History Fanfic / ElementalsOfHarmony

31st Jul '17 7:51:40 AM SeptimusHeap
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** The capital (and only) city of the lagomaths is [[SdrawkcabName Smada]][[WatershipDown drachir]].

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** The capital (and only) city of the lagomaths is [[SdrawkcabName Smada]][[WatershipDown Smada]][[Literature/WatershipDown drachir]].
8th Jul '17 10:06:36 PM Orbiting
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** Five planetary pony princesses that make sure the world works the way it should. [[{{Exalted}} Hmm...]]

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** Five planetary pony princesses that make sure the world works the way it should. [[{{Exalted}} [[TabletopGame/{{Exalted}} Hmm...]]
7th Jul '17 5:09:30 PM mangamanic
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* NotAHyperbole: Pinkie's cutie mark story ending in "And that's how Equestria was made.".

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* NotAHyperbole: NotHyperbole: Pinkie's cutie mark story ending in "And that's how Equestria was made.".
7th Jul '17 5:08:31 PM mangamanic
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* NotAHyperbole: Pinkie's cutie mark story ending in "And that's how Equestria was made.".
1st Jul '17 6:40:39 AM Theriocephalus
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* AdaptationalBadass: The Strings section of the Office Of Parallel Realities is headed by a version of BonBon who ''ate the moon and sun'' "like celestial truffles", ''deposed Luna and Celestia'', and then restriped the skies with the "linnea", strands of light that needed no guidance. She left her ponies to rule themselves (which they did, very successfully).

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* AdaptationalBadass: The Strings section of the Office Of of Parallel Realities is headed by a version of BonBon Bon Bon who ''ate the moon and sun'' "like celestial truffles", ''deposed Luna and Celestia'', and then restriped the skies with the "linnea", strands of light that needed no guidance. She left her ponies to rule themselves (which they did, very successfully).



* AltumVidetur: Two chapter titles have been in Latin, "Ave Discordia" and "Fiat Harmonia." Interestingly, both involve a deity getting transformed into {{MineralMacGuffin}}s.
** A third, "Quod Cucurbita," breaks the pattern for the sake of an WebComic/MSPaintAdventures reference.

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* AltumVidetur: Two chapter titles have been in Latin, "Ave Discordia" and "Fiat Harmonia." Interestingly, both involve a deity [[spoiler: getting transformed into {{MineralMacGuffin}}s.
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{{Mineral MacGuffin}}s]]. A third, "Quod Cucurbita," Cucurbita", breaks the pattern for the sake of an WebComic/MSPaintAdventures ''WebComic/MSPaintAdventures'' reference.



* CrisisCrossover: In the latest chapter, the Sweetie Belle from Fanfic/TheSweetieChroniclesFragments shows up in the middle of this world's Ponyville. While she herself is sort of ticked off to find a world where her particular situation gets government funding and such, Lyra is more concerned about some of the scarier timelines she's heading to. Ditzy, on the other hand, is more wiling to let her finish her mission ASAP.

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* CrisisCrossover: In the latest chapter, the Sweetie Belle from Fanfic/TheSweetieChroniclesFragments ''Fanfic/TheSweetieChroniclesFragments'' shows up in the middle of this world's Ponyville. While she herself is sort of ticked off to find a world where her particular situation gets government funding and such, Lyra is more concerned about some of the scarier timelines she's heading to. Ditzy, on the other hand, is more wiling to let her finish her mission ASAP.



* EvilCounterpart: Played with. Lauren and Discord are Lawful and Chaotic Counterparts. They're also [[EvilTwin twins]].
** And just like as the Elements of Harmony are made from Lauren's body, ''Ave Discordia'' creates the Elements of Discord: Chaos, Mischief, Charisma, Ambition, Vanity and Cunning.

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* EvilCounterpart: Played with. Lauren and Discord are Lawful and Chaotic Counterparts. They're also [[EvilTwin twins]].
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twins]]. And just like as the Elements of Harmony are made [[spoiler: from Lauren's body, body]], ''Ave Discordia'' creates the Elements of Discord: Chaos, Mischief, Charisma, Ambition, Vanity and Cunning.
17th Jun '17 9:26:14 AM nombretomado
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** [[JoeQuesada "I'm magic! I don't have to explain anything!"]]

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** [[JoeQuesada [[Creator/JoeQuesada "I'm magic! I don't have to explain anything!"]]
9th Jun '17 8:21:50 PM Theriocephalus
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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic and MagicTheGathering by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane). There are entries in the anthology ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle'' that are canon, and there is also a one-shot continuation, ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' which is about Ditzy's first meeting with Starlight Glimmer.

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]], ''Story Shuffle'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]], and ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333685/where-parallel-lines-converge here]].

Compare and contrast with Fanfic/TheAlarmaverse.

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A {{crossover}} of WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and MagicTheGathering ''TabletopGame/MagicTheGathering'' by [=FanOfMostEverything=]. Currently complete, with two SequelSeries in progress. The first, ''Sideboard of Harmony'', is a collection of {{drabble}}s. The second, ''My Little Praetor: Phthisis is Magic'', is about the Phyrexian invasion of Ungula (the ponies' plane). There are entries in the anthology ''Fanfic/StoryShuffle'' that are canon, and there is also a one-shot continuation, ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' which is about Ditzy's first meeting with Starlight Glimmer.

The story can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/Elementals-of-Harmony here]], the Sideboard ''Sideboard'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/17719/Sideboard-of-Harmony here]], ''My Little Praetor'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/29275/My-Little-Praetor%3A-Phthisis-is-Magic here]], ''Story Shuffle'' [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/216813/story-shuffle here]], and ''Where Parallel Lines Converge'' [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/333685/where-parallel-lines-converge here]].

Compare and contrast with Fanfic/TheAlarmaverse.''Fanfic/TheAlarmaverse''.
23rd May '17 3:08:26 PM Malady
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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: Averted, several times. Especially by Pinkie, who at times literally [[FightLikeACardPlayer fights like a card player]].

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* GameplayAndStorySegregation: Averted, several times. Especially by Pinkie, who at times literally [[FightLikeACardPlayer fights like a card player]].player]], as said in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/8 Allies Assembling]]::
--> The earth pony smiled. "... [W]hen Avatar of Discord enters the battlefield, I have to sack it unless I discard two cards. I went with Anger to give her haste and Fiery Temper so I could cast it via madness. So now, the Laughter Elemental's dead and we've got a five-three flier to take on the others!"



* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]:

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* GroinAttack: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]:Plans Making Contact]]:



* ProlongedPrologue: The titular monsters don't even show up until Chapter 7.

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* ProlongedPrologue: The titular monsters don't even show up until Chapter 7.[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/7 the seventh chapter, First In, Last Out]].



* PunBasedTitle: Several chapter titles are card game puns. Most egregious is [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=78991 "Plight of Foal's Betrayal."]]

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* PunBasedTitle: Several chapter titles are card game puns. Most egregious is "[[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/10 Plight of Foal's Betrayal]]", a pun on [[http://gatherer.wizards.com/Pages/Card/Details.aspx?multiverseid=78991 "Plight "Night of Foal's Souls' Betrayal."]]
23rd May '17 2:58:40 PM Malady
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* FacinatingEyebrow: From Scootaloo during her negotiations with the Loyalty Elemental in [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/8 Allies Assembling]]:
--> One eyebrow slowly rose.



* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]: "Also to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)"

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* GroinAttack: [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/2/elementals-of-harmony/plans-making-contact Chapter 2]]: "Also 2]]:
--> Also
to her shock and dismay was the unicorn horn jabbing a very sensitive spot... Ditzy Doo performing an impressive headstand while wearing an expression of unspeakable pain. As the pegasus tipped forward, Rarity could see why. "Oh dear..." ... Several apologies and a discreet ice pack later, the two continued their conversation under more equitable conditions, both seated (Ditzy rather gingerly)"gingerly)[.]



-->She turned to Pinkie Pie for a more sensible explanation (and what a sorry state of affairs that implied.)

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-->She --> She turned to Pinkie Pie for a more sensible explanation (and what a sorry state of affairs that implied.)



* ObfuscatingInsanity / TheWonka: It's not entirely clear which Pinkie falls under. It's entirely possible that's she's ''both''.
* OCStandIn: The protagonist is an [[EnsembleDarkhorse Ensemble Darkpony]], after all.

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* ObfuscatingInsanity / ObfuscatingInsanity: In combination with TheWonka: It's not entirely clear which Pinkie falls under. It's entirely possible that's she's ''both''.
* OCStandIn: The protagonist is an [[EnsembleDarkhorse Ensemble Darkpony]], {{Ensemble Dark|horse}}pony, after all.



-->Goblins were annoying, present in nearly every plane, came in only one quantity (too many), and had an impressive talent for killing themselves. Humans were largely similar, but generally had better hygiene and on occasion had better manners.

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-->Goblins --> Goblins were annoying, present in nearly every plane, came in only one quantity (too many), and had an impressive talent for killing themselves. Humans were largely similar, but generally had better hygiene and on occasion had better manners.



* PunctuatedForEmphasis: From [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/6 Omens and Portents]]:
"As I recall, you had no patience for matters of court at the time. Something about some charming young stallion."\\
"Oh, right."\\
--> "It was either Aristrotle or Brayto if I remember correctly."\\
"Oh. Right."\\
"You did court both master and pupil, didn't you?"\\
"'''OH. RIGHT'''." The reverb sent chills down Ditzy's spine and made her very grateful she'd visited the bathroom prior to the meal.\\
Celestia seemed wholly unfazed. "Why Luna, that was a near flawless impression of Aunt Teleute!"



* RetiredBadass: Ditzy, being a Planeswalker whose put planeswalking behind her and is trying to live a normal life with her daughter in Ponyville, certainly fits the bill.



* RetiredBadass: Ditzy, being a Planeswalker whose put planeswalking behind her and is trying to live a normal life with her daughter in Ponyville, certainly fits the bill.


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* RuleOfThree: Some conversations involve three parts, such as Luna's repetitions of "Oh, right." from [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/1048/6 Omens and Portents]].
14th Feb '17 12:10:21 AM Theriocephalus
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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to [[turn Ditzy into spoiler:an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.]]

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* GoneHorriblyWrong: Starlight Glimmer ''accidentally'' managed to [[turn [[spoiler:turn Ditzy into spoiler:an an invincible universe-devouring EldritchAbomination.]]
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