fire Sage in to address him: with Ozai defeated, Zuko is now the new Fire Lord. A Fire Lord who, with some help, is very eager to make good on his dream to make up for his nation's many sins.
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Rather than desperately chase for the approval of his father, [[ForWantOfANail Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier]] than in canon. As in, immediately after he wakes up in the palace following his Agni Kai and was told he is banished. Unfortunately, he's never been a patient one, and Zuko decides to confront his father Ozai right then and there about what he's going with the bold claim that he ''will'' find the Avatar and he ''will'' help them overthrow him. This unfortunately leads to do. a change of plans.
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zukowould spend spent the next three years hidden away to be trained in secret, assuming that they know or remember that Fire Lord Ozai even had a son. In reality, the young man Zuko has been locked away and prisoned, never seeing sunlight and having barely any human contact outside of a few select guards. That is, until one day those guards happily open his cell door to let a Fire Sage in to address him: him with Ozai defeated, Zuko the first good news he's heard in a long, long time: his father has been defeated by the Avatar, so he is now the new Fire Lord. A Fire Lord who, with some help, is very eager to make good on his dream It's time to make up for his nation's many sins.
As far as the world is concerned, Prince Zuko
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: [[spoiler:In regards to removing Azula's bending, Iroh was correct in his observation that it would only be a matter of time before Azula was able to escape from her prison and she had already injured around two hundred guards by that point. That being said, Toph later notes that taking away Azula's bending only made her mental deterioration worse.]]
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint: [[spoiler:In regards to removing Azula's bending, Iroh was correct in his observation that it would only be a matter of time before Azula was able to escape from her prison and she had already injured around two hundred guards by that point. That being said, point, so taking away her powers was probably a good thing. However, Toph later notes that while it does make her far less of a threat, taking away Azula's bending has only made really served to worsen her obvious mental deterioration worse.deterioration.]]
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* BroughtDownToNormal: Zuko lost his firebending at some point during his imprisonment, seemingly from being cut off from the sun for so long. Aang takes away Ozai's [[spoiler:and Azula's]] bending.
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* BroughtDownToNormal: BroughtDownToNormal:
** Zuko lost his firebending at some point during his imprisonment, seeminglyfrom due to being cut off from the sun for so long. long.
** As in canon, Aang takes away Ozai's bending. However, he also goes on to take [[spoiler:andAzula's]] bending.Azula's firebending]] as well.
** Zuko lost his firebending at some point during his imprisonment, seemingly
** As in canon, Aang takes away Ozai's bending. However, he also goes on to take [[spoiler:and
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Ozai took the palace doctors with him during the end of his campaign, meaning that [[spoiler:Kya]] closest they have on hand to a professional healer.
* CompositeCharacter: Zhao takes on some of canon Zuko's role in Season 1 as the one who discovers the Avatar had returned and burns down Kyoshi Island.
* CompositeCharacter: Zhao takes on some of canon Zuko's role in Season 1 as the one who discovers the Avatar had returned and burns down Kyoshi Island.
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* ClosestThingWeGot: Ozai took the palace doctors with him during the end of his campaign, meaning that [[spoiler:Kya]] one of their prisoners ([[spoiler:Kya]]) is the closest they have on hand to a professional healer.
* CompositeCharacter: Since the fic has Zuko be imprisoned for the entirety of the show's events, Zhao takeson some a number of canon Zuko's role in Season Book 1 as roles; namely being the one who discovers that the Avatar had returned and burns has returned, as well as burning down Kyoshi Island.
* CompositeCharacter: Since the fic has Zuko be imprisoned for the entirety of the show's events, Zhao takes
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** Chapter 22 is told from Toph's POV as she grows uncomfortable with Aang [[spoiler:removing Azula's bending]] and believes Iroh and her friends are wrong to assume Zuko is evil like his father. [[spoiler:This culminates in her choice to break Azula free from prison and go on the run with Piandao.]]
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** Chapter Chapters 22 is and 34 are told from Toph's POV as she grows uncomfortable with Aang [[spoiler:removing Azula's bending]] and believes Iroh and her friends are wrong to assume everyone immediately assuming Zuko is evil like his father. [[spoiler:This must be just as vile as Ozai without any proof. This culminates in her [[spoiler:her choice to break Azula free from prison and go on the run with Piandao.Piandao, with Chapter 34 covering the trio's journey through the Earth Kingdom as they aim to get to the Fire Nation and talk with Zuko.]]
* Chapter 37 is about Piandao recounting his entire life up until the present, from when he was abandoned by his parents, to eventually being taken under the wing of a swordsmaster, to having students of his own and the events of the show, to [[spoiler:him, Toph, and Azula finally making it to the Fire Nation to meet with Zuko]].
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* DramaticIrony: When the Gaang first learns about Zuko from Ozai and Iroh, they assume that he’s evil like his father.
** When Toph brings up the possibility that Zuko is still the kind boy that Iroh remembered him as, Iroh sadly dismisses that idea and states that Zuko is likely already corrupted by Ozai.
** When Toph brings up the possibility that Zuko is still the kind boy that Iroh remembered him as, Iroh sadly dismisses that idea and states that Zuko is likely already corrupted by Ozai.
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* DramaticIrony: DramaticIrony:
** When the Gaang first learns aboutZuko from Ozai and Iroh, Zuko, they assume that he’s evil like his father.
** When Toph brings up the possibilityfather. Iroh even dismisses Toph's suggestion that Zuko is could still the kind king boy that Iroh he remembered him as, Iroh sadly dismisses that idea and states stating that Zuko is likely already corrupted by Ozai.Ozai. Of course, the very premise of the story stems from Zuko refusing to be anything like his father.
** When the Gaang first learns about
** When Toph brings up the possibility
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki remained imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler:Because ForWantOfANail:
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Sukiremained remain imprisoned at the Boiling Rock for the entirety of the war.]]
** Since Zuko was imprisoned, Zhao ends up being the one to discover the Avatar is still alive and chase the group throughout the fic's version of Book 1.
** Because Zuko never met the Gaang, Sokka never learned where his father was being kept prisoner. As a result, Hakoda and Suki
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* InternalReveal: [[spoiler:While tending to Zuko's stab injury in Chapter 15, Kya, Hakoda, Suki, Mai and Ty Lee finally find out just how badly Zuko has been damaged, and Kya, Ty Lee and Mai hear the story of where he had been for three years.]]
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* InternalReveal: [[spoiler:While tending to Zuko's stab injury in Downplayed. In Chapter 15, Kya, [[spoiler:Kya, Hakoda, Suki, Mai and Ty Lee finally find out Lee]] all become privy to just how badly damaged Zuko's body is. Chapter 17 sees Zuko has been damaged, and Kya, finally explain the full story about the previous three years to [[spoiler:Kya, Ty Lee and Mai hear Mai]], which is the story of where he had been for three years.]]first time the reader also gets the complete details beyond the fic's synopsis.
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* MamaBear: [[spoiler:Kya gave herself up for her daughter, as in canon, but was actually literally taken away by the Southern Raiders and imprisoned, rather than killed. But upon being freed, she deduces Zuko's predicament through a few simple questions and is well on her way to becoming a surrogate mother for him.]]
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Kya scolding Hakoda for being too harsh and judgmental with Zuko]].
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Kya scolding Hakoda for being too harsh and judgmental with Zuko]].
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* MamaBear: MamaBear:
** [[spoiler:Kya gave herself up for her daughter, as in canon, but was actually literally taken away by the Southern Raiders and imprisoned, rather than killed.But upon Upon being freed, she deduces Zuko's predicament through a few simple questions and is well on her way to becoming a surrogate mother for him.]]
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Kya scoldinghim, even going so far as to scold Hakoda for being too harsh and judgmental with Zuko]].the boy]].
** [[spoiler:Kya gave herself up for her daughter, as in canon, but was actually literally taken away by the Southern Raiders and imprisoned, rather than killed.
** Chapter 14 has [[spoiler:Kya scolding
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* SympathyForTheDevil: Toph spends her interlude realizing how mentally screwed up Azula is and that being imprisoned [[spoiler:and depowered]] is only making her worse.
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* SympathyForTheDevil: Toph spends her interlude realizing how mentally screwed up damaged Azula is and that being imprisoned [[spoiler:and depowered]] is only making her worse.worse.
-->''Toph knew that she should be thinking the way her friends were, that this was the right choice, that this kept people safe, but she couldn’t help but think about how…\\She couldn’t help but think about how Azula was only ''fourteen years old''.''
-->''Toph knew that she should be thinking the way her friends were, that this was the right choice, that this kept people safe, but she couldn’t help but think about how…\\She couldn’t help but think about how Azula was only ''fourteen years old''.''
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The premise is that Zuko realizes his destiny much earlier. As in, as soon as he wakes up in the palace after his Agni Kai and is told he is banished. Unfortunately, he's never been a patient one. So he storms right up to Ozai and tells him what he's going to do. And gets locked up for over three years. Then, one day, he's being pulled out and told he's the new Fire Lord.
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AdaptationalJobChange: {{Downplayed|Trope}} with Zhao. In canon, he was introduced as a commander of the Fire Navy before later being promoted to admiral by Ozai. Here, he was already an admiral by the time Aang awoke from the iceberg.
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