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*AbledInTheAdaptation: Minor character Ikkanzaka Jirōbō, who in canon faced Orihime and Uryu and got his Soul Sleep and Soul Chain severed, instead faces Orihime and Tatsuki. The resulting defeat allowed him to keep his powers, instead giving him a HeelRealization.
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* DemotedToExtra: Uryu was one of the main characters in canon. Here, he remains a side character.
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* DemotedToExtra: Uryu was one of the main characters in canon. Here, he remains a side character.character, with the implication that Ryuuken had him BroughtDownToNormal.
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* ExtremeDoormat: Deconstructed in regards to Orihime. Like in canon, Orhime's passive nature stemmed from her brother's death the night that they had a calamitous argument. Shun Shun Rika tells her that doesn't mean she can't dislike or hate something, especially if it hurts her. That includes [[WithFriendsLikeThese her "friends" constant groping, disparaging her meals, or thinking lesser of her for other reasons]].
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* ExtremeDoormat: Deconstructed in regards to Orihime. Like in canon, Orhime's passive nature stemmed from her brother's death the night that they had a calamitous argument. Shun Shun Rika Rikka tells her that doesn't mean she can't dislike or hate something, especially if it hurts her. That includes [[WithFriendsLikeThese her "friends" constant groping, disparaging her meals, or thinking lesser of her for other reasons]].
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* ExtremeDoormat: Deconstructed in regards to Orihime. Like in canon, Orhime's passive nature stemmed from her brother's death the night that they had a calamitous argument. Shun Shun Rika tells her that doesn't mean she can't dislike or hate something, especially if it hurts her. That includes [[WithFriendsLikeThese her "friends" constant groping, disparaging her meals, or thinking lesser of her for other reasons]].
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* FriendsWithBenefits: Kukaku and Yoruichi apparently had have a history as when Yoruichi asks if she should change back from her cat form, Kukaku replies that it would end with both of them sidetracked.
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* FriendsWithBenefits: Kukaku and Yoruichi apparently had have a history as when Yoruichi asks if she should change back from her cat form, Kukaku replies that it would end with both of them sidetracked.
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** Related to the above, Ichigo never learns that he and Uryu are distant cousins, the exact distance is never established, here both are aware they are related through their respective mother and father.
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** Related to the above, Ichigo never only learns that he and Uryu are distant cousins, cousins during the "Everything But The Rain" arc, the exact distance is never established, here both are aware they are related through their respective mother and father.
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** Related to the above, Ichigo never learns that he and Uryu are distant cousins, the exact distance is never established, here both are aware they are related through their respective mother and father.
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* DoubleStandardRapeFemaleOnFemale: Subverted, While Orihime's passive personality means that she doesn't complain when it happens, but her conversation with Shun Shun Rikka makes it clear that she hates Chizuru's constant groping of her and her admitting this alongside other things such as being treated as an idiot for her personality, despite being third in class, or slut-shammed for her figure is how she attains her shikai.
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* ThrowingOffTheDisability: [[spoiler:With Orihime's Shin Shin Rikka, Kukaku manages to regain her lost arm.]]
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Saitama is actual Japanese prefecture.
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* ShoutOut: One of the locations mentioned in the story is called Saitama Prefecture, Saitama as in ''Webcomic/OnePunchMan''.
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* KissingCousins: Kukaku becomes attracted to Ichigo just from his attractiveness and power, wanting to keep it within the family.
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* KissingCousins: Kukaku becomes attracted to Ichigo just from his attractiveness and power, wanting to keep it within the family. She specifically notes that they are distant enough that it is not an issue genetically speaking.
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* AdaptedOut: Certain canon elements are removed from this story.
** Ichigo performs Konso on this hospital Jibakurei before Don Kanonji can turn it into a Hollow.
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, as the Greek and Japanese Shinigami made sure that Yhwach was DraggedOffToHell.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Because Uryu's father knocks him out after he released the hollow bait, Uryu never forms a friendship under fire with Ichigo and his companions during the Substitute Shinigami arc.
** Ichigo performs Konso on this hospital Jibakurei before Don Kanonji can turn it into a Hollow.
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, as the Greek and Japanese Shinigami made sure that Yhwach was DraggedOffToHell.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Because Uryu's father knocks him out after he released the hollow bait, Uryu never forms a friendship under fire with Ichigo and his companions during the Substitute Shinigami arc.
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* AdaptedOut: Certain canon elements are removed from this story.
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** In canon, Ichigoperforms Konso on this hospital Jibakurei before Don Kanonji can turn it only got into a Hollow.
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, asrelationship with Orihime, and only after the Greek main series was over. Here, he's in a polyamorous relationship with her and Japanese Shinigami made sure that Yhwach was DraggedOffToHell.
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:Tatsuki, with Rukia eventually joining in.
** Because Uryu's father knocks him out after he released the hollow bait, Uryu never forms a friendship under fire with Ichigo and his companions during the Substitute Shinigami arc.
** In canon, Ichigo
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, as
* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul:
** Because Uryu's father knocks him out after he released the hollow bait, Uryu never forms a friendship under fire with Ichigo and his companions during the Substitute Shinigami arc.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In canon, Ichigo only got into a relationship with Orihime, and only after the main series was over. Here, he's in a polyamorous relationship with her and Tatsuki, with Rukia eventually joining in.
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* AdaptedOut: Certain canon elements are removed from this story.
** Ichigo performs Konso on this hospital Jibakurei before Don Kanonji can turn it into a Hollow.
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, as the Greek and Japanese Shinigami made sure that Yhwach was DraggedOffToHell.
** Ichigo performs Konso on this hospital Jibakurei before Don Kanonji can turn it into a Hollow.
** Instead of getting Kon, Ichigo gets a Mod Soul that's a better match for him.
** The [[MythArc Thousand Year Blood War]] will not be featured, as the Greek and Japanese Shinigami made sure that Yhwach was DraggedOffToHell.
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* DemotedToExtra: Uryu was one of the main characters in canon. Here, he remains a side character.
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** Because Ichigo and co don't become friends with Uryū, he doesn't show up to help save Rukia.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Because Uryu's father knocks him out after he released the hollow bait, Uryu never forms a friendship under fire with Ichigo and his companions during the Substitute Shinigami arc.
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* PlayingWithFire: Tatsuki's Shikai is Mōsho, which is a fire-based ability.
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* ShoutOut: One of the locations mentioned in the story is called Saitama Prefecture, Saitama as in ''Webcomic/OnePunchMan''.
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* SexuallyTransmittedSuperpowers: Ichigo literally (and accidentally) fucks Shinigami powers into Orihime and Tatsuki.
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* ChekhovsGun: Ichigo having sex with his girlfriends Orihime and Tatsuki in Chapter 1 turns out to have far-reaching consequences. Since it was after Ichigo became a Shinigami but before he learned to control his reiatsu, he, but complete accident, fucked enough reiatsu into them to turn his girlfriends into shinigamis as well.
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* ChekhovsGun: Ichigo having sex with his girlfriends Orihime and Tatsuki in Chapter 1 turns out to have far-reaching consequences. Since it was after Ichigo became a Shinigami but before he learned to control his reiatsu, he, but by complete accident, fucked enough reiatsu into them to turn his girlfriends into shinigamis as well.
