History Fanfic / ElementalsOfHarmony

23rd May '17 3:08:26 PM Malady
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: Averted, several times. Especially by Pinkie, who at times literally [[FightLikeACardPlayer fights like a card player]].

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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: Averted, several times. Especially by Pinkie, who at times literally [[FightLikeACardPlayer fights like a card player]].player]], as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/8 Allies Assembling]]::
--> The earth pony smiled. "... [W]hen Avatar of Discord enters the battlefield, I have to sack it unless I discard two cards. I went with Anger to give her haste and Fiery Temper so I could cast it via madness. So now, the Laughter Elemental's dead and we've got a five-three flier to take on the others!"



* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]:

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* GroinAttack: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]:Plans Making Contact]]:



* ProlongedPrologue: The titular monsters don't even show up until Chapter 7.

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* ProlongedPrologue: The titular monsters don't even show up until Chapter 7.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/7 the seventh chapter, First In, Last Out]].



* PunBasedTitle: Several chapter titles are card game puns. Most egregious is [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=78991 "Plight of Foal's Betrayal."]]

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* PunBasedTitle: Several chapter titles are card game puns. Most egregious is "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/10 Plight of Foal's Betrayal]]", a pun on [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=78991 "Plight "Night of Foal's Souls' Betrayal."]]
23rd May '17 2:58:40 PM Malady
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* FacinatingEyebrow: From Scootaloo during her negotiations with the Loyalty Elemental in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/8 Allies Assembling]]:
--> One eyebrow slowly rose.



* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]: "Also to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)"

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* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]: "Also 2]]:
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to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)"gingerly)[.]



-->She turned to Pinkie Pie for a more sensible explanation (and what a sorry state of affairs that implied.)

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-->She --> She turned to Pinkie Pie for a more sensible explanation (and what a sorry state of affairs that implied.)



* ObfuscatingInsanity / TheWonka: It's not entirely clear which Pinkie falls under. It's entirely possible that's she's ''both''.
* OCStandIn: The protagonist is an [[EnsembleDarkhorse Ensemble Darkpony]], after all.

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* ObfuscatingInsanity / ObfuscatingInsanity: In combination with TheWonka: It's not entirely clear which Pinkie falls under. It's entirely possible that's she's ''both''.
* OCStandIn: The protagonist is an [[EnsembleDarkhorse Ensemble Darkpony]], {{Ensemble Dark|horse}}pony, after all.



-->Goblins were annoying, present in nearly every plane, came in only one quantity (too many), and had an impressive talent for killing themselves. Humans were largely similar, but generally had better hygiene and on occasion had better manners.

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-->Goblins --> Goblins were annoying, present in nearly every plane, came in only one quantity (too many), and had an impressive talent for killing themselves. Humans were largely similar, but generally had better hygiene and on occasion had better manners.



* PunctuatedForEmphasis: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/6 Omens and Portents]]:
"As I recall, you had no patience for matters of court at the time. Something about some charming young stallion."\\
"Oh, right."\\
--> "It was either Aristrotle or Brayto if I remember correctly."\\
"Oh. Right."\\
"You did court both master and pupil, didn't you?"\\
"'''OH. RIGHT'''." The reverb sent chills down Ditzy's spine and made her very grateful she'd visited the bathroom prior to the meal.\\
Celestia seemed wholly unfazed. "Why Luna, that was a near flawless impression of Aunt Teleute!"



* RetiredBadass: Ditzy, being a Planeswalker whose put planeswalking behind her and is trying to live a normal life with her daughter in Ponyville, certainly fits the bill.



* RetiredBadass: Ditzy, being a Planeswalker whose put planeswalking behind her and is trying to live a normal life with her daughter in Ponyville, certainly fits the bill.


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* RuleOfThree: Some conversations involve three parts, such as Luna's repetitions of "Oh, right." from [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/6 Omens and Portents]].
14th Feb '17 12:10:21 AM Theriocephalus
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to [[turn Ditzy into spoiler:an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.]]

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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to [[turn [[spoiler:turn Ditzy into spoiler:an an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.]]
19th Dec '16 1:08:45 PM Malady
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* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]: "Also to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)"
16th Dec '16 5:00:07 PM Malady
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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and MagicTheGathering by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane). There is also a one-shot continuation, ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' which is about Ditzy's first meeting with Starlight Glimmer.

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]], ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333685/where-parallel-lines-converge here]].

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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and MagicTheGathering by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane). There are entries in the anthology ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle'' that are canon, and there is also a one-shot continuation, ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' which is about Ditzy's first meeting with Starlight Glimmer.

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]], ''Story Shuffle'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]], and ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333685/where-parallel-lines-converge here]].
13th Dec '16 7:49:51 PM MetaFour
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Compare and contrast with Fanfic/TheAlarmaverse.
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14th Nov '16 4:27:21 PM Malady
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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and MagicTheGathering by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane).

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], and ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]].

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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and MagicTheGathering by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane).

plane). There is also a one-shot continuation, ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' which is about Ditzy's first meeting with Starlight Glimmer.

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], and ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]], ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333685/where-parallel-lines-converge here]].



* EldritchAbomination: In the one-shot story ''Where Parallel Lines Meet'', Starlight Glimmer's attempt to strip Ditzy of her cutie mark [[spoiler: transforms her into a new Eldrazi. Thankfully, the Elements of Harmony are able to reverse the change.]]



* GoneHorriblyRight: Starlight successfully manages to use the cutie unmarking spell on Ditzy Doo. The problem is that Ditzy's mark is for planeswalking, so when Starlight ripped out Ditzy's mark, she also ripped out her Spark. And it turns out that if you rip out a Planeswalker's spark, you get a new Eldrazi.
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to turn Ditzy into an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.



* OurMonstersAreWeird: Really the only trope that covers the sheer ''bizzareness'' of Ditzy's titan form.
--> The head of the creature seemed to be nothing but a tremendous, lidless eyeball with seven different pupils wandering about the sphere at random. Behind it was a stalk-like body, mottled in ash gray, bruise puce, bile yellow, and colors that Starlight perceived yet her mind refused to identify. The enormous form branched into three pairs of wide arrays of tendrils, like the blood vessels of vast, invisible flippers. Their subtle flexing as they impossibly held the creature aloft made it clear that there was no more to them than those undulating, mazelike complexes of flesh. The tail branched into trailing, dangling lengths of living tissue. Some brushed against the peak that housed the Cutie Vault. Where they did, the rock turned iridescent, its edges visibly softening like an ice sculpture in an oven.


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[[folder:Where Parallel Lines Converge]]
* EldritchAbomination: In the one-shot story ''Where Parallel Lines Meet'', Starlight Glimmer's attempt to strip Ditzy of her cutie mark [[spoiler: transforms her into a new Eldrazi. Thankfully, the Elements of Harmony are able to reverse the change.]]
* GoneHorriblyRight: Starlight successfully manages to use the cutie unmarking spell on Ditzy Doo. The problem is that Ditzy's mark is for planeswalking, so when Starlight ripped out Ditzy's mark, she also ripped out her Spark. And it turns out that if you rip out a Planeswalker's spark, [[spoiler:you get a new Eldrazi.]]
* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to [[turn Ditzy into spoiler:an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.]]
* OurMonstersAreWeird: Really the only trope that covers the sheer ''bizzareness'' of [[spoiler:Ditzy's titan form.]]
--> The head spoiler:of the creature seemed to be nothing but a tremendous, lidless eyeball with seven different pupils wandering about the sphere at random. Behind it was a stalk-like body, mottled in ash gray, bruise puce, bile yellow, and colors that Starlight perceived yet her mind refused to identify. The enormous form branched into three pairs of wide arrays of tendrils, like the blood vessels of vast, invisible flippers. Their subtle flexing as they impossibly held the creature aloft made it clear that there was no more to them than those undulating, mazelike complexes of flesh. The tail branched into trailing, dangling lengths of living tissue. [[spoiler:Some brushed against the peak that housed the Cutie Vault. Where they did, the rock turned iridescent, its edges visibly softening like an ice sculpture in an oven.]]
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13th Nov '16 5:58:02 AM ReaderAt2046
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* GoneHorriblyRight: Starlight successfully manages to use the cutie unmarking spell on Ditzy Doo. The problem is that Ditzy's mark is for planeswalking, so when Starlight ripped out Ditzy's mark, she also ripped out her Spark. And it turns out that if you rip out a Planeswalker's spark, you get a new Eldrazi.
26th Oct '16 1:54:34 PM dvorak
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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Dinky's AntiMagic talent is already {{Badass}} enough, but it becomes ten times more awesome when we learn that it lets her ''erase a pony's cutie mark''.

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* HeartIsAnAwesomePower: Dinky's AntiMagic talent is already {{Badass}} badass enough, but it becomes ten times more awesome when we learn that it lets her ''erase a pony's cutie mark''.
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