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* RealisticDictionIsUnrealistic: Pretty cleanly averted in this fic. Characters stutter and stumble in their words and have to repeat themselves in conversations, allowing the cast to feel a lot more like real people. Malley herself is the biggest case, suffering from a nervous stutter that has her struggle with completing sentences.
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One morning, a 13-year-old Inkling girl Malley wakes up in her apartment terrified. This is normal. She then notices that she appears to have been sleeping next to her own corpse. This isn't normal. After some additional panic over "Dead Malley", the mysterious stranger decides to take on the moniker (it's apparently better than her real name), as well as remain Malley's roommate for the foreseeable future (Malley does not have a choice in the matter). You see, Dead Malley is really an Octoling with plans for Inkopolis... plans which are summarily interrupted by when a dam bursts and floods the poor Inkopolis neighborhood where Malley and her friends reside.

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One morning, a 13-year-old Inkling girl Malley wakes up in her apartment terrified.apartment, scared out of her mind. This is normal. She then notices that she appears to have been sleeping next to her own corpse. This isn't normal. After some additional panic over "Dead Malley", the mysterious stranger decides to take on the moniker (it's apparently better than her real name), as well as remain Malley's roommate for the foreseeable future (Malley does not have a choice in the matter). You see, Dead Malley is really an Octoling with plans for Inkopolis... plans which are summarily similarly interrupted by when a dam bursts and floods the poor Inkopolis neighborhood where Malley and her friends reside.



* DarkAndTroubledPast: No one comes to Barclay with a happy life. While it's never delved into for Malley, most of what is mentioned of her life before Lawan, Donnie and Angie paints an unpleasant picture.

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: No one comes to living in Barclay with has a happy life. While it's never delved into for Malley, most of what is mentioned of her life before Lawan, Donnie and Angie paints an unpleasant picture.



* FromBadToWorse: When the flood starts, it forces the tenants of the first floor to evacuate to the upper levels, while the main characters have to wade through the dirty water to salvage what they can and to activate the emergency power. By day 4, the flood waters engulf the second floor, the power is knocked out [[spoiler: and a squad of sanitized octolings try to assualt the building.]]

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* FromBadToWorse: When the flood starts, it forces the tenants of the first floor to evacuate to the upper levels, while the main characters have to wade through the dirty water to salvage what they can and to activate the emergency power. By day 4, the flood waters engulf the second floor, the power is knocked out out, [[spoiler: and a squad of sanitized octolings Octolings try to assualt assault the building.]]



* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.

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* ObstructiveBureaucrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) Street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.



** At some point, a conversation is briefly derailed over the fact Donnie once had to study an episode of [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons The Simpsons]] in a history class, of all things
* {{Workaholic}}: Lawan and Kosh deconstruct this trope. Lawan is the main breadwinner for her family, taking up long hours of work that have only served to strain her relationships with them. Kosh overworks himself diving into the flooded first floor for others to the point of exhaustion [[spoiler: because he [[AccompliceByInaction finds himself responsible for the flood happening in the first place]]]]

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** At some point, a conversation is briefly derailed over the fact Donnie once had to study an episode of [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons The Simpsons]] in a history class, of all things
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* {{Workaholic}}: Lawan and Kosh deconstruct this trope. Lawan is the main breadwinner for her family, taking up long hours of work that have only served to strain her relationships with them. Kosh overworks himself diving into the flooded first floor for others to the point of exhaustion [[spoiler: because he [[AccompliceByInaction finds himself responsible for the flood happening in the first place]]]]place]].]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: No one comes to Barclay with a happy life. While it's never delved into for Malley, most of what is mentioned of her life before Lawan, Donnie and Angie paints an unpleasant picture.

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''Exercises in Gratitude (The Barclay Street Flood)'' is a ''{{Franchise/Splatoon}}'' fanfic on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/redeyedsheepskull/pseuds/redeyedsheepskull redeyedsheepskull]].

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''Exercises ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 Exercises in Gratitude (The Barclay Street Flood)'' Flood)]]'' is a ''{{Franchise/Splatoon}}'' fanfic on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/redeyedsheepskull/pseuds/redeyedsheepskull redeyedsheepskull]].
redeyedsheepskull]]. [[DoorStopper At over 900,000 words]], ''Exercises in Gratitude'' is the longest piece of ''Splatoon'' fanfiction on [=AO3=].



Now trapped in a crowded apartment building filled displaced and disoriented tenants, a RagtagBandOfMisfits are forced to attempt to regain control over a rapidly deteriorating situation.

In June 2022, ''Exercises in Gratitude'' became the longest piece of ''Splatoon'' fanfiction on [=AO3=], [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].

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Now trapped in a crowded apartment building filled with displaced and disoriented tenants, a RagtagBandOfMisfits are forced to attempt to regain control over a rapidly deteriorating situation.

In June 2022, ''Exercises in Gratitude'' became the longest piece of ''Splatoon'' fanfiction on [=AO3=], [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].
situation. But as these situations go, things naturally get worse before they get better.
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* WhamLine: Kosh at the end of chapter 118, the start of the "Rain, rain, go away" 4-parter: "I used to work at Inkopolis Second Dam. I knew this flood was going to happen. I’ve always known. I want to confess."

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* WhamLine: Kosh at the end of chapter 118, the start of the "Rain, rain, go away" 4-parter: [[spoiler: "I used to work at Inkopolis Second Dam. I knew this flood was going to happen. I’ve always known. I want to confess.""]]
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*WhamLine: Kosh at the end of chapter 118, the start of the "Rain, rain, go away" 4-parter: "I used to work at Inkopolis Second Dam. I knew this flood was going to happen. I’ve always known. I want to confess."
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a socially anxious teenager, an intruder who oddly resembles her as a corpse, their disgruntled mother figure, their anxious mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a socially anxious teenager, an intruder who oddly resembles her as a corpse, a surly older teen, their disgruntled mother figure, their anxious mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* ExtremelyShortTimeSpan: Currently well over 600,000 words, over 100 chapters, and yet in-univere, only six days have passed.
* FromBadToWorse: When the flood starts, it forces the tenants of the first floor to evacuate to the upper levels, while the main characters have to wade through the dirty water to salvage what they can and to activate the emergency power. By day 4, the flood waters engulf the second floor, the power is knocked out [[spoiler: and a squad of sanitized octolings try to assualt the building.]]



* PoorCommunicationKills: You could probably call the story this, and it would fit perfectly. A good chunk of the conflict between the characters comes from an unwillingness or inability to communicate their issues with each other, with the street flood more or less ''forcing'' them to finally work out their issues.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: You could probably call the story this, and it would fit perfectly. A good chunk of the conflict between the characters comes from an unwillingness or inability to communicate their issues with each other, with the street flood more or less ''forcing'' them to finally work out their issues.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which socially anxious teenager, an intruder who oddly resembles the corpse of another, her as a corpse, their disgruntled mother figure, their anxious mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Dead Malley refuses to go by anything other than Dead Malley. Everyone more or less rolls with it.
* PoorCommunicationKills: You could probably call the story this, and it would fit perfectly. A good chunk of the conflict between the characters comes from an unwillingness or inability to communicate their issues with each other, with the street flood more or less ''forcing'' them to finally work out their issues.



** Apparently, Murch is a fan of an old human-era show called [[Franchise/KamenRider "Ramen Rider"]].

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** Apparently, Murch One of Wabi's contacts is apparently a fan of an old human-era show called [[Franchise/KamenRider "Ramen Rider"]].Rider"]].
** At some point, a conversation is briefly derailed over the fact Donnie once had to study an episode of [[WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons The Simpsons]] in a history class, of all things
* {{Workaholic}}: Lawan and Kosh deconstruct this trope. Lawan is the main breadwinner for her family, taking up long hours of work that have only served to strain her relationships with them. Kosh overworks himself diving into the flooded first floor for others to the point of exhaustion [[spoiler: because he [[AccompliceByInaction finds himself responsible for the flood happening in the first place]]]]
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''Exercises In Gratitude (The Barclay Street Flood)'' is a ''{{Franchise/Splatoon}}'' fanfiction on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}.

One morning, a 13-year-old Inkling girl Malley wakes up terrified. This is normal. She then notices that she appears to be sleeping next to her own corpse. This isn't normal. After some additional panic over "Dead Malley", the mysterious stranger decides to take on the moniker (it's apparently better than her real name), as well as remain Malley's roommate for the foreseeable future (Malley does not have a choice in the matter). You see, Dead Malley is really an Octoling with plans for Inkopolis... plans which are summarily interrupted by when a dam bursts and floods the poor Inkopolis neighborhood where Malley and her friends reside.

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''Exercises In in Gratitude (The Barclay Street Flood)'' is a ''{{Franchise/Splatoon}}'' fanfiction fanfic on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}.

Own}}, written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/redeyedsheepskull/pseuds/redeyedsheepskull redeyedsheepskull]].

One morning, a 13-year-old Inkling girl Malley wakes up in her apartment terrified. This is normal. She then notices that she appears to be have been sleeping next to her own corpse. This isn't normal. After some additional panic over "Dead Malley", the mysterious stranger decides to take on the moniker (it's apparently better than her real name), as well as remain Malley's roommate for the foreseeable future (Malley does not have a choice in the matter). You see, Dead Malley is really an Octoling with plans for Inkopolis... plans which are summarily interrupted by when a dam bursts and floods the poor Inkopolis neighborhood where Malley and her friends reside.

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Exercises In Gratitude(The Barclay Street Flood) is a {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} fanfiction on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}.

When a dam bursts and a poor neighborhood in Inkopolis floods over, nine people, trapped in a crowded apartment building, struggle to manage the needs of the displaced former tenants.

The story opens with a 13-year-old inkling girl, Malley, waking up to find a girl who looks strangely like her. The girl, who takes on the moniker of Dead Malley, is revealed to be an octoling with plans for Inkopolis.

Plans which are summarily interrupted by the street flooding, forcing a RagtagBandOfMisfits to attempt to regain control over a rapidly deteriorating situation.

This fanfic has recently become notable as the single-longest {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} Fanfiction on AO3, [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].

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Exercises ''Exercises In Gratitude(The Gratitude (The Barclay Street Flood) Flood)'' is a {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} ''{{Franchise/Splatoon}}'' fanfiction on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}.

When a dam bursts and a poor neighborhood in Inkopolis floods over, nine people, trapped in a crowded apartment building, struggle to manage the needs of the displaced former tenants.

The story opens with
One morning, a 13-year-old inkling girl, Malley, waking up to find a Inkling girl who looks strangely like her. The girl, who takes Malley wakes up terrified. This is normal. She then notices that she appears to be sleeping next to her own corpse. This isn't normal. After some additional panic over "Dead Malley", the mysterious stranger decides to take on the moniker of (it's apparently better than her real name), as well as remain Malley's roommate for the foreseeable future (Malley does not have a choice in the matter). You see, Dead Malley, Malley is revealed to be really an octoling Octoling with plans for Inkopolis.

Plans
Inkopolis... plans which are summarily interrupted by when a dam bursts and floods the street flooding, forcing poor Inkopolis neighborhood where Malley and her friends reside.

Now trapped in a crowded apartment building filled displaced and disoriented tenants,
a RagtagBandOfMisfits are forced to attempt to regain control over a rapidly deteriorating situation.

This fanfic has recently become notable as In June 2022, ''Exercises in Gratitude'' became the single-longest {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} Fanfiction longest piece of ''Splatoon'' fanfiction on AO3, [=AO3=], [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].
























** Apparently, Murch is a fan of an old human-era show called [[Franchise/KamenRider "Ramen Rider"]].

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** Apparently, Murch is a fan of an old human-era show called [[Franchise/KamenRider "Ramen Rider"]].Rider"]].
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* Obstructivebureaucrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.

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* ObstructiveBeaurocrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.

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* ObstructiveBeaurocrat: Obstructivebureaucrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.
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* ObstructiveBeurocrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.

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* ObstructiveBeurocrat: ObstructiveBeaurocrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.
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*ObstructiveBeurocrat: The Inkopolis government is depicted as this, constantly prioritizing better-off areas (Read: everywhere except Barclay street) and doing the bare minimum to maintain public favor.
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* ShoutOut: In chapter 53, Donnie [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse picks up and carries Lawan while saying, "Aaaand, scoop!"]].

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* ShoutOut: In chapter 53, Donnie [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse picks up and carries Lawan while saying, "Aaaand, scoop!"]].scoop!"]].
**Apparently, Murch is a fan of an old human-era show called [[Franchise/KamenRider "Ramen Rider"]].
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]flood?]]

*ShoutOut: In chapter 53, Donnie [[WesternAnimation/TheOwlHouse picks up and carries Lawan while saying, "Aaaand, scoop!"]].
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* InterspeciesRelationship: Lawan, a sea urchin, is married to Donnie, a crab.

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*InterspeciesRelationship: Lawan, a sea urchin, is married to Donnie, a crab.
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*DarkFic: Not to the extent of others since there are some glimmers of hope, but compared to the source material, there's much more GrayAndGrayMorality, with no guarantee of a happy ending.


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*GrayAndGrayMorality: There are very few outright heroes, and equally few outright villains. Just about everyone is trying to protect themselves and their loved ones, and sometimes that just happens to be at odds with others.
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*ConspiracyTheorist: Janko the anemone is this, as he suspects that Grizzco is involved in shady activities. Naturally, the flood only exacerbates this.
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* RagtagBandOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]

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* RagtagBandOfMisfits: RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]
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** One of the tags is even [[LampshadeHanging "if you just started reading this fic then you have my express condolences"]]

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** One of the tags is even [[LampshadeHanging "if you just started reading this fic then you have my express condolences"]]condolences"]]

*RagtagBandOfMisfits: Let's see here. We have a group of teenagers, one of which oddly resembles the corpse of another, their disgruntled mother figure, a ConspiracyTheorist and his talking fish friend, and two con artists. [[SarcasmMode What do you mean, you wouldn't feel safe with them in the middle of a flood?]]
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This fanfic has recently become notable as the single-longest {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} Fanfiction on AO3, [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].

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This fanfic has recently become notable as the single-longest {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} Fanfiction on AO3, [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].here]].
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*DoorStopper: Oh yeah. This fanfiction consists of well over 600k words, going on 700k. There's already more than 100 chapters, and weekly updates.
**One of the tags is even [[LampshadeHanging "if you just started reading this fic then you have my express condolences"]]
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Exercises In Gratitude(The Barclay Street Flood) is a {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} fanfiction on {{Website/Archive Of Our Own}}.

When a dam bursts and a poor neighborhood in Inkopolis floods over, nine people, trapped in a crowded apartment building, struggle to manage the needs of the displaced former tenants.

The story opens with a 13-year-old inkling girl, Malley, waking up to find a girl who looks strangely like her. The girl, who takes on the moniker of Dead Malley, is revealed to be an octoling with plans for Inkopolis.

Plans which are summarily interrupted by the street flooding, forcing a RagtagBandOfMisfits to attempt to regain control over a rapidly deteriorating situation.

This fanfic has recently become notable as the single-longest {{VideoGame/Splatoon}} Fanfiction on AO3, [[DoorStopper at well over 600,000 words]]. If you want to try and catch up, you can find it [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/29597820/chapters/72752205 here]].

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