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* TakeThat: Light and L are ''[[UsefulNotes/BoysLoveNotes riba]]'' in this fic, they are not shoehorned into {{Seme}}-{{Uke}} stereotypes:
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* TakeThat: Light and L are ''[[UsefulNotes/BoysLoveNotes ''[[MediaNotes/BoysLoveNotes riba]]'' in this fic, they are not shoehorned into {{Seme}}-{{Uke}} stereotypes:
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* CosmicPlaything: Light. Even when his plans go right, something is always going wrong... but [[MagnificentBastard he still usually recovers quickly.]]
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* CosmicPlaything: Light. Even when his plans go right, something is always going wrong... but [[MagnificentBastard he still usually recovers quickly.]]
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* UnequalPairing: L (the detective in charge of the Kira investigation) and Light (the main suspect in the Kira investigation), however this fic subverts the usual FandomSpecificPlot where [[OverprotectiveDad Mr. Yagami gets mad at L]] for sleeping with his son and instead he gets mad at ''Light'' because it looks like he's corrupting the investigation.
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* UnequalPairing: L (the detective in charge of the Kira investigation) and Light (the main suspect in the Kira investigation), however this fic subverts the usual FandomSpecificPlot where [[OverprotectiveDad Mr. Yagami gets mad at L]] L for sleeping with his son and instead he gets mad at ''Light'' because it looks like he's corrupting the investigation.
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Catch Your Death Of Cold trope.
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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: L and Light get sick from staying outside in the rain for an extended period of time.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: At one point L is referred to as "mildly autistic."
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* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Light to L and Misa to Light.
* TheAtoner: Light.
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* EndlessCorridor: When Light and L investigate Yotsuba.
* FeverDreamEpisode: [[TitleDrop Duh]].
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* IncompatibleOrientation: Misa and Light.
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* LivingWithTheVillain
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* MomentKiller: Matsuda, and later Ryuk.
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* [[spoiler: RedemptionEarnsLife]]
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* {{Yandere}}: Misa gets really creepy...
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* YaoiGuys: Light and L.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: as soon as Light decides he wants to quit being Kira [[ButtMonkey he has to deal with potentially deadly and/or incriminating disaster after disaster]].
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: as As soon as Light decides he wants to quit being Kira [[ButtMonkey he has to deal with potentially deadly and/or incriminating disaster after disaster]].
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* AlternateUniverseFic
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* RealityEnsues: L and Light get sick from staying outside in the rain for an extended period of time.
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* SidekickExMachina: when Rem is helping him, Light [[HypocriticalHumor "jokingly" considers how easy it would be to pursue a life of crime]] with a Shinigami as an accomplice.
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* SidekickExMachina: when When Rem is helping him, Light [[HypocriticalHumor "jokingly" considers how easy it would be to pursue a life of crime]] with a Shinigami as an accomplice.
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* SlashFic
* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome: L and Light get sick from staying outside in the rain for an extended period of time.
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Badass Gay is a disambiguation page, and therefore not a trope. Do not pothole or wick to Badass Gay.
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* BadassGay: Light and L.
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* BastardBoyfriend: Before the events of the series [[spoiler: Yamamoto]] was one to Light.
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* DomesticAbuser: Before the events of the series [[spoiler: Yamamoto]] was one to Light.
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* VillainsNeverLie: When Light tells the investigators [[spoiler: [[MetaphoricallyTrue he is constantly being watched and guarded by two Shinigami-one keeps constant watch over him and threatens him every time he steps out of line and the other, a Shinigami that likes apples, drops in regularly to takes reports from the one guarding him]]]] [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse and then let's them come to their own conclusions]] [[FalseInnocenceTrick about his involvement in the Kira case.]]
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* VillainsNeverLie: When Light tells the investigators [[spoiler: [[MetaphoricallyTrue he is constantly being watched and guarded by two Shinigami-one keeps constant watch over him and threatens him every time he steps out of line and the other, a Shinigami that likes apples, drops in regularly to takes reports from the one guarding him]]]] [[AnOfferYouCantRefuse and then let's lets them come to their own conclusions]] [[FalseInnocenceTrick about his involvement in the Kira case.]]
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* AmnesiacDissonance: Even after Light falls in love with L and realizes that his plan to rid the world of crime had been fundamentally flawed and doomed to fail from the start, he still convinces himself that he was nonetheless justified in using the Death Note for as long as he did -- until he loses his memories of the Death Note for good, whereupon he becomes absolutely repulsed at the thought that Kira might have manipulated or even been him and firmly believes that L shouldn't let his feelings for him get in the way of punishing him if he turns out to have indeed been Kira, even rejecting all the possible explanations/justifications L brings up for making his punishment less severe.
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* TheAtoner: Light
* BadassGay: Light and L
* BadassGay: Light and L
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* TheAtoner: Light
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* BadassGay: Light andLL.
* BadassGay: Light and
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesia in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people then they could have the power of Kira.]]]]
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* BatmanGambit: [[spoiler: Light tricks all the officers present at Higuchi's arrest into accepting and giving up ownership of the notebook [[LaserGuidedAmnesia in order to wipe their memories]] by having Rem throw the notebook at every cop, growling out "That's mine, give it back to me" and if me." If "Give it back or IllKillYou" doesn't work work, [[SecretTestOfCharacter she should then tell them they passed the test of bravery]] and that she had selected them to be the next Kira, Kira and if they would just [[PaterFamilicide slaughter their families]] [[IfYoureSoEvilEatThisKitten and fifty additional innocent people then they could have the power of Kira.]]]]Kira, something no one in their right mind would agree to.]]]]
* BirdsOfAFeather: In spite of Light and L's obvious differences in opinion on Kira and justice, it becomes clear that both of them are deeply screwed-up {{Manipulative Bastard}}s who could never be happy with anyone else because they need someone who provides them with constant intellectual stimulation and never becomes boring to them.
* BirdsOfAFeather: In spite of Light and L's obvious differences in opinion on Kira and justice, it becomes clear that both of them are deeply screwed-up {{Manipulative Bastard}}s who could never be happy with anyone else because they need someone who provides them with constant intellectual stimulation and never becomes boring to them.
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* BreakTheHaughty: one of L's tests of Light's love for him is public humiliation.
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* BreakTheHaughty: one One of L's tests of Light's love for him is seeing if he'll humiliate himself in public humiliation. to win him back.
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* CaughtInTheRain: The story begins with the rooftop scene from episode 25 [[spoiler: [[FixFic but has a very different outcome.]]]]
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* CaughtInTheRain: The story begins with the rooftop scene from episode 25 [[spoiler: 25, [[FixFic but has a very different outcome.]]]] outcome]].
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* CosmicPlaything: Light. Even when his plans go right something is always going wrong... [[MagnificentBastard he usually recovers quickly.]]
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* CosmicPlaything: Light. Even when his plans go right right, something is always going wrong... but [[MagnificentBastard he still usually recovers quickly.]]
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* DoggedNiceGuy: Light to L.
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* DragonInChief: Rem
* DrowningMySorrows: Light needs more information about the case... so Light finds Matsuda at a bar...
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* DragonInChief: Rem
Rem.
* DramaPreservingHandicap: If L's time spent in the rain hadn't caused him to become delirious from a high fever for several days, it would have been far harder for Light to escape his surveillance long enough to communicate with Rem or for [[spoiler:Rem to convince L to give the Death Note back to her without him becoming suspicious]].
* DrowningMySorrows: Light needs more information about the case... soLight he finds Matsuda at a bar...
* DramaPreservingHandicap: If L's time spent in the rain hadn't caused him to become delirious from a high fever for several days, it would have been far harder for Light to escape his surveillance long enough to communicate with Rem or for [[spoiler:Rem to convince L to give the Death Note back to her without him becoming suspicious]].
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* {{Fingore}}: [[spoiler: when Light burns the notebook and his hands along with it.]]
* FixFic: [[spoiler: Averting the outcome of episode 25.]]
* FixFic: [[spoiler: Averting the outcome of episode 25.]]
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* {{Fingore}}: [[spoiler: when When Light burns the notebook and his hands along with it.]]
* FixFic:[[spoiler: Averting the outcome of episode 25.]]
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* FleetingPassionateHobbies: [[spoiler: after dumping Light]], L takes up Nei hua to distract himself.
* FreudianSlipperySlope: poor drunk Matsuda...
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* FleetingPassionateHobbies: [[spoiler: after After dumping Light]], L takes up Nei hua to distract himself.
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* HeelRealization: Light realizes that the Kira plan isn't working.
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* HeelRealization: Light realizes that the Kira plan isn't working. working, although he's still prideful enough that he thinks that him trying it out for six months at the cost of Raye, Naomi, and other innocent people's lives was still perfectly justified.
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: [[spoiler: Light gets the investigators and even L to begin doubting that he is Kira because Kira would never let himself get caught like this, Kira would never incriminate himself like this... ]]
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* IKnowYouKnowIKnow: [[spoiler: Light gets the investigators and even L to begin doubting that he is Kira because Kira would never let himself get caught like this, Kira would never incriminate himself like this... ]]this...
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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler: when L catches Light on camera watching and reacting to an invisible presence.]]
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* ImplausibleDeniability: [[spoiler: when When L catches Light on camera watching and reacting to an invisible presence.]]
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* {{Lemon}}: there are several
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* LoveMartyr: Light
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* LoveMartyr: Light
LoveRedeems: [[ZigzaggingTrope Zigzagged]]. Light's realization that killing L, someone he has grown close to, would cause him to lose the last of his sanity contributes to his decision to stop being Kira, but he doesn't view it or the impromptu sex they had on the roof as the sole reason for his decision. In addition, developing feelings for L doesn't stop Light from still being a prideful ManipulativeBastard who has little empathy for others outside of his family or L; he becomes more willing to admit that he might be wrong about some things and take L's feelings in consideration to make their relationship work, but he's still hardly a nice person. The author describes Light as not so much "redeemed" as "rehabilitated".
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* ManipulativeBastard: both Both Light and L. L.
* TheMasochismTango: Light and L's relationship comes off as this at many points, with them constantly manipulating each other even while having sex.
* TheMasochismTango: Light and L's relationship comes off as this at many points, with them constantly manipulating each other even while having sex.
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* MomentKiller: Matsuda. Later Ryuk.
* MultitaskedConversation: Light frequently has to communicate with the Shinigami and L at the same time.
* {{Mutants}}: [[spoiler: Since L proved that [[ByTheEyesOfTheBlind Light can see something that no one else can see]], and that [[{{Seers}} he reacted to events he had no way of knowing about]], and [[BreakingTheBonds somehow Light's chain broke...]]]] the taskforce now thinks Light has superhuman powers. Matsuda pesters him to [[MindOverMatter levitate something]].
* MultitaskedConversation: Light frequently has to communicate with the Shinigami and L at the same time.
* {{Mutants}}: [[spoiler: Since L proved that [[ByTheEyesOfTheBlind Light can see something that no one else can see]], and that [[{{Seers}} he reacted to events he had no way of knowing about]], and [[BreakingTheBonds somehow Light's chain broke...]]]] the taskforce now thinks Light has superhuman powers. Matsuda pesters him to [[MindOverMatter levitate something]].
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* MomentKiller: Matsuda. Later Matsuda, and later Ryuk.
* MultitaskedConversation: Light frequently has to communicate with the Shinigami and L at the sametime.
time with dialogue vague enough to not make L too suspicious but still specific enough for the Shinigami to understand.
* {{Mutants}}: [[spoiler: Since L proved that [[ByTheEyesOfTheBlind Light can see something that no one else can see]], and that [[{{Seers}} he reacted to events he had no way of knowing about]], and [[BreakingTheBonds somehow Light's chain broke...]]]] the taskforce now thinks Light has superhuman powers. Matsuda pesters him to [[MindOverMatter levitatesomething]]. something]].
* MythologyGag: One of Light's reasons for giving up on being Kira is his theory that since he can no longer use Misa to deflect suspicion away from him, he would eventually have to give a Death Note to a fanatical but mentally unstable Kira follower if he ever came under suspicion again for being Kira which would lead to his downfall -- which is indeed exactly what happened to him in the second half of the manga and anime.
* MultitaskedConversation: Light frequently has to communicate with the Shinigami and L at the same
* {{Mutants}}: [[spoiler: Since L proved that [[ByTheEyesOfTheBlind Light can see something that no one else can see]], and that [[{{Seers}} he reacted to events he had no way of knowing about]], and [[BreakingTheBonds somehow Light's chain broke...]]]] the taskforce now thinks Light has superhuman powers. Matsuda pesters him to [[MindOverMatter levitate
* MythologyGag: One of Light's reasons for giving up on being Kira is his theory that since he can no longer use Misa to deflect suspicion away from him, he would eventually have to give a Death Note to a fanatical but mentally unstable Kira follower if he ever came under suspicion again for being Kira which would lead to his downfall -- which is indeed exactly what happened to him in the second half of the manga and anime.
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* SexFaceTurn: Light decides he'd rather not kill L after they have sex for the first time.
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* SlashFic SingleTargetSexuality: Light is the only person L has ever been sexually attracted to; he tries dating other men and women on Watari's suggestion but feels nothing for any of them. Similarly, while Light has had sex with other men, L is clearly the only person in the world outside of his family capable of making him feel anything close to love.
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* SuckSessor: Near
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* TakeThat: Light and L are ''[[BoysLoveNotes riba]]'' in this fic, they are not shoehorned into {{Seme}}-{{Uke}} stereotypes:
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* TakeThat: Light and L are ''[[BoysLoveNotes ''[[UsefulNotes/BoysLoveNotes riba]]'' in this fic, they are not shoehorned into {{Seme}}-{{Uke}} stereotypes:
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* ShoutOut: After Rem assists Light by breaking the [[ChainedHeat chain]] L seems to be under the impression that Light is a [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender metalbender]].
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* ShoutOut: After Rem assists Light [[BreakingTheBonds by breaking the [[ChainedHeat chain]] L seems to be under the impression that Light is a [[WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender metalbender]].
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* RealityEnsues: L and Light get sick from staying outside in the rain for an extended period of time.
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Boy Gentle Boy]]: [[spoiler: L is the brooding one, ''Light'' is the gentle one being very careful with how he treats L since he was on the receiving end of a very abusive relationship in the past.]]
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* [[BroodingBoyGentleGirl Brooding Boy Gentle Boy]]: [[spoiler: L is the brooding one, ''Light'' is the gentle one being very careful with how he treats L since he Light was on the receiving end of a very abusive relationship in the past.]]
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* CrazyJealousGuy: Light towards L. It's implied that Light is a bit emotionally stunted and needy [[WellDoneSonGuy given his father was never around for him growing up.]]
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* UnequalPairing: L (the detective in charge of the Kira investigation) and Light (the main suspect in the Kira investigation), however this fic subverts the usual fanfic reaction where [[OverprotectiveDad Mr. Yagami gets mad at L]] for sleeping with his son and instead he gets mad at ''Light'' because it looks like he's corrupting the investigation.
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* UnequalPairing: L (the detective in charge of the Kira investigation) and Light (the main suspect in the Kira investigation), however this fic subverts the usual fanfic reaction FandomSpecificPlot where [[OverprotectiveDad Mr. Yagami gets mad at L]] for sleeping with his son and instead he gets mad at ''Light'' because it looks like he's corrupting the investigation.
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty: as soon as Light decides he wants to quit being Kira [[ButtMonkey he has to deal with potentially deadly and/or incriminating disaster after disaster]].
