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* OffModel: One strange case of this actually being used for drama in a ''fanfic''. The Big Guy notices those animation errors, like Rainbow missing her wings in a frame or two, or Applejack's hat or freckles blinking out of existence. Discord is less than thrilled, and wonders if he was the cause of that dimensional instability.
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Baleful Polymorph was renamed per TRS
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* BalefulPolymorph: Poison Joke turns the Big Guy into an irresistible male Alicorn.
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* ForcedTransformation: Poison Joke turns the Big Guy into an irresistible male Alicorn.
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Stop me if you've heard it. A human appears in Equestria, and then goes on to have adventures with the inhabitants.
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* ShoutOut: The Big Guy shows them videos of G1 ''MyLittlePony''. Considering some villains from G1 showed up earlier, this is cause for concern for the ponies. The [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyG3 G3]] episodes are briefly mentioned as well.
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* ShoutOut: The Big Guy shows them videos of G1 ''MyLittlePony''.''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePony''. Considering some villains from G1 showed up earlier, this is cause for concern for the ponies. The [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyG3 G3]] episodes are briefly mentioned as well.
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* RealityEnsues: What does the Big Guy do when Pinkie Pie breaks into his house and throws him a surprise party? ScrewThisImOutOfHere.
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** In Chapter 7, Holly Hock says that Rainbow Dash is the fastest pegasus at ground level but "There's a mare a lot faster at altitude," likely a reference to Dainty Dish from ''Fanfic/HigherFlierOrMyLittleBlackbird''.
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** In Chapter 7, Holly Hock says that Rainbow Dash is the fastest pegasus at ground level but "There's a mare a lot faster at altitude," likely a reference to Dainty Dish from ''Fanfic/HigherFlierOrMyLittleBlackbird''.''Fanfic/HigherFlier''.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Over the first few weeks, the Big Guy shows the ponies assorted films - from ''Disney/{{Fantasia}}'' to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' to ''Anime/SailorMoon''. At first they think that these are documentaries, and even when Rarity hypothesizes that they're just stories, Twilight scoffs at the notion.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: Over the first few weeks, the Big Guy shows the ponies assorted films - from ''Disney/{{Fantasia}}'' ''WesternAnimation/{{Fantasia}}'' to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' to ''Anime/SailorMoon''. At first they think that these are documentaries, and even when Rarity hypothesizes that they're just stories, Twilight scoffs at the notion.
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* BadassGrandpa: He is old enough to have taken part in World War II. It's implied that he got de-aged a bit.
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* {{Unishment}}: When the two soldiers (and one castle chef) are briefed on why they're in Ponyville, Mile Stone chastises them, saying that they could at least ''pretend'' that they're being punished. Their 'sorries' don't sound very sincere, either.
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* LanguageBarrier: The Big Guy is incapable of even creating sounds that the ponies can recognize as their speech, and vice versa. [[spoiler: Later averted with inter-dimensional ponies.]]
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* LanguageBarrier: The Big Guy is incapable of even creating sounds that the ponies can recognize as their speech, and vice versa. [[spoiler: Later averted with inter-dimensional ponies.ponies, and still later averted once the bestowal of Fragrance Rebirth's power onto the main cast comes with a side of Lingua Equestria and English.]]
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* AntiHumor: The Big Guy likes to do this, and other subversions of classical punchlines, to Discord's horror.
-->'''Discord''': Excuse me, do you know how to get to the Albert Hall?
-->'''Big Guy''': Play at Carnegie with the queen watching would be a way.
-->'''Discord''': Excuse me, do you know how to get to the Albert Hall?
-->'''Big Guy''': Play at Carnegie with the queen watching would be a way.
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* CerebusSyndrome: When the Big Guy is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Tear Twirler and Trixie]].
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* CerebusSyndrome: When the Big Guy is kidnapped by [[spoiler: Tear Twirler and Trixie]].Trixie]], the fic ''really'' gets started. There are plenty of moments of comedy throughout still, though.
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* DontAskJustRun: During a NoodleIncident, Dinky sees the Big Guy running and sensibly follows him instead of asking questions.
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* DontAskJustRun: During a NoodleIncident, Dinky sees the Big Guy running and sensibly follows him instead of asking questions. Every one of the other Crusaders gets covered in sap.
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** The Big Guy gets imprisoned and tortured by the Ponies... after he saves Equestria from Nightmare and her followers.
%%** Who are the ponies most comfortable with the Big Guy? Derpy and Dinky Hooves.
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** The Big Guy gets imprisoned and tortured by the Ponies... after he saves Equestria from Nightmare and her followers.
%%** Whofollowers. Better, the ponies seem to be unaware of how crucifixion actually affects humans, and never take the time to find ''out'', so not only are the they torturing him for no reason, they aren't even aware they're doing it.
** The ponies most comfortable with the BigGuy? Guy at the beginning are Derpy and Dinky Hooves.Hooves, who would normally have been a classical example of TheIngenue. It transpires that their willingness to think in simple terms, and accept what he shows them, is what gets the Big Guy to fully appreciate them in turn.
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** The ponies most comfortable with the Big
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* FreakyFridayFlip: The Big Guy and Celestia undergo this. PlayedForDrama, as neither are amused by what happened. The Big Guy, especially is furious when Luna demands that he not ruin Celestia's reputation, while Celestia is not under similar restrictions.
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* FreakyFridayFlip: The Big Guy and Celestia undergo this. PlayedForDrama, as neither are amused by what happened. The Big Guy, especially especially, is furious when Luna demands that he not ruin Celestia's reputation, while Celestia is not under similar restrictions.
** This might also describe the Big Guy. If you cross him, he will ruin all your plans, set everything you know up on end, and reduce you to a wilting lily, all while smiling, talking gently, and occasionally singing.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: [[spoiler: The power of the Alicorn Big Guy reflected the true nature of a pony and brought it to the surface.]]
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: [[spoiler: The power cutie mark of the Alicorn Big Guy reflected the true nature of a pony pony's romantic and sexual inclinations -- and brought it them to the surface.]]
