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* DeadManWriting: Near the end of the story, Spike sends out a final message as he lies on the ground dying to expose Cheerilee for her crimes. [[spoiler: However, since he had to rush the writing, it ends up getting misinterpreted, and Twilight ends up taking the blame instead.]]
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* KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
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* SadistTeacher: Cheerilee, who goes UpToEleven.
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Brutally and sadistically torture and kill any and all children that are giving her trouble, in a way that is very reminiscent of ''{{FanFic/Cupcakes}}''.''Fanfic/CupcakesSergeantSprinkles''. In fact, many would say ''Cheerilee's Garden'' is ''Cupcakes'''s SpiritualSuccessor. Right down to being a TrollFic gone a ''little'' too far.
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* TheBadGuyWins: Cheerilee has a terrible inability to get rid of evidence in a smart and safe manner. Fortunately for her, Twilight arrives on the scene and unwittingly [[spoiler: destroys the evidence for her. Although Cheerilee is killed by Twilight, she gets off scott free while Twilight is blamed for her atrocities]].
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* TheBadGuyWins: Cheerilee has a terrible inability to get rid of evidence in a smart and safe manner. Fortunately for her, Twilight arrives on the scene and unwittingly [[spoiler: destroys the evidence for her. Although Cheerilee is killed by Twilight, she gets off scott free scot-free while Twilight is blamed for her atrocities]]. atrocities]].
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* {{Gorn}}: Unless you're not familar with [[DarkFic Dark Fics]] or know what the story is about, chances are you'll want blood. And oh boy, '''will you get it.'''
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* {{Gorn}}: Unless you're not familar familiar with [[DarkFic Dark Fics]] or know what the story is about, chances are you'll want blood. And oh boy, '''will you get it.'''
* KarmicDeath: In the end, [[spoiler: Twilight kills Cheerilee just as brutally and sadistically as the heartless teacher killed her own victims. Cheerilee's tongue is torn out, her eyes are burst in their sockets, and she is slashed all along her body, all of which are variants of "punishments" that she herself doled out to ponies who were powerless to stop her]].
* KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
* KnightTemplar: Cheerilee initially seems to become this, thinking that the naughty foals and "corruptive" influences like [[spoiler: the Mane Six]] must be purged to bring peace and morality to Ponyville. Its subversion becomes increasingly obvious as the story goes on, though, culminating in the moment where Twilight calls out Cheerilee for using her "cause" as a weak excuse to cover up the fact that she is a SerialKiller who [[ForTheEvulz murders ponies for the enjoyment of it]].
** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia vows to become one as well in order to avenge Twilight against the legal system that screwed her over.]]
* MercyKill: Cheerilee made an already-tortured Rainbow Dash do this to her friend after mortally wounding her.
* KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
* KnightTemplar: Cheerilee initially seems to become this, thinking that the naughty foals and "corruptive" influences like [[spoiler: the Mane Six]] must be purged to bring peace and morality to Ponyville. Its subversion becomes increasingly obvious as the story goes on, though, culminating in the moment where Twilight calls out Cheerilee for using her "cause" as a weak excuse to cover up the fact that she is a SerialKiller who [[ForTheEvulz murders ponies for the enjoyment of it]].
** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia vows to become one as well in order to avenge Twilight against the legal system that screwed her over.]]
* MercyKill: Cheerilee made an already-tortured Rainbow Dash do this to her friend after mortally wounding her.
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* NeverSayDie: Believe it or not, played straight at the end of Diamond Tiara's and Silver Spoon's torture.
-->“Both of the fillies looked up as they heard a rumbling noise coming from a pipe above them, and as they saw a familiar clear liquid gush down they realized they wouldn’t get to see anything else, ever again.”
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* KarmicDeath: In the end, [[spoiler: Twilight kills Cheerilee just as brutally and sadistically as the heartless teacher killed her own victims. Cheerilee's tongue is torn out, her eyes are burst in their sockets, and she is slashed all along her body, all of which are variants of "punishments" that she herself doled out to ponies who were powerless to stop her]].
* KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
* KnightTemplar: Cheerilee initially seems to become this, thinking that the naughty foals and "corruptive" influences like [[spoiler: the Mane Six]] must be purged to bring peace and morality to Ponyville. Its subversion becomes increasingly obvious as the story goes on, though, culminating in the moment where Twilight calls out Cheerilee for using her "cause" as a weak excuse to cover up the fact that she is a SerialKiller who [[ForTheEvulz murders ponies for the enjoyment of it]].
** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia vows to become one as well in order to avenge Twilight against the legal system that screwed her over.]]
* MercyKill: Cheerilee made an already-tortured Rainbow Dash do this to her friend after mortally wounding her..
* NeverSayDie: Believe it or not, played straight at the end of Diamond Tiara's and Silver Spoon's torture.
-->“Both of the fillies looked up as they heard a rumbling noise coming from a pipe above them, and as they saw a familiar clear liquid gush down they realized they wouldn’t get to see anything else, ever again.”
* SadisticChoice: Silver Spoon is given one in the form of a button that she can press to temporarily stop her torture device, but pours acid into Diamond Tiara's trap.
* KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
* KnightTemplar: Cheerilee initially seems to become this, thinking that the naughty foals and "corruptive" influences like [[spoiler: the Mane Six]] must be purged to bring peace and morality to Ponyville. Its subversion becomes increasingly obvious as the story goes on, though, culminating in the moment where Twilight calls out Cheerilee for using her "cause" as a weak excuse to cover up the fact that she is a SerialKiller who [[ForTheEvulz murders ponies for the enjoyment of it]].
** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia vows to become one as well in order to avenge Twilight against the legal system that screwed her over.]]
* MercyKill: Cheerilee made an already-tortured Rainbow Dash do this to her friend after mortally wounding her..
* NeverSayDie: Believe it or not, played straight at the end of Diamond Tiara's and Silver Spoon's torture.
-->“Both of the fillies looked up as they heard a rumbling noise coming from a pipe above them, and as they saw a familiar clear liquid gush down they realized they wouldn’t get to see anything else, ever again.”
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''"I, Cheerilee, will never let any [[TVTropesWillRuinYourLife tropes take over my life]], ever again."''
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[[caption-width-right:250: The torture scenes aren't the disturbing part. The fact that someone wrote about such innocent characters performing in them is what's disturbing.]]
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[[caption-width-right:250: The torture scenes aren't the disturbing part. The fact that someone wrote about such innocent characters performing Want a good reason for why you should pay attention in them is what's disturbing.school? Here you go.]]
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* StartOfDarkness: For [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]]
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* StartOfDarkness: For [[spoiler: Princess Celestia]]Celestia]].
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* BullyingADragon: Cheerilee decides to [[spoiler: drive Twilight, the Element of Magic and somepony who completely outmatches her in a fair fight, over the DespairEventHorizon by brutally murdering all her friends and psychologically torturing her with this information. It ends lethally for her]].
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* BullyingADragon: Cheerilee decides to [[spoiler: drive Twilight, the Element of Magic and somepony who would completely outmatches outmatch her in a fair fight, over the DespairEventHorizon by brutally murdering slaughtering all her friends and psychologically torturing her with relaying this information. It information to her. Naturally, this ends lethally for her]].
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* {{Gorn}}: Unless a reader is stupid, you're not familar with [[DarkFic Dark Fics]] or doesn't know what the fanfic story is about they will about, chances are you'll want blood. And oh boy, they'll '''will you get it.'''
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* DirtyCoward: Cheerilee takes sadistic pleasure in torturing her victims as long as they're helpless and she has AntiMagic and death traps to back her up, but [[spoiler: is reduced to begging for her life as soon as Twilight puts her on the ropes]].
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* EvilGloating: A rare heroic example, where [[spoiler: an utterly pissed-off Twilight sadistically taunts Cheerilee before killing her. Since Cheerilee enjoyed her own victims' ineffectual pleas for mercy, it's painted as deserved]].
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* FantasticRacism: Cheerilee seems prejudiced against unicorns, holding them in contempt for relying on magic. She takes particular pleasure in the idea that an earth pony could take down Twilight Sparkle.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Twilight is in a state of utter murderous rage when she comes back to life and gets Cheerilee alone, after the death of all her friends. She literally tears her to shreds]].
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* AloneWithThePsycho: Twist gets this feeling when she realizes that Cheerilee, who has been transferred to her school, might be the killer. She's terrified at the prospect of having to come to school for the rest of the year.
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* ThisIsUnforgivable: [[spoiler: Twilight flat-out tells Cheerilee that she has to die for what she did]].
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* VillainsWantMercy: [[spoiler: Cheerilee is reduced to begging for her life when Twilight overpowers her. She receives no mercy]].
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* InsaneTrollLogic: Cheerilee decides the Mane 6 are fair game because her students weren't paying attention, and several of them were close to Twilight and her friends, therefore it's Twilight's fault for "corrupting" them. It's clear that her real motive is simply to punish anyone who tries to bring her to justice.
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* HeroicSacrifice: Silver Spoon is given the choice between being tortured herself or hitting a button to dump acid on Diamond Tiara. When faced with the prospect of her tongue being cut out, she does hit the button, but is so guilt-stricken at hearing her friend's screams that she stops, and resolves never to hit the button again. [[spoiler: It only buys them a few more minutes of life, but they at least die together]].
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* AssholeVictim:
** Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's deaths are just as gruesome as everypony else's, but their bullying ways may paint it as deserved.
** [[spoiler:Cheerilee herself]] becomes this when [[spoiler:Twilight kills her]]. Unfortunately, [[spoiler:this, combined with misintepretion of Spike's letter to Celestia, makes the police think that Twilight committed ''all'' of the murders and that Cheerilee was just another innocent victim]].
** Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon's deaths are just as gruesome as everypony else's, but their bullying ways may paint it as deserved.
** [[spoiler:Cheerilee herself]] becomes this when [[spoiler:Twilight kills her]]. Unfortunately, [[spoiler:this, combined with misintepretion of Spike's letter to Celestia, makes the police think that Twilight committed ''all'' of the murders and that Cheerilee was just another innocent victim]].
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* InfantImmortality: Horribly averted.
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* KarmicDeath: In the end, [[spoiler: Twilight kills Cheerilee just as brutally and sadistically as the heartless teacher killed her own victims. Cheerilee's tongue is torn out, her eyes are burst in their sockets, and she is slashed all along her body, all of which are variants of "punishments" that she herself doled out to ponies who were powerless to stop her]].
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** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia seemingly vows to become one over ''all of Equestria'' in revenge for Twilight's MiscarriageOfJustice and her subsequent suicide.]]
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** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia seemingly vows to become one over ''all of Equestria'' as well in revenge for Twilight's MiscarriageOfJustice and order to avenge Twilight against the legal system that screwed her subsequent suicide.over.]]
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** [[spoiler:At the end, Celestia seemingly vows to become one over ''all of Equestria'' in revenge for Twilight's MiscarriageOfJustice and her subsequent suicide.]]
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Meet Cheerilee: teacher, loveable character (on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''), and - according to fanfiction writer [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Unahim Unahim]] - a sadistic killer of children. Well, at least the children she deems worthless. [[spoiler: Along with those she holds responsible.]]
Cheerilee is facing a problem that probably many teachers have in their careers. Her students are acting up and not paying attention in class, and whatever they do pay attention to just isn't sinking in. Cheerilee has tried and tried again to teach this restless bunch, but everything she's tried so far has failed. Cheerilee is at her wits' end. She feels worthless as a teacher and, thanks to her students' inability to learn, is on the verge of a mid-life crisis. Her whole life, sanity included, is crumbling. She doesn't reach out for help from fellow teachers, nor does she see a therapist. She finds a different, [[spoiler: not much]] better solution.
Cheerilee is facing a problem that probably many teachers have in their careers. Her students are acting up and not paying attention in class, and whatever they do pay attention to just isn't sinking in. Cheerilee has tried and tried again to teach this restless bunch, but everything she's tried so far has failed. Cheerilee is at her wits' end. She feels worthless as a teacher and, thanks to her students' inability to learn, is on the verge of a mid-life crisis. Her whole life, sanity included, is crumbling. She doesn't reach out for help from fellow teachers, nor does she see a therapist. She finds a different, [[spoiler: not much]] better solution.
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Meet Cheerilee: teacher, loveable character (on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''), and - according to fanfiction writer [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Unahim Unahim]] - a sadistic killer of children. Well, at least the children she deems worthless. [[spoiler: Along with those she holds responsible.]]\n\n
Cheerilee is facing a problem that probably many teachers have in their careers. Her students are acting up and not paying attention in class, and whatever they do pay attention to just isn't sinking in. Cheerilee has tried and tried again to teach this restless bunch, but everything she's tried so far has failed. Cheerilee is at her wits' end. She feels worthless as a teacher and, thanks to her students' inability to learn, is on the verge of a mid-life crisis. Her whole life, sanity included, is crumbling. She doesn't reach out for help from fellow teachers, nor does she see a therapist. She finds a different,[[spoiler: not much]] possibly better solution.
Cheerilee is facing a problem that probably many teachers have in their careers. Her students are acting up and not paying attention in class, and whatever they do pay attention to just isn't sinking in. Cheerilee has tried and tried again to teach this restless bunch, but everything she's tried so far has failed. Cheerilee is at her wits' end. She feels worthless as a teacher and, thanks to her students' inability to learn, is on the verge of a mid-life crisis. Her whole life, sanity included, is crumbling. She doesn't reach out for help from fellow teachers, nor does she see a therapist. She finds a different,
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler:Due to a nasty series of {{ContrivedCoincidence}}s, all of Cheerilee's crimes get pinned on Twilight instead.]]
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* MiscarriageOfJustice: [[spoiler:Due to a nasty series of {{ContrivedCoincidence}}s, {{Contrived Coincidence}}s, all of Cheerilee's crimes get pinned on Twilight instead.]]
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Meet Cheerilee: teacher, lovable cartoon character (on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''), and - according to fanfiction writer [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Unahim Unahim]] - a sadistic killer of children. Well, at least the children she deems worthless. [[spoiler: Along with those she holds responsible.]]
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Meet Cheerilee: teacher, lovable cartoon loveable character (on ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''), and - according to fanfiction writer [[http://www.fimfiction.net/user/Unahim Unahim]] - a sadistic killer of children. Well, at least the children she deems worthless. [[spoiler: Along with those she holds responsible.]]
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** Even then, another layer of depression is added when [[spoiler:Celestia plans to raze Equestria and form a new, totalitarian Solar Empire.]]
* [[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide: Twilight Sparkle, upon realizing even Celestia didn't think she was innocent.]]
* [[spoiler:DyingDeclarationOfLove]]: [[spoiler:Spike and Rarity moments before they die]].
** Even then, another layer of depression is added when [[spoiler:Celestia plans to raze Equestria and form a new, totalitarian Solar Empire.]]
* [[spoiler: DrivenToSuicide: Twilight Sparkle, upon realizing even Celestia didn't think she was innocent.]]
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** Even then, another layer of depression is added when [[spoiler:Celestia plans to raze Equestria and form a new, totalitarian Solar Empire.* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle, upon realizing even Celestia didn't think she was innocent.]]
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll]]: KillEmAll: By the end of Part 2 of "Scarlet Harvest", [[spoiler: the Mane Six, Spike, the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon, Snips and Snails, Twist, and Cheerilee herself are all dead]].
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