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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesia in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesia in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people then they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* NotSoStoic: [[spoiler: Light when L screws up his plan and rejects him.]]
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* TheStarscream: Invoked trope. When Light [[spoiler: is cornered [[SeamlessSpontaneousLie he comes up with a new story]]- he isn't Kira, but he was forced to work for Kira but once he gained Kira's trust he betrayed him.]] It works as a solid defense against being accused of being Kira and some even view him as a hero but he has lost the trust he once had when the Taskforce begins to realize how [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative]] Light really is.]]
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* TheStarscream: Invoked trope. When Light [[spoiler: is cornered [[SeamlessSpontaneousLie he comes up with a new story]]- story- he isn't Kira, but he was forced to work for Kira but once he gained Kira's trust he betrayed him.]] It works as a solid defense against being accused of being Kira and some even view him as a hero but he has lost the trust he once had when the Taskforce begins to realize how [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative]] Light really is.]]
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* TheStarscream: Invoked trope. When Light [[spoiler: is cornered [[SeamlessSpontaneousLie he comes up with a new story]]- he isn't Kira, but he was forced to work for Kira but once he gained Kira's trust he betrayed him.]] It works as a solid defense against being accused of being Kira and some even view him as a hero but he has lost the trust he once had when the Taskforce begins to realize how [[ManipulativeBastard manipulative]] Light really is.]]
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* IncompatibleOrientation: Misa and Light.
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* MindRape: Light feels "defiled" every time he regains his Kira memories.
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* MindRape: Light feels "defiled" defiled every time he regains his Kira memories.
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Light to L.
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* VillainousCrush: Light to L.
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* ThinkUnsexyThoughts: when L lets Light back into his presence, Light has to work hard on focusing on the murder case L has given him instead of on L.
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* NerdsAreVirgins: played straight with L at the beginning of the story, averted with Light.
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* TakeThat: Light and L are ''[[BoysLoveNotes riba]]'' in this fic, they are not shoehorned into {{Seme}}-{{Uke}} stereotypes:
-->'''L''': There's the cultural stereotype of the uke, who receives blow jobs from the seme, which is seen as a privilege for the uke. In return, the seme gets to enter the uke, which is a privilege for the seme. However, it's considered degrading and low-status to be entered by another man, so supposedly nobody wants to be the uke and the blow jobs are seen as a way to compensate the uke for that humiliation and entice him into his role. I think you view yourself as the seme and me as the uke.
-->'''Light''': But those are just stereotypes. No relationship is really that simple unless there's at least one idiot involved.
-->'''L''': There's the cultural stereotype of the uke, who receives blow jobs from the seme, which is seen as a privilege for the uke. In return, the seme gets to enter the uke, which is a privilege for the seme. However, it's considered degrading and low-status to be entered by another man, so supposedly nobody wants to be the uke and the blow jobs are seen as a way to compensate the uke for that humiliation and entice him into his role. I think you view yourself as the seme and me as the uke.
-->'''Light''': But those are just stereotypes. No relationship is really that simple unless there's at least one idiot involved.
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Boy Gentle Boy]]: [[spoiler: L is the brooding one, ''Light'' is the gentle one being very careful with how he treats L since he was on the receiving end of a very abusive relationship relationship in the past.]]
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Boy Gentle Boy]]: [[spoiler: L is the brooding one, ''Light'' is the gentle one being very careful with how he treats L since he was on the receiving end of a very abusive relationship relationship in the past.]]
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* BastardBoyfriend: Before the events of the series [[spoiler: Yamamoto]] was one to Light.
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Boy Gentle Boy]]: [[spoiler: L is the brooding one, ''Light'' is the gentle one being very careful with how he treats L since he was on the receiving end of a very abusive relationship relationship in the past.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Light's [[spoiler: last relationship was very destructive and ended poorly]], L [[spoiler: has lived through several tragedies he chooses not to dwell or elaborate on to anyone.]]
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* LoveMartyr: Light
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* YaoiGuys: Light and L.
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* TheTalk: Watari forces L and Light read some sex ed books.
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* TheTalk: Watari forces L and Light to read some sex ed books.
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* AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale: Many people find it humorous how Misa stalks Light and only when Misa gets really violent and crazy do people consider calling the cops.
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* AbuseIsOkayWhenItsFemaleOnMale: Many people find it humorous how Misa stalks Light (or even think he's lucky) and only when Misa gets really violent and crazy do people consider even ''consider'' calling the cops.
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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler: when L catches Light on camera that Light sees and reacts to an invisible presence.]]
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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler: when L catches Light on camera that Light sees watching and reacts reacting to an invisible presence.]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesi in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesi [[LaserGuidedAmnesia in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook in order to wipe their memories by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesi in order to wipe their memories memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook in order to wipe their memories by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* SeamlessSpontaneousLie: Light comes up with an elaborate one [[spoiler: when cornered. [[TheStarScream He claims he was coerced into working for Kira and then betrayed him and though he conveniently can't go into details, he has now backed Kira into a corner so he can't kill anymore.]]]]
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* SeamlessSpontaneousLie: Light comes up with an elaborate one [[spoiler: when cornered. cornered- [[TheStarScream He he claims he was coerced into working for Kira and then betrayed him and though he conveniently can't go into details, he has now backed Kira into a corner so he can't kill anymore.]]]]
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** Also [[spoiler: when backed into a corner Light pretends to be both TheMole and the ReverseMole to Kira—that he was coerced into helping Kira but now he has somehow backed Kira into a corner so he can't kill anymore. L realizes to his frustration that there's no way to prove it one way or another.]]
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** Also [[spoiler: when backed into a corner Light pretends to be both TheMole and the ReverseMole to Kira—that he was [[TheStarscream coerced into helping working for Kira but now he has somehow backed Kira into a corner so he can't kill anymore. anymore.]] L realizes to his frustration that there's no way to prove it one way or another.]]
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* SorryImGay: Light resorts to telling Misa this to prevent Rem from forcing him back into a relationship with her.
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* SorryImGay: Light resorts to telling Misa this to prevent Rem from forcing him back into a relationship with her.
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** [[spoiler: When Light is cornered he counters with the arguement that if he was Kira why were they still alive and why would he allow himself to be trapped so easily?]] Aizawa suggests that Kira might just be [[LoveMakesYouDumb "a fool for love"]] but L immediately dismisses it as ridiculous. [[{{Irony}} Of course Kira would never fall in love with L!]]
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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler: when L catches Light on camera that Light sees and reacts to an invisible presence.]]
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* SeamlessSpontaneousLie: Light comes up with one [[spoiler: when cornered.]]
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* DiggingYourselfDeeper: poor drunk Matsuda...
-->'''Matsuda''': It was so horrible. I- I feel like I've violated Misa-Misa just by listening to those lies being told to her... I don't want to have sex with two men and Misa-Misa at the same time... (*everyone stares*) No, no, I'm not with this guy, he's just my friend who has sex with my other male friend. [[HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday I really like women a lot and any women who want to be with me, I'll respect them incredibly hard and skillfully with all the right respectful lines that I'm going to learn.]]
-->'''Light''': I don't think you should return to this bar anytime soon.
-->'''Matsuda''': It was so horrible. I- I feel like I've violated Misa-Misa just by listening to those lies being told to her... I don't want to have sex with two men and Misa-Misa at the same time... (*everyone stares*) No, no, I'm not with this guy, he's just my friend who has sex with my other male friend. [[HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday I really like women a lot and any women who want to be with me, I'll respect them incredibly hard and skillfully with all the right respectful lines that I'm going to learn.]]
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* FreudianSlipperySlope: poor drunk Matsuda...
-->'''Matsuda''': It was so horrible. I- I feel like I've violated Misa-Misa just by listening to those lies being told to her... I don't want to have sex with two men and Misa-Misa at the same time... (*everyone stares*) No, no, I'm not with this guy, he's just my friend who has sex with my other male friend. [[HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday I really like women a lot and any women who want to be with me, I'll respect them incredibly hard and skillfully with all the right respectful lines that I'm going to learn.]]
-->'''Light''': I don't think you should return to this bar anytime soon.
-->'''Matsuda''': It was so horrible. I- I feel like I've violated Misa-Misa just by listening to those lies being told to her... I don't want to have sex with two men and Misa-Misa at the same time... (*everyone stares*) No, no, I'm not with this guy, he's just my friend who has sex with my other male friend. [[HaveIMentionedIAmHeterosexualToday I really like women a lot and any women who want to be with me, I'll respect them incredibly hard and skillfully with all the right respectful lines that I'm going to learn.]]
-->'''Light''': I don't think you should return to this bar anytime soon.
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* ManOnFire: [[spoiler: Light does this out of desperation when L (re)discovers the notebook. Light sticks his hands in the fire and he holds the notebook there until it's burnt to ash.]]
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* ManOnFire: [[spoiler: Light does this out of desperation when L (re)discovers the notebook. Light grabs the notebook and sticks his hands in the fire and he holds the notebook there until it's burnt to ash.]]
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* FriendlyEnemy: Light realizes it was L that was protecting him and Misa from being assassinated.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: [[spoiler: Light gets the investigators and even L to begin doubting that he is Kira because Kira would never let himself get caught like this, Kira never incriminate himself like this... ]]
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: [[spoiler: Light gets the investigators and even L to begin doubting that he is Kira because Kira would never let himself get caught like this, Kira would never incriminate himself like this... ]]
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* NoEndorHolocaust: When the Shinigami attack Yotsuba. Justified, [[BlueAndOrangeMorality if anyone actually died in an incident where the Shinigami didn't use their death notes they'd get in trouble.]]
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* NoEndorHolocaust: When the Shinigami [[spoiler: attack Yotsuba.Yotsuba]]. Justified, [[BlueAndOrangeMorality if anyone actually died in an incident where the Shinigami didn't use their death notes they'd get in trouble.]]