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** [[TerseTalker Yuzuru]] and [[AntiquatedLinguistics Mukuro]] don't speak like they do in canon, sounding more like everyone else. However, traces of their canon speech can be noticed in the way they talk.
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** [[{{Chuunibyou}} Kaguya]], [[TerseTalker Yuzuru]] Yuzuru]], and [[AntiquatedLinguistics Mukuro]] don't speak like they do in canon, sounding more like everyone else. However, traces of their canon speech can be noticed in the way they talk.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', as not only are all of the Spirits present from the start, but most of them look to be living happy lives.
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* * LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', as not only are all of the Spirits present from the start, but most of them look to be living happy lives.lives. The first chapter also makes no mention that the Eurasian Sky Disaster was any worse than it had been in canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Like in Date A Re:Live, some of the characters who were important later on in the story have a much bigger spotlight here, like the Spirits who appeared in the latter half of the series. The best example of this is Mio, who appears as herself from the beginning.
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* AscendedExtra: Like in Date ''Date A Re:Live, Re:Live'', some of the characters who were important later on in the story have a much bigger spotlight here, like the Spirits who appeared in the latter half of the series. The best example of this is Mio, who appears as herself from the beginning.
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* AscendedExtra: Like in Date A Re:Live, some of the characters who were important later on in the story have a much bigger spotlight here, like the Spirits who appeared in the latter half of the series. The best example of this is Mio, who appears as herself from the beginning.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: Unlike canon, where Tohka could be considered a daughter to Mio due to being created from a Sephira Crystal, she's instead Mio's younger sister.
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* RelatedDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: Unlike canon, where Tohka could be considered a daughter to Mio due to being created from a Sephira Crystal, she's instead Mio's younger sister.
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->"Just as a similar story is able to take its own path, a different story can follow an almost identical path. How will the original events of Date A Live go when the smallest of changes [creates] a different, yet nearly unchanged story?"
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->"Just as a similar story is able to take its own path, a different story can follow an almost identical path. How will the original events of Date A Live go when the smallest of changes [creates] creates a different, yet nearly unchanged story?"
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->Just as a similar story is able to take its own path, a different story can follow an almost identical path. How will the original events of Date A Live go when the smallest of changes tells a different, yet nearly unchanged story?
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' (''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27267973/chapters/66618541 AO3 Link]]'') is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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** The Spirits' transformation during the battle with the Diabolus, in response to Shiniji's feelings, is based off the transformation scene from Mayuri Judgment.
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** The Spirits' transformation during the battle with the Diabolus, in response to Shiniji's feelings, is based off the transformation scene from [[Anime/DateALiveMayuriJudgement Mayuri Judgment.Judgment]].
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Like in ''Date A Re:Live'', various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon, with the primary additions all of the canonical Spirits.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Like in ''Date A Re:Live'', various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon, with the primary additions being all of the canonical Spirits.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Like in ''Date A Re:Live'', various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon, with the primary additions being Ellen and all of the canonical Spirits.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Like in ''Date A Re:Live'', various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon, with the primary additions being Ellen and all of the canonical Spirits.
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* ForWantOfANail: Unlike canon, Shinji isn't immediately killed after being shot by Westcott, allowing him to be reborn as himself instead of Shido. This and doing the same with Mana sets off a [[ButterflyEffect chain of events]] that results in most if not all of the changes in the story.
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* ForWantOfANail: Unlike canon, Shinji isn't immediately killed after being shot by Westcott, allowing him to be reborn as himself instead of Shido. This and doing the same with Mana sets off a [[ButterflyEffect chain of events]] events that results in most if not all of the changes in the story.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When the Spirits successfully destroy the Diabolus, the backlash from its destruction ends up giving Issac Westcott brain damage, which Mio says to Tohka will likely make him even more dangerous.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When the Spirits successfully destroy the Diabolus, the backlash from its destruction ends up giving Issac Westcott brain damage, which Mio says to tells Tohka will likely make him even more dangerous.
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* OnlyOneName: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Unlike canon, where Yoshino and Natsumi' family names were only revealed at the very end of the story, their full names are used right from the start.
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* OnlyOneName: {{Subverted|Trope}}. Unlike canon, where Yoshino and Natsumi' Natsumi's family names were only revealed at the very end of the story, their full names are used right from the start.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'', from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively, to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned white.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'', from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively, to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned white. This is occasionally [[SubvertedTrope subverted]] in some areas as well, such as the footwear of Tohka's Astral Dress being replaced with Tenka's.
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** When Mio [[SymbioticPossession temporarily possesses]] Tohka, it causes her hair to turn white just like "Beast", a version of Tohka from another timeline who appears in Volumes 21 and 22.
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** [[TerseTalker Yuzuru]] and [[AntiquatedLinguistics Mukuro]] don't speak like they do in canon, sounding more like everyone else. However, traces of their canon speech can be noticed in the way they talk.
** Most of the events in Shido and Tohka's date are skipped over, only covering its beginning up to their talk on the bench.
** Zafkiel doesn't grant Kurumi the power to TimeTravel, removing her involvement in Origami's backstory and her goal to undo the events of the Eurasian Sky Disaster.
** [[TerseTalker Yuzuru]] and [[AntiquatedLinguistics Mukuro]] don't speak like they do in canon, sounding more like everyone else. However, traces of their canon speech can be noticed in the way they talk.
** Most of the events in Shido and Tohka's date are skipped over, only covering its beginning up to their talk on the bench.
** Zafkiel doesn't grant Kurumi the power to TimeTravel, removing her involvement in Origami's backstory and her goal to undo the events of the Eurasian Sky Disaster.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] later confirms this is because ''he is'' Shinji Takamiya, who was SparedByTheAdaptation, taking the role of Shido.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] later confirms this is because ''he is'' Shinji Takamiya, who was SparedByTheAdaptation, taking the role of Shido. [[invoked]]
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* CombatStilettos: {{Subverted|Trope}}, as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly.
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* CombatStilettos: {{Subverted|Trope}}, as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly. [[invoked]]
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* OfficialCouple: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has said that Mio will be the only one that Shinji will end up with in the end.
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* GladHesOnOurSide: This is Tohka's reaction to seeing Kotori's attack on the Diabolus, which involves her blasting blasting her flame into it repeatedly, to the the point that flames burst out of it.
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* GladHesOnOurSide: This is Tohka's reaction to seeing Kotori's attack on the Diabolus, which involves her blasting blasting her flame [[PlayingWithFire flames]] into it repeatedly, to the the point that flames burst out of it.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: After seeing, and confirming, what kind of man Issac Westtcot is, Shinji declares that he will not forgive him for what he has done.
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* GladHesOnOurSide: This is Tohka's reaction to seeing Kotori's attack on the Diabolus, which involves her blasting blasting her flame into it repeatedly, to the the point that flames burst out of it.
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* WatchOutForThatTree: After dodging a sofa being carried by two men, Kaguya turns around and brags this fact to Yuzuru while skating backwards, leading her to crash, back first, into a light post.
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* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for an unrevealed group.
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* RapunzelHair: Nia's hair is longer than in canon, while Origami is in her New Timeline appearance from the start.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When the Spirits successfully destroy the Diabolus, the backlash from its destruction ends up giving Issac Westcott brain damage, which Mio says to Tohka will likely make him even more dangerous.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] later confirms this is because ''he is'' Shinji Takamiya, who was SparedByTheAdaption, taking the role of Shido.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] later confirms this is because ''he is'' Shinji Takamiya, who was SparedByTheAdaption, SparedByTheAdaptation, taking the role of Shido.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has yet to confirm if he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live or not.
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has yet to confirm if he later confirms this is because ''he is'' Shinji Takamiya, who was SparedByTheAdaption, taking the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live or not.role of Shido.
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* DarkerAndEdgier: Like with ''Date A Re:Live'', the first chapter makes it clear the story has more stakes than canon, though not as much as shown in LighterAndSofter.
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* SeenItAll: While Kaguya and Yuzuru are panicking about Kotori's [[GlowingEyesOfDoom behavior]] [[BloodKnight during]] the fight with the Diabolus, Mana and Yoshino just say that this is normal for her.
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* IResembleThatRemark: Kaguya tells Yuzuru that she feels that she is missing something that her brain won't leave her alone. When Yuzuru comments that she usually never lets anything go, Kaguya agrees before realizing that [[StealthInsult wasn't meant as a compliment]].
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* ElementalRockPaperScissors: During Tohka and Origami's fight, Shinji mentions to Tohka that Origami's power of [[LightEmUp light]] is giving her an advantage over [[CastingAShadow Tohka]] due to the fight being during the day, and the opposite would be true if it were night.
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* OfficialCouple: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has said that Mio will be the only one that Shinji will end up with in the end.
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** Three of the DEM's automatons, the Jabberwocky, Alice, and Cheshire Cat's names and abilities are all based off the Ashcroft Series of CR-Units from Date AST Like.
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