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** Then there's a literal example of ''TheSimpsons'' [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Already Did It]] when Mr. Weaver hands Meg a note saying "You Are Meg Griffin". He gets confronted by Matt Groening's lawyers on the plane
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** Then there's a literal example of ''TheSimpsons'' ''WesternAnimation/TheSimpsons'' [[WesternAnimation/SouthPark Already Did It]] when Mr. Weaver hands Meg a note saying "You Are Meg Griffin". He gets confronted by Matt Groening's lawyers on the plane
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* TakeThat: ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', Miley Cyrus, and Meg-bashers (hell, bullies in general).
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* TakeThat: ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', ''Literature/TheTwilightSaga'', ''WesternAnimation/AvatarTheLastAirbender'', Miley Cyrus, and Meg-bashers (hell, bullies in general).
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** FunnyAneurysmMoment: Two weeks after this fic was published, I found [[http://www.democratandchronicle.com/article/20091029/BUSINESS/910290322/Fizzling+Jolt+Cola+may+close this article on how JOLT might go out of business]]. *headdesk* [[ButtMonkey Once again, the world hates me.]]
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* ArtShift: Several scenes, if really animated, would call for Mr. Weaver (and Meg) to become {{Animesque}} (see SelfFanservice, below).
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* ArtShift: Several scenes, if really animated, would call for Mr. Weaver (and Meg) to become {{Animesque}} (see SelfFanservice, below).SelfFanservice).
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* BigLippedAlligatorMoment: Well, this '''is''' ''WesternAnimation/FamilyGuy'', so the typical "[[WesternAnimation/SouthPark manatee]] [[FanNickname jokes]]" are expected, but this fic has a cutaway '''within''' a cutaway: After a cutaway to Quagmire in bed with Mork and a very angry Mindy, Mork prompts a flashback to when [[TheSchizophreniaConspiracy Exidor]] invited them to an orgy. [[HoYay It]] [[FanDisservice ends]] [[{{Squick}} badly]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: It's revealed that Connie [[DrivenToSuicide drove two girls to suicide]] at her 14th birthday party, and it's implied she did the same several other girls at different times. Also, she and her friend, Gina, tortured the "ugly kids" in a way not unlike Abu Ghraib ([[DudeNotFunny And that wasn't actually meant to be funny]], but more of a way to show how horrible Connie really was. [[BlackComedy Although I wouldn't put it past the actual show to put something like that in there.]])
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* ScriptFic
* SelfFanservice: Parodied. When Meg first looks at Mr. Weaver, she sees him in {{Animesque}} style with *deep breath* BishieSparkle, LoveBubbles, DramaticWind, [[SuckMyRose rose petals blowing by]], and even [[GaussianGirl soft focus]] (making him possibly the first ever Gaussian Guy. She sees him this way several times during the course of the fic. He's even this way during the closing credits.
* SelfFanservice: Parodied. When Meg first looks at Mr. Weaver, she sees him in {{Animesque}} style with *deep breath* BishieSparkle, LoveBubbles, DramaticWind, [[SuckMyRose rose petals blowing by]], and even [[GaussianGirl soft focus]] (making him possibly the first ever Gaussian Guy. She sees him this way several times during the course of the fic. He's even this way during the closing credits.
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* ScriptFic
* SelfFanservice: Parodied. When Meg first looks at Mr. Weaver, she sees him in {{Animesque}} style with *deep breath* BishieSparkle, LoveBubbles, DramaticWind, [[SuckMyRose rose petals blowing by]], and even [[GaussianGirl soft focus]] (making him possibly the first ever Gaussian Guy. She sees him this way several times during the course of the fic. He's even this way during the closing credits.ScriptFic: The entire fic is composed as if it were a script.
* SelfFanservice: Parodied. When Meg first looks at Mr. Weaver, she sees him in {{Animesque}} style with *deep breath* BishieSparkle, LoveBubbles, DramaticWind, [[SuckMyRose rose petals blowing by]], and even [[GaussianGirl soft focus]] (making him possibly the first ever Gaussian Guy. She sees him this way several times during the course of the fic. He's even this way during the closing credits.
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Misplaced, moving to the correct tab: Sorry man, but these don't particularly belong in the main.
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* {{Fetish}}: Meg likes Mr. Weaver's hairy arms, while he thinks it would be hot if she wore Connie's fluffy pink jacket during sex.\
* HilariousInHindsight: This fic was completed long before "Dial Meg For Murder" aired, but it was pretty awesome to see Meg deliver some sort of soda-related punishment to Connie on-screen (even if it wasn't fatal). Oh, and [[TakeThatKiss the dominance kiss]]. Looks like my scene of Meg suggesting she and Mr. Weaver rape Connie together wasn't that far-fetched.
* HumorDissonance: The scenes where Robin's characters are supposedly improvising (to the delight of other characters. Well, most characters anyway) aren't really funny. That is because although I am quite good at spoken improvisation, I cannot capture Robin's magic in a fanfic. Rest assured, were this an actual script to be recorded in a studio by Robin, those parts would say [[HarpoDoesSomethingFunny "Robin can go off here".]]
* HilariousInHindsight: This fic was completed long before "Dial Meg For Murder" aired, but it was pretty awesome to see Meg deliver some sort of soda-related punishment to Connie on-screen (even if it wasn't fatal). Oh, and [[TakeThatKiss the dominance kiss]]. Looks like my scene of Meg suggesting she and Mr. Weaver rape Connie together wasn't that far-fetched.
* HumorDissonance: The scenes where Robin's characters are supposedly improvising (to the delight of other characters. Well, most characters anyway) aren't really funny. That is because although I am quite good at spoken improvisation, I cannot capture Robin's magic in a fanfic. Rest assured, were this an actual script to be recorded in a studio by Robin, those parts would say [[HarpoDoesSomethingFunny "Robin can go off here".]]
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* {{Fetish}}: Meg likes Mr. Weaver's hairy arms, while he thinks it would be hot if she wore Connie's fluffy pink jacket during sex.\
* HilariousInHindsight: This fic was completed long before "Dial Meg For Murder" aired, but it was pretty awesome to see Meg deliver some sort of soda-related punishment to Connie on-screen (even if it wasn't fatal). Oh, and [[TakeThatKiss the dominance kiss]]. Looks like my scene of Meg suggesting she and Mr. Weaver rape Connie together wasn't that far-fetched.
* HumorDissonance: The scenes where Robin's characters are supposedly improvising (to the delight of other characters. Well, most characters anyway) aren't really funny. That is because although I am quite good at spoken improvisation, I cannot capture Robin's magic in a fanfic. Rest assured, were this an actual script to be recorded in a studio by Robin, those parts would say [[HarpoDoesSomethingFunny "Robin can go off here".]]
* HilariousInHindsight: This fic was completed long before "Dial Meg For Murder" aired, but it was pretty awesome to see Meg deliver some sort of soda-related punishment to Connie on-screen (even if it wasn't fatal). Oh, and [[TakeThatKiss the dominance kiss]]. Looks like my scene of Meg suggesting she and Mr. Weaver rape Connie together wasn't that far-fetched.
* HumorDissonance: The scenes where Robin's characters are supposedly improvising (to the delight of other characters. Well, most characters anyway) aren't really funny. That is because although I am quite good at spoken improvisation, I cannot capture Robin's magic in a fanfic. Rest assured, were this an actual script to be recorded in a studio by Robin, those parts would say [[HarpoDoesSomethingFunny "Robin can go off here".]]
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-->'''Mr. Weaver''': Well, either way is pretty [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop warped]].
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-->'''Mr. Weaver''': Well, either way is pretty [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop warped]].warped.
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-->'''Meg''': Oh yeah? I'm [[GenreSavvy savvy]] too. And I know this is [[AllJustADream all a dream.]] [[CrashingDreams I'll just think of something really loud to wake me up.]]
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-->'''Meg''': Oh yeah? I'm [[GenreSavvy savvy]] too. And I know this is [[AllJustADream all a dream.]] dream]]. [[CrashingDreams I'll just think of something really loud to wake me up.]]
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-->'''Meg''': So, what are we going to do to her? Are we gonna hack her Facebook account? Are we gonna raid her MySpace page? [[BlackComedyRape Are we gonna rape her?]]
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-->'''Meg''': So, what are we going to do to her? Are we gonna hack her Facebook account? Are we gonna raid her MySpace Website/MySpace page? [[BlackComedyRape Are we gonna rape her?]]
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** Meg and Mr. Weaver have a discussion about film (while stoned) where Meg mixes up Jeff Daniels and JeffBridges. Mr. Weaver corrects her by telling her that Jeff Daniels was the one in ''RV'' and and Jeff Bridges was the one in ''Film/TheFisherKing''.
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** Meg and Mr. Weaver have a discussion about film (while stoned) where Meg mixes up Jeff Daniels and JeffBridges.Creator/JeffBridges. Mr. Weaver corrects her by telling her that Jeff Daniels was the one in ''RV'' and and Jeff Bridges was the one in ''Film/TheFisherKing''.
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-->'''Mr. Weaver''': Well, either way is pretty [[WarpedAesop warped]].
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-->'''Mr. Weaver''': Well, either way is pretty [[WarpedAesop [[FamilyUnfriendlyAesop warped]].
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* [[WholePlotReference One-third Plot Reference]]: A combination of ''Film/DeadPoetsSociety'', ''Film/{{Heathers}}'', and ''WorldsGreatestDad''.
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* [[WholePlotReference One-third Plot Reference]]: A combination of ''Film/DeadPoetsSociety'', ''Film/{{Heathers}}'', and ''WorldsGreatestDad''.''Film/WorldsGreatestDad''.
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** Non-sexual examples include the soundtrack (there are a '''lot''' of songs used in this fic. So much that I made a playlist of them), and of course the TVTropes {{Shout Out}}s.
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** Non-sexual examples include the soundtrack (there are a '''lot''' of songs used in this fic. So much that I made a playlist of them), and of course the TVTropes Wiki/TVTropes {{Shout Out}}s.