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* ForWantOfANail: Unlike canon, Shinji isn't immediately killed after being shot by Westcott, allowing him to be reborn as himself instead of Shido. This and doing the same with Mana sets off a chain of events that results in most if not all of the changes in the story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14065470/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' (''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27267973/chapters/66618541 AO3 Link]]'') is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14065470/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' (''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27267973/chapters/66618541 AO3 Link]]'') is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' ''Literature/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their greatest wish being to find the cause behind their deaths, and get much needed closure from it.
However, upon starting the first day of his Second Years in Raizen High, a transfer student named Origami leads Shinji to discover a dark possibility behind their deaths shortly before a Spacequake alarm leads them to meeting a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds even more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
However, upon starting the first day of his Second Years in Raizen High, a transfer student named Origami leads Shinji to discover a dark possibility behind their deaths shortly before a Spacequake alarm leads them to meeting a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds even more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their greatest wish being to find the cause behind their deaths, and get much needed closure from it.
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Upon starting the first day of his SecondYears Year in Raizen High, a transfer student named Origami leads Shinji to discover a dark possibility behind their deaths shortly before a Spacequake alarm leads them to meeting a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts.past. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds even more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such, there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past Volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such, there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past Volume 12 16 (or the third fourth season) of the series.
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* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter, from Shinji's (originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for Kotori, to him and Mana entering a trance that brought them towards the spacequake where they first meet Tohka.
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* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter, from Shinji's (originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for Kotori, to him and Mana entering a trance that brought them towards the spacequake Spacequake where they first meet Tohka.
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* DarkSecret: Origami tells Shinji, based on rumors her Aunt has told her, that she believes his parents were killed by the DEM because they knew the truth about the first spacequake.
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* DarkSecret: Origami tells Shinji, based on rumors her Aunt has told her, that she believes his parents were killed by the DEM because they knew the truth about behind the first spacequake.Eurasian Sky Disaster.
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* LuminescentBlush: Phantom's mosaic ends up turning completely pink when Tokha asks why one of the two individuals (Shinji) she met earlier didn't have breasts.
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* LuminescentBlush: Phantom's mosaic ends up turning completely pink when Tokha Tohka asks why one of the two individuals (Shinji) she met earlier didn't have breasts.
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** The Spirits' transformation during the battle with the Diabolus, in response to Shiniji's feelings, is based off the transformation scene from [[Anime/DateALiveMayuriJudgement Mayuri Judgment]].
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** The Spirits' transformation during the battle with the Diabolus, in response to Shiniji's Shinji's feelings, is based off the transformation scene from [[Anime/DateALiveMayuriJudgement Mayuri Judgment]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When the Spirits successfully destroy the Diabolus, the backlash from its destruction ends up giving Issac Westcott brain damage, which Mio tells Tohka will likely make him even more dangerous.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: When the Spirits successfully destroy the Diabolus, the backlash from its destruction ends up giving Issac Isaac Westcott brain damage, which Mio tells Tohka will likely make him even more dangerous.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: After seeing, and confirming, what kind of man Issac Westtcot is, Shinji declares that he will not forgive him for what he has done.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: After seeing, and confirming, what kind of man Issac Westtcot Isaac Westcott is, Shinji declares that he will not forgive him for what he has done.
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* GladHesOnOurSide: This is Tohka's reaction to seeing Kotori's attack on the Diabolus, which involves her blasting her [[PlayingWithFire flames]] into it repeatedly, to the the point that flames burst out of it.
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* GladHesOnOurSide: This is Tohka's reaction to seeing Kotori's attack on the Diabolus, which involves her blasting her [[PlayingWithFire flames]] into it repeatedly, to the the point that flames burst out of it.
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* AllInTheManual: The side story, ''Asgard Electronics - Daily Observations: Confidential Data'', is a collection of files written by Elsie that show information about various characters alongside scenes canon to the main story.
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* AllInTheManual: The side story, ''Asgard ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/38037469/chapters/95006842 Asgard Electronics - Daily Observations: Confidential Data'', Data]]'', is a collection of files written by Elsie that show information about various characters alongside scenes canon to the main story.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' (''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27267973/chapters/66618541 AO3 Link]]'') is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline net/s/14065470/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' (''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/27267973/chapters/66618541 AO3 Link]]'') is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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* AllInTheManual: The side story, ''Asgard Electronics - Daily Observations: Confidential Data'', is a collection of files written by Elsie that show information about various characters alongside scenes canon to the main story.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their greatest wish being to find the cause behind their deaths, and find much needed closure from it.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their greatest wish being to find the cause behind their deaths, and find get much needed closure from it.
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At the start of 2022, it was revealed by Tohka that kingpariah is no longer co-writing the story as a result of real life circumstances on his side, and thus every chapter past the first will be written by her alone.
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At the start of 2022, it was revealed by Tohka that kingpariah is no longer co-writing the story as a result of real life circumstances on his side, and thus every chapter past the first four will be written by her alone.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their main purpose being to find some kind of answers behind their deaths, and find much needed closure from it.
However, upon the first day of their Second Years in their respective schools, a transfer student named Origami leads to Shinji discovering a dark possibility behind their deaths hours before a Spacequake alarm leads them to discovering a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
However, upon the first day of their Second Years in their respective schools, a transfer student named Origami leads to Shinji discovering a dark possibility behind their deaths hours before a Spacequake alarm leads them to discovering a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their main purpose greatest wish being to find some kind of answers the cause behind their deaths, and find much needed closure from it.
However, upon starting the first day oftheir his Second Years in their respective schools, Raizen High, a transfer student named Origami leads to Shinji discovering to discover a dark possibility behind their deaths hours shortly before a Spacequake alarm leads them to discovering meeting a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds even more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has confirmed that, regardless of what happens, Mio will not die and will be the only girl Shinji ends up with. [[invoked]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has confirmed that, regardless of what happens, Mio will not die and will be the only girl that Shinji ends up with. [[invoked]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has confirmed that, regardless of what happens, Mio will not die and be the only girl Shinji ends up with. [[invoked]]
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* ForegoneConclusion: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has confirmed that, regardless of what happens, Mio will not die and will be the only girl Shinji ends up with. [[invoked]]
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* OfficialCouple: [[WordOfGod The Author]] has said that Mio will be the only one that Shinji will end up with in the end. [[invoked]]
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** The Author describes ''Altered Timeline'' as a happier take on Mio's love story, which is how Tachibana himself described Date A Live in the afterword of Volume 19.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', as not only are all of the Spirits present from the start, but most of them look to be living happy lives. The first chapter also makes no mention that the Eurasian Sky Disaster was any worse than it had been in canon.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', as not only are all of the Spirits present from the start, but most of them look to be living happy lives. The first chapter also makes no mention that of the Eurasian Sky Disaster was being any worse than it had been in canon.
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* * LighterAndSofter: Compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', as not only are all of the Spirits present from the start, but most of them look to be living happy lives. The first chapter also makes no mention that the Eurasian Sky Disaster was any worse than it had been in canon.
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