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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/1/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Persona 3: Fairly English Story]] started as an AU Fic of what the author thinks [[{{Persona3}} Persona 3: FES]] would have been like if Minato Arisato was raised in England after his parents death. Then things started to deviate from the original source material, and [[CrazyAwesome Stuff Happened]].
It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expressionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]].
It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expressionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]].
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/1/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Persona 3: Fairly English Story]] started as an AU Fic of what the author thinks [[{{Persona3}} Persona 3: FES]] would have been like if Minato Arisato was had been raised in England after his parents parents' death. Then things started to deviate from the original source material, and [[CrazyAwesome Stuff Happened]].
It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expressionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel,[[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]].
{{Persona 4}}.
It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expressionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel,
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and there's an omake series called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/FESxtras FESxtras]], formerly Investigation Team Yo!. Then he goes on a two-year mission. Casey W has also begun work on an official sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's a TearJerker on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check these out.
The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's a TearJerker on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check these out.
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and there's an omake series called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/FESxtras FESxtras]], formerly Investigation called "Investigation Team Yo!.Yo!". Then he goes on a two-year mission. Casey W has also begun work on an official sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
Shadow]].
The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's alrady a TearJerker just on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just absolutely heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check these out.
The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's alrady a TearJerker just on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just absolutely heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check these out.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking - Minato's sense of priorities aren't always the same as everyone elses.
* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism - Minato does a lot of awesome things. That often inflates his ego. Now he's much more humble, but still points out that he is awesome on several occaisions.
* ArcWords - First it's Price on your honesty, then [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage]].
* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism - Minato does a lot of awesome things. That often inflates his ego. Now he's much more humble, but still points out that he is awesome on several occaisions.
* ArcWords - First it's Price on your honesty, then [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage]].
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking - Minato's sense of priorities aren't always the same as everyone elses.
else's.
* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism - Minato does a lot of awesome things.That This often inflates his ego. Now he's much more humble, but still points out that he is awesome on several occaisions.
occasions.
* ArcWords - First it'sPrice "Price on your honesty, honesty", then [[Series/DoctorWho "[[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage]]. Rage]]".
* AcquiredSituationalNarcissism - Minato does a lot of awesome things.
* ArcWords - First it's
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* AuthorAppeal - Can you think of any other reason the Jakkai become anthropomorphic animals?
* BigBrotherMentor - [[spoiler: Minato taught his sister a few tricks, such as how to effectively [[{{Persona 4}} disguise herself as a male detective.]]]]
* BigBrotherMentor - [[spoiler: Minato taught his sister a few tricks, such as how to effectively [[{{Persona 4}} disguise herself as a male detective.]]]]
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* AuthorAppeal - Can you think of any other reason why the Jakkai become anthropomorphic animals?
* BigBrotherMentor - [[spoiler: Minato taught his sister a few tricks, such as how to effectively [[{{Persona 4}} disguise herself as a maledetective.]]]]detective]].]]
* BigBrotherMentor - [[spoiler: Minato taught his sister a few tricks, such as how to effectively [[{{Persona 4}} disguise herself as a male
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** When we actually see the backstory, it makes even more sense.
* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. His fathers? [[spoiler: Shirogane's, previously Kuzunoha. Granddad faked his and Naoto's death to prevent Minato from ruining her life due to his carrying Death.]]
** It gets even worse that he didn't know about it being [[spoiler: faked]] for ten years.
* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu - [[spoiler: Minato loses almost all his Personae and all the skills he's gained and still barely managed to beat Nyarlathotep.]]
* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. His fathers? [[spoiler: Shirogane's, previously Kuzunoha. Granddad faked his and Naoto's death to prevent Minato from ruining her life due to his carrying Death.]]
** It gets even worse that he didn't know about it being [[spoiler: faked]] for ten years.
* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu - [[spoiler: Minato loses almost all his Personae and all the skills he's gained and still barely managed to beat Nyarlathotep.]]
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** When Then when we actually see the backstory, it makes even more sense.
* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. Hisfathers? father's? [[spoiler: Shirogane's, previously Shirogane, formerly Kuzunoha. Granddad faked his and Naoto's death to prevent Minato from ruining her life due to his carrying Death.around the living personification of Death inside him.]]
** It gets even worse that he didn't even know about it being [[spoiler: faked]] for ten years.
* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu - [[spoiler: Minato loses almost all his Personae and all the skills he's gained and still barelymanaged manages to beat Nyarlathotep.]]
* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. His
** It gets even worse that he didn't even know about it being [[spoiler: faked]] for ten years.
* BrokeYourArmPunchingOutCthulhu - [[spoiler: Minato loses almost all his Personae and all the skills he's gained and still barely
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* BlackAndGreyMorality
* BladeLock
* BodyHorror - [[{{Squick}} Jessica.]] 'Nuff said.
* BladeLock
* BodyHorror - [[{{Squick}} Jessica.]] 'Nuff said.
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* BladeLock
* BilingualBonus - Minato's nickname for [[spoiler: Ken: Kenjamin. "Ken" means "strong", and "Jamin" (taken from Benjamin) is Hebrew for "right hand".]]
* BlackAndGreyMorality
* BladeLock
* BlackAndGreyMorality
* BladeLock
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* ChekhovsArmoury - Subverted. The author takes the tiniest things and creates whole plotlines with them, so readers start looking for {{Lost}} level patterns. In reality, the authors playing XanatosSpeedChess.
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* ChekhovsArmoury ChekhovsArmory - Subverted. The author takes the tiniest things and creates whole plotlines with them, so readers start looking for {{Lost}} level patterns. In reality, the authors author's really just playing XanatosSpeedChess.
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** Played straight later on with [[spoiler: Jessica, Elizabeth, and Margaret]]
* CrazyPrepared - Minato to somewhat scary levels sometimes.
** [=~Can't Bathe Without A Weapon~=] - Don't ask where he was keeping that spare Evoker.
* CrazyEnoughToWork [[spoiler: - Minato discusses a plan with an enemy over the police radio, then says that only a fool would attempt it. He then tells said enemy to ask Adachi what kind of Fool Minato is.]]
* {{Crossover}} - {{Persona}}, [[{{Persona2}} Eternal Punishment, Innocent Sin,]] ShinMegamiTenseiNocturne, ShinMegamiTenseiII, DevilSurvivor, ShinMegamiTenseiIf, ShinMegamiTensei, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]], DevilMayCry. Turns out the last one counts as SMT.
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind [[spoiler: - Attacker was a HeroicSacrifice]]
** Akihiko did it for Minato too at one point.
* ColourCodedForYourConvenience - [[BottomlessMagazines Devil Rounds.]]
* CrazyPrepared - Minato to somewhat scary levels sometimes.
** [=~Can't Bathe Without A Weapon~=] - Don't ask where he was keeping that spare Evoker.
* CrazyEnoughToWork [[spoiler: - Minato discusses a plan with an enemy over the police radio, then says that only a fool would attempt it. He then tells said enemy to ask Adachi what kind of Fool Minato is.]]
* {{Crossover}} - {{Persona}}, [[{{Persona2}} Eternal Punishment, Innocent Sin,]] ShinMegamiTenseiNocturne, ShinMegamiTenseiII, DevilSurvivor, ShinMegamiTenseiIf, ShinMegamiTensei, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]], DevilMayCry. Turns out the last one counts as SMT.
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind [[spoiler: - Attacker was a HeroicSacrifice]]
** Akihiko did it for Minato too at one point.
* ColourCodedForYourConvenience - [[BottomlessMagazines Devil Rounds.]]
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** Played straight later on with [[spoiler: Jessica, Elizabeth, and Margaret]]
Margaret.]]
* CrazyPrepared -Minato Minato, to somewhat scary levels sometimes.
** [=~Can't Bathe Without A Weapon~=] - Don't ask where he was keeping that spareEvoker.
Evoker. Just… don't.
* CrazyEnoughToWork [[spoiler: - Minato discusses a plan with an enemy over the police radio, then says that only a fool would attempt it. He then tells said enemy to ask Adachi just what kind ofFool [[IncrediblyLamePun Fool]] Minato is.]]
* {{Crossover}} - {{Persona}}, [[{{Persona2}} Eternal Punishment, Innocent Sin,]] ShinMegamiTenseiNocturne, ShinMegamiTenseiII, DevilSurvivor, ShinMegamiTenseiIf, ShinMegamiTensei,[[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]], {{Persona 4}}, DevilMayCry. Turns out the that last one counts actually does count as SMT.
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind - [[spoiler:- Attacker was a HeroicSacrifice]]
** Akihiko did it for Minatotoo too, at one point.
* ColourCodedForYourConvenience - [[BottomlessMagazines DevilRounds.]]Rounds]].
* CrazyPrepared -
** [=~Can't Bathe Without A Weapon~=] - Don't ask where he was keeping that spare
* CrazyEnoughToWork [[spoiler: - Minato discusses a plan with an enemy over the police radio, then says that only a fool would attempt it. He then tells said enemy to ask Adachi just what kind of
* {{Crossover}} - {{Persona}}, [[{{Persona2}} Eternal Punishment, Innocent Sin,]] ShinMegamiTenseiNocturne, ShinMegamiTenseiII, DevilSurvivor, ShinMegamiTenseiIf, ShinMegamiTensei,
* ConvenientlyTimedAttackFromBehind - [[spoiler:
** Akihiko did it for Minato
* ColourCodedForYourConvenience - [[BottomlessMagazines Devil
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* DarkerAndEdgier - You would think that would be hard to do in a world where the world's gonna end end there's nothing you can do about it, but it happens.
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* DarkerAndEdgier - You would think that this would be hard to do in a world where the world's already gonna end end and there's nothing you can do about it, but it happens.
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* [[spoiler: DecoyProtagonist]] - Read at your own risk. [[hottip:** : To the surprise of everyone, Minato's shadow WAS the narrator of the entire story! So this leaves the real Minato being different to the shadow Minato, in other words, the snide remarks, insults and sarcastic comments were all of Minato's shadow. What the hell.]]
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* [[spoiler: DecoyProtagonist]] - Read at your own risk. [[hottip:** : To the surprise of everyone, Minato's shadow WAS the narrator of the entire story! So this leaves the real Minato being different to the shadow Minato, in other words, the snide remarks, insults and sarcastic comments were all of Minato's shadow. Shadow. What the hell.]]The Hell?!]]
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: The author himself admits mainly getting his information off the Megami Tensei Wiki; though there are some errors that would have been avoidable
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: The author himself admits mainly getting his information off the Megami Tensei Wiki; though there are some errors that would have been avoidableavoidable.
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* FanNickname - Minato gives these out to people.
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* FanNickname - Minato gives these out to people. Extra points go to [[spoiler:Ken]]'s for the BilingualBonus.
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* FightingYourFriend - Minato gets charmed. ''RUN.''
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* FightingYourFriend - Minato gets charmed. ''RUN.'''''RUN.'''
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* FreudianExcuse - Inverted. Minato punches those people harder for being pussies.
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* FreudianExcuse - Inverted. Minato punches those people even harder for being pussies.
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* FlatWhat - A Lot.
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* FlatWhat - A Lot.''lot''.
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* HannibalLecture - Hell, even Minato gives one in a IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight against Junpei.
** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[color:white: Adachi has it mastered]]
* HeadphonesEqualIsolation - Minato listens to less and less music as he gets more responsible. He plugs in the headphones when he's running from these responsibilities.
* HelpYourSelfInThePast - He gets a skill that lets him do that and it's powered by awesome.
** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[color:white: Adachi has it mastered]]
* HeadphonesEqualIsolation - Minato listens to less and less music as he gets more responsible. He plugs in the headphones when he's running from these responsibilities.
* HelpYourSelfInThePast - He gets a skill that lets him do that and it's powered by awesome.
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* HannibalLecture - Hell, even Minato gives one in a the middle of an IKnowYouAreInThereSomewhereFight against Junpei.
** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[color:white: Adachi has itmastered]]
mastered.]]
* HeadphonesEqualIsolation - Minato listens to less and less music as he gets more responsible. He plugs in the headphones only when he's running from these responsibilities.
*HelpYourSelfInThePast HelpYourselfInThePast - He gets a skill that lets him do that this, and it's powered by awesome.Awesome.
** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[color:white: Adachi has it
* HeadphonesEqualIsolation - Minato listens to less and less music as he gets more responsible. He plugs in the headphones only when he's running from these responsibilities.
*
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* HeroicRROD - Valhalla [[spoiler: which, in game, gives him invincibility for one turn before shunting his HP down to 1. Much the same happens when he uses it]]
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* HeroicRROD - Valhalla [[spoiler: which, in game, gives him invincibility for one turn before shunting his HP down to 1. Much the same happens when he uses it]]it.]]
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* HeroicSociopath - Minato. [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage indeed.]]
* [[HesBack He's Back]] - Several times. Now he's back to stay.
* [[HesBack He's Back]] - Several times. Now he's back to stay.
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* HeroicSociopath - Minato. [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage Rage, indeed.]]
*[[HesBack He's Back]] HesBack - Several times. Now he's back to stay.
*
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* HighAltitudeBattle - [[spoiler: Minato and Dante on a suicide mission to destroy an AirbourneAircraftCarrier full of enemies.]]
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* HighAltitudeBattle - [[spoiler: Minato and Dante on a suicide mission to destroy an AirbourneAircraftCarrier AirborneAircraftCarrier full of enemies.]]
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** In addition, most, if not all, of Minato's problems are caused by his actions, so this trope also applies to him. ''[[ItGotWorse A freaking lot]]''
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** In addition, most, if not all, of Minato's problems are caused by his actions, so this trope also applies to him. ''[[ItGotWorse A freaking lot]]''lot!]]''
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* HowDoIShotWeb - [[spoiler: Minato never figures out how to use the HollowArcana until just before he loses it.]]
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* HowDoIShotWeb - [[spoiler: Minato never figures out how to use the HollowArcana Hollow Arcana until just before he loses it.]]
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* HoYay - To the extent where Minato considers whether he's Homophobic or just tired of it.
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* HoYay - To the extent where Minato considers whether he's Homophobic or just plain tired of it.
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-> If anyone asks, I'll say Junpei did it.
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* IndyPloy - Gods, demons, terrorists, schoolteachers, and {{MagnificentBastard}}'s are all plotting against Minato. He just goes with it.
** Authors kinda doing this too, but not so much lately.
** Authors kinda doing this too, but not so much lately.
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* IndyPloy - Gods, demons, terrorists, schoolteachers, and {{MagnificentBastard}}'s {{Magnificent Bastard}}s are all plotting against Minato. He just goes with it.
**Authors Author's kinda doing this too, but just not so much lately.
**
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* ImmuneToBullets - [[spoiler: So long as they hit him in the head]]
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* ImmuneToBullets - [[spoiler: So long as they hit him in the head]]head.]]
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** From chapter 94: [[spoiler: ''Take control over Gekkoukan High School, secure the surrender of Minato Arisoto through use of hostages. Kill hostages if target fails to comply. Do not engage the target directly, nor attempt to subdue him or take him by force, he is a lethal and ruthless leader of the terrorist organisation known as Strega, going by the handle of 'Jin'.'']]
* [[ItsUpToYou It's Up To You]] - At first, Minato is chosen to lead as Akihiko was injured and he was the most competent fighter out of him, Yukari and Junpei. However, once people start realising just how powerful he is, he ends up doing most of the fighting in many of the fights.
* [[ItsUpToYou It's Up To You]] - At first, Minato is chosen to lead as Akihiko was injured and he was the most competent fighter out of him, Yukari and Junpei. However, once people start realising just how powerful he is, he ends up doing most of the fighting in many of the fights.
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** From chapter 94: [[spoiler: ''Take "Take control over Gekkoukan High School, secure the surrender of Minato Arisoto through use of hostages. Kill hostages if target fails to comply. Do not engage the target directly, nor attempt to subdue him or take him by force, he is a lethal and ruthless leader of the terrorist organisation known as Strega, going by the handle of 'Jin'.'']]
"]]
*[[ItsUpToYou It's Up To You]] ItsUpToYou - At first, Minato is chosen to lead as Akihiko was injured and he was the most competent fighter out of him, Yukari and Junpei. However, once people start realising just how powerful he is, he ends up doing most of the fighting in many of the fights.
*
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* JesusWasWayCool - [[spoiler: LouisCypher agrees with Minato on this one. Turns out the reason he left heaven was because SMT god wasn't like Jesus.]]
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* JesusWasWayCool - [[spoiler: LouisCypher agrees with Minato on this one. Turns out the reason he left heaven was because SMT god SMT's God wasn't like Jesus.]]
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* KarmaHoudini - Justified. [[color:white: Adachi's one too for the same reason]]
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* KarmaHoudini - Justified. [[color:white: Adachi's one too too, for the same reason]]reason.]]
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* LargeHam - One of Minato's back-up plans to defeat Nyx is to [[HotBlooded Shout as hard as he can]]
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* LargeHam - One of Minato's back-up plans to defeat Nyx is to [[HotBlooded Shout shout as hard as he can]]can]].
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* LifeOrLimbDecision - Minato often has to do this. He usually picks the other guys limb.
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* LifeOrLimbDecision - Minato often has to do this. He usually picks winds up picking the other guys guy's limb.
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-> ''This is the line in the sand... To cross this line is to cross me. And to cross me is to end.'' '''Minato in Chapter 59.'''
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* LastSecondChance - If his enemy is human, he will usually give them a couple of warnings to back down before slaughtering them. [[CompleteMonster Usually]]
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* LastSecondChance - If his enemy is human, he will usually give them a couple of warnings to back down before slaughtering them. [[CompleteMonster Usually]]Usually.]]
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* MagneticWeapons - One of Ken's heavier hitting tactics is to turn his spear into a railgun.
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* MagneticWeapons - One of Ken's heavier hitting heavier-hitting tactics is to turn his spear into a railgun.
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* {{Meido}} - Remember when Yukari tried on that Maid outfit once? [[color:white: Everyone joins in]]
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* {{Meido}} - Remember when Yukari tried on that Maid outfit once? [[color:white: Everyone joins in]]in.]]
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya - [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/73/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Chapter 73. Just Chapter 73.]]
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* MyNameIsInigoMontoya - [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/73/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Chapter 73. Just Just… Chapter 73.]]
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* NarniaTime - Time in the Velvet Room either passes hyper-fast or not at all. A more prominent example, however, would be the passage of time in the demon world
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* NarniaTime - Time in the Velvet Room passes either passes hyper-fast or not at all. A more prominent example, however, would be the passage of time in the demon world
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*** And let's not forget [[spoiler: Adachi, the Arcana Shadows, normal Shadows, The Greek Pantheon, Nyxists, the Police, [[BeyondTheImpossible Even Nyx herself does this.]] ]]
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*** And let's not forget [[spoiler: Adachi, the Arcana Shadows, normal Shadows, The Greek Pantheon, Nyxists, the Police, [[BeyondTheImpossible Even even Nyx herself does this.]] this]].]]
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* NonuniformUniform - Head of student council is allowed to take this further.
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* NonuniformUniform - Head The head of student council the Student Council is allowed to take this further.
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* OneOfUs - The author is a troper, and it shows in the story. In fact, he apparently put the story into the Fan Fic Recommendation page of Persona 3.
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* OneOfUs - The author is a troper, and it shows in the story. In fact, he himself apparently put the story into the Fan Fic Recommendation page of Persona 3.
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* OneWingedAngel - Chariot and Justice, which starts as a Space Marine Predator, transforms into a Space Marine Dreadnought and a {{Gundam}} respectively after splitting apart.
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* OneWingedAngel - Chariot and Justice, which starts as a Space Marine Predator, transforms into a Space Marine Dreadnought and a {{Gundam}} respectively after splitting apart. Minato specifically has an OhCrap moment at this.
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* ParentalAbandonment - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad faked the death of himself and Minato's sister in order to stop her from being dragged into the insane world that Death would drag Minato into.]]
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* ParentalAbandonment - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad faked the death of himself his and Minato's sister sister's deaths in order to stop her from being dragged into the insane world that Death would inevitably drag Minato into.]]
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* PatrickStewartSpeech - To counter Takaya's 'you suck' speech.
* PhlebotinumRebel [[spoiler: - At one point, all the Justice Arcana Personae except Mechizedek rebels go on strike. The reason was because of that little war on heaven that was being waged between them.]]
* PersonOfMassDestruction - All of S.E.E.S. really. Especially Minato.
* PhlebotinumRebel [[spoiler: - At one point, all the Justice Arcana Personae except Mechizedek rebels go on strike. The reason was because of that little war on heaven that was being waged between them.]]
* PersonOfMassDestruction - All of S.E.E.S. really. Especially Minato.
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* PatrickStewartSpeech - To In order to counter Takaya's 'you suck' speech.
TheReasonYouSuckSpeech.
* PhlebotinumRebel [[spoiler: - At one point, all the Justice Arcana Personae except Mechizedekrebels rebel and go on strike. The reason was because of [[ItMakesSenseInContext that little war on heaven Heaven that was being waged between them.]]
at the time.]]]]
* PersonOfMassDestruction - All of S.E.E.S. , really. Especially Minato.
* PhlebotinumRebel [[spoiler: - At one point, all the Justice Arcana Personae except Mechizedek
* PersonOfMassDestruction - All of S.E.E.S.
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* AllPsychologyIsFreudian - Averted. While Minato does prefer the psychodynamic approach, as does the universe in general and the author, other branches of psychology, notably biological psychology and the behavioral approach have large influences as well.
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* AllPsychologyIsFreudian - Averted. While Minato does prefer the psychodynamic approach, as does do the universe in general and the author, other branches of psychology, notably biological psychology and the behavioral approach approach, have large influences as well.
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-> [[spoiler: WHO THE BLOODY HELL IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THIS FIASCO!? IT'S IKUTSUKI'S FAULT ISN'T IT!? I'LL SKIN HIM ALIVE!!!]] '''
*** Rage was due to Aigis's problems on her first day at school.'''
-> "MEMO'S!!!"
* RealMenWearPink - Minato listens to women talk about shoes, Shinji has his own apron.
** [[spoiler: Jun Kurosu.]] Never has a gay florist been so badass since [[YuYuHakusho Kurama.]]
* RedArmbandOfLeadership - Lampshaded in [[spoiler: The battle for Arisojack]]
* RefugeInAudacity - Main character's a GodModeSue? That's fine, make everything else God Mode Sue's too.
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun - All the time.
*** Rage was due to Aigis's problems on her first day at school.'''
-> "MEMO'S!!!"
* RealMenWearPink - Minato listens to women talk about shoes, Shinji has his own apron.
** [[spoiler: Jun Kurosu.]] Never has a gay florist been so badass since [[YuYuHakusho Kurama.]]
* RedArmbandOfLeadership - Lampshaded in [[spoiler: The battle for Arisojack]]
* RefugeInAudacity - Main character's a GodModeSue? That's fine, make everything else God Mode Sue's too.
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun - All the time.
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*** Rage was due to Aigis's problems on her first day at
->
--> "MEMO'S!!!"
* RealMenWearPink - Minato listens to women talk about
** [[spoiler: Jun Kurosu.]] Never has a gay florist been so badass since [[YuYuHakusho
* RedArmbandOfLeadership - Lampshaded in [[spoiler: The battle for Arisojack.]]
* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun -
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong - One set of Shadows sent Minato back in time a week. He trained in Tartarus then jumped the Shadows just ''after'' they sent his past-self back.
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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong - One set of Shadows sent Minato back in time a week. He trained in Tartarus then jumped the Shadows just ''after'' ''just after'' they sent his past-self back.
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* ShonenUpgrade - Turning him into BadassAbnormal. [[color:white: He loses them though. Then gets them back and uses then properly.]]
* SongFic - When the Shadow the Hedgehog theme, "I Am" appears, someone is going to be kicked ''up the arse'' '''ARISOTO STYLE.'''
* SongFic - When the Shadow the Hedgehog theme, "I Am" appears, someone is going to be kicked ''up the arse'' '''ARISOTO STYLE.'''
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* ShonenUpgrade - Turning him into a BadassAbnormal. [[color:white: He loses them though. Then gets them back and uses then properly.]]
* SongFic - When the Shadow the Hedgehogtheme, theme "I Am" appears, someone is going to be kicked ''up the arse'' '''ARISOTO STYLE.'''
* SongFic - When the Shadow the Hedgehog
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* ChainsawGood - Minato's ecstatic when he finds a Chainsword in the Chariot dungeon.
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* ChainsawGood - Minato's Minato is ecstatic when he finds a Chainsword in the Chariot dungeon.
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* ShockingSwerve - [[AvertedTrope Gloriously Averted.]] One of the best and most unexpected [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in fanficdom that wasn't a complete AssPull. The FridgeLogic behind it only leaves you even more speechless.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
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* ShockingSwerve - [[AvertedTrope Gloriously Averted.]] One of the best and most unexpected [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] {{Mind Screw}}s in fanficdom all of fanfiction that wasn't ''wasn't'' a complete AssPull. The FridgeLogic behind it only leaves you even more speechless.
** Perhaps you meantFridgeBrilliance ? FridgeBrilliance? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS - Minato's last name is Arisato, but the author didn't know that. Whoops.
* SphereOfDestruction - How else do you [[spoiler: Someone who keeps bursting out of her corpse alive and well every time you brutally slaughter her?]]
* SphereOfDestruction - How else do you [[spoiler: Someone who keeps bursting out of her corpse alive and well every time you brutally slaughter her?]]
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* SpellMyNameWithAnS - Minato's last name is Arisato, but the author didn't know that. Whoops.
that at first. Whoops. He even lampshades it later, but decides to stick with it.
* SphereOfDestruction - How else do you [[spoiler:Someone someone who keeps bursting out of her corpse alive and well every time you brutally slaughter her?]]
* SphereOfDestruction - How else do you [[spoiler:
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* TheStoic - Justified exceptionally well. [[spoiler: Brain damage from the car crash that killed his parents killed the lobes that link emotion to facial expressions. He has to force every scowl, every laugh, ever smile. He's learnt to be good at it.]]
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* TheStoic - Justified exceptionally well. [[spoiler: Brain damage from the car crash that killed his parents also killed the lobes that link emotion to facial expressions. He has to force every scowl, every laugh, ever every smile. He's learnt to be good at it.]]
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* StoryBreakerPower - By the end, everyone. Even the mooks are story breakers, so it evens out.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide - Minato's is still Minato. And it is scary.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide - Minato's is still Minato. And it is scary.
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* StoryBreakerPower - By the end, everyone. Even the mooks ''Mooks'' are story breakers, Story Breakers, so it evens out.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide - Minato's is still Minato. And yes, it is that damn scary.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide - Minato's is still Minato. And yes, it is that damn scary.
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** Played straight later on concerning [[spoiler: Freeing Minato from the eternal seal. If humans don't desire death, then there's no need for the seal, so you just need to social link everybody.]]
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** Played straight later on concerning [[spoiler: Freeing Minato from the eternal seal.Eternal Seal. If humans don't desire death, then there's no need for the seal, so you just need to social link everybody.]]
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* TimeTravel - Remember the [[Series/DoctorWho Stone Angels?]]
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* TimeTravel - Remember the [[Series/DoctorWho Stone Angels?]]Angels]]?
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* {{Troperiffic}}
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* {{Troperiffic}} {{Troperiffic}}
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* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet - Both by Minato and to Minato.
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* ThrowingDownTheGauntlet - Both by Minato and to ''to'' Minato.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill - Or making damned sure that it's dead and not coming back.
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* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill - Or at least making damned sure that it's dead and not coming back.
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* TranquilFury - If Minato gets this, ''Run.''
* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[CombatPragmatist and he beats them with experience.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass - Minato, while he starts getting arrogant.
* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[CombatPragmatist and he beats them with experience.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass - Minato, while he starts getting arrogant.
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* TranquilFury - If Minato gets this, ''Run.''
'''run'''.
* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[CombatPragmatist andhe then Minato just plain beats them with raw experience.]]
* TookALevelInJerkass - Minato,while when he starts getting arrogant.
* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[CombatPragmatist and
* TookALevelInJerkass - Minato,
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* UpToEleven - Not just the fic. [[spoiler: The social links go up to eleven too. And its even a major plot point as Personae that are a part of Minato's Up to Eleven links are card-summonable ala The Inaba Scoobies ''AND'' they are unable to be destroyed.]]
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* UpToEleven - Not just the fic. [[spoiler: The social links Social Links go up to eleven too. And its it is even a major plot point as Personae that are a part of Minato's Up to Eleven links are card-summonable ala a la [[{{Persona 4}} The Inaba Scoobies Scoobies]] ''AND'' they are unable to be destroyed.]]
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* TheUnfettered - Never try to call Minato's bluff. He will follow through with spades in anything. ''Anything''.
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* TheUnfettered - Never try to call Minato's bluff. He will follow through with spades in anything. ''Anything''.''Anything.''
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* UnstoppableRage - Never Charm Minato and make him beat the crap out of his nakama. Ever. [[spoiler: Also never threaten Yukari or you will be put through a world of hurt and then disintegrated]]
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* UnstoppableRage - Never Charm Minato and make him beat the crap out of his nakama.Nakama. Ever. [[spoiler: Also never threaten Yukari or you will be put through a world of hurt and then disintegrated]]disintegrated.]]
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* WeakButSkilled - [[spoiler: Adachi. Despite having Personae that are half as strong as Minato, he ''still'' manages to hand him his ass through over half of the battle.]]
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* WeakButSkilled - [[spoiler: Adachi. Despite having Personae that are half as strong as Minato, Minato's, he ''still'' manages to hand him his ass through over half of the battle.]]
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* WhatTheHellHero - More or less Minato's modus operandi. ''FOR EVERYTHING''
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* WhatTheHellHero - More or less Minato's modus operandi. ''FOR EVERYTHING''EVERYTHING.''
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity - The stronger Minato's Personaes get, the crazier he becomes.
* WorthyOpponent - The Reaper. In fact, he combines this trope with basically being Tartarus' own [[KillerGameMaster Killer Game Master]].
* WorthyOpponent - The Reaper. In fact, he combines this trope with basically being Tartarus' own [[KillerGameMaster Killer Game Master]].
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity - The stronger Minato's Personaes Personae get, the crazier he becomes.
* WorthyOpponent - The Reaper. In fact, he combines this trope with basically being Tartarus' own[[KillerGameMaster Killer Game Master]].KillerGameMaster.
* WorthyOpponent - The Reaper. In fact, he combines this trope with basically being Tartarus' own
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** WouldHitAGirl - To Minato, an opponent is there to hit, regardless of sex, creed, colour, age or species.
* XMeetsY - {{Persona 3}} meets [[ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Shinji And Warhammer40K]]
* XMeetsY - {{Persona 3}} meets [[ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Shinji And Warhammer40K]]
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** WouldHitAGirl - To Minato, an opponent is there to hit, regardless of sex, creed, colour, age age, or species.
* XMeetsY - {{Persona 3}} meets[[ShinjiAndWarhammer40K Shinji And Warhammer40K]]
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* XMeetsY - {{Persona 3}} meets
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* ArcWords - First it's Price on your honesty, then [[DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage]].
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* ArcWords - First it's Price on your honesty, then [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage]].
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* HeroicSociopath - Minato. [[DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage indeed.]]
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* HeroicSociopath - Minato. [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Fire and Ice and Rage indeed.]]
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** [[DoctorWho Minato's ''other'' thinking posture?]]
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** [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Minato's ''other'' thinking posture?]]
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* TimeTravel - Remember the [[DoctorWho Stone Angels?]]
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* TimeTravel - Remember the [[DoctorWho [[Series/DoctorWho Stone Angels?]]
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* CombatPragmatist - [[spoiler: First thing Ikutsuki does after TheReveal is shoot Takeharu in the head, followed by Minato.]] [[color:white: [[CrazyAwesome It doesn't work.]]]]
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim - Averted. [[spoiler: First thing Ikutsuki does after TheReveal is shoot Takeharu in the head, followed by Minato.]] [[color:white: [[CrazyAwesome It doesn't work.]]]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/1/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Persona 3: Fairly English Story]] started as an AU Fic of what the author thinks [[{{Persona3}} Persona 3: FES]] would have been like if Minato Arisato was raised in England after his parents death. Then things started to deviate from the original source material, and [[CrazyAwesome Stuff Happened]]
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[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5194916/1/Persona_3_Fairly_English_Story Persona 3: Fairly English Story]] started as an AU Fic of what the author thinks [[{{Persona3}} Persona 3: FES]] would have been like if Minato Arisato was raised in England after his parents death. Then things started to deviate from the original source material, and [[CrazyAwesome Stuff Happened]]
Happened]].
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and there's an omake series called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/FESxtras FESxtras]], formerly Investigation Team Yo!. Then he goes on a two-year mission.
Casey W has also begun work on an official sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
Casey W has also begun work on an official sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and there's an omake series called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/FESxtras FESxtras]], formerly Investigation Team Yo!. Then he goes on a two-year mission.
mission. Casey W has also begun work on an official sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
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* OneWingedAngel - Chariot and Justice, which starts as a Space Marine Predator, transforms into a Space Marine Dreadnought and a {{Gundam}} respectively after splitting apart.
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy - Minato. [[spoiler: Ikutsuki, Strega.]] [[supersecretspoiler: Adachi]]
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* DangerouslyGenreSavvy - Minato. [[spoiler: Ikutsuki, Strega.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Adachi]]
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* DontLookAtMe [[supersecretspoiler: - Rio's Shadow]]
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* DontLookAtMe [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: - Rio's Shadow]]
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* [[supersecretspoiler: [[CandleJack Hello.]]]]
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* [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: [[CandleJack Hello.]]]]
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** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[supersecretspoiler: Adachi has it mastered]]
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** His enemies do it too sometimes. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Adachi has it mastered]]
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* KarmaHoudini - Justified. [[supersecretspoiler: Adachi's one too for the same reason]]
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* KarmaHoudini - Justified. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Adachi's one too for the same reason]]
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* KnightOfCerebus - Ikutsuki. [[supersecretspoiler: In more ways than one.]]
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* KnightOfCerebus - Ikutsuki. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: In more ways than one.]]
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* {{Meido}} - Remember when Yukari tried on that Maid outfit once? [[supersecretspoiler: Everyone joins in]]
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* {{Meido}} - Remember when Yukari tried on that Maid outfit once? [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Everyone joins in]]
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** Minato can get away with a lot of things because he honestly doesn't believe he can get in trouble for it. When he does think he's going to get a comeuppance, he usually does. [[supersecretspoiler: Same goes for other Fools]]
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** Minato can get away with a lot of things because he honestly doesn't believe he can get in trouble for it. When he does think he's going to get a comeuppance, he usually does. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Same goes for other Fools]]Fools.]]
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* ShonenUpgrade - Turning him into BadassAbnormal. [[supersecretspoiler: He loses them though. Then gets them back and uses then properly.]]
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* ShonenUpgrade - Turning him into BadassAbnormal. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: He loses them though. Then gets them back and uses then properly.]]
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* SuicidalOverconfidence - Anyone who gets in Minato's way. [[supersecretspoiler: Also how Minato dies.]]
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* SuicidalOverconfidence - Anyone who gets in Minato's way. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Also how Minato dies.]]
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* TakingTheBullet [[supersecretspoiler: - Akihiko for Shinji]]
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* TakingTheBullet [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: - Akihiko for Shinji]]
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* WhatMeasureIsANonhuman - Aigis. [[supersecretspoiler: Minatos.]]
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* WhatMeasureIsANonhuman - Aigis. [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: Minatos.]]
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim - Averted. [[spoiler: First thing Ikutsuki does after TheReveal is shoot Takeharu in the head, followed by Minato.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[CrazyAwesome It doesn't work.]]]]
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* WhyDontYaJustShootHim - Averted. [[spoiler: First thing Ikutsuki does after TheReveal is shoot Takeharu in the head, followed by Minato.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[color:white: [[CrazyAwesome It doesn't work.]]]]
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* TheCombatPragmatist - Minato. [[MilitaryBrat Makes sense]] [[BritsWithBattleships when we meet the uncle who raised him.]]
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* TheCombatPragmatist CombatPragmatist - Minato. [[MilitaryBrat Makes sense]] [[BritsWithBattleships when we meet the uncle who raised him.]]
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[TheCombatPragmatist and he beats them with experience.]]
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* TryingToCatchMeFightingDirty - Anything's fair game when Minato gets in close. His opponent usually descends to his level, [[TheCombatPragmatist [[CombatPragmatist and he beats them with experience.]]
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* AngstWhatAngst - While Minato may pull the DeusAngstMachina card every now and again, he's actually very well off considering.
** [[spoiler: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Turns out he's lying.]] ]]
* AlasPoorVillain - [[spoiler: Hermit]]
** [[spoiler: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Turns out he's lying.]] ]]
* AlasPoorVillain - [[spoiler: Hermit]]
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* {{Badass}} - Many, Many times.
** BackToBackBadasses - [[spoiler: Minato and Shinji against the Lover's army of zombie Shadows. It also happens whenever Minato and Naoki team up.]]
*** As of the sequel, [[spoiler: Naoki and Yukiko, [[OneSceneWonder Funky Student]] and Kanji, and Kenji with Jun, although they were completely outclassed by [[CodeGeass Rio]] ]]
** BadassBoast
** BadassAbnormal - Everyone once they learn new tricks to their Personae.
** BadassAdorable - [[spoiler: Bebe.]] Yes, ''that'' [[spoiler: Bebe.]]
** BadassArmy - [[spoiler: The Jakkai]]
** BadassBack
** BadassBiker - Minato when he steals Mitsuru's bike.
** BadassBeard - [[spoiler: The Reaper.]]
** BadassBookworm - Minato, but the Reaper seems quite eloquent too. [[RealMenWearPink Jun definitely qualifies.]]
** BadassCape
** BadassCreed - [[DoctorWho No Second Chances.]] [[spoiler: [[HeWhoFightsMonsters That's the kind of monster I am.]] ]]
** BadassFurry - The Jakkai
** CulturedBadass - The Reaper.
** TookALevelInBadass - Junpei, Shinji, Ken, [[supersecretspoiler: Kenji]]
*** Strega are much more effective in this story too.
** DareToBeBadass - Minato often calls people onto this. Got it himself a couple of times.
** BreakTheBadass - There was an entire chapter about Minato coming to terms with his fear of dying after being called out by Ryoji. [[supersecretspoiler: Also, Shinji's resolution after Akihiko's death.]]
** BadassGrandpa - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad is Raidou.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[BishonenLine Reaper's True from]] ]]
** DiagnosisFromDrBadass - Minato's pretty decent at diagnosing his own injury's, then shouting at Yukari to hurry up and heal him.
** UnderestimatingBadassery - Everyone who fights Minato for the first time underestimates him. ''Everyone''. Even if they know he's a Badass.
** BackToBackBadasses - [[spoiler: Minato and Shinji against the Lover's army of zombie Shadows. It also happens whenever Minato and Naoki team up.]]
*** As of the sequel, [[spoiler: Naoki and Yukiko, [[OneSceneWonder Funky Student]] and Kanji, and Kenji with Jun, although they were completely outclassed by [[CodeGeass Rio]] ]]
** BadassBoast
** BadassAbnormal - Everyone once they learn new tricks to their Personae.
** BadassAdorable - [[spoiler: Bebe.]] Yes, ''that'' [[spoiler: Bebe.]]
** BadassArmy - [[spoiler: The Jakkai]]
** BadassBack
** BadassBiker - Minato when he steals Mitsuru's bike.
** BadassBeard - [[spoiler: The Reaper.]]
** BadassBookworm - Minato, but the Reaper seems quite eloquent too. [[RealMenWearPink Jun definitely qualifies.]]
** BadassCape
** BadassCreed - [[DoctorWho No Second Chances.]] [[spoiler: [[HeWhoFightsMonsters That's the kind of monster I am.]] ]]
** BadassFurry - The Jakkai
** CulturedBadass - The Reaper.
** TookALevelInBadass - Junpei, Shinji, Ken, [[supersecretspoiler: Kenji]]
*** Strega are much more effective in this story too.
** DareToBeBadass - Minato often calls people onto this. Got it himself a couple of times.
** BreakTheBadass - There was an entire chapter about Minato coming to terms with his fear of dying after being called out by Ryoji. [[supersecretspoiler: Also, Shinji's resolution after Akihiko's death.]]
** BadassGrandpa - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad is Raidou.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[BishonenLine Reaper's True from]] ]]
** DiagnosisFromDrBadass - Minato's pretty decent at diagnosing his own injury's, then shouting at Yukari to hurry up and heal him.
** UnderestimatingBadassery - Everyone who fights Minato for the first time underestimates him. ''Everyone''. Even if they know he's a Badass.
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* CrazyAwesome - The fic starts off pretty standard, but then it gets pretty obvious what [[{{Warhammer40000}} the]] [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann author's]] [[ShinjiAndWarhammer40k been]] [[FullmetalAlchemist studying.]]
** Minato's pretty insane himself, but full of awesome.
** Minato's pretty insane himself, but full of awesome.
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome
* CrowningMomentOfFunny - "I prepared a song about it."
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - The ''ENTIRE'' Epiclouge. Yes, even the parts where [[spoiler: Minatos threatens Metatron to stay out of his business and he crushes Izanami after the events of Persona 4 with '''THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE''']]
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome - Chapter 18.
* CrowningMomentOfFunny - "I prepared a song about it."
* CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming - The ''ENTIRE'' Epiclouge. Yes, even the parts where [[spoiler: Minatos threatens Metatron to stay out of his business and he crushes Izanami after the events of Persona 4 with '''THE ENTIRE UNIVERSE''']]
* CrowningMusicOfAwesome - Chapter 18.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse - The Reaper, Kenji, and Jin.
** For that matter, [[spoiler: Shinji's]] popularity was why [[spoiler: Aki took a bullet for him.]]
** For that matter, [[spoiler: Shinji's]] popularity was why [[spoiler: Aki took a bullet for him.]]
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* GodModeSue - The author has thrown up his hands and admitted this, so made up for it by amping the difficulty up to 'Minato Must Die'
** Something of a deconstruction, since the universe stopped treating Minato as a God Mode Sue and reality ensued.
** Something of a deconstruction, since the universe stopped treating Minato as a God Mode Sue and reality ensued.
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* GrowingTheBeard - Up until Chapter 36, the story is pretty standard. Then the [[CrazyAwesome fun starts.]]
** CerebusSyndrome - Chapter 72, then things start to get dark.
** CerebusSyndrome - Chapter 72, then things start to get dark.
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* IronWoobie - [[spoiler: Minatos.]] Especially in the last five chapters.
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* MagnificentBastard - Minato, Takaya. [[supersecretspoiler: Adachi]]
** Not to mention chapter 94 when [[spoiler:Minato sleeps with Mitsuru and technically has "robo-sex" with Aegis while dating Yukari who is in this story is Little Miss Weapon Wieldin' Mood Swings. And earlier in story, he did it to Chihiro and Yuko!]] Good thing he is also a ManipulativeBastard. He does feel guilty about it though...
*** Very, Very nearly Jin. The one flaw in his XanatosGambit was that he didn't account for [[spoiler: Jun Kurosu.]]
** Not to mention chapter 94 when [[spoiler:Minato sleeps with Mitsuru and technically has "robo-sex" with Aegis while dating Yukari who is in this story is Little Miss Weapon Wieldin' Mood Swings. And earlier in story, he did it to Chihiro and Yuko!]] Good thing he is also a ManipulativeBastard. He does feel guilty about it though...
*** Very, Very nearly Jin. The one flaw in his XanatosGambit was that he didn't account for [[spoiler: Jun Kurosu.]]
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* NightNurse - Referenced. [[spoiler: Junpei gets his ass kicked as a result.]]
* NightmareFuel - [[spoiler: How the author goes into ''GREAT'' detail about how Nyarlathlotep destroys most of Minato's Personae falls greatly into this trope.]]
** When Minato gets scared, you'll know it, because the Narrator keeps narrating through the fear. It get's really bad when he's scooping his lungs up off the floor and running for his life while under Panic.
*** Minato got charmed at one point. [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Now]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that]] [[NotBrainwashed was]] [[BreakTheBadass bad.]]
* NightmareFuel - [[spoiler: How the author goes into ''GREAT'' detail about how Nyarlathlotep destroys most of Minato's Personae falls greatly into this trope.]]
** When Minato gets scared, you'll know it, because the Narrator keeps narrating through the fear. It get's really bad when he's scooping his lungs up off the floor and running for his life while under Panic.
*** Minato got charmed at one point. [[SuperpoweredEvilSide Now]] [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown that]] [[NotBrainwashed was]] [[BreakTheBadass bad.]]
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* RatedMForManly - Played straight and inverted. It's a very intellectual story, but the guns are huge and destructive, every other character is badass to some degree, and lots of things go boom.
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* ReplacementScrappy - Averted HARD. [[spoiler: Shinji's development after Akihiko's death is flawless.]]
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* DidNotDoTheResearch: The author himself admits mainly getting his information off the Megami Tensei Wiki; though there are some errors that would have been avoidable
** Case in point, his Tatsuya Suou has aparently killed Philemon. Who invokes [[AsLongAsThereIsEvil As Long As There Is Good]].
** Similarly, Tatsuya describes the Wild Card as an 'impossible' power (or, for reference's sake, an Innocent Sin), which begets an Eternal Punishment. As the respective title's pages explain, the titles refer to Tatsuya himself, not his Wild Card.
** Case in point, his Tatsuya Suou has aparently killed Philemon. Who invokes [[AsLongAsThereIsEvil As Long As There Is Good]].
** Similarly, Tatsuya describes the Wild Card as an 'impossible' power (or, for reference's sake, an Innocent Sin), which begets an Eternal Punishment. As the respective title's pages explain, the titles refer to Tatsuya himself, not his Wild Card.
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A mistake that he made work? It really comes off as "Sure Why Not" instead.
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* AssPull - [[AvertedTrope Gloriously Averted.]] One of the best and most unexpected [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in fanficdom that wasn't a complete AssPull. The FridgeLogic behind it only leaves you even more speechless.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
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* ShockingSwerve - [[AvertedTrope Gloriously Averted.]] One of the best and most unexpected [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in fanficdom that wasn't a complete AssPull. The FridgeLogic behind it only leaves you even more speechless.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
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* * [[AssPull]] - [[AvertedTrope Gloriously Averted.]] One of the best and most unexpected [[MindScrew Mind Screws]] in fanficdom that wasn't a complete AssPull. The FridgeLogic behind it only leaves you even more speechless.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
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** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
** Perhaps you meant FridgeBrilliance ? It really is an eye-opener. Reading the story a second time gives you a whole new perception of the tale.
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* [[AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering Wanna Do Something Bang Out Of Order?]]
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* [[AreYouPonderingWhatImPondering Wanna Do Something Bang Out Of Order?]]Order?]] - You will quickly learn to love this phrase and what it causes whenever uttered.
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The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's a TearJerker on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check thse out.
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The Author recently did a prequel called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Stay Awake With Me]], which covers the events between Minato's parents dying and him moving to England. It's a TearJerker on its own, but if you've already read Fairly English Story, then it's just heartbreaking. A rewrite is also currently in the works, titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6055388/1/Rebuild_of_Fairly_English_Story Rebuild of Fairly English Story]]. If you considered reading Fairly English Story but was put off by the poor writing quality, then check this thse out.
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and has started a collection on spinoff stories based around Persona 4 called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/Investigation_Team_Yo Investigation Team Yo!]]. Then he goes on a two-year mission.
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The author has posted the first chapter of the sequel (titled [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5860066/1/ For Every Soul]], because get it? FES?) and has started a collection on spinoff stories based around Persona 4 there's an omake series called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5866195/1/Investigation_Team_Yo net/s/5866195/1/FESxtras FESxtras]], formerly Investigation Team Yo!]].Yo!. Then he goes on a two-year mission.
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* BackToBackBadasses - [[spoiler: Minato and Shinji against the Lover's army of zombie Shadows. It also happens whenever Minato and Naoki team up.]]
** As of the sequel, [[spoiler: Naoki and Yukiko, [[OneSceneWonder Funky Student]] and Kanji, and Kenji with Jun, although they were completely outclassed by [[CodeGeass Rio]] ]]
* BadassBoast
* BadassAbnormal - Everyone once they learn new tricks to their Personae.
* BadassAdorable - [[spoiler: Bebe.]] Yes, ''that'' [[spoiler: Bebe.]]
* BadassArmy - [[spoiler: The Jakkai]]
* BadassBack
* BadassBiker - Minato when he steals Mitsuru's bike.
* BadassBeard - [[spoiler: The Reaper.]]
* BadassBookworm - Minato, but the Reaper seems quite eloquent too. [[RealMenWearPink Jun definitely qualifies.]]
* BadassCape
* BadassCreed - [[DoctorWho No Second Chances.]] [[spoiler: [[HeWhoFightsMonsters That's the kind of monster I am.]] ]]
* BadassFurry - The Jakkai
* CulturedBadass - The Reaper.
* TookALevelInBadass - Junpei, Shinji, Ken, [[supersecretspoiler: Kenji]]
** Strega are much more effective in this story too.
* DareToBeBadass - Minato often calls people onto this. Got it himself a couple of times.
* BreakTheBadass - There was an entire chapter about Minato coming to terms with his fear of dying after being called out by Ryoji. [[supersecretspoiler: Also, Shinji's resolution after Akihiko's death.]]
* BadassGrandpa - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad is Raidou.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[BishonenLine Reaper's True from]] ]]
* DiagnosisFromDrBadass - Minato's pretty decent at diagnosing his own injury's, then shouting at Yukari to hurry up and heal him.
* UnderestimatingBadassery - Everyone who fights Minato for the first time underestimates him. ''Everyone''. Even if they know he's a Badass.
** As of the sequel, [[spoiler: Naoki and Yukiko, [[OneSceneWonder Funky Student]] and Kanji, and Kenji with Jun, although they were completely outclassed by [[CodeGeass Rio]] ]]
* BadassBoast
* BadassAbnormal - Everyone once they learn new tricks to their Personae.
* BadassAdorable - [[spoiler: Bebe.]] Yes, ''that'' [[spoiler: Bebe.]]
* BadassArmy - [[spoiler: The Jakkai]]
* BadassBack
* BadassBiker - Minato when he steals Mitsuru's bike.
* BadassBeard - [[spoiler: The Reaper.]]
* BadassBookworm - Minato, but the Reaper seems quite eloquent too. [[RealMenWearPink Jun definitely qualifies.]]
* BadassCape
* BadassCreed - [[DoctorWho No Second Chances.]] [[spoiler: [[HeWhoFightsMonsters That's the kind of monster I am.]] ]]
* BadassFurry - The Jakkai
* CulturedBadass - The Reaper.
* TookALevelInBadass - Junpei, Shinji, Ken, [[supersecretspoiler: Kenji]]
** Strega are much more effective in this story too.
* DareToBeBadass - Minato often calls people onto this. Got it himself a couple of times.
* BreakTheBadass - There was an entire chapter about Minato coming to terms with his fear of dying after being called out by Ryoji. [[supersecretspoiler: Also, Shinji's resolution after Akihiko's death.]]
* BadassGrandpa - [[spoiler: Minato's Granddad is Raidou.]] [[supersecretspoiler: [[BishonenLine Reaper's True from]] ]]
* DiagnosisFromDrBadass - Minato's pretty decent at diagnosing his own injury's, then shouting at Yukari to hurry up and heal him.
* UnderestimatingBadassery - Everyone who fights Minato for the first time underestimates him. ''Everyone''. Even if they know he's a Badass.
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** When we actually see the backstory, it makes even more sense.
** It gets even worse that he didn't know about it being [[spoiler: faked]] for ten years.
** Minato's pretty insane himself, but full of awesome.
** [[TearJerker The Prequel. Just... The Prequel.]]
** Played straight with Minato's. He's the walking example of a psychopath with a broken psyche.
** Averted with '''S'''tay '''A'''wake '''W'''ith '''M'''e.
*** SAWM?
*** SAWM?
** Something of a deconstruction, since the universe stopped treating Minato as a God Mode Sue and reality ensued.
** The prequel too, kinda.
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* StoryBreakerPower - By the end, everyone. Even the mooks are story breakers.
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* StoryBreakerPower - By the end, everyone. Even the mooks are story breakers.breakers, so it evens out.
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** When talking to a demon, you automatically start know how to speak Demonic. Probably got something to do with the Sekai Rei.
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** When talking to a demon, you automatically start know how to speak Demonic. Probably got something to do with the Sekai Rei.
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** [[spoiler: [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me Turns out he's lying.]] ]]
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* TearJerker- [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6294680/1/Stay_Awake_With_Me The prequel, Stay Awake With Me]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. His fathers? [[spoiler: Shirogane's, previously Kuzunoha. Granddad faked his and Naoto's death to prevent Minato from ruining her life due to his carrying Death.]] SoYeah.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily - On Minato's mother's side, her brother is in the SBS, his cousin (his DistaffCounterpart of Persona 3: Portable) has been trained to fight since she could walk, his other cousin goes for midnight runs atop buildings. His fathers? [[spoiler: Shirogane's, previously Kuzunoha. Granddad faked his and Naoto's death to prevent Minato from ruining her life due to his carrying Death.]] SoYeah.]]
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* DivineParentage - [[spoiler: Ryoji got a girl pregnant. SoYeah.]]
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* DivineParentage - [[spoiler: Ryoji got a girl pregnant. SoYeah.]]
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** [[spoiler: He dies because his heart tries to kill the Shadow possessing his body by tearing itself from the Circulatory System.]] SoYeah.
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** And now '''F'''ace '''E'''very '''S'''hadow.
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** [[spoiler:Adachi]] starts off as just a nice little cameo. By the end of the story, he has become part of a huge cast of supporting characters, while [[spoiler:the sequel has him joining the main cast proper.]]
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** [[spoiler: He dies because his heart tries to kill the Shadow posessing his body by tearing itself from the Circulatory System.]] SoYeah.
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** [[spoiler: The Hollow Arcana is descirbed as the power to make your insanity override reality.]]
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** [[spoiler: The Hollow Arcana is descirbed described as the power to make your insanity override reality.]]
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** [[TookALevelInBadass Remember the Hermit? That thing stuck to the sound system who used that electric attack]] [[FakeUltimateMook that was an absolute pushover to beat?]] [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann It's the Chouginga Gurren lagann.]]
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** [[TookALevelInBadass Remember the Hermit? That thing stuck to the sound system who used that electric attack]] [[FakeUltimateMook that was an absolute pushover to beat?]] [[TengenToppaGurrenLagann It's the Chouginga Gurren lagann.Lagann.]]
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* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys - Scrolls? Quasi-dimensional armoury? [[spoiler: Personal munition factory in the kingdom of demons that he rules?]]
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* WhereDoesHeGetAllThoseWonderfulToys - Scrolls? Quasi-dimensional armoury? [[spoiler: Personal munition munitions factory in the kingdom of demons that he rules?]]
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It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expresionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]].
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It's told in first person from Minato's perspective, giving him more of a personality while still keeping the sleepy, expresionless expressionless teen that Fanon has made him out to be, while taking a few levels in badass along the way. Towards the later chapters, things start to get a little out of hand, yet it still somehow manages not to break canon most of the time, even the canon for its somewhat direct sequel, [[{{Persona4}} Persona 4]].
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Casey W has also begun work on an offical sequel from the viewpoint of Seta Souji as he goes through the events of the altered Persona 4 canon. It's called [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6148119/1/Persona_4_Face_Every_Shadow Face Every Shadow.]]
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* DiggingToChina - What happens if you drop an indestructable spear that pierces anything? It turns up a couple of days later in Canada.
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* LampshadeHanging - Minato often gets irratated at the spooky voices in his head reminding him that he's farming friends for demonic powers at the most inappropriate times.
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* LampshadeHanging - Minato often gets irratated irritated at the spooky voices in his head reminding him that he's farming friends for demonic powers at the most inappropriate times.
