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* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lights wrapped around Mount Doom and dozens of Christmas trees.
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* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas Christmas party, complete with lights wrapped around Mount Doom and dozens of Christmas trees.
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** MCU Mandarin receives one when he tries to enter the Villains' Chrismas Party.
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** MCU Mandarin receives one when he tries to enter the Villains' Chrismas Christmas Party.
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* VillainsOutShopping: Apparently there's an annual Villain Chrismas party, with Taylor taking part in the current one.
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* VillainsOutShopping: Apparently there's an annual Villain Chrismas Christmas party, with Taylor taking part in the current one.
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Or, the one where Taylor ends up in the Vilain Pub during her Trigger and gets some carrier advice. Brockton Bay is not ready at all.
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Or, the one where Taylor ends up in the Vilain Pub during her Trigger and gets some carrier career advice. Brockton Bay is not ready at all.
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** She tries to cultivate similar reputation, since it helps her plans.
* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed. Emma has no real friends beside Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: The villains are all eager share their expertise with Taylor to help her become a great villain. However they make it clear that they aren't 'asking' if she wants their help. Either she's one of them, or she's a hero who wandered into the wrong pub.
* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed. Emma has no real friends beside Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: The villains are all eager share their expertise with Taylor to help her become a great villain. However they make it clear that they aren't 'asking' if she wants their help. Either she's one of them, or she's a hero who wandered into the wrong pub.
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** She tries to cultivate a similar reputation, reputation since it helps her plans.
* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed. Emma has no real friendsbeside besides Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send sent to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: The villains are all eager to share their expertise with Taylor to help her become a great villain.However However, they make it clear that they aren't 'asking' if she wants their help. Either she's one of them, or she's a hero who wandered into the wrong pub.
* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed. Emma has no real friends
* AnOfferYouCantRefuse: The villains are all eager to share their expertise with Taylor to help her become a great villain.
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** After her debut, Protectorate conclude that Arachne is someone that Triggered due to actions of a hero by being caught in a cape fight.
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** After her debut, Protectorate conclude concludes that Arachne is someone that Triggered due to the actions of a hero by being caught in a cape fight.
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** [[spoiler: After Taylor witnesses Dinah's abduction, she finds her wallet and makes the connection to Brockton's mayor. Unaware of Dinah's Thinker abilities, she concludes Coil is attempting to manipulate the mayor thorough her]].
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** [[spoiler: After Taylor witnesses Dinah's abduction, she finds her wallet and makes the connection to Brockton's mayor. Unaware of Dinah's Thinker abilities, she concludes Coil is attempting to manipulate the mayor thorough through her]].
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** [[spoiler: Averted with Brian. He only cares about Dinah's kidnapping because it was made public and it can hurt Aisha]].
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Or at least a lesser evil, but Coil has no idea why Arachne does anything, since she wouldn't ''directly'' profit from those actions, in money or political power.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Or at least a lesser evil, but Coil has no idea why Arachne does anything, since she wouldn't ''directly'' profit from those actions, in money or political power.
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** [[spoiler: Averted with Brian. He only cares about Dinah's kidnapping because it was made public and it can hurt Aisha]].
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Or at least a lesser evil, but Coil has no idea why Arachne doesanything, anything since she wouldn't ''directly'' profit from those actions, in money or political power.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Or at least a lesser evil, but Coil has no idea why Arachne does
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* EvilIsHammy: The villains hear about Taylor's world, and they are disappointed at how dull the villains are. When Zoom, The Joker, and Maleficent are attacked by Skidmark, they're amazed at how Skidmark doesn't even try a good monologue.
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* EvilIsHammy: The villains hear about Taylor's world, and they are disappointed at how dull the villains are. When Skidmark attacks Zoom, The Joker, and Maleficent are attacked by Skidmark, they're amazed at how Skidmark doesn't even try a good monologue.
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** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or change [[spoiler:by taking an advantage of the resentment among the less well-off population]].
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** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, system so that they will have to either crash or change [[spoiler:by taking an advantage of the resentment among the less well-off population]].
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* FateWorseThanDeath: The Merchants who has the misfortune to engage Maleficient. She just shoved her opponents into a pillar of melted obsidian, while taking the time to make sure they would remain alive and burning in eternal Greek Fire.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: The Merchants who has have the misfortune to engage Maleficient. She just shoved her opponents into a pillar of melted obsidian, while taking the time to make sure they would remain alive and burning in eternal Greek Fire.
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** Arranged for evidence of Shadow Stalker's inaction in a rape case to surface, leading to a massive lawsuit pursued by Carol Dallon;
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** Arranged for evidence of Shadow Stalker's inaction in a rape case to the surface, leading to a massive lawsuit pursued by Carol Dallon;
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** [[spoiler:Got a trio of independent capes to clear out a bunch of Merchant stashhouses (for a cut of the loot, of course)]];
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** [[spoiler:Got a trio of independent capes to clear out a bunch of Merchant stashhouses stash houses (for a cut of the loot, of course)]];
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** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', after all, plus getting tips from Moriarty and The Master.
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** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', after all, plus getting get tips from Moriarty and The Master.
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* MoralityKitchenSink: The villains in the bar are all, well, villains. However, the type and scope of them varies wildly- from honorable villains who wouldn't hurt a child, villains who had good intentions, all the way up to literal gods of evil and omnicidal maniacs.
* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lights wraped around Mount Doom and dozens of chrismas trees.
* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lights wraped around Mount Doom and dozens of chrismas trees.
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* MoralityKitchenSink: The villains in the bar are all, well, villains. However, the type and scope of them varies vary wildly- from honorable villains who wouldn't hurt a child, villains who had good intentions, all the way up to literal gods of evil and omnicidal maniacs.
* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lightswraped wrapped around Mount Doom and dozens of chrismas Christmas trees.
* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lights
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** MCU Mandarin receives one when he tries to enter Villains' Chrismas Party.
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** MCU Mandarin receives one when he tries to enter the Villains' Chrismas Party.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The delivery guy who got traumatised by Arachne.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The delivery guy who got traumatised traumatized by Arachne.
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** Protectorate. Piggot even lampshades this, thinking that three fourths of their work time is taken by PR events.
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** Protectorate. Piggot even lampshades this, thinking that three fourths three-fourths of their work time is taken by PR events.
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* SoleSurvivor: A single Merchant was spared Joker, Zoom and Maleficient's revenge... for a few hours because Zoom wanted her to provide the police with his name. Then he just broke into the interrogation room and snapped her neck.
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* SoleSurvivor: A single Merchant was spared Joker, Zoom Zoom, and Maleficient's revenge... for a few hours because Zoom wanted her to provide the police with his name. Then he just broke into the interrogation room and snapped her neck.
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* TheStarscream: The TropeNamer is name dropped, and deconstructed- because he backstabs everyone to get higher in rank, even when it would make things worse for him, no one trusts him or wants to work with him. Taylor openly uses him as an example as to why she wouldn't be this kind of villain.
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* TheStarscream: The TropeNamer is name dropped, name-dropped, and deconstructed- because he backstabs everyone to get higher in rank, even when it would make things worse for him, no one trusts him or wants to work with him. Taylor openly uses him as an example as to of why she wouldn't be this kind of villain.
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* SpottingTheThread: [[spoiler:Once they were tipped off, the PRT quickly realizes that Coil got various independents to stage distractions since those attacks occurred within ''minutes'' of each other and drew heroes away from Dinah's kidnapping]].
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* AdultFear: Exploited by Arachne to manipulate some of her targets:
** [[spoiler:She tips off Wards' parents to their children's exact situation to turn them against the PRT]];
** [[spoiler:She manipulates the dockworkers by pointing out how many of their friends and relatives were hurt by gangs because the heroes did nothing to improve the situation in the city]];
** [[spoiler:She tips off Wards' parents to their children's exact situation to turn them against the PRT]];
** [[spoiler:She manipulates the dockworkers by pointing out how many of their friends and relatives were hurt by gangs because the heroes did nothing to improve the situation in the city]];
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** [[spoiler:She tips off Wards' parents to their children's exact situation to turn them against the PRT]];
** [[spoiler:She manipulates the dockworkers by pointing out how many of their friends and relatives were hurt by gangs because the heroes did nothing to improve the situation in the city]];
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* RealityEnsues:
** Since Protectorate lists all their PR events of their website, gangs regularly stage attacks during that time as they know most of heroes will be occupied somewhere else. On the other hand, Protectorate expects those attacks, so they leave some people behind to deal with them.
** Emma isn't actually liked by many people, with only Sophia protecting her from retaliation. As Taylor points out, without her "attack dog", she will soon be targeted by E88, ABB and even civilian kids that she annoyed.
** [[spoiler:Once they were tipped off, the PRT quickly realizes that Coil got various independents to stage distractions since those attacks occurred within ''minutes'' of each other and drew heroes away from Dinah's kidnapping]].
** Since Protectorate lists all their PR events of their website, gangs regularly stage attacks during that time as they know most of heroes will be occupied somewhere else. On the other hand, Protectorate expects those attacks, so they leave some people behind to deal with them.
** Emma isn't actually liked by many people, with only Sophia protecting her from retaliation. As Taylor points out, without her "attack dog", she will soon be targeted by E88, ABB and even civilian kids that she annoyed.
** [[spoiler:Once they were tipped off, the PRT quickly realizes that Coil got various independents to stage distractions since those attacks occurred within ''minutes'' of each other and drew heroes away from Dinah's kidnapping]].
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* DeadFic: Not updated since the spring of 2019, leaving a cliffhanger at [[spoiler: Dinah's kidnapping]], and the SpaceBattles thread was the victim of a Thread Necromancy incident.
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* DeadFic: Not updated since the spring of 2019, leaving a cliffhanger at [[spoiler: Dinah's kidnapping]], and the SpaceBattles Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom thread was the victim of a Thread Necromancy incident.
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* ThenLetMeBeEvil: Taylor's reaction to finding out Sophia is Shadowstalker.
---> ''Sophia Hess is a hero''.
---> But uncertainty turned to steel as she lifted her gaze up from the tile floor.
---> Sophia Hess wanted to play being a hero?
---> Fine, then it looked like she ''was'' going to be a Villain.
---> ''Sophia Hess is a hero''.
---> But uncertainty turned to steel as she lifted her gaze up from the tile floor.
---> Sophia Hess wanted to play being a hero?
---> Fine, then it looked like she ''was'' going to be a Villain.
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* MoralityKitchenSink: The villains in the bar are all, well, villains. However, the type and scope of them varies wildly- from honorable villains who wouldn't hurt a child, villains who had good intentions, all the way up to literal gods of evil and omnicidal maniacs.
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* BlindObedience: Miss Militia has shades of this, combined with SelectiveObliviousness and [[MyCountryRightOrWrong Protectorate, Right Or Wrong]]
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* BlindObedience: Miss Militia has shades of this, combined with SelectiveObliviousness and [[MyCountryRightOrWrong Protectorate, Right Or Wrong]]Wrong]]. In her defense, those strategies absolutely ''worked'' for her- she was taken from a war-torn country where she triggered because, as a child soldier, she was made to scout for land mines. The system that took her in and gave her the life she has now is not perfect, but she latched on to it since it was much better than what she had before.
** The Joker, despite his disgust at the villain scene of Brockton, chooses not to show the city what a ''real'' criminal is like, because he knows that this city is Taylor's, and it'd ruin her education.
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* EvilIsHammy: The villains hear about Taylor's world, and they are disappointed at how dull the villains are.
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* EvilIsHammy: The villains hear about Taylor's world, and they are disappointed at how dull the villains are. When Zoom, The Joker, and Maleficent are attacked by Skidmark, they're amazed at how Skidmark doesn't even try a good monologue.
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** [[spoiler:Calvert when he realises somebody framed him and leaked Dinah's kidnapping to the news]].
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** [[spoiler:Calvert when he realises realizes somebody framed him and leaked Dinah's kidnapping to the news]].
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* PlausibleDeniability: Apparently Piggot knew about Shadow Stalker's unauthories patrols and lethal weaponry, but did nothing to stop her since it wasn't making any problems for the PRT.
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* PlausibleDeniability: Apparently Piggot knew about Shadow Stalker's unauthories unauthorized patrols and lethal weaponry, but did nothing to stop her since it wasn't making any problems for the PRT. PRT and was generally very effective in hunting criminals.
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** [[spoiler:Once they were tipped off, the PRT quickly realises that Coil got various independents to stage distractions since those attacks occured within ''minutes'' of each other and drew heroes away from Dinah's kidnapping]].
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** [[spoiler:Once they were tipped off, the PRT quickly realises realizes that Coil got various independents to stage distractions since those attacks occured occurred within ''minutes'' of each other and drew heroes away from Dinah's kidnapping]].
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* TheStarscream: The TropeNamer is name dropped, and deconstructed- because he backstabs everyone to get higher in rank, even when it would make things worse for him, no one trusts him or wants to work with him. Taylor openly uses him as an example as to why she wouldn't be this kind of villain.
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* XanatosGambit: Makuta advises Taylor to do this sort of thing, as it is what separates the lesser villains from the greater ones- to hide objectives within objectives so that no matter what you do, ''you win.''
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* BreakingSpeech: Just before leaving Winslow for the last time, Taylor tells Emma just how many enemies she's made in the school with her behavior, and how the only thing that was holding them back was fear of Sophia. And now that Emma's rabid attack dog had been stripped of her probation and sent to juvie, they were free to act. Before Taylor leaves she can already tell that some members of Emma's clique are already thinking of cutting ties to save themselves.
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** Villains warn Taylor against doing it since Murphy is always watching.
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** Villains warn Taylor against doing it since Murphy is always watching. They have a SwearJar for when people make that mistake.
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* EvilerThanThou: The villains of the pub are disgusted by the fact that most supervillains in Brockton Bay never amount to more than property damage and street crime, and decide to teach Taylor how to do villainy ''[[DoWrongRight properly]]''.
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** It even gets lampshaded at the pub. When Taylor tells her colleagues how often the Protectorate does PR events, Palpatine wonders how they find time to get actual work done, and she tells him that as a rule, they don't.
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** When Joker offers Taylor a glass of beer, Palpatine destroys it immediately, because Taylor is underage and the Villains may be evil, but not irresponsible.
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* {{Mordor}}: The TropeNamer shows up as the location of Villain Chrismas party, complete with lights wraped around Mount Doom and dozens of chrismas trees.
* NoodleIncident: Bonesaw once sent a package containing a custom-made virus to the Youth Guard.
* NoodleIncident: Bonesaw once sent a package containing a custom-made virus to the Youth Guard.
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In one world, Taylor Hebert became a villain by accident. In another, Taylor gets some mentoring in villainy.
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'''Official summary:''' In one world, Taylor Hebert became a villain by accident. In another, Taylor gets some mentoring in villainy.
villainy.
Or, the one where Taylor ends up in the Vilain Pub during her Trigger and gets some carrier advice. Brockton Bay is not ready at all.
Or, the one where Taylor ends up in the Vilain Pub during her Trigger and gets some carrier advice. Brockton Bay is not ready at all.
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* AdultFear: Exploited by Arachne to manipulate some of her targets.
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* AdultFear: Exploited by Arachne to manipulate some of her targets. targets:
** [[spoiler:She tips off Wards' parents to their children's exact situation to turn them against the PRT]];
** [[spoiler:She manipulates the dockworkers by pointing out how many of their friends and relatives were hurt by gangs because the heroes did nothing to improve the situation in the city]];
** [[spoiler:She tips off Wards' parents to their children's exact situation to turn them against the PRT]];
** [[spoiler:She manipulates the dockworkers by pointing out how many of their friends and relatives were hurt by gangs because the heroes did nothing to improve the situation in the city]];
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* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed by Taylor. Emma has no real friends beside Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
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* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed by Taylor.Deconstructed. Emma has no real friends beside Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
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* BeneathNotice: Coil is this on the local cape scene [[spoiler:right until Taylor drags him into the spotlight]].
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* BeneathNotice: Coil is this on the local cape scene [[spoiler:right until Taylor ''somebody'' drags him into the spotlight]].
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* BrokenPedestal: Taylor loses faith in heroes when she learns that Sophia is a Ward.
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* BrokenPedestal: Taylor loses all faith in heroes when she learns that Sophia is a Ward.
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** [[spoiler: After Taylor witnesses Dinah's abduction, she finds her wallet and makes the connection to Brockton's mayor. Unaware of Dinah's Thinker abilities, she concludes Coil is attempting to manipulate the mayor thorough her.]]
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** Coil thinks Arachne may be a vanguard of a larger organization, especially in the aftermath of the Merchants' massacre.
** [[spoiler: After Taylor witnesses Dinah's abduction, she finds her wallet and makes the connection to Brockton's mayor. Unaware of Dinah's Thinker abilities, she concludes Coil is attempting to manipulate the mayor thoroughher.]]her]].
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Discussed. Taylor very carefully plans her debut as Arachne, knowing that it will make or break her reputation as a villain. [[spoiler:It goes off spectacularly]].
** [[spoiler: After Taylor witnesses Dinah's abduction, she finds her wallet and makes the connection to Brockton's mayor. Unaware of Dinah's Thinker abilities, she concludes Coil is attempting to manipulate the mayor thorough
* EstablishingCharacterMoment: Discussed. Taylor very carefully plans her debut as Arachne, knowing that it will make or break her reputation as a villain. [[spoiler:It goes off spectacularly]].
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** Taylor checked. It's perfectly acceptable for a villain.
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** Taylor checked. It's perfectly acceptable for a villain.villain [[spoiler:which is why she decides to help Dinah]].
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* EvilMentor: The villains of the pub start to function as mentors to Taylor.
* EvilPlan: Discussed. Villains tell Taylor to find some kind of a goal, even an unattainable one, to have a direction and drive to follow.
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or change.
* EvilPlan: Discussed. Villains tell Taylor to find some kind of a goal, even an unattainable one, to have a direction and drive to follow.
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or change.
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* EvilMentor: The villains of the pub Pub start to function as mentors to Taylor.
* EvilPlan: Discussed. Villains tell Taylor to find some kind of a goal, even an unattainable one, to have a direction and drive tofollow.move, and to carefully plan her moves so she doesn't back herself into a corner.
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash orchange. change [[spoiler:by taking an advantage of the resentment among the less well-off population]].
* EvilPlan: Discussed. Villains tell Taylor to find some kind of a goal, even an unattainable one, to have a direction and drive to
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or
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* FramingTheGuiltyParty: [[spoiler: Taylor does this to Coil for his kidnapping of Dinah, sending a fake ransom note to the mayor and making ''sure'' that the news leaked to the press]].
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* FramingTheGuiltyParty: [[spoiler: Taylor Arachne does this to Coil for his kidnapping of Dinah, sending a fake ransom note to the mayor and making ''sure'' that the news leaked to the press]].
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* InexplicablyAwesome: Taylor somehow ends up at the pub during her trigger, with no one sure on the ''how''.
* JustAKid: Piggot's opinion when she learns Arachne is no older than 20.
* JustAKid: Piggot's opinion when she learns Arachne is no older than 20.
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* InexplicablyAwesome: Taylor somehow ends up at the pub Pub during her trigger, with no one sure on the ''how''.
* JustAKid: Piggot's opinion when she learns Arachne is no older than20.20, thinking she's just some teenager on [[ScrewTheRulesIHaveSupernaturalPowers a power trip]].
* JustAKid: Piggot's opinion when she learns Arachne is no older than
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** [[spoiler: Averted for Taylor, who considers him a wannabe and a nuisance.]]
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** [[spoiler: Averted for Taylor, Arachne, who considers him a wannabe and a nuisance.]]
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* BeneathNotice: Coil is this on the local cape scene [[spoiler:right until Taylor drags him into the spotlight]].
* BigWhat: [[spoiler:Calvert has an internal one when he realises someone framed him]].
* BigWhat: [[spoiler:Calvert has an internal one when he realises someone framed him]].
* FantasticRacism: Piggot is prejudiced against parahumans, as per canon. It's exploited by Coil since he knows she won't bring in Thinker support or pay attention to any unpowered crimes.
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* FramingTheGuiltyParty: [[spoiler: Taylor does this to Coil for his kidnapping of Dinah, sending a faked ransom note to the mayor and making ''sure'' that the news leaked to the press]].
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* FramingTheGuiltyParty: [[spoiler: Taylor does this to Coil for his kidnapping of Dinah, sending a faked fake ransom note to the mayor and making ''sure'' that the news leaked to the press]].
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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: Trainwreck made sure that his armour couldn't be easily destroyed or taken apart by Brutes. [[spoiler:So he's unable to take it off in time before it (and he) overheats during a fight with Spitfire's group]].
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* VillainWithGoodPublicity: Arachne slowly cultivates this in certain circles.
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* AdultFear: Exploited by Arachne to manipulate some of her targets.
* AlphaBitch: Deconstructed by Taylor. Emma has no real friends beside Sophia and once her "attack dog" is send to juvie, her powerbase crumbles completely.
* TheChessmaster: Arachne. Everything she does somehow furthers her goals, often without leaving any links to herself.
* EvilCannotComprehendGood: Or at least a lesser evil, but Coil has no idea why Arachne does anything, since she wouldn't ''directly'' profit from those actions, in money or political power.
* JustAKid: Piggot's opinion when she learns Arachne is no older than 20.
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** [[spoiler:Convinced Sophia's handler to hand over heroes' personal files]];
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** [[spoiler:Convinced Sophia's handler to hand over heroes' personal files]]; files to her]];
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** [[spoiler:Convinced some of the dockworkers to set a trap for Hookwolf]].
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** [[spoiler:Convinced some of the dockworkers to set a trap for Hookwolf]]. Hookwolf]];
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** In some myths, Arachne created a tapestry depicting gods' flaws and mistakes. Taylor wants to expose the inadequacy and hipocrisy of the current hero system.
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** In some myths, Arachne created a tapestry depicting gods' flaws and mistakes. Taylor wants to expose the inadequacy and hipocrisy hypocrisy of the current hero system.
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* OhCrap: [[spoiler: The Undersiders have a massive one when they learn why the boss needed a distraction... ''from tv news'']].
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* OhCrap: OhCrap:
** The guy who delivered Arachne's... purchases, once he sees what's inside the packaging.
** [[spoiler: The Undersiders have a massive one when they learn why the boss needed a distraction... ''from tv news'']].
** The guy who delivered Arachne's... purchases, once he sees what's inside the packaging.
** [[spoiler: The Undersiders have a massive one when they learn why the boss needed a distraction... ''from tv news'']].
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: The delivery guy who got traumatised by Arachne.
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** [[spoiler: Provided Youth Guard with Wards' files, including the ones that confirm they aren't getting required support and therapy, which prompts ''another'' lawsuit from ''Quinn Calle'']];
** [[spoiler: Informed Wards' parents of the limited support and heavy scrutiny their children receive in the program (we see only Clockblocker's mother, who later goes to Youth Guard)]];
** [[spoiler: Got a trio of independent capes to clear out a bunch of Merchant stashhouses (for a cut of the loot, of course)]];
** [[spoiler: Framed Coil for the kidnapping of Dinah Alcott, putting Thomas Calvert against the wall as the PRT's starting to realize the extent of Coil's real ambition and power]];
** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', after all.
** [[spoiler: Informed Wards' parents of the limited support and heavy scrutiny their children receive in the program (we see only Clockblocker's mother, who later goes to Youth Guard)]];
** [[spoiler: Got a trio of independent capes to clear out a bunch of Merchant stashhouses (for a cut of the loot, of course)]];
** [[spoiler: Framed Coil for the kidnapping of Dinah Alcott, putting Thomas Calvert against the wall as the PRT's starting to realize the extent of Coil's real ambition and power]];
** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', after all.
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** [[spoiler: Provided [[spoiler:Convinced some of the dockworkers to set a trap for Hookwolf]].
** [[spoiler:Provided Youth Guard with Wards' files, including the ones that confirm they aren't getting required support and therapy, which prompts ''another'' lawsuit from ''Quinn Calle'']];
**[[spoiler: Informed [[spoiler:Informed Wards' parents of the limited support and heavy scrutiny their children receive in the program (we see only Clockblocker's mother, who later goes to Youth Guard)]];
**[[spoiler: Got [[spoiler:Got a trio of independent capes to clear out a bunch of Merchant stashhouses (for a cut of the loot, of course)]];
**[[spoiler: Framed [[spoiler:Framed Coil for the kidnapping of Dinah Alcott, putting Thomas Calvert against the wall as the PRT's starting to realize the extent of Coil's real ambition and power]];
** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', afterall.all, plus getting tips from Moriarty and The Master.
** [[spoiler:Provided Youth Guard with Wards' files, including the ones that confirm they aren't getting required support and therapy, which prompts ''another'' lawsuit from ''Quinn Calle'']];
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** She ''is'' getting mentored by [[Toys/{{Bionicle}} Makuta Teridax]], one of the greatest manipulators ''ever'', after
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* FalseReassurance: Arachne tells Sophia's PRT handler she will be given everything she's earned and a safe place in exchange for copying the Ward files for her. [[spoiler:She gets a stack of false bills with only a real one at the top and gets drugged at the wheel of her van, ensuring she'll wake up in jail.]]
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* EvilPlan: Discussed. Villains tell Taylor to find some kind of a goal, even an unattainable one, to have a direction and drive to follow.
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or change.
* FalseReassurance: Arachne tells Sophia's PRT handler she will be given everything she's earned and a safe place in exchange for copying the Ward files for her. [[spoiler:She gets a stack of false billswith only a real one at the top and gets drugged at the wheel of her van, and framed for possession, ensuring she'll wake up in jail.]]jail]].
** She settles on exposing the hypocrisy of the current hero system, so that they will have to either crash or change.
* FalseReassurance: Arachne tells Sophia's PRT handler she will be given everything she's earned and a safe place in exchange for copying the Ward files for her. [[spoiler:She gets a stack of false bills
** [[spoiler:Convinced Sophia's handler to hand over heroes' personal files]];
* RevengeBeforeReason: Villains warn Taylor against doing it [[spoiler:after she mentions framing the handler]].
* TastesLikePurple: According to Joker, Brockton Bay smells like paranoia and terror.
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---> '''Armsmaster:''' She controls ''bugs'' Director. I think we can take her.
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---> '''Armsmaster:''' She controls ''bugs'' ''bugs'', Director. [[MythologyGag I think we can take her.]]
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* VillainsOutShopping: Apparently there's an annual Villain Chrismas party, with Taylor taking part in the current one.