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* AdaptationalAngstDowngrade: In contrast to the above example, some of the Straw Hats have less mental baggage to worry about than their canon selves.
** Nami gets to enjoy a stable childhood with Bellemere and Nojiko after she kills Arlong, ensuring that she does not have to work for the people responsible for conquering her home and killing her adoptive mother.
** Kaya is much happier since her parents are still alive, ensuring that she and Usopp have a closer relationship with each other.
** Sanji managing to escape Germa 66 with Reiju in tow and preventing Zeff from amputating his own leg has ensured that he doesn't hold himself responsible for his adoptive father losing his leg nor worry about if he's the only member of his family to still be a decent human being.
** Reiju growing up under Zeff's care has given her a much better sense of self-worth since Zeff is a ''much'' better father to her than Judge ever was.
** Nami gets to enjoy a stable childhood with Bellemere and Nojiko after she kills Arlong, ensuring that she does not have to work for the people responsible for conquering her home and killing her adoptive mother.
** Kaya is much happier since her parents are still alive, ensuring that she and Usopp have a closer relationship with each other.
** Sanji managing to escape Germa 66 with Reiju in tow and preventing Zeff from amputating his own leg has ensured that he doesn't hold himself responsible for his adoptive father losing his leg nor worry about if he's the only member of his family to still be a decent human being.
** Reiju growing up under Zeff's care has given her a much better sense of self-worth since Zeff is a ''much'' better father to her than Judge ever was.
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** Luffy is practically mini-Kaido from his Devil Fruit and is virtually unstoppable.
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** Luffy is practically mini-Kaido a downsized version of Kaido from his Devil Fruit and is virtually unstoppable.
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** Even Kaya is implied to be more capable thanks to having Usopp as a mentor. In canon, she was ill and had a couple chapter long arc and then was rarely seen afterwards.
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** Even Kaya is implied to be more capable thanks to having Usopp as a mentor. In canon, she was ill and an IllGirl, had a couple chapter long arc arc, and then was rarely seen afterwards.
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** Nami trounces Arlong and his crew and eats his soul.
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** Nami trounces Arlong and his crew and eats before eating his soul.
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* DisappointedInYou: Luffy and Nami are disappointed at Buggy for being this comically weak despite being a former member of the Roger Pirates with Shanks after they easily defeat him.
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* DisappointedInYou: Luffy and Nami are disappointed at Buggy for being this so comically weak despite being a former member of the Roger Pirates with Shanks after they easily defeat him.
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* ForWantOfANail:
** Nami has a more stable upbringing since Arlong is no longer a problem.
** Kuro is exposed and arrested much earlier than canon, meaning that Kaya is never orphaned.
** Zeff never had to amputate his own leg since Sanji could use Geppo to catch fish from the ocean from the waters around the island they got stranded on.
** Zoro manages to save Kuina from her canonical fate, allowing her to live and join the Straw Hats.
** Zoro and Kuina getting lost results in no one saving Rika from Helmeppo's wolf, resulting in her being savaged by the wild animal.
** Nami has a more stable upbringing since Arlong is no longer a problem.
** Kuro is exposed and arrested much earlier than canon, meaning that Kaya is never orphaned.
** Zeff never had to amputate his own leg since Sanji could use Geppo to catch fish from the ocean from the waters around the island they got stranded on.
** Zoro manages to save Kuina from her canonical fate, allowing her to live and join the Straw Hats.
** Zoro and Kuina getting lost results in no one saving Rika from Helmeppo's wolf, resulting in her being savaged by the wild animal.
* PointOfDivergence:
** Nami has a more stable upbringing since Arlong is no longer a problem, meaning that she's much more well-adjusted.
** Kuro is exposed and arrested much earlier than canon, meaning that Kaya is never orphaned.
** Zeff never had to amputate his own leg since Sanji could use Geppo to catch fish from the ocean from the waters around the island they got stranded on.
** Zoro manages to save Kuina from her canonical fate, allowing her to live and join the Straw Hats.
** Zoro and Kuina getting lost results in no one saving Rika from Helmeppo's wolf, resulting in her being savaged by the wild animal.
** Nami has a more stable upbringing since Arlong is no longer a problem, meaning that she's much more well-adjusted.
** Kuro is exposed and arrested much earlier than canon, meaning that Kaya is never orphaned.
** Zeff never had to amputate his own leg since Sanji could use Geppo to catch fish from the ocean from the waters around the island they got stranded on.
** Zoro manages to save Kuina from her canonical fate, allowing her to live and join the Straw Hats.
** Zoro and Kuina getting lost results in no one saving Rika from Helmeppo's wolf, resulting in her being savaged by the wild animal.
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* RedBaron: Luffy is now known as ''"The Cataclysm"'' instead of Straw Hat due to his powerful use of Conqueror's Haki that causes catastrophic effects whenever he fights such as his brief spar with Mihawk.
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* RedBaron: Luffy is now known as ''"The Cataclysm"'' instead of Straw Hat due to his powerful use of Conqueror's Haki that causes catastrophic effects whenever he fights fights, such as his brief spar with Mihawk.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Little Rika from Shells Town is a CheerfulChild. [[ForWantOfANail Because Zoro wasn't there to protect her from Helmeppo's pet wolf this time]], she has been reduced to a BrokenBird who barely responds to anyone.
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: Little Rika from Shells Town is a CheerfulChild. [[ForWantOfANail [[ButterflyOfDoom Because Zoro wasn't there to protect her from Helmeppo's pet wolf this time]], she has been reduced to a BrokenBird who barely responds to anyone.
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** Zoro casually smacks Smoker out of the way at Loguetown.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Because Zoro wasn't present at Shells Town, Helmeppo's wolf savaged Rika. Helmeppo himself was so horrified that he ordered his men to kill said wolf and has never returned to town since, all while sending money to pay for Rika's medical bills.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: EveryoneHasStandards:
** Because Zoro wasn't present at Shells Town, Helmeppo's wolf savaged Rika. Helmeppo himself was so horrified that he ordered his men to kill said wolf and has never returned to town since, all while sending money to pay for Rika's medicalbills.bills.
** Sanji refuses to flirt with Kaya because she's dating Usopp, who lampshades that women romantically involved with a crewmate are the only women he considers completely off limits.
** Because Zoro wasn't present at Shells Town, Helmeppo's wolf savaged Rika. Helmeppo himself was so horrified that he ordered his men to kill said wolf and has never returned to town since, all while sending money to pay for Rika's medical
** Sanji refuses to flirt with Kaya because she's dating Usopp, who lampshades that women romantically involved with a crewmate are the only women he considers completely off limits.
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* NotMakingThisUpDisclaimer: Kaya is dismayed to learn that islands where it rains lightning isn't one of Usopp's tall tales but an actual place where several of the Straw Hats have visited.
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* RhetoricalQuestionBlunder: At Loguetown, Alvida asks who's the most beautiful woman on the sea. Unfortunately for her, Luffy and Yamato immediately give answers she doesn't like: Robin and Hancock respectively.
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This time around, the Straw Hats reunite in the past once more in the form of alternate-timeline versions of themselves and their comrades. Chaos ensues as the incredibly overpowered crew of multiversal misfits decide to reembark the journey that they set out together on during their previous lives
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This time around, the Straw Hats reunite in the past once more in the form of alternate-timeline versions of themselves and their comrades. Chaos ensues as the incredibly overpowered crew of multiversal misfits decide to reembark the journey that they set out together on during their previous lives
lives.
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* Red Baron: Luffy is now known as ''"The Cataclysm"'' instead of Straw Hat due to his powerful use of Conqueror's Haki that causes catastrophic effects whenever he fights such as his brief spar with Mihawk.
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* Red Baron: RedBaron: Luffy is now known as ''"The Cataclysm"'' instead of Straw Hat due to his powerful use of Conqueror's Haki that causes catastrophic effects whenever he fights such as his brief spar with Mihawk.
