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On the Thirteenth of March, 2016, a Tragedy is set to occur. The Trickster, who in the next year will defy fate like it’s their day job, is nowhere to be found for now - still dealing with the fallout of their supposed crime.
But what if someone else was there to prevent it?
You don’t necessarily need a graceful rescue to save a life. Perhaps all that’s necessary is for someone to space out in the right place at the right time.
The Butterfly Effect can take over from there.
Dragon's Duet (and its side story) can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2748376 here]].
But what if someone else was there to prevent it?
You don’t necessarily need a graceful rescue to save a life. Perhaps all that’s necessary is for someone to space out in the right place at the right time.
The Butterfly Effect can take over from there.
Dragon's Duet (and its side story) can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2748376 here]].
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- Dragon's Duet
Dragon's Duet is a story set with a PointOfDivergence where Ryuji accidentally saved Kasumi from her death and the butterfly effect that follows. Dragon's Duet and it's connected side
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* AdaptationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan'' and LightEmUp powers, plus a BladeOnAStick and SniperRifle to fight with.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan'' and LightEmUp powers, plus a BladeOnAStick spear and SniperRifle to fight with.
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** [[spoiler:After Awakening Cendrillon, Sumire's moveset drastically changes, with her exchanging Bless moves for Curse, and losing the Physical attacks in favor of leaning towards healing more,
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** [[spoiler:After Awakening Cendrillon, Sumire's moveset drastically changes, with her exchanging Bless moves for Curse, and losing the Physical attacks in favor of leaning towards healing more, as well as more status spells (and the same accuracy/evasion boosting move Yusuke gets)]].
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** [[spoiler:After Awakening Cendrillon, Sumire's moveset drastically changes, with her exchanging Bless moves for Curse, and losing the Physical attacks in favor of leaning towards healing more,
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* MundaneUtility: The Phantom Thieves, when they first get Jose's wishing star, wish for... food. Except for Ren - who uses it to wish that Morgana would stop telling him to go to bed.
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* MundaneUtility: The Phantom Thieves, when they first get Jose's wishing star, wish for... food. Except for Ren - Ren, who lectures them over using it for something so petty - even though later, [[HypocriticalHumor he uses it to wish that Morgana would stop telling him to go to bed.bed]].
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon, and WordOfGod is that Sumire will have a different moveset from her canon self.
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* AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon.
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** [[spoiler:After Awakening Cendrillon,
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* OverprotectiveMom: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children. As in, she started pondering the ShovelTalk the second she ''heard'' about Ren and Ryuji.
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji and Kasumi.
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji and Kasumi.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:During Sumire's Palace arc, Kasumi has a near-breakdown several times as it becomes clear just ''how'' bad Sumire's mental health had become without her noticing - and how big of a part she played in that decline]].
* OverprotectiveMom: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children. As in, she started pondering the ShovelTalk the second she ''heard'' about Ren andRyuji.
Ryuji, ''long'' before they starting dating her daughters.
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji andKasumi.Kasumi - InterfaceSpoiler reveals that both duos are due to become an OfficialCouple later in the story.
* OverprotectiveMom: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children. As in, she started pondering the ShovelTalk the second she ''heard'' about Ren and
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji and
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* LethalChef: As it turns out, Kasumi is the ''polar'' opposite cooking-wise of Sumire's skills as a SupremeChef.
-->'''Ren''': "Sumire told me about your cooking curse. I refuse to let you set fire to Leblanc.”\\
Kasumi pouted “I’ve never set fire to anything-”\\
“You ''melted'' a pan.” The others stared at Kasumi in shock as she tried to deny it… only for Ren to pull out a picture Sumire sent him. It was impressive how deformed the kitchen utensil was.
-->'''Ren''': "Sumire told me about your cooking curse. I refuse to let you set fire to Leblanc.”\\
Kasumi pouted “I’ve never set fire to anything-”\\
“You ''melted'' a pan.” The others stared at Kasumi in shock as she tried to deny it… only for Ren to pull out a picture Sumire sent him. It was impressive how deformed the kitchen utensil was.
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Dragon's Duet (and its side story can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2748376 here]].
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Dragon's Duet (and its side story story) can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/series/2748376 here]].
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Dragon's Duet can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34087816/chapters/84801727 here]].
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Dragon's Duet (and its side story can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34087816/chapters/84801727 here]].
org/series/2748376 here]].
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* AccidentalHero: Ryuji keeps Sumire from running into the street - and prevents Kasumi's death - simply by accidentally standing in Sumire's way when she was distraught.
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* AccidentalHero: Ryuji keeps Sumire from running into the street - and prevents Kasumi's death - simply by accidentally standing in Sumire's way when she was distraught.
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* ForWantOfANail: Kasumi survives due to Ryuji preventing Sumire from running into the street.
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* ForWantOfANail: Kasumi survives due to Ryuji accidentally preventing Sumire from running into the street.
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* MundaneUtility: The Phantom Thieves, when they first get Jose's wishing star, wish for... food. Except for Ren - who uses it to wish that Morgana would stop telling him to go to bed.
-->"Did you guys seriously try to use a potentially all-powerful magical wish-granting artifact, to order a fancy takeaway?"
-->"Did you guys seriously try to use a potentially all-powerful magical wish-granting artifact, to order a fancy takeaway?"
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* MamaBear: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children.
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* MamaBear: OverprotectiveMom: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children.children. As in, she started pondering the ShovelTalk the second she ''heard'' about Ren and Ryuji.
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* GoodParents: Shinichi Yoshizawa and his wife are this to Kasumi and Sumire, clearly loving them both to bits (although it's mentioned that their mother is an OverprotectiveMom).
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* AdaptationSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon, and WordOfGod is that Sumire will have a different moveset from her canon self.
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* AdaptationSuperpowerChange: AdaptationalSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon, and WordOfGod is that Sumire will have a different moveset from her canon self.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan''.
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* AdaptationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan''.Mulan'' and LightEmUp powers, plus a BladeOnAStick and SniperRifle to fight with.
* AdaptationSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon, and WordOfGod is that Sumire will have a different moveset from her canon self.
* AdaptationSuperpowerChange: ''Hua Mulan'', Kasumi's Persona, has the moveset that was originally used by Cendrillon, and WordOfGod is that Sumire will have a different moveset from her canon self.
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* AscendedExtra: Kasumi becomes a Phantom Thief shortly before Kamoshida's Treasure is stolen.
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* AscendedExtra: Kasumi is still alive here, and becomes a Phantom Thief shortly before Kamoshida's Treasure is stolen.stolen.
* BerserkButton: While it's downplayed, it's clear from the narrative that Sumire ''hates'' the fact that she's suffering from SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome, and how much Kasumi tends to drag her around.
* BerserkButton: While it's downplayed, it's clear from the narrative that Sumire ''hates'' the fact that she's suffering from SuccessfulSiblingSyndrome, and how much Kasumi tends to drag her around.
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* JerkassRealization: Kasumi has one after Ren, Ryuji, and Morgana save her from Kamoshida when he tries to threaten her about her earlier treatment of Ren.
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* AdapatationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan''.
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* AdapatationalBadass: AdaptationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan''.
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* AdapatationalBadass: Kasumi becomes the fifth member of the Thieves here, and gains the Persona ''Hua Mulan''.
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* KnightTemplarBigSister: They're twins, but Kasumi is very overprotective of Sumire at times.
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* KnightTemplarBigSister: They're twins, but Kasumi is very overprotective of Sumire at times.- to the point that when she learns Ren is "a delinquent" and sees her talking to him, she tries to threaten him.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Kasumi and Sumire are both prevented from running into the street like in canon due to Ryuji being in the right place at the right time.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Kasumi and Sumire are both prevented from running into the street like in canon due to Ryuji being in the right place at the right time.time.
* TraumaButton: Sumire has trouble going into the street on her own, after the accident where she was nearly hit by a car (where Kasumi died, canonically).
* TraumaButton: Sumire has trouble going into the street on her own, after the accident where she was nearly hit by a car (where Kasumi died, canonically).
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On the Thirteenth of March, 2016, a Tragedy is set to occur. The Trickster, who in the next year will defy fate like it’s their day job, is nowhere to be found for now - still dealing with the fallout of their supposed crime.
But what if someone else was there to prevent it?
You don’t necessarily need a graceful rescue to save a life. Perhaps all that’s necessary is for someone to space out in the right place at the right time.
The Butterfly Effect can take over from there.
Dragon's Duet can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34087816/chapters/84801727 here]].
!!Tropes in Dragon's Duet include:
* AccidentalHero: Ryuji keeps Sumire from running into the street - and prevents Kasumi's death - simply by accidentally standing in Sumire's way when she was distraught.
* AscendedExtra: Kasumi becomes a Phantom Thief shortly before Kamoshida's Treasure is stolen.
* ForWantOfANail: Kasumi survives due to Ryuji preventing Sumire from running into the street.
* KnightTemplarBigSister: They're twins, but Kasumi is very overprotective of Sumire at times.
* MamaBear: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children.
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji and Kasumi.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Kasumi and Sumire are both prevented from running into the street like in canon due to Ryuji being in the right place at the right time.
But what if someone else was there to prevent it?
You don’t necessarily need a graceful rescue to save a life. Perhaps all that’s necessary is for someone to space out in the right place at the right time.
The Butterfly Effect can take over from there.
Dragon's Duet can be found on Archive of Our Own, [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/34087816/chapters/84801727 here]].
!!Tropes in Dragon's Duet include:
* AccidentalHero: Ryuji keeps Sumire from running into the street - and prevents Kasumi's death - simply by accidentally standing in Sumire's way when she was distraught.
* AscendedExtra: Kasumi becomes a Phantom Thief shortly before Kamoshida's Treasure is stolen.
* ForWantOfANail: Kasumi survives due to Ryuji preventing Sumire from running into the street.
* KnightTemplarBigSister: They're twins, but Kasumi is very overprotective of Sumire at times.
* MamaBear: Kasumi and Sumire's mother is ''very'' protective of her children.
* ShipTease: Between Ren and Sumire, as well as Ryuji and Kasumi.
* SparedByTheAdaptation: Kasumi and Sumire are both prevented from running into the street like in canon due to Ryuji being in the right place at the right time.
