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** [[{{Starcraft}} Tychus Findley]] is a Zone Trooper.

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** [[{{Starcraft}} [[VideoGame/StarCraft Tychus Findley]] is a Zone Trooper.



** One of the turian commanders is named [[{{Starcraft}} Artanis]].

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* {{Badass}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp. And later, is so badass he doesn't die when the universe says he ''should''. A pair of Marked commandos realise that even with half a broken combat knife and a sidearm, their chances of survival ''drop'' the longer they're in Locke's company.]]



* OutsideContextProblem: The Asari commando squad represent the first time humanity has encountered [[MindOverMatter biotics.]] Not to mention their surprise at learning they're fighting more than one alien species. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop [[{{Badass}} Locke]] from killing one of them in hand to hand combat though.]]

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* OutsideContextProblem: The Asari commando squad represent the first time humanity has encountered [[MindOverMatter biotics.]] Not to mention their surprise at learning they're fighting more than one alien species. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop [[{{Badass}} Locke]] Locke from killing one of them in hand to hand combat though.]]

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* DoNotGoGentle: Aware that his fleet is doomed and outgunned, Entra order what remain of his forces to go down fighting against the GDI.



* FaceDeathWithDignity: Aware that his fleet is doomed and outgunned, Entra order what remain of his forces to go down fighting against the GDI.
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* FaceDeathWithDignity: Aware that his fleet is doomed and outgunned, Entra order what remain of his forces to go down fighting against the GDI.
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* OutsideContextVillain: The Asari commando squad represent the first time humanity has enountered [[MindOverMatter biotics.]] Not to mention their surprise at learning they're fighting more than one alien species. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop [[{{Badass}} Locke]] from killing one of them in hand to hand combat though.]]

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* OutsideContextVillain: OutsideContextProblem: The Asari commando squad represent the first time humanity has enountered encountered [[MindOverMatter biotics.]] Not to mention their surprise at learning they're fighting more than one alien species. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop [[{{Badass}} Locke]] from killing one of them in hand to hand combat though.]]
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* TankGoodness: GDI continues to use Mammoth tanks. It's also deconstructed somewhat: Mammoths outgun and outmass turian tanks, but are large enough to be easily targeted for orbital strikes.

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* TankGoodness: GDI continues to use Mammoth tanks. It's also deconstructed somewhat: Mammoths outgun and outmass turian tanks, but are large enough to be easily targeted for orbital strikes. Thus, they are sidelined for all but the beginning and end of the story.
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This is ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6965762/1/Eagles_Fall Eagle's Fall]]'', a loose prequel to the C&C/ME fusion that is ''{{Fanfic/Renegade}}''.

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This is ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6965762/1/Eagles_Fall Eagle's Fall]]'', a loose prequel to the C&C/ME ''VideoGame/CommandAndConquerTiberianSeries''[=/=]''Franchise/MassEffect'' fusion that is ''{{Fanfic/Renegade}}''.
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** [[ModernWarfare Captain Pelayo]] commands a force of Zone Raiders.

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** [[ModernWarfare [[VideoGame/ModernWarfare Captain Pelayo]] commands a force of Zone Raiders.
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* DramaticIrony: TheTturian's are operating under the assumption that Shanxi is humanity's homeworld and that the forces they're fighting represent the entirety of the human army/armada. [[spoiler: [[MassOhCrap The reinforcements from Sol come as a nasty shock.]]]]

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* DramaticIrony: TheTturian's The Turian's are operating under the assumption that Shanxi is humanity's homeworld and that the forces they're fighting represent the entirety of the human army/armada. [[spoiler: [[MassOhCrap The reinforcements from Sol come as a nasty shock.]]]]

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* MoreDakka: The Grinder .50cal machinegun, which has finally replaced the old M2 HMG. It's powerful enough that it can kill a turian light tank.



* MoreDakka: The Grinder .50cal machinegun, which has finally replaced the old M2 HMG. It's powerful enough that it can kill a turian light tank.

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* MoreDakka: OutsideContextVillain: The Grinder .50cal machinegun, which Asari commando squad represent the first time humanity has finally replaced the old M2 HMG. It's powerful enough that it can kill a turian light tank.enountered [[MindOverMatter biotics.]] Not to mention their surprise at learning they're fighting more than one alien species. [[spoiler: Doesn't stop [[{{Badass}} Locke]] from killing one of them in hand to hand combat though.]]
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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[Main/BFG Dreadnaughts.]]

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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[main/BFG Dreadnaughts.]]

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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[main/BFG [[Main/BFG Dreadnaughts.]]
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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[BFG Dreadnaughts.]]

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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[BFG [[main/BFG Dreadnaughts.]]
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* CurbStompCushion: Despite holding out for months and inflicting massive casualties on the Turian ground forces, the Turian's ability to call in a KillSat strike with impunity meant there was never a chance for humanity to win.


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* DramaticIrony: TheTturian's are operating under the assumption that Shanxi is humanity's homeworld and that the forces they're fighting represent the entirety of the human army/armada. [[spoiler: [[MassOhCrap The reinforcements from Sol come as a nasty shock.]]]]


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** The Turians reaction to the revelation that A) Shanxi was just a colony, not a homeworld, and that B) humanity's actual fleet has [[BFG Dreadnaughts.]]
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** The [[{{FEAR}} MOD-3 Rocket Launcher]] and [[GearsOfWar Grinder]] machinegun.

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** The [[{{FEAR}} [[VideoGame/FirstEncounterAssaultRecon MOD-3 Rocket Launcher]] and [[GearsOfWar Grinder]] machinegun.
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* {{Badass}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]

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* {{Badass}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp. And later, is so badass he doesn't die when the universe says he ''should''. A pair of Marked commandos realise that even with half a broken combat knife and a sidearm, their chances of survival ''drop'' the longer they're in Locke's company.]]
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* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]

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* {{BadAss}}: {{Badass}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]



* BoringButPractical: GDI uses conventional treads on tanks, instead of mass effect antigrav systems like Turian tanks. This allows them to carry bigger guns will less recoil and stability issues, and allocate more power to the railguns.

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* BoringButPractical: GDI uses conventional treads on tanks, instead of [[HoverTank mass effect antigrav systems like Turian tanks.tanks]]. This allows them to carry bigger guns will less recoil and stability issues, and allocate more power to the railguns.



* ChekhovsGunman: Lance Corporal Ulrich Kastner, shown in Chapter 2 as a close friend of both Specialist Reese and PFC (later Sergeant) Findlay, disappears without fanfare in the same chapter. [[spoiler: Chapter 8 reveals he was captured by Nod and transformed into one of the new Marked of Kane.]]

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* ChekhovsGunman: Lance Corporal Ulrich Kastner, shown in Chapter 2 as a close friend of both Specialist Reese and PFC (later Sergeant) Findlay, disappears without fanfare in the same chapter. [[spoiler: Chapter [[spoiler:Chapter 8 reveals he was captured by Nod and transformed into one of the new Marked of Kane.]]



* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Aleena, Wasea and Zaeed Messani.]]

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* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Aleena, [[spoiler:Aleena, Wasea and Zaeed Messani.]]



* HopeSpot: A major turian attack on one of GDI's key outposts is repulsed, and the GDI commander begins to hope that they can turn things around. [[spoiler: He and the outpost are destroyed in an orbital strike, which causes General Williams to order the cease fire.]]

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* HopeSpot: A major turian attack on one of GDI's key outposts is repulsed, and the GDI commander begins to hope that they can turn things around. [[spoiler: He [[spoiler:He and the outpost are destroyed in an orbital strike, which causes General Williams to order the cease fire.]]
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* AscendedFanboy: Peptuck considers this canon in Renegade for what actually happened.
* AscendedExtra: Locke will be appearing in Renegade, following a positive fan reaction.

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* AscendedFanboy: Peptuck considers this canon in Renegade for what actually happened.
happened, so much so that there are deliberate {{Continuity Nod}}s to it in the later chapters, not to mention....
* AscendedExtra: Locke will be appearing appears in Renegade, following a positive fan reaction.
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* KillSat: Pretty much the only reason the Turians were able to make ANY forward progress planetside was their capacity (and ruthlessness) for utterly abusing orbital strikes. (To be fair, it was practically the only way to disable, let alone destroy, the "house-sized masses of fuck you" that are GDI tanks.)

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* KillSat: Pretty much the only reason the Turians were able to make ANY forward progress planetside was due to their capacity (and ruthlessness) for utterly abusing orbital strikes. (To be fair, it was practically the only way to disable, let alone destroy, the "house-sized masses of fuck you" that are GDI tanks.)
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*KillSat: Pretty much the only reason the Turians were able to make ANY forward progress planetside was their capacity (and ruthlessness) for utterly abusing orbital strikes. (To be fair, it was practically the only way to disable, let alone destroy, the "house-sized masses of fuck you" that are GDI tanks.)
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** Zone Raider sonic blasters usually burst eyes at close range.


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** [[StarWars Rogue Squadron]] is apparently active for a fair bit of the invasion.
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* AscendedFanboy: Peptuck considers this canon in Renegade for what actually happened.
* AscendedExtra: Locke will be appearing in Renegade, following a positive fan reaction.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Specialist Locke, natch. [[spoiler:How popular? Peptuck has confirmed he will appear in Renegade.]]
** [[spoiler:HesJustHiding]]: [[spoiler: Locke is certainly NOT dead, but he's keeping a low profile...sorta.]]
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** The [[{{FEAR}} MOD-3 Rocket Launcher]] and [[GearsOfWar Grinder]] machinegun.

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* ChekhovsGunman: Lance Corporal Ulrich Kastner, shown in Chapter 2 as a close friend of both Specialist Reese and PFC (later Sergeant) Findlay, disappears without fanfare in the same chapter. [[spoiler:Chapter 8 reveals he was captured by Nod and transformed into one of the new Marked of Kane.]]

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* ChekhovsGunman: Lance Corporal Ulrich Kastner, shown in Chapter 2 as a close friend of both Specialist Reese and PFC (later Sergeant) Findlay, disappears without fanfare in the same chapter. [[spoiler:Chapter [[spoiler: Chapter 8 reveals he was captured by Nod and transformed into one of the new Marked of Kane.]]]]
* DespairEventHorizon: [[YouShouldKnowThisAlready General Williams surrenders]] after going through this.



** [[spoiler:HesJustHiding]]

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** [[spoiler:HesJustHiding]][[spoiler:HesJustHiding]]: [[spoiler: Locke is certainly NOT dead, but he's keeping a low profile...sorta.]]



* HopeSpot: A major turian attack on one of GDI's key outposts is repulsed, and the GDI commander begins to hope that they can turn things around. [[spoiler: He and the outpost are destroyed in an orbital strike, which causes General Williams to order the cease fire.]]



** Don't forget the [[DoomRepercussionsOfEvil colonel named Joson]].

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** Don't forget the [[DoomRepercussionsOfEvil colonel Colonel named Joson]].

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* BreakTheCutie: Alice, the little girl in Chapter 2 who watches a GDI sniper die before her. [[spoiler:By Chapter 7, the sheer fatigue of the war has left her drained of all emotion, which may have played a part in her mother committing suicide. And she doesn't even realise it.]]



* ChekhovsGunman: Lance Corporal Ulrich Kastner, shown in Chapter 2 as a close friend of both Specialist Reese and PFC (later Sergeant) Findlay, disappears without fanfare in the same chapter. [[spoiler:Chapter 8 reveals he was captured by Nod and transformed into one of the new Marked of Kane.]]
* EarlyBirdCameo: [[spoiler: Aleena, Wasea and Zaeed Messani.]]



** [[spoiler:HesJustHiding]]



* TankGoodness: GDI continues to use Mammoth tanks. It's also deconstructed somewhat: Mammoths outgun and outmass turian tanks, but are large enough to be easily targeted for orbital strikes.

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** Don't forget the [[DoomRepercussionsOfEvil colonel named Joson]].
* TankGoodness: GDI continues to use Mammoth tanks. It's also deconstructed somewhat: Mammoths outgun and outmass turian tanks, but are large enough to be easily targeted for orbital strikes.strikes.
* [[TimeToStepUpCommander Time To Step Up, Sergeants]]: ''All'' of the senior officers of Frank Company were little more than Sergeants or even Privates. Phillip Dante steps up the most, as he goes from Staff Sergeant to acting Captain because ''every other officer'' in his company had died in the initial bombardment by the turians.
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* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler: who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]

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* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler: who [[spoiler:who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]



* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Mammoth tank callsign "Inferno", which appears early on and then is sidelined due to the risk of orbital strikes; it returns to combat in the endgame.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Specialist Locke, natch. [[spoiler: How popular? Peptuck has confirmed he will appear in Renegade.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Locke removes an eye from a Nod scientist, for both torture and because there's a camera implant recording everything she sees.]]
* GambitPileup: A lot, but most particularly [[spoiler: with Nod black ops types, who are observing the conflict and taking notes.]]

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* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Mammoth [[spoiler:Mammoth tank callsign "Inferno", which appears early on and then is sidelined due to the risk of orbital strikes; it returns to combat in the endgame.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Specialist Locke, natch. [[spoiler: How [[spoiler:How popular? Peptuck has confirmed he will appear in Renegade.]]
* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Locke [[spoiler:Locke removes an eye from a Nod scientist, for both torture and because there's a camera implant recording everything she sees.]]
* GambitPileup: A lot, but most particularly [[spoiler: with [[spoiler:with Nod black ops types, who are observing the conflict and taking notes.]]



* [spoiler: ScrewDestiny]]: [[spoiler: a Nod commando team engages Locke, using probability calculator augmentations to "see" into the future. Except that Locke is so badass, he lives when he's supposed to die.]]

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* [spoiler: ScrewDestiny]]: [[spoiler: a [[spoiler:ScrewDestiny]]: [[spoiler:A Nod commando team engages Locke, using probability calculator augmentations to "see" into the future. Except that Locke is so badass, he lives when he's supposed to die.]]



** [[Starcraft Tychus Findley]] is a Zone Trooper.

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** [[Starcraft [[{{Starcraft}} Tychus Findley]] is a Zone Trooper.



** One of the turian commanders is named [[Starcraft Artanis]].

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* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler: who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly.]]

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* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler: who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly.single-handedly, while being hit with Warp.]]


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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Locke removes an eye from a Nod scientist, for both torture and because there's a camera implant recording everything she sees.]]


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* OhCrap: Locke tends to invoke this in people.

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This is ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6965762/1/Eagles_Fall Eagle's Fall]], a loose prequel to the C&C/ME fusion that is ''{{Fanfic/Renegade}}''.

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This is ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6965762/1/Eagles_Fall Eagle's Fall]], Fall]]'', a loose prequel to the C&C/ME fusion that is ''{{Fanfic/Renegade}}''.



* MoreDakka: The Grinder .50cal machinegun, which has finally replaced the old M2 HMG. It's powerful enough that it can kill a turian light tank.



** [{ArmyOfTwo Sergeants Salem and Rios]], who continue to be bros.

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** [{ArmyOfTwo [[ArmyOfTwo Sergeants Salem and Rios]], who continue to be bros.
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The Battle of Shanxi. The first conflict between humans and turians. A war fought between the forces of the Global Defense Initiative and the Turian Hiearchy, a war that set the stage for GDI's future relations with the Citadel Council.

Outnumbered and outgunned, GDI troops dig in and pray their foxholes don't become their graves, continuing to resist the turian invaders, holding out for relief.

This is ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6965762/1/Eagles_Fall Eagle's Fall]], a loose prequel to the C&C/ME fusion that is ''{{Fanfic/Renegade}}''.

Written by Char Nobyl, ''Eagle's Fall'' is a gripping account of the Battle of Shanxi, with GDI replacing the Systems Alliance.
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!!Examples of tropes in this fanfic:

* AmazonBrigade: Captain Pelayo's Zone Raiders, and an Asari commando squad.
* {{BadAss}}: A lot of them, but most prominently Specialist Locke, a GDI commando, [[spoiler: who kills a biotic Asari commando single-handedly.]]
* BadassArmy: GDI's troops are depicted as this; despite being formed from rag-tag groups of survivors, with a poor logistics supply, GDI resistance forces nonetheless make the invasion painful for the turians.
* BoringButPractical: GDI uses conventional treads on tanks, instead of mass effect antigrav systems like Turian tanks. This allows them to carry bigger guns will less recoil and stability issues, and allocate more power to the railguns.
* ChekhovsGun: [[spoiler: Mammoth tank callsign "Inferno", which appears early on and then is sidelined due to the risk of orbital strikes; it returns to combat in the endgame.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Specialist Locke, natch. [[spoiler: How popular? Peptuck has confirmed he will appear in Renegade.]]
* GambitPileup: A lot, but most particularly [[spoiler: with Nod black ops types, who are observing the conflict and taking notes.]]
* [spoiler: ScrewDestiny]]: [[spoiler: a Nod commando team engages Locke, using probability calculator augmentations to "see" into the future. Except that Locke is so badass, he lives when he's supposed to die.]]
* ShoutOut: Quite a few:
** [{ArmyOfTwo Sergeants Salem and Rios]], who continue to be bros.
** [[Starcraft Tychus Findley]] is a Zone Trooper.
** [[ModernWarfare Captain Pelayo]] commands a force of Zone Raiders.
*** There's also an Orca pilot who goes down while providing CAS; Pelayo and her Zone Raiders rescue him, in a callback to when her original version was rescued.
** One of the turian commanders is named [[Starcraft Artanis]].
* TankGoodness: GDI continues to use Mammoth tanks. It's also deconstructed somewhat: Mammoths outgun and outmass turian tanks, but are large enough to be easily targeted for orbital strikes.

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