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* AdaptationalVillainy: Mothwing training in the Dark Forest?
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Surprisingly averted for Hawkfrost after causing the ChainOfPeople earlier in chapter 2, perhaps because of how awesome Hawkfrost is? [[spoiler:Instead, he has to [[UsefulNotes/Covid19Pandemic stay within 6 Fox-lengths]] of Leopardstar, Mistyfoot, or Mothwing. He doesn't like it.]]
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* YouCantGoHomeAgain: Surprisingly averted for Hawkfrost after causing the ChainOfPeople earlier in chapter 2, perhaps because of how awesome Hawkfrost is? [[spoiler:Instead, he has to [[UsefulNotes/Covid19Pandemic stay within 6 Fox-lengths]] fox-lengths of Leopardstar, Mistyfoot, or Mothwing. He doesn't like it.]]]]
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sea_toad Sea Toads]] really do exist, although they are fish instead of frogs like you'd think.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: A ''Chaunacops'' anglerfish appears as a RunningGag in the Dark Forest.
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** Happens again in the next chapter, this time towards Lionpaw. He accepted the scam, though.
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* MindScrew: The Dark Forest has some elements of the Deep Sea, (including a Chaunacops anglerfish) which should be outright impossible in such a place. Even weirder is that Four-shaped trees from WebAnimation/BattleForBFDI are also present.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiabolusExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the ''only'' such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.[[/note]]. Panicking cats, Breezepaw attacking Sandstorm, then all the hell broke loose after that strike.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiabolusExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A places [[note]]However, a gathering would be the ''only'' such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.[[/note]].ironically[[/note]]. Panicking cats, Breezepaw attacking Sandstorm, then all the hell broke loose after that strike.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: A Chaunacops anglerfish appears as a RunningGag in the Dark Forest.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: A Chaunacops ''Chaunacops'' anglerfish appears as a RunningGag in the Dark Forest.
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* SeldomSeenSpecies: A Chaunacops anglerfish appears as a RunningGag in the Dark Forest.
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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: Hawkfrost pranks Hollypaw by insisting she is a spy. Works too well when Redwillow actually believes it.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiablosExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the ''only'' such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.[[/note]]. Panicking cats, Breezepaw attacking Sandstorm, then all the hell broke loose after that strike.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiablosExMachina DiabolusExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the ''only'' such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.[[/note]]. Panicking cats, Breezepaw attacking Sandstorm, then all the hell broke loose after that strike.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiablosExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the only such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.]]
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiablosExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the only ''only'' such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.]][[/note]]. Panicking cats, Breezepaw attacking Sandstorm, then all the hell broke loose after that strike.
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* TotalEclipseOfThePlot: Comes as a DiablosExMachina as a lunar eclipse, during a gathering, of all places.[[note]]A gathering would be the only such time a blood Moon could happen, ironically.]]
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* AluminumChristmasTrees: [[https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sea_toad Sea Toads]] really do exist, although they are fish instead of frogs like you'd think.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 2 has a [[ComicStrip/Peanuts Kite-Eating Tree]] fall on the edge of ShadowClan camp.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 2 has a [[ComicStrip/Peanuts [[ComicStrip/{{Peanuts}} Kite-Eating Tree]] fall on the edge of ShadowClan camp.[=ShadowClan=] camp. Even funnier is that it happened at the exact same time Jaypaw mentioned it.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 2 has a [[ComicStrip/Peanuts Kite-Eating Tree]] fall on the edge of ShadowClan camp.
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* CrowdChant: Bramblestar interrupts the chanting at the first 2 of the Three being apprentices, but allows them to do it after Hollypaw is apprenticed.
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* ParodyCommercial: Tigerstar does this in an attempt to get Jaypaw into the Dark Forest. It fails when Spottedleaf interrupts it and brings Jaypaw back to StarClan.
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* ParodyCommercial: Tigerstar does this in an attempt to get Jaypaw into the Dark Forest. It fails when Spottedleaf interrupts it and brings Jaypaw back to StarClan.[=StarClan=].
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* ParodyCommercial: Tigerstar does this in an attempt to get Jaypaw into the Dark Forest. It fails when Spottedleaf interrupts it and brings Jaypaw back to StarClan.
