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* KickTheSonOfABitch: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with its [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a major factor.
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet Platform/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with its [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a major factor.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]] all by himself, and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they genuinely care about him and have been there for him in secret.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]] all by himself, and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase because he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they genuinely care about him and have been there for him in secret.
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Set in a world where humans were at odds with the other races until a mysterious pandemic has started to turn the majority of mankind into savage, animalistic creatures called Ferals. Because of this, the Royal Sisters made a walled city where many Equestrians and selected non-infected humans would be safe from the Ferals. While the rest of the world around it seemingly decays.
Years later 16-year-old human named Spike Clawson is having a miserable life, from the loss his parents to the outbreak when he was young, constantly being mistreated by those around him because of his race and lives alone in a rotting apartment.
Years later 16-year-old human named Spike Clawson is having a miserable life, from the loss his parents to the outbreak when he was young, constantly being mistreated by those around him because of his race and lives alone in a rotting apartment.
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Set in a world where humans were at odds with the other races until a mysterious pandemic has started to turn the majority of mankind into savage, animalistic creatures called Ferals. Because of this, the Royal Sisters made a walled city where many Equestrians and selected non-infected humans would be safe from the Ferals. While Ferals, while the rest of the world around it seemingly decays.
Yearslater later, a 16-year-old human named Spike Clawson is having a miserable life, from the loss of his parents to the outbreak when he was young, constantly being mistreated by those around him because of his race and lives alone in a rotting apartment.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Before escaping the city, Spike decides to give his power suit a few "test runs" by blowing up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroying Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beating Rumble to a pulp and leaving him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was all that unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike but [[DisproportionateRetribution punishes him when he tries to defend himself]], Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that they kinda deserved it.
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Before escaping the city, Spike decides to give his power suit a few "test runs" by blowing up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroying Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beating Rumble to a pulp and leaving him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was all that unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike but [[DisproportionateRetribution punishes him when he tries to defend himself]], Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that [[AssholeVictim they kinda deserved it.
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* TheDogBiteBack: Spike gets back at some of the ponies who made his life miserable before escaping Canterlot for good. See PayEvilUntoEvil below for more details.
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* TheDogBiteBack: TheDogBitesBack: Spike gets back at some of the ponies who made his life miserable before escaping Canterlot for good. See PayEvilUntoEvil below for more details.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they genuinely care about him and have been there for him in secret.
* AssholeVictim: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
* AssholeVictim: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], apartment]] all by himself, and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they genuinely care about him and have been there for him in secret.
* AssholeVictim: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
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* AssholeVictim: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
* TheDogBiteBack: Spike gets back at some of the ponies who made his life miserable before escaping Canterlot for good. See PayEvilUntoEvil below for more details.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beats Rumble to a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike and punishes him when he tries to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that [[AssholeVictim they kinda deserved it]].
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats Rumble to up (and most likely killed) a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on Spike her and punishes him when he tries planned to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that [[AssholeVictim they kinda deserved it]].
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* PayEvilUntoEvil: Before escaping the city, Spike decides to give his power suit a few "test runs" by blowing up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroying Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beating Rumble to a pulp and leaving him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was all that unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike but [[DisproportionateRetribution punishes him when he tries to defend himself]], Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that they kinda deserved it.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they've been there for him in secret.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they've they genuinely care about him and have been there for him in secret.
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with its [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a forefront.
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with its [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a forefront.
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* PostApocalypticDog: Starlight has an Australian Cattle Dog named Jack for a companion.
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* AssholeVictim: In her introduction chapter, Starlight beats up (and most likely killed) a gang of earth pony stallions who tried to sneak up on her and planned to do some... [[RapeIsASpecialKindOfEvil less than savory things to her]].
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceQueen slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they've been there for him in secret.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceQueen [[DefrostingIceKing slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they've been there for him in secret.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]as character]] as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
JerkWithAHeartOfGold and [[DefrostingIceQueen slowly but surely warm up to the girls]] when he finds out they've been there for him in secret.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's the author's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]. He's character]]as he's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beats Rumble to a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike and punishes him when he tries to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash said that they kinda deserved it.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beats Rumble to a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[SpoiledBrat pampered]] [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike and punishes him when he tries to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash said commented (At least regarding the bully trio and Flintheart) that [[AssholeVictim they kinda deserved it.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's [[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.them]] and thought [[DontYouDarePityMe they only did it out of pity.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's other carnations of the character. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self]] and Wildcard25's other carnations of the character.[[Fanfic/TheGirlsOfMyLife other]] [[Fanfic/ABoysDazzlingGirls incarnations]] [[Fanfic/TheDragonGamer of]] [[Fanfic/HighschoolDragon the]] [[Fanfic/MasterThiefDragon character]]. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his canon self and Wildcard25's other carnations of the character. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic canon self self]] and Wildcard25's other carnations of the character. He's a lot more ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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Years later 16 year old human named Spike Clawson is having a miserable life, from the loss his parents to the outbreak when he was young, constantly being mistreated by those around him because of his race, and lives alone in a rotting apartment.
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Years later 16 year old 16-year-old human named Spike Clawson is having a miserable life, from the loss his parents to the outbreak when he was young, constantly being mistreated by those around him because of his race, race and lives alone in a rotting apartment.
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with it's [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a forefront.
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''Feral World'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' fanfic written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/156298/Wildcard25 Wildcard25]] on Website/FimfictionDotNet [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/499035/feral-world here]]. It is considered his [[DarkerAndEdgier darkest fic yet]] with it's its [[AfterTheEnd post-apocalyptic setting]] and FantasticRacism being a forefront.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. He's more rude and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly showed a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. Especially when you compare him to both his canon self and Wildcard25's other carnations of the character. He's a lot more rude ruder and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly showed show a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So So, his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
* BreatherEpisode: The chapter "Camp Out" is this.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beats Rumble to a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike and punishes him when he tries to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash said that they kinda deserved it.
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Before escaping the city, Spike blew up both of Surf & Turf's respective cars, destroyed Flintheart's house with a falling tree, savagely beats Rumble to a pulp and threw him in a trash can, did the same to Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score and even broke their wings for good measure. Was it all unnecessarily petty and cruel? Probably, but they all had it coming. Surf and Turf were a pair of [[AlphaBitch Alpha Bitches]] who look down on Spike, Flintheart was a racially biased SternTeacher (bordering on SadistTeacher) who lets the other students gang up on Spike and punishes him when he tries to defend himself, Rumble was a JerkAss who [[FantasticRacism constantly badmouthed Spike and humanity as a whole]] and [[KarmaHoudini never gets punished for it]], and Hoops, Dumbbell, and Score are [[BarbaricBully barbaric bullies]] who [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown treats Spike as their personal punching bag]] on a regular basis. So So, it's hard to feel sorry for any of them. Even Rainbow Dash said that they kinda deserved it.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. He's more rude and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly showed a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[FantasticRacism was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians solely becuase he was a human.]] So his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Spike is this in this fic. He's more rude and abrasive. When the girls rescued him the first two times, [[UngratefulBastard he didn't exactly showed a lot of gratitude towards them.]] Granted, [[DarkAndTroubledPast he lost his parents to the pandemic when he was young, was kicked out of an orphanage when he turned thirteen,]] lived in a [[HorribleHousing rundown, rotting apartment]], and [[FantasticRacism [[AllTheOtherReindeer was constantly pushed around by many Equestrians Equestrians]] [[FantasticRacism solely becuase he was a human.]] So his attitude is ''somewhat'' justified. Thankfully though, he's more of a JerkWithAHeartOfGold.
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* DisappearedDad / MissingMom: As mentioned above, Spike's parents were victims of the pandemic. Though, whether they are dead or became Ferals themselves has yet to be answered...
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* DisappearedDad / MissingMom: As mentioned above, Spike's parents parents, Oliver and Rena Clawson, were victims of the pandemic. Though, whether they are dead or became Ferals themselves has yet to be answered...