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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor ''VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}'' fanfiction written by Threepwillow. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as its main characters.
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor ''VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}'' fanfiction written by Threepwillow. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as its main characters.
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
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* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].answered.
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** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
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** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
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** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess [[spoiler:Guess what happens to Lili.]]
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%%* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] [[spoiler:Lili]], when Raz takes them to Canada.
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This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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* ExactWords: The curse affects anyone who considers themselves an Aquato, meaning that Raz's mother [[spoiler:and Lili]] suffer from it since they consider themselves to be Aquatos due to their feelings for their LoveInterest.
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* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
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* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
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* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
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''Curses!'' is a well-done and very OriginalFlavor ''VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}}'' fanfiction written by Threepwillow. It is set roughly four years after the events of the game, and has Razputin and Lili as its main characters.
Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AerithAndBob: Inside Pokeylope's head are turtles with names ranging from Carapastian VI of Sauntershire to Bill.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know that you weren't dead?!''
* BookEnds: The fic begins and ends in Psychonauts Headquarters with Gus calling about the circus being in town.
* TheCavalry: Played with when Raz remembers the Either waiting for them and goes to retrieve it.
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
%%* RaceAgainstTheClock
* RunningGag: Lili finishing a RousingSpeech with a mention of a mission the present party has gone on- only to find that nobody knows what she is talking about.
* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] when Raz takes them to Canada.
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Raz, as a full fledged Psychonaut now, hops on the opportunity to take Lili on a date to see the circus his family performs in, one night. But when the Aquatos' act begins and ends without Raz's father showing up, he knows something is up. After further investigation, he realizes that his dad's in danger. And his safety rests on Raz and Lili tracking down the only remaining Galochio and putting an end to the curse before it's too late.
This fanfic can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4775548/1/Curses here.]]
Administrivia/NeedsABetterDescription.
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!! This fic provides examples of:
* AerithAndBob: Inside Pokeylope's head are turtles with names ranging from Carapastian VI of Sauntershire to Bill.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Lili finds Raz in the tree house and slaps him across the face as soon as he comes out of Fannie's mind. When she heard the wolves, she tried to call him, and [[AdultFear he never answered]].
-->'''Raz:''' I did what I had to to, y'know, ''not die!''\\
'''Lili:''' Well ''how the heck was I supposed to know that you weren't dead?!''
* BookEnds: The fic begins and ends in Psychonauts Headquarters with Gus calling about the circus being in town.
* TheCavalry: Played with when Raz remembers the Either waiting for them and goes to retrieve it.
-->'''Lili:''' Wha-- wai-- where are you going?\\
'''Raz:''' To get the cavalry!\\
'''Lili:''' ''What'' cavalry?\\
'''Raz:''' The one we rode in on!
* CurseEscapeClause: The plot is based around finding out what this is.
* {{Foreshadowing}}: Several moments in the first couple of chapters.
** The mention of Raz's siblings [[spoiler: "wiping off facepaint and finding their own faces underneath again."]]
** Lili gestures quite a lot while speaking before [[spoiler: her arm is injured in the teleporting incident.]]
** Raz tells Lili how his mother was affected by the family's curse because she was an Aquato at heart rather than by blood. [[spoiler: Guess what happens to Lili.]]
* JourneyToTheCenterOfTheMind: [[VideoGame/{{Psychonauts}} Obviously.]]
%%* RaceAgainstTheClock
* RunningGag: Lili finishing a RousingSpeech with a mention of a mission the present party has gone on- only to find that nobody knows what she is talking about.
* SavageWolves: Savage ''invisible'' wolves.
* SuperDrowningSkills: All of the Aquatos, [[spoiler:along with Lili, once she considers herself part of Raz's family.]]
* TeleporterAccident: [[spoiler:Lili,]] when Raz takes them to Canada.
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