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** Ironically subverted by Adrien. Who might be better off simply because he had friends before Emilie was taken.
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** Ironically subverted by Adrien. Who Adrien, who might be better off simply because he had friends before Emilie was taken.
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** Technically Averted by Adrien. His mother still disappeared a year ago and his father still prioritizes his work over his only family.
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** Technically Averted averted by Adrien. His mother still disappeared a year ago and his father still prioritizes his work over his only family.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Kagami and her mother are both literal dragons. As well as, [[spoiler: Nino, Juleka and Ivan.]]
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Kagami and her mother are both literal dragons. As well as, [[spoiler: Nino, Juleka [[spoiler:Nino, Juleka, and Ivan.]]
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* BigBad: The unnamed Queen of the dragons that forces them to raid human settlements using her mind control.
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* BigBad: The unnamed Queen of the dragons that forces them to raid human settlements using her mind control.
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* FoodAndAnimalAttraction: Kagami points out that she's not the only one in the forest that can smell the fish Adrien carries. Much to his embarrassment.
* GadgeteerGenius: Max is this, as he invented his own glasses and [[spoiler: the net canon they use to bring down the other dragons.]]
* GadgeteerGenius: Max is this, as he invented his own glasses and [[spoiler: the net canon they use to bring down the other dragons.]]
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* FoodAndAnimalAttraction: Kagami points out that she's not the only one in the forest that who can smell the fish Adrien carries. Much carries, much to his embarrassment.
* GadgeteerGenius: Max is this, as he invented his own glasses and[[spoiler: the [[spoiler:the net canon they use to bring down the other dragons.]]
* GadgeteerGenius: Max is this, as he invented his own glasses and
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* HighOnCatnip: A certain, unnamed type of grass made Kagami giddy. With prolonged exposure, or ingestion, resulting in sleep. [[spoiler: It was used to calm the dragons the young Berkians brought down as they were still under the Queen's control.]]
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* HighOnCatnip: A certain, unnamed type of grass made Kagami giddy. With prolonged exposure, or ingestion, resulting in sleep. [[spoiler: It [[spoiler:It was used to calm the dragons the young Berkians brought down as they were still under the Queen's control.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: According to WordOfGod Adrien and Kagami will end up in one eventually.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Gabriel is a controlling, demanding, overbearing jerk. While Adrien is kind, empathetic, respectful and reasonable.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Gabriel is a controlling, demanding, overbearing jerk. While Adrien is kind, empathetic, respectful and reasonable.
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* InterspeciesRomance: According to WordOfGod WordOfGod, Adrien and Kagami will end up in one eventually.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Gabriel is a controlling, demanding, overbearingjerk. While jerk while Adrien is kind, empathetic, respectful respectful, and reasonable.
* LikeFatherUnlikeSon: Gabriel is a controlling, demanding, overbearing
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* MythologyGag: Jahlil's conspiracy theories are mentioned in a few chapter.
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* MythologyGag: Jahlil's conspiracy theories are mentioned in a few chapter.chapters.
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* AdultFear: The reason Kagami's mother is so overprotective is because she has already been punished for defying the Queen and doesn't want the same thing to happen to Kagami.
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Story has not been updated since November 2020 and is presumably abandoned.
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-->''The village was on fire.''
-->''Big surprise, right? This only happened oh, every week or so since he was born.''
-->''Not that he’d ever gotten to see it before.''
-->''Perk of being the Chief’s son; getting to live in a big fancy house.''
-->''Downside of being the Chief’s son; his father actually being able to afford good enough locks and to order villagers to guard the house to make sure he couldn’t leave.''
-->''He understood, he really did. His mother had been snatched by a dragon last year. It was hard to blame him for being a little… protective.''
-->''But he HAD to show Father he could protect himself! Could make the village proud.''
-->''Could handle dragons on his own.''
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-->''Big surprise, right? This only happened oh, every week or so since he was born.''
-->''Not that he’d ever gotten to see it before.''
-->''Perk of being the Chief’s son; getting to live in a big fancy house.''
-->''Downside of being the Chief’s son; his father actually being able to afford good enough locks and to order villagers to guard the house to make sure he couldn’t leave.''
-->''He understood, he really did. His mother had been snatched by a dragon last year. It was hard to blame him for being a little… protective.''
-->''But he HAD to show Father he could protect himself! Could make the village proud.''
-->''Could handle dragons on his own.''
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-->''Big
->''Big surprise, right? This only happened oh, every week or so since he was born.
-->''Not
->''Not that he’d ever gotten to see it before.
-->''Perk
->''Perk of being the Chief’s son; getting to live in a big fancy house.
-->''Downside
->''Downside of being the Chief’s son; his father actually being able to afford good enough locks and to order villagers to guard the house to make sure he couldn’t leave.
-->''He
->''He understood, he really did. His mother had been snatched by a dragon last year. It was hard to blame him for being a little… protective.
-->''But
->''But he HAD to show Father he could protect himself! Could make the village proud.
-->''Could
->''Could handle dragons on his own.
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* TastesLikeFriendship: The reason Adrien was carrying a smoked fish in the middle of the forest in the first place.
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* TastesLikeFriendship: The reason Adrien was carrying a smoked fish in the middle of the forest in the first place.place.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Kagami and her mother are both literal dragons.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Kagami and her mother are both literal dragons. As well as, [[spoiler: Nino, Juleka and Ivan.]]
