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* CloneByConversion: William Stryker is dead, but the Purifiers are interested in data on his daughter, so they seize a mutant capable of absorbing DNA to force her to take a sample of Stryker's flesh so they can interrogate him.
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* ParentalSubstitute: Sandra acts as a mother figure to her younger acquaintances and friends.
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* {{Determinator}}: Sandra [[spoiler: and all her alternates]] never give up, no matter what. [[spoiler: Sandra-Prime took this up to eleven, sacrificing her life to create the network and declaring war on every version of King Goblin who will ever exist.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Sandra [[spoiler: and all her alternates]] never give up, no matter what. [[spoiler: Sandra-Prime took this up to eleven, fighting against a reality stone wielding King Goblin and sacrificing her life to create the Sandra network and declaring war on every version of King Goblin who will ever exist.when he was about to kill her, to ensure that the fight could keep going.]]
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* {{Determinator}}: Sandra [[spoiler: and all her alternates]] never give up, no matter what. [[spoiler: Sandra-Prime took this up to eleven, sacrificing her life to create the network and declaring war on every version of King Goblin who will ever exist.]]
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* ShoutOut: The blueprints that Sandra gets after putting a third charge in Spycraft are based on gadgets from ''WesternAnimation/TotallySpies''.
--> To say they were cutting edge was a lie. I saw blueprints for a compact mirror that doubled as a communications device. I got specs for some gogo boots with unique suction cups on them letting me walk on surfaces, providing my core strength improved... and finally, perhaps the strangest thing was the laser inside a lipstick, but the heat wasn’t that great since the power source sucked.
--> To say they were cutting edge was a lie. I saw blueprints for a compact mirror that doubled as a communications device. I got specs for some gogo boots with unique suction cups on them letting me walk on surfaces, providing my core strength improved... and finally, perhaps the strangest thing was the laser inside a lipstick, but the heat wasn’t that great since the power source sucked.
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** The blueprints that Sandra gets after putting a third charge in Spycraft are based on gadgets from ''WesternAnimation/TotallySpies''.
--> ---> To say they were cutting edge was a lie. I saw blueprints for a compact mirror that doubled as a communications device. I got specs for some gogo boots with unique suction cups on them letting me walk on surfaces, providing my core strength improved... and finally, perhaps the strangest thing was the laser inside a lipstick, but the heat wasn’t that great since the power source sucked.sucked.
** Laura spontaneously decides that Sandra's CodeName will be [[Literature/{{Worm}} Doctor Mother]].
** The blueprints that Sandra gets after putting a third charge in Spycraft are based on gadgets from ''WesternAnimation/TotallySpies''.
** Laura spontaneously decides that Sandra's CodeName will be [[Literature/{{Worm}} Doctor Mother]].
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** While fighting Scorpion, Spider-Man tries to save Laura after she's thrown off a building. The way he grabs her with his web ends up with her temporary incapacitation from whiplash. [[GoodThingYouCanHeal Thankfully, her healing factor means she's up and ready to continue in no time.]]
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** While fighting Scorpion, Spider-Man tries to save Laura after she's thrown off a building. The way he grabs her with his web ends up with results in her temporary incapacitation from via whiplash. [[GoodThingYouCanHeal Thankfully, her healing factor means she's up and ready to continue in no time.]]
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** Emma starts off her request for a robot dog by saying: "[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 Mother, I’ve come to bargain.]]".
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** Emma starts off her request for a robot dog by saying: "[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 Mother, I’ve come to bargain.]]".]]"
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* OhCrap: Sandra has this reaction when she realizes that [[ManChild Tony Stark]] and [[GenkiGirl Tabitha Smith]] will be in the same coffee shop with her in a few seconds unless she can get Iron Man his coffee.
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* OhCrap: Sandra has this reaction when she realizes that [[ManChild [[{{Manchild}} Tony Stark]] and [[GenkiGirl Tabitha Smith]] will be in the same coffee shop with her in a few seconds unless she can get Iron Man his coffee.
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'''Sandra:''' ''(thinking)'' Ah, there was my cherub.
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'''Sandra:''' ''(thinking)'' (''thinking'') Ah, there was my cherub.
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* GlowingEyes: A medical examination reveals that Sandra's eyes now constantly glow a dim blue. They get brighter when she gets a charge, and she has to start wearing contacts to hide the glow.
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* GlowingEyes: A medical examination reveals that Sandra's eyes now constantly glow a dim blue.blue, due to [[spoiler: the tiny multiversal portal in her brain]]. They get brighter when she gets a charge, and she has to start wearing contacts to hide the glow.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: Lampshaded by Spider-Man in Chapter 26 when he lists all the people who've fought him before becoming his ally.
--> (''about Laura previously attacking him'') “It’s fine. Some of my best allies started off trying to kill me,” Spider-Man promised, counting with his fingers.\\
“Johnny Storm, Iron Fist, Prowler, Luke Cage, Daredevil...” he went on. I was annoyed none of these allies were someone Spider-Man could turn to for medical aid. I pushed down the urge to ask for numbers and turned to the group.\\
“-Brother Voodoo, Hulk, Moon Knight, Spider-Woman, Dazzler,” Spider-Man kept going.\\
I felt my eyebrow beginning to twitch of its own accord.\\
“Punisher always takes a shot, Black Cat confuses me, the Lizard has moments...” he turned ponderous and we all stared at him.
--> (''about Laura previously attacking him'') “It’s fine. Some of my best allies started off trying to kill me,” Spider-Man promised, counting with his fingers.\\
“Johnny Storm, Iron Fist, Prowler, Luke Cage, Daredevil...” he went on. I was annoyed none of these allies were someone Spider-Man could turn to for medical aid. I pushed down the urge to ask for numbers and turned to the group.\\
“-Brother Voodoo, Hulk, Moon Knight, Spider-Woman, Dazzler,” Spider-Man kept going.\\
I felt my eyebrow beginning to twitch of its own accord.\\
“Punisher always takes a shot, Black Cat confuses me, the Lizard has moments...” he turned ponderous and we all stared at him.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: Lampshaded by Spider-Man in Chapter 26 when he lists all the people who've fought him before becoming his ally.
ally. Sandra is bemused, and annoyed that none of these "allies" are people that Spider-Man could turn to for medical aid.
--> (''about Laura previously attacking him'') “It’s fine. Some of my best allies started off trying to killme,” Spider-Man promised, counting with his fingers.\\
“Johnnyme. Johnny Storm, Iron Fist, Prowler, Luke Cage, Daredevil...” he went on. I was annoyed none of these allies were someone Spider-Man could turn to for medical aid. I pushed down the urge to ask for numbers and turned to the group.\\
“-BrotherDaredevil... -Brother Voodoo, Hulk, Moon Knight, Spider-Woman, Dazzler,” Spider-Man kept going.\\
I felt my eyebrow beginning to twitch of its own accord.\\
“PunisherDazzler, [[OverlyLongGag ...Punisher always takes a shot, Black Cat confuses me, the Lizard has moments...” he turned ponderous and we all stared at him.]]
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** Also, later on, [[spoiler:Sandra gets a vision of another Sandra, battle-scarred, bionic-armed and practically unrecognizable, who the node avatar Barista worries about as a Sandra that has lost herself and now only cares about charges.]]
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** Also, later on, [[spoiler:Sandra gets a vision of another Sandra, battle-scarred, bionic-armed and practically unrecognizable, who the unrecognizable. The node avatar Barista worries about as a Sandra that has Sandras like her, who have lost herself themselves and now only cares care about charges.]]
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'''Tabitha:''' (''internally'') Killed? Yeah, and likely those same people died down there. Romanoff likely had her organs and fluids replaced with venom sacs or something.
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'''Tabitha:''' (''internally'') (''thinking'') Killed? Yeah, and likely those same people died down there. Romanoff likely had her organs and fluids replaced with venom sacs or something.
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** While fighting Scorpion, Spider-Man tries to save Laura after she's thrown off a building. The way he grabs her with his web ends up with her temporary incapacitation from whiplash. Thankfully, her healing factor means she's up and ready to continue in no time.
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** While fighting Scorpion, Spider-Man tries to save Laura after she's thrown off a building. The way he grabs her with his web ends up with her temporary incapacitation from whiplash. [[GoodThingYouCanHeal Thankfully, her healing factor means she's up and ready to continue in no time.]]
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** Tony tells her that this is why he is [[spoiler:asking if she could be the base for the mental map of Jocasta]].
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* PowerIncontinence: Happens when Sandra gets teleported by Nightcrawler. Briefly ducking into the alternate dimension that he uses to teleport momentarily cuts her off from [[spoiler:her multiversal network, which panics and thinks that she is in danger]], and when she re-emerges, she is immediately granted three charges that are automatically invested without her input or say-so.
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* PowerIncontinence: Happens when Sandra gets teleported by Nightcrawler. Briefly ducking into the alternate dimension that he uses to teleport momentarily cuts her off from [[spoiler:her multiversal network, which panics and thinks that she is in danger]], and when she re-emerges, she is immediately granted three charges that are automatically invested without her input or say-so.say-so, the overload knocking her out.
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** Tony and Tabitha immediately become friends because of this. Much to Sandra's horror, Pepper's exasperation and everyone else's bemusement.
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* SplitPersonality: Downplayed. While not going as far as developing extra personalities, Sandra [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/development-heaven-marvel-oc.923609/post-74798714 envisions her repositories of knowledge and experience as other Sandras inside her head]], working together as the Sandra collective to manage the challenges she faces. [[spoiler: It's fitting as she's actually drawing knowledge from other versions of herself in the multiverse, each with their own experiences and worldviews.]]
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* SplitPersonality: SplitPersonalityTeam: Downplayed. While not going as far as developing extra personalities, Sandra [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/development-heaven-marvel-oc.923609/post-74798714 envisions her repositories of knowledge and experience as other Sandras inside her head]], working together as the Sandra collective to manage the challenges she faces. [[spoiler: It's fitting as she's actually drawing knowledge from other versions of herself in the multiverse, each with their own experiences and worldviews.]]
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* SuperheroParadox: Discussed. The "Lee Effect" is a term that Sandra's therapist uses to describe how superpowered individuals choose to come into conflict with each other.
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* SuperheroParadox: Discussed. The "Lee Effect" is a term that Sandra's therapist uses to describe how superpowered individuals appear and choose to come into conflict with each other.
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* DramaticIrony: After learning that several versions of herself hate their Green Goblin equivalents, Sandra remarks that at least she's never been screwed over by a goblin, unaware of the fact that her former employer, Norman Osborn, is the Green Goblin.
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* DramaticIrony: After learning that several versions of herself hate their Green Goblin equivalents, Sandra remarks that at least she's never been screwed over by a goblin, unaware at the time of the fact that her former employer, Norman Osborn, is ''is'' the Green Goblin.
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** Emma starts off her request for a robot dog by saying: "[[Film/DoctorStrange2016 Mother, I’ve come to bargain.]]".
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** Tabitha gives an example as to why she, Laura, and Sandra shouldn't mess with Morlock problems.
--> “Laura we gotta let Morlocks deal with Morlock stuff otherwise we get dragged in, someone has a superbomb or opened a rip in space and we have to deal with it and one of us goes missing for three months while being trapped in a dinosaur-infested jungle. Morlocks are trouble,” Tabitha insisted with narrowed eyes.\\
Why did that sound far too specific to be a random example?\\
Spy and Detective both read that Tabitha was... earnest which actually made wanted to lie down for a moment. She saw the look and tried to look reassuring for my sake.\\
“Kurt got hit mid-teleporting us and we landed in a jungle in the Antarctic,” she said, which answered nothing and only made me stare harder.
--> “Laura we gotta let Morlocks deal with Morlock stuff otherwise we get dragged in, someone has a superbomb or opened a rip in space and we have to deal with it and one of us goes missing for three months while being trapped in a dinosaur-infested jungle. Morlocks are trouble,” Tabitha insisted with narrowed eyes.\\
Why did that sound far too specific to be a random example?\\
Spy and Detective both read that Tabitha was... earnest which actually made wanted to lie down for a moment. She saw the look and tried to look reassuring for my sake.\\
“Kurt got hit mid-teleporting us and we landed in a jungle in the Antarctic,” she said, which answered nothing and only made me stare harder.
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--> '''Sandra:''' (''internally'') Somewhere... somehow, his powers became tangled up in a messy event that caused him to fear ever being relaxed again. It was like Peter suffered some sort of traumatic event early on with his powers that pushed him to constantly run himself ragged, push himself to the limit, risk everything for the moral responsibility of being Spider-Man, and it was killing him on some level.
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--> '''Sandra:''' (''internally'') Somewhere... somehow, his powers became tangled up in a messy event that caused him to fear ever being relaxed again. It was like Peter suffered some sort of traumatic event early on with his powers that pushed him to constantly run himself ragged, push himself to the limit, risk everything for the moral responsibility of being Spider-Man, and it was killing him on some level.
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* CultureClash: Sandra only fully appreciates how rich Tony is when he says that the profits from an invention that Sandra gave him will amount to about a quarter of a million from the first return and likely that number will drop to 200 thousand monthly afterwards. When she asks if he made a mistake, he just takes that [[WrongAssumption as meaning that she wants more]] and says that he'll raise it to 300 thousand for the first month and 210 thousand monthly afterwards. He even says that that amount isn't much, but she can earn more by improving the formula.
--> It hit me then that I knew Tony was rich, but I didn’t consider Tony as ‘rich’. Anything under a million didn’t seem to be a figure worth talking about or worrying about for Tony and I don’t think I ever knew how he saw figures like this.\\
For me?\\
My entire world had just been blown apart and put together with Flex Tape.\\
For Tony? It was the monthly report.
--> It hit me then that I knew Tony was rich, but I didn’t consider Tony as ‘rich’. Anything under a million didn’t seem to be a figure worth talking about or worrying about for Tony and I don’t think I ever knew how he saw figures like this.\\
For me?\\
My entire world had just been blown apart and put together with Flex Tape.\\
For Tony? It was the monthly report.
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** Tony tells her that this is why he is [[spoiler:asking if she could be the base for the mental map of Jocasta]].
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** When Tony shows Sandra [[spoiler:the designs for Vision and Jocasta]], he mentions Ultron, which causes her to remember him as "that villain who went across Europe, nearly causing a civil war".
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* SurveillanceDrone: Sandra makes a few of these in the shape of birds to keep an eye out if Norman Osborn/Green Goblin ever approaches [=AeKure=] Acres.
--> I had done something... scary to the simple circuit board inside, connecting it to the mechanical body that worked off grinding gears and sprockets. The spybird was capable of limited learning. It wasn't alive, it didn't process the information in a way that spoke of questioning or pondering, but simply building a database of constantly updating numbers that it would use to produce an optimal result in regards to its coding.\\
It's purpose?\\
My first serious creation's task was to move about my block and send an early warning to my phone if either Norman Osborn or the Green Goblin was picked up by the camera. I slowly turned to the other 19 watching crow carvings.\\
I was sending a murder against Norman Osborn.
--> I had done something... scary to the simple circuit board inside, connecting it to the mechanical body that worked off grinding gears and sprockets. The spybird was capable of limited learning. It wasn't alive, it didn't process the information in a way that spoke of questioning or pondering, but simply building a database of constantly updating numbers that it would use to produce an optimal result in regards to its coding.\\
It's purpose?\\
My first serious creation's task was to move about my block and send an early warning to my phone if either Norman Osborn or the Green Goblin was picked up by the camera. I slowly turned to the other 19 watching crow carvings.\\
I was sending a murder against Norman Osborn.
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* YouFightLikeACow: Spider-Man likes to make quips in combat and is proud of it.
--> '''Sandra:''' Do you torment your villains, Peter?\\
'''Spider-Man:''' I once read a ton of 'you're so fat' jokes to the Kingpin to his face. Don't think he ever quite forgave me.\\
'''Sandra:''' I may need to put a muffler on your mask. It's not healthy to tease the super-villains.\\
'''Spider-Man:''' And what? Deprive them of banter? It would ruin their days if I didn't make fun of them at least twice a week.
--> '''Sandra:''' Do you torment your villains, Peter?\\
'''Spider-Man:''' I once read a ton of 'you're so fat' jokes to the Kingpin to his face. Don't think he ever quite forgave me.\\
'''Sandra:''' I may need to put a muffler on your mask. It's not healthy to tease the super-villains.\\
'''Spider-Man:''' And what? Deprive them of banter? It would ruin their days if I didn't make fun of them at least twice a week.
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* HateAtFirstSight: In Chapter 31, Norman remarks that he feels this way towards Sandra.
--> "Something about you, Sandra [=AeKure=], bothers me and it's deep... festering in my bones."
--> "Something about you, Sandra [=AeKure=], bothers me and it's deep... festering in my bones."
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Tony is completely serious with Sandra when talking to her about the fact that [[spoiler:she bought an old laptop that used to belong to Howard Stark which might potentially have files on how to make more super soldiers]].
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: If Steve had been made aware of Tabitha's friend being kidnapped, he [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/development-heaven-marvel-oc.923609/post-75076560 would've helped regardless of the political problems this would caused]].
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: If Steve had been made aware of Tabitha's friend being kidnapped, he [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/development-heaven-marvel-oc.923609/post-75076560 would've helped regardless of the political problems this would caused]].cause]].
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* SupremeChef: Sandra becomes one with just a single charge into cooking, and she only gets better. Everyone from Avengers to wall-crawlers sing her praises.
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* SupremeChef: Sandra becomes one with just a single charge into cooking, and she only gets better. Everyone from Avengers to wall-crawlers her tenants sing her praises.
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* MartyrWithoutACause: After learning that Peter is Spider-Man, Sandra decides to support him to prevent him from becoming this.
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