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The plot of the story is driven by Shirou, instead of dying at the end of the Heaven's Feel route, becoming a Counter Guardian of Alaya [[NotSoDifferent like Archer/EMIYA]], and through his presence aims to [[ForWantOfANail change things that went wrong.]] With [[{{Determinator}} Kariya]] as his Master, he will influence many events in the future.

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The plot of the story is driven by Shirou, instead of dying at the end of the Heaven's Feel route, becoming a Counter Guardian of Alaya [[NotSoDifferent like Archer/EMIYA]], Archer/EMIYA, and through his presence aims to [[ForWantOfANail change things that went wrong.]] With [[{{Determinator}} Kariya]] as his Master, he will influence many events in the future.



* AdaptedOut: Lancelot and the Berserker Class, since Kariya summons SHIROU to the Avenger class.
* AxCrazy: Caster as usual.

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%% * AdaptedOut: Lancelot and the Berserker Class, since Kariya summons SHIROU to the Avenger class.
%% * AxCrazy: Caster as usual.



* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Touko and Daisuke]] show up in Chapter 4, showing [[AlternateUniverse how some things are different.]]

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%% * EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Touko and Daisuke]] show up in Chapter 4, showing [[AlternateUniverse how some things are different.]]



* MythologyGag: [[spoiler: Miyu is Shirou's sister]], and Avenger uses some of EMIYA's preferred tactics, such as Hrunting from VisualNovel/FateHollowAtaraxia.
* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou and Rider hand these out to Gilgamesh and Kayneth respectively.

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%% * MythologyGag: [[spoiler: Miyu is Shirou's sister]], and Avenger uses some of EMIYA's preferred tactics, such as Hrunting from VisualNovel/FateHollowAtaraxia.
%% * TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou and Rider hand these out to Gilgamesh and Kayneth respectively.



* WarriorTherapist: Shirou tries to be this to Kariya in order to ease his Master's rage and unhealthy psychological condition.

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%% * WarriorTherapist: Shirou tries to be this to Kariya in order to ease his Master's rage and unhealthy psychological condition.
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The author has [[WordOfGod said that he aims to change things]] from what happened in LightNovel/FateZero, such as how the Servants died and character development for what he considers neglected characters.

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The author has [[WordOfGod said that he aims to change things]] from what happened in LightNovel/FateZero, Literature/FateZero, such as how the Servants died and character development for what he considers neglected characters.
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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNovel/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[{{Determinator}} The Avenger]] would save them.''

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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNovel/FateZero [[literature/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[{{Determinator}} The Avenger]] would save them.''



As of October 5, 2016; the story has now been officially cancelled. The author then revealed that he's going to reboot the entire thing into another fanfic called ''Fate Liner: Red Knight'', using characters and elements from ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' as a basis.

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As of October 5, 2016; the story has now been officially cancelled. The author then revealed that he's going to reboot the entire thing into another fanfic called ''Fate Liner: Red Knight'', using characters and elements from ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' ''Literature/FateApocrypha'' as a basis.
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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNove/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[{{Determinator}} The Avenger]] would save them.''

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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNove/FateZero [[LightNovel/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[{{Determinator}} The Avenger]] would save them.''
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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh [[WorldsStrongestMan (the canon strongest Servant)]] during the battle at the docks. Granted this is the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]
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As of October 5, 2016; the story has now been officially cancelled. The author then revealed that he's going to reboot the entire thing into another fanfic called ''Fate Liner: Red Knight''.

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As of October 5, 2016; the story has now been officially cancelled. The author then revealed that he's going to reboot the entire thing into another fanfic called ''Fate Liner: Red Knight''.
Knight'', using characters and elements from ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' as a basis.
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Simple skill with blades is Master Swordsman. Implausible Fencing Powers are inhuman feats of swordplay-as-superpowers


* ImplausibleFencingPowers: As per canon, Shirou gains the combat experience of the owners of the weapons he's copying. However, he's still not as good as the originals, forcing him to take several hits during his fight against Archer.


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* MasterSwordsman: As per canon, Shirou gains the combat experience of the owners of the weapons he's copying. However, he's still not as good as the originals, forcing him to take several hits during his fight against Archer.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5545105/ForteOfTheBallad98 [=ForteOfTheBallad98=]]], who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5545105/ForteOfTheBallad98 [=ForteOfTheBallad98=]]], who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]
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* AxCrazy: Caster as usual.


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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Shirou and Rider hand these out to Gilgamesh and Kayneth respectively.
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** Caduceus: Normally an A-Rank Noble Phantasm worthy of Hermes ,it has been downgraded to a mere C+ due to Shirou's need to trace it quickly to stabilize Kariya's condition. With its legend warped by confusion with the Rod of Aesculapius (blame the Red Cross), it's capable of healing wounds and eliminating illnesses, but it takes time as a result of the transience of the copy.

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** Caduceus: Normally an A-Rank Noble Phantasm worthy of Hermes ,it Hermes, it has been downgraded to a mere C+ due to Shirou's need to trace it quickly to stabilize Kariya's condition. With its legend warped by confusion with the Rod of Aesculapius (blame the Red Cross), it's capable of healing wounds and eliminating illnesses, but it takes time as a result of the transience of the copy.
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** Caduceus: Normally an A-Rank Noble Phantasm worthy of Hermes ,it has been downgraded to a mere C+ due to Shirou's need to trace it quickly to stabilize Kariya's condition. With its legend warped by confusion with the Rod of Aesculapius, it's capable of healing wounds and eliminating illness, but it takes time as a result of the transience of the copy.

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** Caduceus: Normally an A-Rank Noble Phantasm worthy of Hermes ,it has been downgraded to a mere C+ due to Shirou's need to trace it quickly to stabilize Kariya's condition. With its legend warped by confusion with the Rod of Aesculapius, Aesculapius (blame the Red Cross), it's capable of healing wounds and eliminating illness, illnesses, but it takes time as a result of the transience of the copy.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is written by ForteOfTheBallad98, who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is written by ForteOfTheBallad98, [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5545105/ForteOfTheBallad98 [=ForteOfTheBallad98=]]], who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]



* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Granted this is the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]

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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh [[WorldsStrongestMan (the canon strongest Servant)]] during the battle at the docks. Granted this is the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]



* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Subverted. Avenger is left worn, aching, and out of mana from his fight with Archer, but he only managed to land a single blow to the arrogant Servant's face.

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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Subverted. Avenger is left worn, aching, and out of mana from his fight with Archer, but he only managed to land a single blow to the arrogant Servant's face.face (which is more than enough to damage the Golden King's pride).



* ImplausibleFencingPowers: As per canon, Shirou gains the combat experience of the owners of the weapons he's copying. However, he's still not as good as the originals, forcing him to take several hits during his fight against Archer.



* MetaTwist: In other stories, we never really learn about Shirou's parents. [[spoiler: Here, they are Touko and Daisuke from LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai.]]

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* MetaTwist: In other stories, we never really learn about Shirou's parents. [[spoiler: Here, they are Touko and Daisuke from LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai.]]LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai, which [[FridgeBrilliance makes a decent amount of sense given Shirou's unusual hair color and magic circuits despite his mundane early life.]]]]


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* WarriorTherapist: Shirou tries to be this to Kariya in order to ease his Master's rage and unhealthy psychological condition.

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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Granted this is a the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]

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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Granted this is a the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]


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* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu: Subverted. Avenger is left worn, aching, and out of mana from his fight with Archer, but he only managed to land a single blow to the arrogant Servant's face.
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* AdaptationExpansion: There are several scenes that focus on the other servants like Lancer and Rider rather than Saber and Avenger.



** Jarngreipr: The iron gloves of Thor that are used to enhance his already monstrous strength. Shirou uses them to punch Gilgamesh in the face.

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** Jarngreipr: The iron gloves of Thor that are used to enhance his already monstrous strength. Shirou uses them to punch Gilgamesh in the face.face hard enough to tarnish his visage.

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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Pretty much, it's [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]

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* {{Badass}}: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Pretty much, it's Granted this is a the Nasuverse, so its pretty much [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]]]
* TheBlacksmith: Shirou as usual, though he creates some weapons that are not seen in the main series:
** Caduceus: Normally an A-Rank Noble Phantasm worthy of Hermes ,it has been downgraded to a mere C+ due to Shirou's need to trace it quickly to stabilize Kariya's condition. With its legend warped by confusion with the Rod of Aesculapius, it's capable of healing wounds and eliminating illness, but it takes time as a result of the transience of the copy.
** Jarngreipr: The iron gloves of Thor that are used to enhance his already monstrous strength. Shirou uses them to punch Gilgamesh in the face.
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* UnderestimatedBadassery: Due to SHIROU being the Avenger class of the Fourth War, this is the initial general reaction to him. At least, [[spoiler: before the battle with Gilgamesh at the Docks.]]

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* UnderestimatedBadassery: UnderestimatingBadassery: Due to SHIROU being the Avenger class of the Fourth War, this is the initial general reaction to him. At least, [[spoiler: before the battle with Gilgamesh at the Docks.]]
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* UnderestimatedBadass: Due to SHIROU being the Avenger class of the Fourth War, this is the initial general reaction to him. At least, [[spoiler: before the battle with Gilgamesh at the Docks.]]

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* UnderestimatedBadass: UnderestimatedBadassery: Due to SHIROU being the Avenger class of the Fourth War, this is the initial general reaction to him. At least, [[spoiler: before the battle with Gilgamesh at the Docks.]]
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* UnderestimatedBadass: Due to SHIROU being the Avenger class of the Fourth War, this is the initial general reaction to him. At least, [[spoiler: before the battle with Gilgamesh at the Docks.]]
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* MetaTwist: In other stories, we never really learn about Shirou's parents. [[spoiler: here, they are Touko and Daisuke from LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai.]]

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* MetaTwist: In other stories, we never really learn about Shirou's parents. [[spoiler: here, Here, they are Touko and Daisuke from LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai.]]
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* MetaTwist: In other stories, we never really learn about Shirou's parents. [[spoiler: here, they are Touko and Daisuke from LightNovel/KaraNoKyoukai.]]
* MythologyGag: [[spoiler: Miyu is Shirou's sister]], and Avenger uses some of EMIYA's preferred tactics, such as Hrunting from VisualNovel/FateHollowAtaraxia.
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The author has [[WordOfGod that he aims to change things]] from what happened in LightNovel/FateZero, such as how the Servants died and character development for what he considers neglected characters.

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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNove/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[Determinator The Avenger]] would save them.''

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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNove/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[Determinator [[{{Determinator}} The Avenger]] would save them.''



''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]] is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is posted on FanFiction.Net by ForteOfTheBallad98, who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]

The plot of the story is driven by Shirou, instead of dying at the end of the Heaven's Feel route, becoming a Counter Guardian of Alaya [[NotSoDifferent like Archer/EMIYA]], and through his presence aims to [[ForWantOfANail change things that went wrong.]] With [[Determinator Kariya]] as his Master, he will influence many events in the future.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]] Swords]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is posted on FanFiction.Net written by ForteOfTheBallad98, who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]

The plot of the story is driven by Shirou, instead of dying at the end of the Heaven's Feel route, becoming a Counter Guardian of Alaya [[NotSoDifferent like Archer/EMIYA]], and through his presence aims to [[ForWantOfANail change things that went wrong.]] With [[Determinator [[{{Determinator}} Kariya]] as his Master, he will influence many events in the future.



* Badass: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Pretty much, it's [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]

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* Badass: AdaptedOut: Lancelot and the Berserker Class, since Kariya summons SHIROU to the Avenger class.
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Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Pretty much, it's [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]


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* InSpiteOfANail: Despite abandoning his old ideals, Shirou still ends up becoming a Counter Guardian. Unlike Archer, though, he only acts for Alaya when his friends or their descendants are in danger.
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* Badass: Shirou/Avenger as per the usual, but some credit has to go to Gilgamesh during the battle at the docks. Pretty much, it's [[WorldOfBadass a world of badasses.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: Shirou is aiming to give Kariya some, and it seems to have worked but time will tell. More radically, [[spoiler: Kayneth and Lancer]] get some serious character development, but it's going to take a while...
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Touko and Daisuke]] show up in Chapter 4, showing [[AlternateUniverse how some things are different.]]
* WeakButSkilled: This is Avenger's schtick, and his stats are similar to EMIYA's in some respects. However, [[TookALevelInBadass some of his stats are larger than EMIYA's]] based on the Heaven's Feel route of trials that Shirou went through.
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-> ''[[HeroicSacrifice On his last breath]], Shirou destroyed the [[EldritchAbomination Greater Grail, along with Angra Mainyu.]] He had been expecting to die quietly, [[YouCantFightFate not to somehow become employed to Alaya.]] Though he had been human, he was a Heroic Spirit, and as Avenger of the [[LightNove/FateZero Fourth Holy Grail War]], he would do his best to win, and [[ScrewDestiny save those people who had shaped him from his birth in the fire.]] [[Determinator The Avenger]] would save them.''
-->-- ''Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords'', the summary of the story

''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10882407/1/Fate-Zero-Avenger-of-Swords Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords]] is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse. It is posted on FanFiction.Net by ForteOfTheBallad98, who considers this his [[MagnumOpus greatest work so far.]]

The plot of the story is driven by Shirou, instead of dying at the end of the Heaven's Feel route, becoming a Counter Guardian of Alaya [[NotSoDifferent like Archer/EMIYA]], and through his presence aims to [[ForWantOfANail change things that went wrong.]] With [[Determinator Kariya]] as his Master, he will influence many events in the future.

The author has [[WordOfGod that he aims to change things]] from what happened in LightNovel/FateZero, such as how the Servants died and character development for what he considers neglected characters.

!! ''Fate Zero: Avenger of Swords'' contains examples of:

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