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** Loads from the films found at the drive-in theatre, many titles copied verbatim; ''WesternAnimation/TheIronGiant'', ''Film/RockyHorrorPictureShow'', ''Film/TheBigLebowski'', ''Film/WhenTheWindBlows'' and ''[[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk Daring Do and the Raiders of the Lost Ark]]''.

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** Loads from the films found at the drive-in theatre, many titles copied verbatim; ''WesternAnimation/TheIronGiant'', ''Film/RockyHorrorPictureShow'', ''Film/TheRockyHorrorPictureShow'', ''Film/TheBigLebowski'', ''Film/WhenTheWindBlows'' and ''[[Film/RaidersOfTheLostArk Daring Do and the Raiders of the Lost Ark]]''.
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** There was apparently a pre-war singer going by the name [[Music/VeraLynn Vera Lynn]].

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** There was apparently a pre-war singer going by the name [[Music/VeraLynn Vera Lynn]].Music/VeraLynn.



* BigCreepyCrawlies: The ant colony in Seahoof[[spoiler: [[MadeOfExplodium which has been consuming the munitions stored there]].]] A nearby swamp is also home to some dangerous variants of what the characters believe are bloatsprites.

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* BigCreepyCrawlies: The ant colony in Seahoof[[spoiler: [[MadeOfExplodium which has been consuming the munitions stored there]].]] there]]]]. A nearby swamp is also home to some dangerous variants of what the characters believe are bloatsprites.



* BiggerIsBetter: Night Strike's overall approach to upgrading weaponry can be best summed up as "[[MoreDakka more]], [[{{BFG}} bigger]] and [[StuffBlowingUp louder]]". So far she's yet to carry anything smaller than a very meaty shotgun.

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* BiggerIsBetter: Night Strike's overall approach to upgrading weaponry can be best summed up as "[[MoreDakka more]], [[{{BFG}} bigger]] "{{more|Dakka}}, {{b|FG}}igger and [[StuffBlowingUp louder]]". So far she's yet to carry anything smaller than a very meaty shotgun.



** Once again with the mercenaries, this time while the Five had hitched a ride aboard the heavily-armed Trout. [[DidNotThinkThisThrough Because attacking a target]] while they're [[TooDumbToLive onboard a gunboat]] [[SarcasmMode is a great idea.]]

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** Once again with the mercenaries, this time while the Five had hitched a ride aboard the heavily-armed Trout. [[DidNotThinkThisThrough Because attacking a target]] while they're [[TooDumbToLive onboard a gunboat]] [[SarcasmMode is a great idea.]]idea]].



* DrillSergeantNasty: Crash Dive suffers from this before eventually [[DefrostingTheIceQueen warming up to the others.]] This is also subverted entirely with Scouring Charge.

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* DrillSergeantNasty: Crash Dive suffers from this before eventually [[DefrostingTheIceQueen warming up to the others.]] others]]. This is also subverted entirely with Scouring Charge.



* HasTwoDaddies: Both Night Strike and Static Charge. The explanation behind this tends to yield [[INeedAFreakingDrink a few interesting reactions]].

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* HasTwoDaddies: HasTwoMommies: Gender-inverted: Both Night Strike and Static Charge.Charge each have two fathers. The explanation behind this tends to yield [[INeedAFreakingDrink a few interesting reactions]].



* LadySwearsalot: Night Strike's slowly developing a rather sizable repertoire of phrases, most of them including her private areas and various types of large ordinance and ammunition.

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* LadySwearsalot: [[SirSwearsALot Lady Swears-a-Lot]]: Night Strike's slowly developing a rather sizable repertoire of phrases, most of them including her private areas and various types of large ordinance and ammunition.



** Though this is more of an obscure reference, the gryphon mercenaries encountered throughout the story all have this going for them. Merlin and Royce are named for engines that powered the Supermarine Spitfire, of which the later variants utilized an engine known as the Rolls-Royce Griffon. Hispano and her sister Suiza likewise are named for the company that produced the 20mm autocannon used extensively by [[UsefulNotes/BritsWithBattleships British forces]] in [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo WWII]], one of which Hispano herself carries as a primary weapon.

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** Though this is more of an obscure reference, the gryphon mercenaries encountered throughout the story all have this going for them. Merlin and Royce are named for engines that powered the Supermarine Spitfire, of which the later variants utilized an engine known as the Rolls-Royce Griffon. Hispano and her sister Suiza likewise are named for the company that produced the 20mm autocannon used extensively by [[UsefulNotes/BritsWithBattleships British forces]] in [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo WWII]], UsefulNotes/{{W|orldWarII}}WII, one of which Hispano herself carries as a primary weapon.



* OnlySaneMan: While he has his moments, Static Charge is firmly on this track thanks largely to being the only member of the group not utterly explosive happy, not massively mutated and completely mute, and not bitter and still suffering from lifelong borderline fascist programming. He's also not [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking addicted to Sparkle Cola.]]

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* OnlySaneMan: While he has his moments, Static Charge is firmly on this track thanks largely to being the only member of the group not utterly explosive happy, not massively mutated and completely mute, and not bitter and still suffering from lifelong borderline fascist programming. He's also not [[ArsonMurderandJaywalking [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking addicted to Sparkle Cola.]]



** Happens again as they finally reach the Vanhoover Air Base, their last chance for finding a generator. [[spoiler: They do manage to find one, bolted to the back of a truck at that, but first there's a small matter of an [[ThoseMagnificentFlyingMachines air race...]]]]

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** Happens again as they finally reach the Vanhoover Air Base, their last chance for finding a generator. [[spoiler: They do manage to find one, bolted to the back of a truck at that, but first there's a small matter of an [[ThoseMagnificentFlyingMachines air race...]]]]race]]...]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: Most of Page 30, where Night Strike's hospital visit produces some unexpected results.
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** [[spoiler: Contrail's own personal aircraft is seen on page 100, a jet known as the Icarus. While you might expect a standard turbine or two for propulsion, such isn't the case - the Icarus runs on a pair of Pulsejets, and if the story is to be believed they were ripped wholesale from a pair of the Equestrian equivalent of [[NazisWithGnarlyWeapons V-1 Cruise Missiles]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Contrail's own personal aircraft is seen on page 100, a jet known as the Icarus. While you might expect a standard turbine or two for propulsion, such isn't the case - the Icarus runs on a pair of Pulsejets, and if the story is to be believed they were ripped wholesale from a pair of the Equestrian equivalent of [[NazisWithGnarlyWeapons [[UsefulNotes/NazisWithGnarlyWeapons V-1 Cruise Missiles]].]]
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* BrainInAJar: [[spoiler: What the person who calls themselves Cerberus turns out to be.]]


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* CompletedFic: As of October 22nd, 2017.


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** As of October 22nd, 2017, the final wordcount is a whopping 547,852.


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** [[spoiler: And, finally, the method used to destroy Project Cerberus, by throwing both of the Valkyrie's remaining megaspells into the missile's engine.]]


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** [[spoiler: The only time Static's ever killed another sentient, sapient being is when dealing with Doctor Haukohl.]]
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** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]



** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]
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** [[spoiler: Later on, Aerith and Static infiltrate a pre-war bunker complex to destroy it. In the process, they come across an astonishingly tall vertical shaft cutting clear up the center of the mountain, and are faced with either climbing the single ladder all the way to the top or abandoning the bunker there and finding a different path up to the top. Mercifully, Aerith is an alicorn, which means she has wings, and as such can easily just fly both of them to the top of the shaft.]]


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** While setting up explosives in order to destroy an enemy bunker, Static and Aerith come across an [[VideoGame/MetalGearSolid3SnakeEater immensely tall vertical concrete shaft dug right out of the mountain's core, with only a paltry ladder for ascending it.]] [[spoiler: Mercifully, Aerith is an alicorn, and can just fly both of them up. While she's doing so, Static remarks about hearing a song playing over the radio at double-speed, with the lyrics regarding something about ''eating snakes''.]]

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** Seen with the Tank Ghouls as well, if somewhat expected. Rangefinder's tank is outfitted with a pintle-mounted [=M2HB=] Browning fifty cal for the commander, while Rheinmetall's tank Porschia can equip an MG42 on a cupola mount. [[spoiler: Caution Tape's tank takes the cake, though, sporting no less than SEVEN M2 Brownings, two of them alone in a commander's mount on the main turret.]]

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*** [[spoiler: During a later stealth section, she gives up her Garand and Sieg Automatic in favor of a [[RareGuns De Lisle Carbine]].]]
** Seen with the Tank Ghouls as well, if somewhat expected. Rangefinder's tank is outfitted with a pintle-mounted [=M2HB=] Browning fifty cal for the commander, while Rheinmetall's tank Porschia can equip an MG42 [=MG42=] on a cupola mount. [[spoiler: Caution Tape's tank takes the cake, though, sporting no less than SEVEN M2 Brownings, two of them alone in a commander's mount on the main turret.]]

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* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: Night Strike of all people resorts to this in a rather disturbing twist, and more alarmingly it's done almost entirely in the name of personal revenge.]]



* CoolGuns: Par for the course, given it's a Fallout: Equestria story. Twintails still carries his twin Browning Automatic Rifles and .45-cal Luger from Occupational Hazards, while Night Strike has "inherited" his extended-barrel M79 Grenade Rifle.
** Later on, Aerith shows herself to be quite a gun nut as well, opting for a classic [=M1928A1=] Tommy Gun and an M1 Garand mounting a scope. [[spoiler: Even further along she gets ahold of a [[RareGuns Sieg Automatic Rifle]], a bullpup design firing the .30-06 cartridge much like the BAR.]]
** Seen with the Tank Ghouls as well, if somewhat expected. Rangefinder's tank is outfitted with a pintle-mounted [=M2HB=] Browning fifty cal for the commander, while Rheinmetall's tank Porschia can equip an MG42 on a cupola mount. [[spoiler: Caution Tape's tank takes the cake, though, sporting no less than SEVEN M2 Brownings, two of them alone in a commander's mount on the main turret.]]
** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]



* ColdBloodedTorture: [[spoiler: Night Strike of all people resorts to this in a rather disturbing twist, and more alarmingly it's done almost entirely in the name of personal revenge.]]

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* MadeOfIron: Not immediately obvious, but Static Charge proves to be capable of taking a surprising level of damage and still going. Enough that, upon arriving at a clinic after being shoryuken'd into a tree, the medic notes most ponies wouldn't have even been left standing. A more literal example are the characters outfitted with PowerArmour.
* MacrossMissileMassacre: Scouring Charge's main weapon, Sunburst, is a fully-automatic rapid-fire missile launcher, based off of the Red Glare from [[VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas Lonesome Road.

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* MadeOfIron: Not immediately obvious, but Static Charge proves to be capable of taking a surprising level of damage and still managing to keep going. Enough that, upon arriving at a clinic after being shoryuken'd into a tree, the medic notes most ponies wouldn't have even been left standing. A more literal example are the characters outfitted with PowerArmour.
* MacrossMissileMassacre: Scouring Charge's main weapon, Sunburst, is a fully-automatic rapid-fire missile launcher, based off of the Red Glare from [[VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas Lonesome Road.Road]].


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** Though this is more of an obscure reference, the gryphon mercenaries encountered throughout the story all have this going for them. Merlin and Royce are named for engines that powered the Supermarine Spitfire, of which the later variants utilized an engine known as the Rolls-Royce Griffon. Hispano and her sister Suiza likewise are named for the company that produced the 20mm autocannon used extensively by [[UsefulNotes/BritsWithBattleships British forces]] in [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarTwo WWII]], one of which Hispano herself carries as a primary weapon.


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* TheWarRoom: The one at the EQUAD facility back home is mentioned, where it's [[TheBigBoard Big Board]] used to alert the home wasteland that something's gone horribly, horribly wrong. Later on, ones are seen at the Vanhoover Air Base and Fort Maple as well - in both cases, people have to be reminded that [[Film/DrStrangelove they can't fight in there]].

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** [[spoiler: With the HMS Cadence up and running for the most part, it's sizable complement of anti-air batteries have been able to put to use as of page 94. A [[{{BFG}} 4-inch quick-firing gun]] loaded with a flak shell, and [[MoreDakka about eight 40mm autocannons]] tends to be prety effective against most flying stuff.]]

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** [[spoiler: With the HMS Cadence up and running for the most part, it's sizable complement of anti-air batteries have been able to put to use as of page 94. A [[{{BFG}} 4-inch quick-firing gun]] loaded with a flak shell, and [[MoreDakka about eight 40mm autocannons]] tends to be prety pretty effective against most flying stuff.]]



** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[NoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]

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** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[NoKillLikeOverkill [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]



** [[spoiler:More often than not this tends to backfire rather than be played straight. When Night Strike storms what appears to be a group of raiders torturing Minty Candy, she almost ends up killing a group simply subjecting him to bad films for their own humour.]]

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** [[spoiler:More often than not this tends to backfire rather than be played straight. When Night Strike storms what appears to be a group pair of raiders slavers torturing Minty Candy, Static Charge, she almost ends up killing a group both of them simply for subjecting him to bad films for their own humour.]]



** [[spoiler: Contrail's own personal aircraft is seen on page 100, a jet known as the Icarus. While you might expect a standard turbine or two for propulsion, such isn't the case - the Icarus runs on a pair of Pulsejets, and if the story is to be believed they were ripped wholesale from a pair of the Equestrian equivalent of [[NazisWithGnarlyWeapons V-1 Cruise Missiles]].]]



* LeaningontheFourthWall: The writers aren't above highlighting the odd moments from the Fallout games in their stories, or even gameplay mechanics. Notably, when Night Strike is separated from the group, she performs a mental double-take as her Pipbuck is pointing towards somewhere she has never been and lists her main objective as finding Minty Candy.

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* LeaningontheFourthWall: LeaningOnTheFourthWall: The writers aren't above highlighting the odd moments from the Fallout games in their stories, or even gameplay mechanics. Notably, when Night Strike is separated from the group, she performs a mental double-take as her Pipbuck is pointing towards somewhere she has never been set it to and lists her main objective as finding Minty Candy.the Valkyrie.



* MacrossMissileMassacre: Scouring Charge's main weapon, Sunburst, is a fully-automatic rapid-fire missile launcher, based off of the Red Glare from [[VideoGame/FalloutNewVegas Lonesome Road.
** [[spoiler: Later on, Contrail's personal aircraft the Icarus takes flight in the final battle, loaded with 24 hollow-charge anti-tank rockets on the wings. There's also discussion of using a barrage of V-1 cruise missiles against Fort Maple as well.]]



** [[spoiler: For fans of the show, many would recall a sea serpent in the first few episodes which the youtube captions named 'Steven Magnet', and this was confirmed his canon name as of episode 100. What's the name of the robotic sea serpent encountered late on in the story? Steven ''Electro''magnet. The authors are ''not'' sorry for the pun.]]



** [[spoiler: A much more severe threat later rears its head when a mechanical sea serpent shows up to threaten the heroes.]]

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** While in the planning for the final big battle, a disagreement in the briefing room nearly leads to a brawl. What phrase does Sharpwing use to break it up?
--> [[Film/DrStrangelove "Hey, hey! No fightin' in the war room!"]]


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** [[spoiler: Thermobaric/fuel-air bombs are exceptionally dangerous when used against confined spaces, such as tunnels, as their blast waves are extended compared to regular explosions and the nature of the weapons mean they burn up the available oxygen quite rapidly.]]
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* HiddenVillain: [[spoiler: Cerberus proves to be this, as we only learn of their existence well into the story, and even then only a few of their members' names are revealed by part 100.]]


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* MechanicalMonster: [[spoiler: Cerberus has robo-dragons and it knows how to use them. Worse still, manticore and sea serpent variations show up late into the tale.]]


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* SymbolicBlood: [[http://www.furaffinity.net/view/23791597/ Page 98]], with shades of HighPressureBlood. [[spoiler: Both cases understandable, considering the creature the 'blood' came from is a large robotic dragon - red hydraulic oil would've been stored in large quantities and under high pressure in order to give the dragon the necessary strength to throw tank turrets around.]]
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** The tank ghouls play some part in this as well, as three of them carry roof-mounted machine guns originally meant for AA defense. [[spoiler: Not to mention Rheinmetall's tank mounting the 8.8cm [=KwK=] 36, which due to it being based off of the Flak 18/36 allows it to fire the air-burst Flak 88 shells used with the guns found at the sub pen... provided the dragons are flying low enough, anyways.]]

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** The tank ghouls play some part in this as well, as three of them carry roof-mounted machine guns originally meant for AA defense. [[spoiler: Not to mention Rheinmetall's tank mounting the 8.8cm [=KwK=] 36, which due to it being based off of the Flak 18/36 allows it to fire the air-burst Flak 88 shells used with the guns found at the sub pen... provided the dragons are flying low enough, anyways.]]



** [[spoiler: One of the tanks shipped in from Cordite to assist is named the Liberty Bell. Matching with the real tank, crews of the [=SOMUA=] S35 remarked that, due to the thick cast hull and turret armor, when struck with the anti-tank weaponry of the day, the tank had a tendency to ring like a bell would.]]

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** [[spoiler: One of the tanks shipped in from Cordite to assist is named the Liberty Bell. Matching with the real tank, crews of the [=SOMUA=] S35 remarked that, that due to the thick cast hull and turret armor, when struck with the anti-tank weaponry of the day, the tank had a tendency to ring like a bell would.]]
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* AlmightyJanitor: Military version, Crash Dive officially is still only a Private of the defunct Grand Pegasus Enclave. [[spoiler: However, when [[TheCaptain Lt.Col. Tail End]] shows up with his army of ex-Enclave, his first action upon greeting her is to treat her as his superior, based on the fact that she knows the most about what they're all up against, having served with the very soldiers that are threatening this wasteland.]]


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*** And, later in the story after a return to the Vanhoover Air Base, the group runs into them again, having abandoned their attempts at flight for a job shuttling the residents around comfortably aboard their Hover-Vans. The Vanhoover Air Base Hover-Van [[Series/TheGrandTour Grand Touring]] Service has at least been serving well in keeping them occupied nowadays.
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* AntiAir: A big part of the story is dedicated to outfitting towns with larger and larger guns capable of downing airborne foes. This is the least bit due to the group discovering [[spoiler: Crash Dive's old Grand Pegasus Enclave unit is still alive, and all flying their own aircraft at that. Oh, and also giant robotic dragons.]]
** The usefulness of the guns is minimal, but it is increasing as the story progresses. Probably on account of the gunners not having many things to shoot at.
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* OldSchoolDogfight: [[spoiler: The first proper battle pitting the Valkyrie against the robo-dragons fits this, as it involves at least two of them getting downed by the Valkyrie's [[MoreDakka twin 40mm autocannons]] through Night Strike's piloting skills.]]
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** This also applies to some of the vehicles seen. [[spoiler: Mad Jack's tank Avery is a Churchill AVRE; Rheinmetall's tank Porschia is Ferdinand Porsche's bid for the Tiger tank; Rangefinder's tank Fyre is a Sherman Firefly; and Caution Tape's tank Deathtrap is a T-35, which was rather notorious for breaking down and not exactly being endowed with armor. Doubly so when you consider the poorly-shielded reactor in the back.]]
** [[spoiler: One of the tanks shipped in from Cordite to assist is named the Liberty Bell. Matching with the real tank, crews of the [=SOMUA=] S35 remarked that, due to the thick cast hull and turret armor, when struck with the anti-tank weaponry of the day, the tank had a tendency to ring like a bell would.]]


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** [[spoiler: Even later on, upon arrival at Maple Station once again, a townspony approaches the group claiming that Static's stealth suit has been finished being repaired, and she was there to deliver and collect on the payment of a thousand caps. After Night Strike points out they'd picked it up weeks ago, and lunges to get the 'stealth suit' from the mare, the wannabe scammer makes a swift exit.]]


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** [[spoiler: The crew of the Liberty Bell, a French S35 cavalry tank, all speak both English and French, usually lapsing into the latter when expressing disbelief or annoyance.]]


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** Page 92 brings in even more, if you can believe it. [[spoiler: Among the newly-arrived vehicles is a Crusader Mk [=III=], a British cavalry tank armed with a formidable 6-pounder gun; a [=SOMUA=] S35, a French cavalry tank carrying a decent 47mm AT gun; a Nucleana T-8, a fictional light interwar tank mounting a short 50mm AT gun; and a Type 4 Chi-So tracked carrier, which can best be described as an APC truck with tracks instead of wheels. All are vehicles belonging to Cordite as well, along with their crews.]]
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* PunnyName: Fowler refuses to run more than one of the HMS Cadence's four reactors for Radio KAOS, and even then he only runs it at quarter-power. While this does have a reasonable explanation, the one which Fowler gave was that he doesn't care at all for the music played on the station - well, he IS a ''Petty'' Officer.
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* EnemyMine: [[spoiler: Veterans from the Foallands War answer the call for assistance aboard the HMS Cadence, coming from both the Equestrian Royal Navy forces and the Armada of the Gryphon Republic. As finding 750 capable bodies to operate a warship is a tall order in and of itself, let alone ones with previous training, they're forced to work with each other onboard the old heavy cruiser.]]


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* OldSoldier: [[spoiler: Most of the Maple Station tank ghouls qualify as this, having served for the Equestrian military prior to the bombs falling. They're hardly as shellshocked and cynical as the usual portrayals of this trope, however.]]
** [[spoiler: Also applicable to both the BT-42 crew from Cordite, all of them ghouls as well, and the several [[UsefulNotes/TheFalklandsWar Foallands War]] veterans arriving to assist with operating the HMS Cadence.]]

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* MildlyMilitary: [[spoiler: Seen in the friendly Enclave Remnant forces that arrive to aid in operating the HMS Cadence. It's a stricter example than most given they're composed of the largest military organization found in Equestria for near on 200 years straight, but, well, they are still remnants.]]

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* MildlyMilitary: [[spoiler: Seen in In keeping with the friendly Enclave Remnant forces that arrive to aid in operating the HMS Cadence. It's a stricter example than most given [[Videogame/BattlefieldBadCompany game]] they're composed from, B Company is hardly the most disciplined unit, earning the ire of several towns at some point prior to the story's events.]]
* MilitarySalute: [[spoiler: Crash Dive and the newly-arrived [[TheCaptain Lt.Col. Tail End]] share one, both characters having once been part
of the largest Grand Pegasus Enclave's military. In a severe break of tradition however, the higher-ranked Tail End is the one who initiates the salute both times.]]
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* EasyLogistics: Played with. The tank ghouls have access to an ammunition replication cart and all their vehicles run on magical reactor power, which means ammunition and fuel isn't an issue for them, but finding trained crews to help with operating the vehicles is a concern. [[spoiler: Especially so in the case of the HMS Cadence - 750 crew for one ship is a lot to ask for in a post-apocalyptic wasteland.]]


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* BreatherEpisode: Given the action heavy nature of many sequences, the story can be divided between slower paced and more character driven segments, and arcs which press ahead with the main plot. This can often lead into the story adding an
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* BigBad: Page 38 has the gryphon mercs that were initially sent after them give the name of the person paying for their heads, an entity that calls itself Cerberus.

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* BigBad: Page 38 has the gryphon mercs that were initially sent after them give the name of the person paying for their heads, an entity that calls itself Cerberus. [[spoiler: They're later confirmed to be remnants of the Enclave who have been gathering up old superweapons for themselves.]]


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* DrillSergeantNasty: Crash Dive suffers from this before eventually [[DefrostingTheIceQueen warming up to the others.]] This is also subverted entirely with Scouring Charge.


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* EleventhHourRanger: The final few chapters introduce a few new characters as the story moves towards a finale. This is largely justified by the heroes actively calling for help and seeking reinforcements.


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* GeneralRipper: [[spoiler: What little we see of Cerberus' seems to emphasize a very war-like attitude among their kind.]]


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* GondorCallsForAid: Or in this case, the Vanhoover Five call for aid, upon realising just who they're up against.


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* HeroicRROD: [[spoiler: Aerith nearly burns out her horn when she is forced to repeatedly teleport herself and Static Charge away from an enemy compound. The effort leaves her bedridden for days afterwards.]]


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* TournamentArc: A very minor one in the form of TheBigRace between Night Strike and the leader of a small community of aircraft builders.

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* NoKillLikeOverkill: Night Strike incarnate. Considering her favorite weapons are a 40mm shotgun/grenade rifle and a fully-automatic sniper rifle chambered for a round commonly used for destroying military materiel, it doesn't take too much to see this in action.
** [[spoiler: Oh, and that grenade rifle? The same chapter she gets her automatic .50 cal sniper rifle, she also gets some new ammunition for Thumper. Said ammunition has a blast yield equivalent to a Balefire Egg, Fallout Equestria's equivalent to the Fat Man's [[StuffBlowingUp small tactical nuclear warhead]].]]


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** Being fair, this is Night Strike incarnate. Considering her favorite weapons are a 40mm shotgun/grenade rifle and a fully-automatic sniper rifle chambered for a round commonly used for destroying military materiel, it doesn't take too much to see this in action.
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** [[spoiler: And as of page 88, the HMS Cadence as a whole is going to be brought out in full force. It's less breaking out a piece from the museum as it is breaking out the ''[[UpToEleven entire museum]]'' itself.

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** [[spoiler: The HMS Cadence herself is one of these, having been maintained in mostly working order for two and a half centuries by Fowler. Less of a ChekhovsGun and more of a [[UpToEleven Chekhov's Gun''ship'']].

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** [[spoiler: The HMS Cadence herself is one of these, having been maintained in mostly working order for two and a half centuries by Fowler. Less of a ChekhovsGun and more of a [[UpToEleven Chekhov's Gun''ship'']].Gunship]].]]



** [[spoiler: The Tank Ghouls of Maple Station have given names to their tanks as well; Mad Jack's Churchill AVRE 'Avery'; Rangefinder's Sherman Firefly 'Fyre'; Rheinmetall's Porsche Tiger 'Porschia'; and Caution Tape's yet-unseen 'Deathtrap'.]]

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** [[spoiler: The Tank Ghouls of Maple Station have given names to their tanks as well; Mad Jack's Churchill AVRE 'Avery'; Rangefinder's Sherman Firefly 'Fyre'; Rheinmetall's Porsche Tiger 'Porschia'; and Caution Tape's yet-unseen T-35 'Deathtrap'.]]


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** By Page 86, it's clear that there's soon to be ''something'' big on the horizon. What do the Vanhoover Five do? [[spoiler: Start putting out calls for more tanks, start prepping the Vanhoover Air Base for battle, and get an ''entire friggin' warship'' staffed to fighting capacity.]] MoreDakka indeed.
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** [[spoiler: Bit of a smaller one owing to his TranquilFury attitude, but don't mention Gauss Rifles near Quick Fire. Many copies of his personal weapon were gutted and used to make them, leaving it a bit of a sore spot for him.]]


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** [[spoiler: Quick Fire, the gunner of the [=BT-42=], owns a pristinely-kept [[FinnsWithFearsomeForests Lahti L39 20mm Anti-Tank rifle]]. [[NoKillLikeOverkill He uses it for hunting]].]]


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** The crew of the Cordite [=BT-42=] counts as well, also coming from Long Haul.


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** [[spoiler: Two-thirds of the crew of the Cordite [=BT-42=] speak fluent Finnish, with the driver possibly exclusively speaking it. As for the commander, he holds a British accent, much like Mad Jack.]]


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** And as of page 88, [[spoiler: a group of three tank ghouls from the far-off settlement of Cordite have arrived to the Vanhoover Five's aid, bringing with them their own [[UsefulNotes/FinnsWithFearsomeForests BT-42]]. For those not aware, this tank mounts a 4.5-inch howitzer in a turret, effectively the same gun as on the [=FV304=] - and on a chassis that can do ''72 kilometers an hour''.]]
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--> Sharpwing, while discussing the fireproof fabric used for the Stork's flight surfaces: "That, and, uh, this was all they had left of it. Heavy Strike said that Fast Track set most of what wasn't used in the airship's balloon on fire... somehow."

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--> Sharpwing, '''Sharpwing, while discussing the fireproof ''fireproof'' fabric used for the Stork's flight surfaces: surfaces''': "That, and, uh, this was all they had left of it. Heavy Strike said that Fast Track set most of what wasn't used in the airship's balloon on fire... somehow."
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* DemolitionsExpert: Scouring Charge holds the most knowledge of the Vanhoover Five when it comes to the handling and rewiring of large quantities of explosives, with Night Strike coming in at a close second - though, given her usual attitudes, she does often straddle the line between this and MadBomber.

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