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* Adorkable: Iron Will becomes this when he tries asking Minotaur-Applejack out.
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* Adorkable: {{Adorkable}}: Iron Will becomes this when he tries asking Minotaur-Applejack out.
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* BigFriendlyDog: Rarity starts acting this way as a Diamond Dog.
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** In "Customer 3: Spike - Unicorn", near the end of the chapter, Rarity reveals that she likes the idea of being with Spike.
** In "Customer 5: Starlight Glimmer - Changeling Royalty (Chrysalis-type)", Starlight, as a Changeling Queen, takes Sunburst to be the king of her new hive. He manages to talk her down, and the end of the chapter shows Starlight is now pregnant.
** In "Customer 7: Rainbow Dash - Griffon", it's revealed that Gilda and Greta have feelings for each other. Also, Gabby apparently catches the eye of a hawk-like male Griffon.
** In "Customer 5: Starlight Glimmer - Changeling Royalty (Chrysalis-type)", Starlight, as a Changeling Queen, takes Sunburst to be the king of her new hive. He manages to talk her down, and the end of the chapter shows Starlight is now pregnant.
** In "Customer 7: Rainbow Dash - Griffon", it's revealed that Gilda and Greta have feelings for each other. Also, Gabby apparently catches the eye of a hawk-like male Griffon.
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** In "Customer 2: Applejack - Minotaur", after Applejack's impromptu wrestling match against Iron Will, Iron Will asks Applejack out on a date, which Applejack actually gives consideration.
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* Adorkable: Iron Will becomes this when he tries asking Minotaur-Applejack out.
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* ShipTease: Plenty in the story.
** In "Customer 1: Fluttershy - Draconequus", when Discord sees Fluttershy's draconequus form, he starts chirping like a bird, puffs out his chest (which gains a large tuft), and creates a bunch of anthropomorphic flowers, lollipops, and ice cream cones that start dacing around him. Fluttershy immediately recognizes it as a mating ritual.
** In "Customer 1: Fluttershy - Draconequus", when Discord sees Fluttershy's draconequus form, he starts chirping like a bird, puffs out his chest (which gains a large tuft), and creates a bunch of anthropomorphic flowers, lollipops, and ice cream cones that start dacing around him. Fluttershy immediately recognizes it as a mating ritual.
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* BerserkButton: Starlight ends up pushing Discord's by taking on Fluttershy's form.
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* BizarreAlienBiology: Apparently, the gestation period for Changelings takes about a year. However, since Starlight is giving birth to hybrids, it might be different.
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** FanonDiscontinuity: Clearly Jonathan doesn't consider the IDW comics (or at least, the Friends Forever series) canon, since they say that Iron Will is married and a father.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Like Pinkie Pie, Alicorn!Trixie takes over the narrative.
** Blackmail: By stealing the author's USB drive and threaten to reveal publicly all his [[Rule34 clopfics]].
** Blackmail: By stealing the author's USB drive and threaten to reveal publicly all his [[Rule34 clopfics]].
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Like Pinkie Pie, Alicorn!Trixie takes over the narrative.
** Blackmail: By stealingnarrative. She steals the author's USB drive and [[{{Blackmail}} threaten to reveal publicly publicly]] all his [[Rule34 clopfics]].
** Blackmail: By stealing
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** FanonDiscontinuity: Clearly Jonathan doesn't consider the IDW comics (or at least, the Friends Forever series canon), since they say that Iron Will is married and a father.
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* ShipTease: Between Applejack and Iron Will.
** FanonDiscontinuity: Clearly Jonathan doesn't consider the IDW comics (or at least, the Friends Forever series canon), since they say that Iron Will is married and a father.
** FanonDiscontinuity: Clearly Jonathan doesn't consider the IDW comics (or at least, the Friends Forever series canon), since they say that Iron Will is married and a father.
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* WhamLine:
--> '''Starlight Glimmer:''' So, I think I'm pregnant.
--> '''Starlight Glimmer:''' So, I think I'm pregnant.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: Like Pinkie Pie, Alicorn!Trixie takes over the narrative.
** Blackmail: By stealing the author's USB drive and threaten to reveal publicly all his [[Rule34 clopfics]].
** Blackmail: By stealing the author's USB drive and threaten to reveal publicly all his [[Rule34 clopfics]].
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''Discord's New Business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Jonathan "KnightMysterio" Spires (yes, he of ''WakingNightmares'' fame) set somewhere after season 6.
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''Discord's New Business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Jonathan "KnightMysterio" "[=KnightMysterio=]" Spires (yes, he of ''WakingNightmares'' fame) set somewhere after season 6.
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''Discord's New Business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction set somewhere after season 6.
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''Discord's New Business'' is a WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic fanfiction by Jonathan "KnightMysterio" Spires (yes, he of ''WakingNightmares'' fame) set somewhere after season 6.
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* ShoutOut: To TheInfiniteLoops. Queen Novo in this storyline subscribes to the idea of [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill 'seapony diplomacy.']] Her method of dealing with pirates who kidnapped her involves dropping a tsunami on them.
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* ShoutOut: To TheInfiniteLoops.''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops''. Queen Novo in this storyline subscribes to the idea of [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill 'seapony diplomacy.']] Her method of dealing with pirates who kidnapped her involves dropping a tsunami on them.
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** Barely a few minutes after the CMC reach Baltimore, they're targeted by a rapist. Luckily, Discord is here to MindRape him.
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** Barely a few minutes after the CMC reach Baltimore, Manehattan, they're targeted by a rapist. Luckily, Discord is here to MindRape him.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Remember Jet Set and Upper Crust, the two jerks from ''Sweet and Elite''? Here, they're revealed to be fanatical racists who, with the help of corrupt guards, beat up non-ponies and brainwash them in never coming back to Canterlot, all in the name of keeping the city "pure". They already had 18 victims, and Luna would have been the 19th...
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* AdaptationalVillainy: Remember Jet Set and Upper Crust, the two jerks from ''Sweet and Elite''? Here, they're revealed to be fanatical racists who, with the help of corrupt guards, beat up non-ponies and brainwash them in into never coming back to Canterlot, all in the name of keeping the city "pure". They already had 18 victims, and Luna would have been the 19th...
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* AudienceParticipation: As said above, the readers decide who gets transformed inyo what. More precisely, each chapter ends on revealing who will be the focus of the next chapter. From its publication, the readers have one week to vote for what transformation they want to see.
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* AudienceParticipation: As said above, the readers decide who gets transformed inyo into what. More precisely, each chapter ends on revealing who will be the focus of the next chapter. From its publication, the readers have one week to vote for what transformation they want to see.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away and treated like crap by a pair of high-end businesses... And is then beaten up by corrupt guards at the service of the pony KuKluxKlan, as had 18 non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away and treated like crap by a pair of high-end businesses... And is then beaten up by corrupt guards at in the service of the pony KuKluxKlan, as had 18 non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his customer in what they want for 24 hours (or more).
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* VoluntaryShapeshifting: The theme of the fic. Discord, for a fee, transforms his customer in into what they want for 24 hours (or more).
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Which business? Why, turn ponies in other species for 24 hours! And because he's feeling nice, he gave a free transformation to Twilight and all her friends.
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Which business? Why, turn turning ponies in into other species for 24 hours! And because he's feeling nice, he gave a free transformation to Twilight and all her friends.
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And ''you'' decide who gets transformed in what!
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And ''you'' decide who gets transformed in into what!
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* AudienceParticipation: As said above, the readers decide who gets transformed in what. More precisely, each chapter ends on revealing who will be the focus of the next chapter. From its publication, the readers have one week to vote for what transformation they want to see.
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** The possible transformation are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty (Chrysalis and Thorax types), dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
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** The possible transformation transformations are: Earth pony, pegasus, unicorn, alicorn, zebra, donkey, griffon, minotaur, old-type changeling (Pre-season 6), new-type changeling (Post-season 6), changeling royalty (Chrysalis and Thorax types), dragon, and draconequus. Special requests are possible.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The fact that Discord has a permit for his business is what worries the most Twilight.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: The fact that Discord has a permit for his business is what worries Twilight the most Twilight.most.
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** Some chapters let you choose both the transformation and the character, or the transformation instead of the characters.
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* AdultFear: Rarity, Applejack and RD are scared of what could happen to the girls. ''And they're right.''
** Barely a few minutes after the CMC reach Baltimore, they're targeted by a rapist. Luckily, Discord is here to MindRape him.
** When they go at a bar, a creep tries to pull a DateRape on Scootaloo. This time, Applebloom's wariness and the bouncer's quick thinking foil the plot.
** Barely a few minutes after the CMC reach Baltimore, they're targeted by a rapist. Luckily, Discord is here to MindRape him.
** When they go at a bar, a creep tries to pull a DateRape on Scootaloo. This time, Applebloom's wariness and the bouncer's quick thinking foil the plot.
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Honestly, the fact that '''''[[TheStoic Maud Pie]]''''' got traumatized by Granite Wasps should have been a red flag, girls...
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* CutenessProximity: Human!Fluttershy thinks Sunset Shimmer as a unicorn is the cutest thing ever.
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* CutenessProximity: Human!Fluttershy thinks Sunset Shimmer as a unicorn is the cutest thing ever.ever, immediately wanting to give her mane brushes and tummy rubs.
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* NightmareFuel: In-Universe. The Crusaders go to see the adults-only play [[MarbleHornets Granite Wasps]] and are left traumatized by it.
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* NightmareFuel: In-Universe. InUniverse. The Crusaders go to see the adults-only play [[MarbleHornets [[WebVideo/MarbleHornets Granite Wasps]] and are left traumatized by it.
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[[folder: Customer 11: The Cutie Mark Crusaders - Age Manipulation]]
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[[folder: Customer 11: 13: The Cutie Mark Crusaders - Age Manipulation]]
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DidntThinkThisThrough: The Crusaders realize quickly that their plan to spend the day in Manehattan as adults has some holes in it.
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* DidntThinkThisThrough: The Crusaders realize quickly that their plan to spend the day in Manehattan as adults has some holes in it.
* NightmareFuel: In-Universe. The Crusaders go to see the adults-only play [[MarbleHornets Granite Wasps]] and are left traumatized by it.
* NightmareFuel: In-Universe. The Crusaders go to see the adults-only play [[MarbleHornets Granite Wasps]] and are left traumatized by it.
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DidntThinkThisThrough: The Crusaders realize quickly that their plan to spend the day in Manehattan as adults has some holes in it.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away and treated like crap by a pair of high-end businesses... and is then beaten up by corrupt guards at the service of the pony KuKluxKlan, as had 18 non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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* FantasticRacism: During her exploration of Canterlot, Zebra Luna is turned away and treated like crap by a pair of high-end businesses... and And is then beaten up by corrupt guards at the service of the pony KuKluxKlan, as had 18 non-ponies before her. To say the least, Princess Celestia does not take the revelation lightly.
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* MuggingTheMonster: Everyone who messed with Zebra!Luna.
* OhCrap: Jet Set, Upper Crust and the corrupt guards when they learn the Zebra they attacked is Luna, and everyone when Celestia gets ''angry''.
* OhCrap: Jet Set, Upper Crust and the corrupt guards when they learn the Zebra they attacked is Luna, and everyone when Celestia gets ''angry''.
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* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Pinkie as an Alicorn does is ''take over the narration and make the author fill in for her at Sugarcube Corner!!'' Don't worry, she exchanges back at the end of the chapter.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: While she stays a CloudCuckooLander, Pinkie is also more mature as an Alicorn.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: While she stays a CloudCuckooLander, Pinkie is also more mature as an Alicorn.
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* AddedAlliterativeAppeal: '''P'''rincess '''P'''inkie '''P'''ie.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Princess Pinkieas an Alicorn Pie does is ''take over the narration and make the author fill in for her at Sugarcube Corner!!'' Don't worry, she exchanges back at the end of the chapter.
* MassOhCrap: The general reaction when people see Princess Pinkie Pie.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: While she stays a CloudCuckooLander, Princess Pinkie Pie is also more matureas an Alicorn.than she usually is.
* BreakingTheFourthWall: The first thing Princess Pinkie
* MassOhCrap: The general reaction when people see Princess Pinkie Pie.
* TheMindIsAPlaythingOfTheBody: While she stays a CloudCuckooLander, Princess Pinkie Pie is also more mature
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* SecretlyWealthy: ''Pinkie Pie'' has invested her money well, that's why she can afford to throw welcome parties for free. It's also hinted it's ''not'' meant to be a secret, she just doesn't think it's important.
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* CutenessProximity: Human!Fluttershy thinks Sunset Shimmer as a unicorn is the cutest thing ever.
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* ScheduleSlip: This chapter was ''one week late'', because of writer's block.
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* ScheduleSlip: This chapter was ''one week late'', because ShoutOut: To TheInfiniteLoops. Queen Novo in this storyline subscribes to the idea of writer's block.[[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill 'seapony diplomacy.']] Her method of dealing with pirates who kidnapped her involves dropping a tsunami on them.
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** Later on, Diamond Dog and [[Rule63 Genderswap]] are added to the list.
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** Later on, Diamond Dog and Dog, [[Rule63 Genderswap]] Genderswap]], hippogriff, catfolk, tatzlpony, age manipulation and (for the reader's vote) transformation error are added to the list.
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* ScheduleSlip: This chapter was ''one week late'', because of writer's block.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Queen Novo ''loves'' this trope.
--> '''Sonata:''' Novo and the concept of overkill have had a long, lasting love affair.
* ScheduleSlip: This chapter was ''one week late'', because of writer's block.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Queen Novo ''loves'' this trope.
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* EasySexChange: Discord makes Fancy sneeze his mustache off, which is the trigger for her turning female. He then puts the mustache on Fleur, which turns her male.
* GenderBender: What Fancy Pants and Fleur Dis Lee decide to have their transformation be. Fancy takes the name Fancy Dress afterward, while Fleur doesn't change his name upon becoming male.
* MenAreStrongWomenArePretty: Fleur tries to invoke this as a joke, lifting up Big Mac's cart. He can't do it, and is immediately shown up by a [[SuperStrongChild little filly]].
* GenderBender: What Fancy Pants and Fleur Dis Lee decide to have their transformation be. Fancy takes the name Fancy Dress afterward, while Fleur doesn't change his name upon becoming male.
* MenAreStrongWomenArePretty: Fleur tries to invoke this as a joke, lifting up Big Mac's cart. He can't do it, and is immediately shown up by a [[SuperStrongChild little filly]].
