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''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last long.\\
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''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) and Videogame/Persona5 written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/311680/ClearlyNotTremor230 ClearlyNotTremor230]]. It pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while also trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) ''Fanfic/TheConversionBureau'') and Videogame/Persona5 ''Videogame/Persona5'' written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/311680/ClearlyNotTremor230 ClearlyNotTremor230]]. It pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while also trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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* AnArmAndALeg: Akira sliced off his father's left hand to stave off his Pony transformation after some Pony conversion serum got on it. However, while it saved his father, he still needed medical attention to treat the wound where his hand was sliced.
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--> '''Rarity''': I am dragging you all to my Psychologist! You people need to talk with a specialist!
--> '''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last long.
--> '''Akira''': Uh? What happened to him?
--> '''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.]]
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
--> '''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last long.
--> '''Akira''': Uh? What happened to him?
--> '''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.]]
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
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--> '''Rarity''': I am dragging you all to my Psychologist! You people need to talk with a specialist!
--> '''Ann''':specialist!\\
''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t lastlong.
-->long.\\
'''Akira''': Uh? What happened tohim?
-->him?\\
'''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.]]
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''':]]\\
'''Rarity''': WHY!?\\
'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
--> '''Ann''':
''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last
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'''Akira''': Uh? What happened to
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'''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''':
'''Rarity''': WHY!?\\
'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
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* {{Expy}}: Upon awakening, [[spoiler: Rarity becomes one for [[Main/UpdatedRerelease Kasumi/Sumire]] right down to her outfit, melee weapon of choice ''and'' Persona.]]
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* DivingSave: When a team of Pegasi barged inside a classroom to convert everyone inside into Ponies, Ryuji ends up saving the teacher Sadayo by tackling her to the ground.
* {{Expy}}: Upon awakening,[[spoiler: Rarity [[spoiler:Rarity becomes one for [[Main/UpdatedRerelease [[UpdatedRerelease Kasumi/Sumire]] right down to her outfit, melee weapon of choice ''and'' Persona.]]
* {{Expy}}: Upon awakening,
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* [[spoiler:SixthRanger:]] [[spoiler:Rarity awakens in her own Palace (which actually turns out to be Nightmare Rarity's) and calls for her Persona, Cendrillion]].
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* [[spoiler:SixthRanger:]] SixthRanger: [[spoiler:Rarity awakens in her own Palace (which actually turns out to be Nightmare Rarity's) and calls for her Persona, Cendrillion]].
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go, as they will need the Elements of Harmony if they wish to save Earth.
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go, as they will need the Elements of Harmony if they wish to save Earth.Earth.
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* TakeThat: The whole reason for Maruki's [[ TheresNoKillLikeOverkill unique]] [[DeathByAdaptation demise]] long before the story. The writer saw him as something that added nothing to the game other than an extra antagonist, and a lame one at that.
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* TakeThat: The whole reason for Maruki's [[ TheresNoKillLikeOverkill [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill unique]] [[DeathByAdaptation demise]] long before the story. The writer saw him as something that added nothing to the game other than an extra antagonist, and a lame one at that.
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* TakeThat: The whole reason for Maruki's [[ TheresNoKillLikeOverkill unique]] [[DeathByAdaptation demise]] long before the story. The writer saw him as something that added nothing to the game other than an extra antagonist, and a lame one at that.
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* Main/DeadByAdaptation: Maruki died after being in Shujin not too much time ago (And he was there before Akira arrived). And it was quite the outrageous one.
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* Main/DeadByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation: Maruki died after being in Shujin not too much time ago (And he was there before Akira arrived). And it was quite the outrageous one.
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* Main/DeadByAdaptation: Maruki died after being in Shujin not too much time ago (And he was there before Akira arrived). And it was quite the outrageous one.
--> '''Rarity''': I am dragging you all to my Psychologist! You people need to talk with a specialist!
--> '''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last long.
--> '''Akira''': Uh? What happened to him?
--> '''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.]]
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
--> '''Rarity''': I am dragging you all to my Psychologist! You people need to talk with a specialist!
--> '''Ann''': We kind of had one in our school, but Dr. Maruki didn’t last long.
--> '''Akira''': Uh? What happened to him?
--> '''Ryuji''': [[TheresNoKillLikeOverkill A week before you arrived a car ran him over. It was not an accident since the culprit drove the car over and over again over his body, then the driver dismounted and pissed on the corpse, spat on it and then drove away.]]
-->'''Rarity''': WHY!?
-->'''Makoto''': Nobody knows, the culprit was never caught, so we don’t know why he did it.
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* {{Expy}}: Upon awakening, [[spoiler: Rarity becomes one for [[Main/UpdatedRerelease Kasumi/Sumire]] right down to her outfit, melee weapon of choice ''and'' Persona.]]
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* GreaterScopeVillain: There's an entity (likely from the human side) that is partially responsible for the conflict. WordOfGod has clearly stated that is ''not'' Yaldabaoth looking for Round Two.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: There's an entity (likely from the human side) that is partially responsible for the conflict. WordOfGod has clearly stated that this is ''not'' Yaldabaoth looking for Round Two.
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* LaResistance: There's a faction in Equestria that opposes Celestia's deeds, led by Lyra Heartstrings.
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* LaResistance: There's a faction in Equestria that opposes Celestia's deeds, led by Lyra Heartstrings.Heartstrings, Thorax and Tempest Shadow; with Zecora and Starlight Glimmer standing as moles within Equestria.
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* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Fluttershy's Shadow treats her "babies" in her Palace.
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* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Fluttershy's Shadow treats her "babies" "beloved dears" in her Palace.
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go.
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* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go.go, as they will need the Elements of Harmony if they wish to save Earth.
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* DidntSeeThatComing: With the exception of Joker, [[spoiler:nobody expected to see Rarity awakening her own Persona]].
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* [[spoiler:SixthRanger:]] [[spoiler:Rarity awakens in her own Palace (which actually turns out to be Nightmare Rarity's) and calls for her Persona, Cendrillion]].
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* MonsterClown: The initial form of Pinkie Pie's Shadow, combined with VillanousHarlequin.
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* MonsterClown: The initial form of Pinkie Pie's Shadow, combined with VillanousHarlequin.VillainousHarlequin.
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* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash's Palace annoys Ryuji and seriously pisses of Yusuke.
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* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash's Palace annoys Ryuji and seriously pisses of off Yusuke.
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* EyesDoNotBelongThere: Shadow Fluttershy has eyes all over her body in her boss form, alluding to the line of "mothers have eyes everywhere".
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* EyesDoNotBelongThere: Fluttershy's Shadow Fluttershy has eyes all over her body in her boss true form, alluding to the line of "mothers have eyes everywhere".
* HiddenDepths: While infiltrating Rarity's Palace, [[spoiler:Akira and the others, to their utter surprise, discover that Ryuji is an excellent piano player]].
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* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Shadow Fluttershy treats her "babies" in her Palace.
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* MonsterClown: The initial form of Pinkie Pie's Shadow, combined with VillanousHarlequin.
* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Fluttershy's ShadowFluttershy treats her "babies" in her Palace.Palace.
* PerversePuppet: The true form of Pinkie Pie's Shadow. She even brings some puppet replicas of her friends to aid her in the fight.
* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Fluttershy's Shadow
* PerversePuppet: The true form of Pinkie Pie's Shadow. She even brings some puppet replicas of her friends to aid her in the fight.
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''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) and Videogame/Persona5 that pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) and Videogame/Persona5 that written by [[https://www.fimfiction.net/user/311680/ClearlyNotTremor230 ClearlyNotTremor230]]. It pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while also trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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* EyesDoNotBelongThere: Shadow Fluttershy has eyes all over her body in her boss form, alluding to the line of "mothers have eyes everywhere".
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* LaResistance: There's a faction in Equestria that opposes Celestia's deeds, led by Lyra Heartstrings.
* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Shadow Fluttershy treats her "babies" in her Palace.
* MyBelovedSmother: This is how Shadow Fluttershy treats her "babies" in her Palace.
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* Big Bad: Princess Celestia. However, there are clear signs that something else is pulling the strings.
* Big Good: Philemon and the staff of the Velvet Room, as usual in the Persona universe.
* Big Good: Philemon and the staff of the Velvet Room, as usual in the Persona universe.
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* Big Bad: BigBad: Princess Celestia. However, there are clear signs that something else is pulling the strings.
*Big Good: BigGood: Philemon and the staff of the Velvet Room, as usual in the Persona universe.universe.
* CityOfAdventure: The form of Rainbow Dash's Palace evokes this, complete with every kind of superhero aesthetic you can come up with.
* FaceHeelTurn: Discord underwent this at some point and had to be resealed with the Elements of Harmony.
* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go.
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* CityOfAdventure: The form of Rainbow Dash's Palace evokes this, complete with every kind of superhero aesthetic you can come up with.
* FaceHeelTurn: Discord underwent this at some point and had to be resealed with the Elements of Harmony.
* YouCantThwartStageOne: In order to infiltrate Princess Celestia's Palace and steal her heart, the Phantom Thieves must strike the Palaces of everypony else, and from all those, the ones of the Mane Six must be the first ones to go.
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One day, a floating kingdom named Equestria appeared in Japan, surrounded by a bright barrier that decomposed anything that got too close to it. Time passed by and the barrier started to expand, with catastrophic results if it wasn't stopped. Equestria's ruler, Princess Celestia offered one solution: The conversion from human to pony so they could survive the barrier and live in Equestria. However, the conversion had the tendency to seriously alter the minds of the humans that converted. And Celestia decided that she would make the decision for mankind on that matter.
Thankfully, in this DarkestHour, a group of rogues rise up once again to defend Earth and defeat Equestria by doing what they do best: Stealing all distorted desires and making the perpetrators confess with their own mouths.
''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) and Videogame/Persona5 that pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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!!This fanfic contain the following tropes:
* AmusementParkOfDoom: This is the shape of Pinkie Pie's Palace.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash's Palace annoys Ryuji and seriously pisses of Yusuke.
* Big Bad: Princess Celestia. However, there are clear signs that something else is pulling the strings.
* Big Good: Philemon and the staff of the Velvet Room, as usual in the Persona universe.
Thankfully, in this DarkestHour, a group of rogues rise up once again to defend Earth and defeat Equestria by doing what they do best: Stealing all distorted desires and making the perpetrators confess with their own mouths.
''Conversion Bureau: The return of the Phantom Thieves of Hearts'' is a crossover fanfic between WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic (specifically, Fanfic/TheConversionBureau) and Videogame/Persona5 that pits The Phantom Thieves against the forces of Equestria while trying to find out what's truly behind this conflict. It can be read [[https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427417/conversion-bureau-the-return-of-the-phantom-thieves-of-hearts here]].
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!!This fanfic contain the following tropes:
* AmusementParkOfDoom: This is the shape of Pinkie Pie's Palace.
* BerserkButton: Rainbow Dash's Palace annoys Ryuji and seriously pisses of Yusuke.
* Big Bad: Princess Celestia. However, there are clear signs that something else is pulling the strings.
* Big Good: Philemon and the staff of the Velvet Room, as usual in the Persona universe.
