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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and even her [[KickTheDog dog]] all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self on a time limit thanks to the brain damage she sustained from the encounter. She shows signs of mentally healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the defeat and following [[ColdBloodedTorture punishment]] of Marcus]].
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and even her [[KickTheDog dog]] all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self and has to live on a borrowed time limit thanks to the brain damage she sustained from the encounter.encounter having severe complications. She shows signs of mentally healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the defeat and following [[ColdBloodedTorture punishment]] of Marcus]].
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* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest: In a story full of questionable parental figures, the deceased parents were usually on the more loving side.
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* GoodParents: In a story full of questionable parental figures, the deceased parents were usually on the more loving side.
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* GoodParents: In a story full of questionable parental figures, the deceased parents were usually on the more loving side.
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* RunningGag: Scarcely a chapter goes by where NEMO doesn't bemoan the weakness of the flesh or get enthusiastic about the idea of someone who's organic abandoning their fleshy vessels to embrace superior cybernetic enhancements.
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* RunningGag: Scarcely a chapter goes by where NEMO doesn't bemoan the weakness of the flesh or get enthusiastic about the idea of someone who's an organic abandoning their fleshy vessels to embrace superior cybernetic enhancements.
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* ParentalIssues: It would be easier to list the examples of people who ''don't'' have this.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
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* TeamMom: Yueliang acts as a nurturing emotional support towards Team PCTN, although she isn't above getting rough when needed.
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* TeamMom: Yueliang acts as a nurturing emotional support towards Team PCTN, although she isn't above getting rough when needed.needed.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
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* RunningGag: Scarcely a chapter goes by where NEMO doesn't bemoan the weakness of the flesh or get enthusiastic about the idea of someone who's organic abandoning their fleshy vessels to embrace superior cybernetic enhancements.
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and even her [[KickTheDog dog]] all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self on a time limit thanks to the brain damage she sustained from the encounter. She shows signs of mentally healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the death of Marcus]].
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and even her [[KickTheDog dog]] all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self on a time limit thanks to the brain damage she sustained from the encounter. She shows signs of mentally healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the death defeat and following [[ColdBloodedTorture punishment]] of Marcus]].
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
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* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
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* LoveTriangle: While NEMO and Penny's blossoming romance is the primary pairing of the story, they both get a healthy amount of ship tease with Ciel, and even Tom.
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* Polyamory: While NEMO and Penny's blossoming romance is the primary pairing of the story, they both get a healthy amount of ship tease with Ciel, and even Tom.
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* MountedCombat: Stella is the primary example of this along with her aura enhanced steed, Zmierzch, having years of experience with mounted combat under her belt. To a lesser extent, Winter uses her summons as combat mounts when the situation calls for it.
* Polyamory: While NEMO and Penny's blossoming romance is the primary pairing of the story, they both get a healthy amount of ship tease with Ciel, and even Tom.
* Polyamory: While NEMO and Penny's blossoming romance is the primary pairing of the story, they both get a healthy amount of ship tease with Ciel, and even Tom.
* RoboRomance: A good chunk of the story is focused on the ShipTease between NEMO and Penny.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
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* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.spades.
* TeamDad: Winter acts as a stern mentor to Team PCTN to push them to be their best, though she's certainly doing a much better job at it than her own father's attempt.
* TeamMom: Yueliang acts as a nurturing emotional support towards Team PCTN, although she isn't above getting rough when needed.
* TeamDad: Winter acts as a stern mentor to Team PCTN to push them to be their best, though she's certainly doing a much better job at it than her own father's attempt.
* TeamMom: Yueliang acts as a nurturing emotional support towards Team PCTN, although she isn't above getting rough when needed.
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and ever her dog all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self. She shows signs of healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the death of Marcus]].
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and ever even her dog [[KickTheDog dog]] all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self. self on a time limit thanks to the brain damage she sustained from the encounter. She shows signs of mentally healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the death of Marcus]].
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* BrokenAce: Yueliang was a proud huntress in the prime of her life before Marcus Black shattered her skull, [[PowerParasite stole her semblance]], and murdered her husband, unborn child, and ever her dog all in quick succession of each other. She survived the encounter as a physical, mental, and spiritual mess of her former self. She shows signs of healing with the support of the team, even [[spoiler:regaining her semblance upon the death of Marcus]].
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* RobotSoldier: NEMO, and arguably Penny, were created for this purpose.
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* RobotSoldier: NEMO, and arguably Penny, were created for this purpose.purpose.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
* VitriolicBestBuds: Winter and Yueliang have this going on in spades.
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* CoolToy: The magical artifact that had the Atlas crew perplexed was revealed by an amused Ozpin to be nothing but an ancient toy designed to help children train their mana back in the days of old humanity.
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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: NEMO is fond of delivering these, commonly using lines from Remnant's version of popular action movies. Dave bemoans this, saying that 'I should never have done all that work last weekend after that Spruce Willis montage'.
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* PreAsskickingOneLiner: NEMO is fond of delivering these, commonly using lines from Remnant's version of popular action movies. Dave bemoans this, saying that grumbling 'I should never have done all that work last weekend after that Spruce Willis montage'.montage' upon discover mere minutes after NEMO is activated.
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* Camp: Despite his
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
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* DoAndroidsDream: Averted for the most part despite the story's name, NEMO and Penny's status as sapient beings is accepted thanks to their [[SoulPower aura]] being tangible proof that they have souls.
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* DoAndroidsDream: Averted for the most part despite the story's name, name. NEMO and Penny's status as sapient beings is accepted thanks to their [[SoulPower aura]] being tangible proof that they have souls.souls.
* Camp: Despite his
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
* PreAsskickingOneLiner: NEMO is fond of delivering these, commonly using lines from Remnant's version of popular action movies. Dave bemoans this, saying that 'I should never have done all that work last weekend after that Spruce Willis montage'.
* RobotDog: Caval is a Grimm stuffed inside a weaponized robot dog. He's about as friendly as can be expected.
* Camp: Despite his
* LongHairedPrettyBoy: Along with being noted as decently handsome, NEMO's long hair is complimented several times throughout the story.
* PreAsskickingOneLiner: NEMO is fond of delivering these, commonly using lines from Remnant's version of popular action movies. Dave bemoans this, saying that 'I should never have done all that work last weekend after that Spruce Willis montage'.
* RobotDog: Caval is a Grimm stuffed inside a weaponized robot dog. He's about as friendly as can be expected.
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* DoAndroidsDream: Averted for the most part despite the story's name, NEMO and Penny's status as sapient beings is accepted thanks to their [[SoulPower aura]] being tangible proof that they have souls.
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* RobotSoldier: NEMO, and arguably Penny, were created for this purpose.
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[DisappearedDad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[EvilGenius Arthur Watts]].
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's through Remnant's deadly, long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way.in fire. And maybe deal with his [[DisappearedDad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[EvilGenius Arthur Watts]].
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[Disappeared Daddaddy [[DisappearedDad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[EvilGenius Arthur Watts]].
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[Disappeared Dad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[Evil Genius Arthur Watts]].
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[Disappeared Dad daddy Daddaddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[Evil Genius [[EvilGenius Arthur Watts]].
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''[[https://fiction.live/stories/Do-Androids-Dream-of-Electric-Creeps-/sAi7fpEGxvBjBZmcf/home Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps]]'' written by Jarob is an ongoing quest of ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}''.
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''[[https://fiction.live/stories/Do-Androids-Dream-of-Electric-Creeps-/sAi7fpEGxvBjBZmcf/home Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps]]'' written by Jarob is an ongoing quest of ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}''.''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}''.
The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[Disappeared Dad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[Evil Genius Arthur Watts]].
!!''Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps?'' contains examples of:
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The story starts with a newly created [[RobotSoldier NEMO]] awakening in an Atlas facility under a Grimm attack, rock music and excessive violence ensue. But it's not all sunshine and gore, as a newly created being, NEMO will have to navigate Remnant and it's long standing conspiracies and forge new bonds along the way. And maybe deal with his [[Disappeared Dad daddy issues]] along the way, a complicated thing when your creator is [[Evil Genius Arthur Watts]].
!!''Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps?'' contains examples of:
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->''Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
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->''Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''''
''[[https://fiction.live/stories/Do-Androids-Dream-of-Electric-Creeps-/sAi7fpEGxvBjBZmcf/home Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps]]'' written by Jarob is an ongoing quest of ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}''.
''[[https://fiction.live/stories/Do-Androids-Dream-of-Electric-Creeps-/sAi7fpEGxvBjBZmcf/home Do Androids Dream of Electric Creeps]]'' written by Jarob is an ongoing quest of ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}''.
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-> ''You will begin in Atlas. You are the prototype, the culmination of the lifetime of work, from the genius Doctor Arthur Watts. Tests will be conducted, diagnostics will be ran, but for you, Project NEMO, none of that matters terribly much at all.
->Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
->Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
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-> ''You will begin in Atlas. You are the prototype, the culmination of the lifetime of work, from the genius Doctor Arthur Watts. Tests will be conducted, diagnostics will be ran, but for you, Project NEMO, none of that matters terribly much at all.
->Breakall''.
->''Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
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->''Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
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Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
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-> ''You will begin in Atlas. You are the prototype, the culmination of the lifetime of work, from the genius Doctor Arthur Watts. Tests will be conducted, diagnostics will be ran, but for you, Project NEMO, none of that matters terribly much at all.
Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''
Break free. Become something else. Find your Name. Or die trying.''