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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, Creator/NDStevenson, revealed he had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While he refused to name it, the hints he gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, Creator/NDStevenson, revealed he had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While he refused to name it, the hints he gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also helps that this is Annacharlier's only fic, and that it matches with an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, Creator/NDStevenson, revealed they he had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they he refused to name it, the hints they he gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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* AbsenteeActor: Wrong Hordak isn't seen or mentioned at all, even in scenes he was a part of in canon such as when everyone was eating Glimmer's dinner at the end of Episode 6.
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* AbsenteeActor: AdaptedOut: Wrong Hordak isn't seen or mentioned at all, even in scenes he was a part of in canon such as when everyone was eating Glimmer's dinner at the end of Episode 6.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Adora and Catra sleeping peacefully. Art by [[Creator/NoelleStevenson ND Stevenson]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:Adora and Catra sleeping peacefully. Art by [[Creator/NoelleStevenson ND Stevenson]]]]
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, [[Creator/NDStevenson]], Creator/NDStevenson, revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, [[Creator/NoelleStevenson ND Stevenson]], revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own showrunner, [[Creator/NoelleStevenson ND Stevenson]], [[Creator/NDStevenson]], revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork ND had posted on Twitter.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Adora and Catra sleeping peacefully. Art by Creator/NoelleStevenson]]
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, showrunner, [[Creator/NoelleStevenson ND Stevenson]], revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up. It also matches an artwork Noelle ND had posted on Twitter.
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* SleepCute: The story [[GoToSleepEnding ends]] with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed, reflected by Noelle's artwork.
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* SleepCute: The story [[GoToSleepEnding ends]] with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed, reflected by Noelle's ND's artwork.
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* HealingFactor: Adora's thoughts reveal she has one, all her wounds no matter how grievous heal when she transforms, but she also mentions that she can still feel them and at times can feel worse then if the wounds had just stayed. It’s implied her HealingHands has a similar effect and the only real cure is to get rest.
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* HealingFactor: Adora's thoughts reveal she has one, all her wounds no matter how grievous heal when she transforms, but she also mentions that she can still feel them and at times can feel worse then if the wounds had just stayed. It’s implied her HealingHands has have a similar effect and the only real cure is to get rest.
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* HealingFactor: Adora's thoughts reveal she has one, all her wounds no matter how grievous heal when she transforms, but she also mentions that she can still feel them and at times can feel worse then if the wounds had just stayed. Its implied her HealingHands has a similar effect and the only real cure is to get rest.
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* HealingFactor: Adora's thoughts reveal she has one, all her wounds no matter how grievous heal when she transforms, but she also mentions that she can still feel them and at times can feel worse then if the wounds had just stayed. Its It’s implied her HealingHands has a similar effect and the only real cure is to get rest.
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* SleepCute: The story [[GoToSleepEnding ends]] with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed.
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Adora inverts this in order to convince Catra that she isn't in a simulation created by Horde Prime by calling him a loser who never knows when to shut up which, being the massive narcissist he is, is something Prime would ''never'' say about himself. It's enough to convince Catra that she was really saved and [[ActuallyPrettyFunny gets her to laugh.]]
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Adora inverts this in order to convince Catra that she isn't in a simulation created by Horde Prime by calling him a loser who never knows when to shut up which, being the massive narcissist he is, is something Prime would ''never'' say about himself. It's enough to convince Catra that she was really saved and [[ActuallyPrettyFunny gets her to laugh.]]
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* SleepCute: The story [[GoToSleepEnding ends]] with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed.
bed, reflected by Noelle's artwork.
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Adora inverts this in order to convince Catra that she isn't in a simulation created by Horde Prime by calling him a loser who never knows when to shut up which, being the massive narcissist he is, is something Prime would ''never'' say about himself. It's enough to convince Catra that she was really saved and [[ActuallyPrettyFunny gets her tolaugh.]]laugh]].
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Adora inverts this in order to convince Catra that she isn't in a simulation created by Horde Prime by calling him a loser who never knows when to shut up which, being the massive narcissist he is, is something Prime would ''never'' say about himself. It's enough to convince Catra that she was really saved and [[ActuallyPrettyFunny gets her to
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* SleepCute: The story ends with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed.
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* SleepCute: The story ends [[GoToSleepEnding ends]] with Catra and Adora falling asleep together on Catra's bed.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and up. It also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter as well.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Adora attempts to convince Catra that she's not irredeemable, but this backfires and only drives her deeper into despair. Ultimately, Entrapta is the one who convinces Catra to let go of her self-hatred and give herself a chance to be one of the good guys.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Adora attempts to convince Catra that she's not irredeemable, but this backfires and only drives her deeper into despair. Ultimately, Entrapta is the one who convinces Catra to let go of her self-hatred and give herself a chance to be one of the good guys.guys.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Just the memory of Catra almost dying after Horde Prime forced her to fall off his throne platform fills Adora with rage, and when she sees how traumatized Catra is from his brainwashing she vows to kill him.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Just the memory of Catra almost dying after Horde Prime forced her to fall off his throne platform fills Adora with rage, and when she sees how traumatized Catra is from his brainwashing she vows to kill him.him and ''enjoy it''.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, revealed they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While they refused to name it, the hints she they gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter as well.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, revealed she they had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While she they refused to name it, the hints she gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter as well.
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The story gained fame when ''She-Ra's'' very own show runner Creator/NoelleStevenson runner, Creator/NoelleStevenson, revealed she had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While she refused to name it, the hints she gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter as well.
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The story gained fame when show runner Noelle Stevenson Creator/NoelleStevenson revealed she had written a fan-fic and posted it online. While she refused to name it, the hints she gave led fans to this story and many feel it lines up, and also matches an artwork Noelle had posted on Twitter as well.
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* ClothingDamage: PlayedForDrama; During her panic attack Catra practically cries when begging Adora to take off her Horde uniform, and unable to find a way to do it naturally Adora opts to just tear the garment off of Catra. It does come a bit back around to {{Fanservice}} as after a moment Adora sheepishly realizes that while lost in thought she was staring at a naked Catra.
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* ClothingDamage: PlayedForDrama; During her panic attack Catra practically cries when begging Adora to take off her Horde uniform, and unable to find a way to do it naturally Adora opts to just tear the garment off of Catra. It does come a bit back around to {{Fanservice}} as after a moment Adora sheepishly realizes that while lost in thought she was staring at a naked Catra.
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* ClothingDamage: PlayedForDrama; During her panic attack {{Continuation}}: The story starts immediately were Episode 5 ended with Adora and Catra practically cries when begging Adora to take off her Horde uniform, still hugging tightly. Halfway through it skips the events shown in Episode 6 with only a few words towards Catra's mindset, before beginning again exactly where Episode 6 ended with everyone gathered together eating the meal Glimmer and unable to find a way to do it naturally Adora opts to just tear the garment off of Catra. It does come a bit back around to {{Fanservice}} as after a moment Adora sheepishly realizes that while lost in thought she was staring at a naked Catra.Wrong Hordak had prepared.
