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* AdaptationalCurves: Some of the Spirits, and Mana, have a more ample bust than they do in canon.
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* AgeLift: Unlike in canon, Nia is young enough to attend high school.
* BigEater: During their meeting, Tohka eats so much that Shinji worries he might run out of money before she is full.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia's vision gets blurry if she isn't wearing her glasses.
* BigEater: During their meeting, Tohka eats so much that Shinji worries he might run out of money before she is full.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia's vision gets blurry if she isn't wearing her glasses.
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* ColorCodedCharacters: Each Spirit has a color associated to them, of the Spirits shown so far:
** Origami’s is White.
** Tohka's is Purple/Violet.
%%** The other Spirits have been shown being associated with Gray, Black, Blue, Red, Yellow, Green, Orange, and Indigo respectively.
** Origami’s is White.
** Tohka's is Purple/Violet.
%%** The other Spirits have been shown being associated with Gray, Black, Blue, Red, Yellow, Green, Orange, and Indigo respectively.
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* TheCynic: Among Mana's group of friends, Natsumi always seems to expect the worst and even when something good does happen to her, she just wonders how long it will last.
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* DroppedGlasses: Implied to be a common occurrence with Nia, along with them breaking after they fall off, since she carries multiple spares on hand.
* ElementalPowers: Each Spirit has one or two elemental affinities associated to their powers.
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
* ExpressiveAccessory: Tohka's ribbon sometimes reacts to her mood. So far, its shown to sharpen itself when she's angry.
* FishOutOfWater: Tohka shows this when she is on her "date" with Shinji. To give one example, when her stomach growls during the middle of a conversation with him, she doesn't realize that it means that she is hungry.
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* ElementalPowers: Each Spirit has one or two elemental affinities associated to their powers.
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
* ExpressiveAccessory: Tohka's ribbon sometimes reacts to her mood. So far, its shown to sharpen itself when she's angry.
* FishOutOfWater: Tohka shows this when she is on her "date" with Shinji. To give one example, when her stomach growls during the middle of a conversation with him, she doesn't realize that it means that she is hungry.
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* DroppedGlasses: Implied FirstEpisodeTwist: Several:
** All of the Spirits awaken their power near the end of the first arc.
** Hiroto Tonomachi is [[TheMole a spy]] working for DEM Industries.
** Karen is working for Westcott, and Ellen is working with Elliot.
* ForWantOfANail: Unlike canon, Shinji isn't immediately killed after being shot by Westcott, allowing him to bea common occurrence reborn as himself instead of Shido. This and doing the same with Nia, along with them breaking after they fall off, since she carries multiple spares on hand.
* ElementalPowers: Each Spirit has one or two elemental affinities associated to their powers.
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
* ExpressiveAccessory: Tohka's ribbon sometimes reacts to her mood. So far, its shown to sharpen itself when she's angry.
* FishOutOfWater: Tohka shows this when she is on her "date" with Shinji. To give one example, when her stomach growls during the middleMana sets off a [[ButterflyEffect chain of a conversation with him, she doesn't realize events]] that it means that she is hungry.
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** All of the Spirits awaken their power near the end of the first arc.
** Hiroto Tonomachi is [[TheMole a spy]] working for DEM Industries.
** Karen is working for Westcott, and Ellen is working with Elliot.
* ForWantOfANail: Unlike canon, Shinji isn't immediately killed after being shot by Westcott, allowing him to be
* ElementalPowers: Each Spirit has one or two elemental affinities associated to their powers.
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
* ExpressiveAccessory: Tohka's ribbon sometimes reacts to her mood. So far, its shown to sharpen itself when she's angry.
* FishOutOfWater: Tohka shows this when she is on her "date" with Shinji. To give one example, when her stomach growls during the middle
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* NameAmnesia: Tohka initially suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:Live'', she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
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* CombatStilettos: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly.
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* CombatStilettos: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], {{Subverted|Trope}}, as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly.
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* TheCynic: Among Mana's group of friends, Natsumi always seems to expect the worst and even when something good does happen to her, she just wonders how long it will last.
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** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kensei Junior High, which happens as of Volume 21 in canon.
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** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kensei Keisei Junior High, which happens as of Volume 21 in canon.
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* DefenseMechanismSuperpower: According to Phantom, while their powers are not fully awakened, the Spirits' Angels will take over their bodies when they sense power strong enough to threaten them, even that of another Spirit's. This is first shown with Origami, who went into a trance after seeing Tohka during her "date" with Shinji.
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** Ellen becoming a deputy teacher at Raizen, a job she's given sometime after the events of Volume 20.
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* CombatStilettos: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly and will have to run.
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* CombatStilettos: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly and will have to run.fly.
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* CombatStilettos: [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]], as none of the Spirit's Astral Dresses will have high heels. This is because [[WordOfGod the author]] claims they will be impractical during instances where they can't fly and will have to run.
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--> '''Tohka:''' I want to know why the taller of the two didn't have these on his chest! ''[pushes her breasts up]''\\
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--> '''Tohka:''' I want to know why the taller of the two (Shinji) didn't have these on his chest! ''[pushes her breasts up]''\\
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an alley, believing that their meeting was just a dream. However, the nature of said dream leaves her wondering if it may have been more than that.
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an alley, believing that their meeting was just a dream. However, the nature of said dream their talk leaves her wondering if it may have been more than that.
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an alley believing that the meeting was just a dream, due to its nature, but the fact that she recalls her name makes her wonder if it actually more than that.
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an alley alley, believing that the their meeting was just a dream, due to its nature, but dream. However, the fact that she recalls nature of said dream leaves her name makes her wonder wondering if it actually may have been more than that.
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an ally believing that the meeting was just a dream, due to its nature, but the fact that she recalls her name makes her wonder if it actually more than that.
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* OrWasItADream: After Tohka's meeting with Phantom, she wakes up in the middle of an ally alley believing that the meeting was just a dream, due to its nature, but the fact that she recalls her name makes her wonder if it actually more than that.
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* AllJustADream: What Tohka believes her talk with Phantom may have been, due to its nature.
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* ThatWasNotADream: After being enveloped by a white flash and falling unconscious, Shinji and Mana wake up in their respective school's shelters, only with everyone acting like they had been there all along. It only takes a quick phone call for them to confirm they both remember the events with Tohka, implying something greater is at work.
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? {{Beat}} Wait, why am ''I'' here?
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? {{Beat}} ''[{{Beat}}]'' Wait, why am ''I'' here?
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? Wait, why am ''I'' here?
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--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? {{Beat}} Wait, why am ''I'' here?
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->Just as a similar story is able to take its own path, a different story can follow an almost identical path. How will the original events of Date A Live go when the smallest of changes tells a different, yet nearly unchanged story?
-->-- The Story Summary on Fanfiction.Net
-->-- The Story Summary on Fanfiction.Net
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* ElementalPowers: Each Spirit has one or two elemental affinities associated to their powers.
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
** Origami's is [[LightEmUp Light]].
** Tohka's is [[CastingAShadow Darkness]].
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Just as a similar story is able to take its own path, a different story can follow an almost identical path. How will the original events of Date A Live go when the smallest of changes tells a different, yet nearly unchanged story?
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In a world that has been ravaged by a new type of natural disaster known as Spacequakes for the past 30 years, a pair of siblings named Shinji and Mana Takamiya live fairly normal lives without their parents, who died when they were fairly young. Their main purpose being to find some kind of answers behind their deaths, and find much needed closure from it.
However, upon the first day of their Second Years in their respective schools, a transfer student named Origami leads to Shinji discovering a dark possibility behind their deaths hours before a Spacequake alarm leads them to discovering a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
With the world as they once knew it slowly unraveling to reveal a secret long forgotten to them, Shinji and Mana begin their journey to find answers as everything changes with the simple question of: "Are you here to kill me?"
However, upon the first day of their Second Years in their respective schools, a transfer student named Origami leads to Shinji discovering a dark possibility behind their deaths hours before a Spacequake alarm leads them to discovering a mysterious girl that further complicates the mystery behind their parents' fates and their unknown pasts. Then, just as this one girl's presence adds more questions to the mix, another nine beings appear and challenge this girl, who seem to be one in the same.
With the world as they once knew it slowly unraveling to reveal a secret long forgotten to them, Shinji and Mana begin their journey to find answers as everything changes with the simple question of: "Are you here to kill me?"
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such, there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such, there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past volume Volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such such, there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]]'' is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]]
Yatogami]], with [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4672544/kingpariah kingpariah]] as a co-writer.
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* AdaptationalCurves: Origami Tobiichi has a more ample bust than in canon.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter from Shinji's (Originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for a couple missing students instead of a relative to him and his sister having a close encounter with Tohka's spacequake.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named [[AdaptationNameChange Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka]]) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated that despite the name change he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter from Shinji's (Originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for a couple missing students instead of a relative to him and his sister having a close encounter with Tohka's spacequake.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named [[AdaptationNameChange Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka]]) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated that despite the name change he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live.
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* AdaptationalCurves: Origami Tobiichi has Some of the Spirits, and Mana, have a more ample bust than they do in canon.
canon.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the firstchapter chapter, from Shinji's (Originally (originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for a couple missing students instead of a relative Kotori, to him and his sister having Mana entering a close encounter with Tohka's spacequake.
trance that brought them towards the spacequake where they first meet Tohka.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance:Various Like in ''Date A Re:Live'', various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in canon, with the first chapter from Mana again primary additions being a member Ellen and all of the main character's (Named [[AdaptationNameChange Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka]]) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
canonical Spirits.
* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] hasstated that despite the name change yet to confirm if he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live.Re:Live or not.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first
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* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has
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* BigEater: Tohka eats so much during her meeting with Shinji that he begins to worry that he will run out of money before she is full.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia Honjo's vision gets blurred whenever her glasses fall off and break.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: What Phantom ends up doing when Tohka says that she wants to ask Shinji why he doesn't happen to have breasts.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia Honjo's vision gets blurred whenever her glasses fall off and break.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: What Phantom ends up doing when Tohka says that she wants to ask Shinji why he doesn't happen to have breasts.
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* AllJustADream: What Tohka believes her talk with Phantom may have been, due to its nature.
* BigEater: During their meeting, Tohka eats so muchduring her meeting with that Shinji that worries he begins to worry that he will might run out of money before she is full.
* BlindWithoutEm:Nia Honjo's Nia's vision gets blurred whenever blurry if she isn't wearing her glasses fall off and break.
glasses.
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: What Phantom ends up doing when Tohkasays that she wants to ask asks her why Shinji why he doesn't happen to have breasts. breasts.
* BigEater: During their meeting, Tohka eats so much
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* DelayedReaction: When Shinji and Mana bump into one another breaking a trance they were under, he asks her what she's doing outside and not in one of the spacequake shelters before asking himself why he also isn't in the shelter.
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* DarkSecret: Origami tells Shinji, based on rumors her Aunt has told her, that she believes his parents were killed by the DEM because they knew the truth about the first spacequake.
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* DelayedReaction:When After a shared trance makes them leave their school's respective shelters, Shinji and Mana bump into one another breaking a trance they were under, doesn't realize he's outside until he asks her what she's doing outside and not in one of Mana the spacequake shelters before asking himself why he also isn't in the shelter.same question.
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* DarkSecret: Origami tells Shinji that she believes that his parents were killed by DEM because they knew the truth about the first spacequake.
* DroppedGlasses: Nia Honjo's glasses break both times they fall off, once on her way to Rindouji High and again in its spacequake shelter when she slammed her free hand on the wall.
* DroppedGlasses: Nia Honjo's glasses break both times they fall off, once on her way to Rindouji High and again in its spacequake shelter when she slammed her free hand on the wall.
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* LuminescentBlush: Phantom ends up turning completely pink when Tokha asks why one of the two individuals (Shinji) she met earlier didn't have breasts.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for DEM.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for DEM.
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* LuminescentBlush: Phantom Phantom's mosaic ends up turning completely pink when Tokha asks why one of the two individuals (Shinji) she met earlier didn't have breasts.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this forDEM.an unrevealed group.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for
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** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21 of ''Date A Live''.
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** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Kensei Junior High, similarly to what is shown which happens as of Volume 21 in volume 21 of ''Date A Live''.canon.
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* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:Live'' she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
* NoodleIncident: When Ellen is introducing herself to Shinji's class, she mentions that she is willing to help them with anything except for Ai, Mai, and Mii for she remembers what happened last year with them.
* RapunzelHair: Nia and Origami once again have long hair.
* SpitTake: Mana reaction to seeing Shinji walking past Danny's with the mysterious girl that the two of them saw at the center of the spacequake earlier.
* NoodleIncident: When Ellen is introducing herself to Shinji's class, she mentions that she is willing to help them with anything except for Ai, Mai, and Mii for she remembers what happened last year with them.
* RapunzelHair: Nia and Origami once again have long hair.
* SpitTake: Mana reaction to seeing Shinji walking past Danny's with the mysterious girl that the two of them saw at the center of the spacequake earlier.
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* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again initially suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:Live'' Re:Live'', she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
* NoodleIncident: When Ellenis introducing introduces herself to Shinji's class, she mentions that she is willing to help them with anything except for reminds Ai, Mai, and Mii for that she remembers what happened they did last year with them.
year, though doesn't mention what they did.
* RapunzelHair:Nia and Nia's hair is longer than in canon, while Origami once again have long hair.
is in her New Timeline appearance from the start.
* SpitTake: Mana has this reactionto seeing when she sees Shinji walking past Danny's Danny's, while she and her friends are eating there, with the mysterious girl that the two of them saw at the center of the spacequake earlier.Tohka.
* NoodleIncident: When Ellen
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned white.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' Re:Live'', from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively respectively, to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned white.
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* MythologyGag: Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21 of ''Date A Live''.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21 of ''Date ALive''.Live''.
** The [[NoodleIncident incident]] between Ellen and Ai, Mai, and Mii is one to the three of them being SpannerInTheWorks towards Ellen during the events of the school trip in the canon series.
** Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21 of ''Date A
** The [[NoodleIncident incident]] between Ellen and Ai, Mai, and Mii is one to the three of them being SpannerInTheWorks towards Ellen during the events of the school trip in the canon series.
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* BigEater: Tohka eats so much during her meeting with Shinji that he begins to worry that he will run out of money before she is full.
* FishOutOfWater: Tohka shows this when she is on her "date" with Shinji. To give one example, when her stomach growls during the middle of a conversation with him, she doesn't realize that it means that she is hungry.
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* MythologyGag: Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21.
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* MythologyGag: Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21.21 of ''Date A Live''.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events that happen past volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:LIve'' she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
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* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:LIve'' Re:Live'' she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
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This is a rewrite/reboot of the fanfic ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes. As such there will be unmarked [[LateArrivalSpoiler spoilers]] for events past volume 12 (or the third season) of the series.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
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* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named [[AdaptationNameChange Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka) Itsuka]]) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.school.
* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated that despite the name change he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live.
* AdaptationNameChange: Shido Itsuka is named Shinji Takamiya, his original identity in canon. [[WordOfGod The author]] has stated that despite the name change he is the same person as Shido was in canon/Date A Re:Live.
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* MythologyGag: Mana, Kotori, Yoshino, Natsumi, and Mukuro are friends and schoolmates at Kenisei Junior High, similarly to what is shown in volume 21.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]] is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]]
This is fan fic is a rewrite/reboot of ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes.
This is fan fic is a rewrite/reboot of ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered
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!!''Date A Live: Altered Timeline'' provides examples of:
* ChangeTheUncomfortableSubject: What Phantom ends up doing when Tohka says that she wants to ask Shinji why he doesn't happen to have breasts.
--> '''Phantom:''' Uh... t-the reason you need to find them is because t-they're important to the Spirits, and that's all I c-can say about it for now, so... please d-don't ask any further on that subject.\\
'''Tohka:''' ''[Thinking]'' She completely ignored my question!
* ColorCodedCharacters: Each Spirit has a color associated to them, of the Spirits shown so far:
** Origami’s is White.
** Tohka's is Purple/Violet.
* DelayedReaction: When Shinji and Mana bump into one another breaking a trance they were under, he asks her what she's doing outside and not in one of the spacequake shelters before asking himself why he also isn't in the shelter.
--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? Wait, why am ''I'' here?
--> '''Phantom:''' Uh... t-the reason you need to find them is because t-they're important to the Spirits, and that's all I c-can say about it for now, so... please d-don't ask any further on that subject.\\
'''Tohka:''' ''[Thinking]'' She completely ignored my question!
* ColorCodedCharacters: Each Spirit has a color associated to them, of the Spirits shown so far:
** Origami’s is White.
** Tohka's is Purple/Violet.
* DelayedReaction: When Shinji and Mana bump into one another breaking a trance they were under, he asks her what she's doing outside and not in one of the spacequake shelters before asking himself why he also isn't in the shelter.
--> '''Shinji:''' Mana? What are you doing here? Wait, why am ''I'' here?
* LuminescentBlush: Phantom ends up turning completely pink when Tokha asks why one of the two individuals (Shinji) she met earlier didn't have breasts.
* NoodleIncident: When Ellen is introducing herself to Shinji's class, she mentions that she is willing to help them with anything except for Ai, Mai, and Mii for she remembers what happened last year with them.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned white.
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* SpitTake: Mana reaction to seeing Shinji walking past Danny's with the mysterious girl that the two of them saw at the center of the spacequake earlier.
* StunnedSilence: Phantom's reaction to a question that Tohka has about Shinji and Mana:
--> '''Tohka:''' I want to know why the taller of the two didn't have these on his chest! ''[pushes her breasts up]''\\
'''Phantom:''' ''[[[LuminescentBlush Turns Completely Pink]]]''
* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turnedwhite.white.
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* StunnedSilence: Phantom's reaction to a question that Tohka has about Shinji and Mana:
--> '''Tohka:''' I want to know why the taller of the two didn't have these on his chest! ''[pushes her breasts up]''\\
'''Phantom:''' ''[[[LuminescentBlush Turns Completely Pink]]]''
* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown turned
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* AdaptationalCurve: Origami Tobiichi has a more ample bust than in canon.
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* AdaptationalCurve: AdaptationalCurves: Origami Tobiichi has a more ample bust than in canon.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown.
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* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown.brown turned white.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13548314/1/Date-A-Live-Altered-Timeline Date A Live: Altered Timeline]] is a ''LightNovel/DateALive'' fanfic by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/5959626/Tohka-Yatogami Tohka Yatogami]]
This is fan fic is a rewrite/reboot of ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes.
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* AdaptationalCurve: Origami Tobiichi has a more ample bust than in canon.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter from Shinji's (Originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for a couple missing students instead of a relative to him and his sister having a close encounter with Tohka's spacequake.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
* AgeLift: Unlike in canon, Nia is young enough to attend high school.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia Honjo's vision gets blurred whenever her glasses fall off and break.
* DroppedGlasses: Nia Honjo's glasses break both times they fall off, once on her way to Rindouji High and again in its spacequake shelter when she slammed her free hand on the wall.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for DEM.
* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:LIve'' she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
* RapunzelHair: Nia and Origami once again have long hair.
* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown.
This is fan fic is a rewrite/reboot of ''Fanfic/DateAReLive'' made with the knowledge of all 22 volumes.
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* AdaptationalCurve: Origami Tobiichi has a more ample bust than in canon.
* AdaptationDeviation: There have been several changes in the first chapter from Shinji's (Originally Shido in canon) reason for not entering the shelter being to search for a couple missing students instead of a relative to him and his sister having a close encounter with Tohka's spacequake.
* AdaptationalEarlyAppearance: Various characters make an earlier first appearance than in canon such as in the first chapter from Mana again being a member of the main character's (Named Shinji Takamiya, like his original incarnation, instead of Shido Itsuka) residence to the Yamai twins being part Raizen High to Ellen taking an undercover job as a teacher at the same school.
* AgeLift: Unlike in canon, Nia is young enough to attend high school.
* BlindWithoutEm: Nia Honjo's vision gets blurred whenever her glasses fall off and break.
* DroppedGlasses: Nia Honjo's glasses break both times they fall off, once on her way to Rindouji High and again in its spacequake shelter when she slammed her free hand on the wall.
* TheMole: Ellen Mathers, the deputy teacher for Shinji's class, is this for DEM.
* NameAmnesia: Tohka Yatogami again suffers from this, but compared to ''Date A Re:LIve'' she remembers it prior to her second meeting with the main character.
* RapunzelHair: Nia and Origami once again have long hair.
* TruerToTheText: Several aspects of the fanfic are closer to the source material than ''Date A Re:Live'' from Tohka's hair and eyes being described as night-colored and crystalline respectively to Isaac Westcott's hair color being ash blonde rather than brown.