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* MythologyGag: [[spoiler:Many of the Servants Illya and Sakura summon to stop Avenger are from ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'']].
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* MythologyGag: [[spoiler:Many of the Servants Illya and Sakura summon to stop Avenger are from ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' and ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'']].
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* CurseCutShort: When [[spoiler:Caster Alter first sends the Shadow after him]], Lancer gets out, "Oh, f—" before he has to start dodging.
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* CurseCutShort: CurseCutShort:
** When [[spoiler:Caster Alter first sends the Shadow after him]], Lancer gets out, "Oh,f—" f--" before he has to start dodging.dodging.
** Saber says, "Oh, sh--" and the rest is [[SoundEffectBleep drowned out]] by a roaring wave of prana.
** When [[spoiler:Caster Alter first sends the Shadow after him]], Lancer gets out, "Oh,
** Saber says, "Oh, sh--" and the rest is [[SoundEffectBleep drowned out]] by a roaring wave of prana.
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* TearsOfBlood: [[spoiler:Mordred]] begins crying tears of blood as [[spoiler:she is corrupted further by Morgan le Fey's magic]].
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I jumped the gun; this is wholly false. It doesn't manifest physically to talk to him and has been all around him since he entered; he approached it by entering. So, it doesn't 'appear' in any sense of the word.
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** [[spoiler:Avenger's physical avatar]] greets Shirou with one when Shirou is heading [[spoiler:back into the mountain]].
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** [[spoiler:Avenger's physical avatar]] greets Shirou with one when Shirou is heading [[spoiler:back into the mountain]].
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** [[spoiler:Mordred]] interrupts the dueling Saber and [[spoiler:Lancelot Berserker]] by coming into existence mid-swing and cutting down the latter.
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** [[spoiler:Mordred]] interrupts the dueling Saber and [[spoiler:Lancelot Berserker]] by coming into existence materializing mid-swing and cutting down the latter.
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** [[spoiler:Mordred]] interrupts the dueling Saber and [[spoiler:Lancelot Berserker]] by coming into existence mid-swing and cutting down the latter.
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: [[spoiler:Mordred]] claims she didn't miss [[spoiler:Saber Lily]] but was aiming only for [[spoiler:Lancelot]], because she doesn't want to share credit for defeating [[spoiler:her father]].
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I tried spoiler-tagging only select bits of the entry, but what makes it a meaningful echo is tied to her identity and a spoilerful plot development.
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* MeaningfulEcho: {{Subverted|Trope}}. [[spoiler:Saber Lily suddenly bursts into the cavern through the ceiling, and Shirou is reminded of the night he first summoned her: he's once again on the ground, facing his impending death from an enemy, and he's just as surprised and awestruck to see her now as he was then because he didn't know she'd been freed from her corruption. Making the comparison, he imagines her turning to him and saying the same line as back then: "I ask of you, are you my master?" Instead, she turns to him and starts berating him and teasing him.]]
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* NearVillainVictory: [[spoiler:Avenger is birthed and is just about to succeed in covering the world in a cloak of darkness that will then absorb all of humanity's souls. It gets as far as spreading over all of Japan despite an unparalleled effort by the cavalry to halt its progress, before it's finally defeated at the last second]].
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* EyeScream: Downplayed. [[spoiler:Avenger]] is stabbed in the eye, but [[spoiler:its body doesn't really exist. It uses Verg Avesta to make Rider feel like her eye has been stabbed, but it's just phantom pain]].
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* HopeSpot: Shirou has just [[spoiler:freed Sakura from possession by Angra Mainyu and averted Angra Mainyu's birth]]. It seems the trouble is over. Then [[spoiler:Kirei stabs Shirou in the back and dives into the sludge leaking from the Greater Grail, starting back up the birth of Angra Mainyu]].
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** [[spoiler:Saber Lily]] views the amorphous eldritch abomination that has evolved from a hydra problem as a worthy foe.
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* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler:Caster Alter]]'s eyes are solidly black, sclera and all.
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* BlackEyesOfEvil: [[spoiler:Caster Alter]]'s eyes are solidly black, sclera and all. [[spoiler:Dark Sakura]]'s eyes become like this when Angra Mainyu fully takes over.
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* LampreyMouth: The steadily more amorphous monster that causes the Hydra Problem (see above) grows lamprey mouths in various places.
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** Gil impales a sword through [[spoiler:Saber Alter]]'s throat and out the back of her neck.
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* DyingAsYourself:
** Just like in the Fate route, [[spoiler:Berserker regains his sanity when he is fatally wounded. Before he dies, he warns Saber that she gave in to her hatred and rage to defeat him, and if she keeps doing that, it will consume her.]]
** After being fatally wounded by [[spoiler:Dark Sakura, Archer projects Rule Breaker and kills himself with it]], both preventing the Shadow from corrupting him and [[spoiler:dying as Emiya Shirou rather than as Archer]].
** Just like in the Fate route, [[spoiler:Berserker regains his sanity when he is fatally wounded. Before he dies, he warns Saber that she gave in to her hatred and rage to defeat him, and if she keeps doing that, it will consume her.]]
** After being fatally wounded by [[spoiler:Dark Sakura, Archer projects Rule Breaker and kills himself with it]], both preventing the Shadow from corrupting him and [[spoiler:dying as Emiya Shirou rather than as Archer]].
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* DyingAsYourself:
** Just like in the Fate route, [[spoiler:Berserker regains his sanity when he is fatally wounded. Before he dies, he warns Saber that she gave in to her hatred and rage to defeat him, and if she keeps doing that, it will consume her.]]
** After being fatally wounded by [[spoiler:Dark Sakura, Archer projects Rule Breaker and kills himself with it]], both preventing the Shadow from corrupting him and [[spoiler:dying as Emiya Shirou rather than as Archer]].
** Just like in the Fate route, [[spoiler:Berserker regains his sanity when he is fatally wounded. Before he dies, he warns Saber that she gave in to her hatred and rage to defeat him, and if she keeps doing that, it will consume her.]]
** After being fatally wounded by [[spoiler:Dark Sakura, Archer projects Rule Breaker and kills himself with it]], both preventing the Shadow from corrupting him and [[spoiler:dying as Emiya Shirou rather than as Archer]].
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* SwordBeam: [[spoiler:Saber Alter has been boosted by her link to the Shadow to the point that even her regular swings can emit sword beams]].
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** A falling boulder apparently somehow cuts a half-inch from Illya's hair.
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I apologize for slightly edit-warring myself here, but a later chapter makes it clear there are exactly two bodies involved.
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* FleshGolem: [[spoiler:Caster Alter]] stitches together parts of the corpses of [[spoiler:True Assassin and the bodies and souls he ate, most notably False Assassin,]] to make a new familiar.
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* FleshGolem: [[spoiler:Caster Alter]] stitches together parts of the corpses of [[spoiler:True Assassin and the bodies and souls he ate, most notably False Assassin,]] Assassin]] to make a new familiar.
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* InASingleBound: [[spoiler:Saber Alter]] scales a tall building in a single bound to get to Gilgamesh.
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** After an action-packed few chapters wherein things go From Bad to Worse multiple times in one night (see entry below), the next chapter-and-a-half consists of comedy with a side of fluff as the remaining heroes make preparations for the final battle. [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]; see Bait and Switch above.
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** After an action-packed few chapters wherein things go From Bad to Worse multiple times in one night (see entry below), the next chapter-and-a-half consists of comedy with a side of fluff as the remaining heroes make preparations for the final battle. [[DoubleSubversion Double Subverted]]; see Bait and Switch Bait-and-Switch above.
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* InASingleBound: [[spoiler:Saber Alter]] scales a tall building in a single bound to get to Gilgamesh.
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** [[spoiler:Archer]] loses his right arm in the final battle against Gilgamesh. [[spoiler:Gilgamesh]] loses a hand again at almost the same time.
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* RedEyesTakeWarning: [[spoiler:Sakura]]'s irises turn red soon after [[spoiler:she becomes Dark Sakura]].
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* InLoveWithYourCarnage: When [[spoiler:Dark Saber]] starts taking down the mountain, [[spoiler:Child Gil]] starts to understand what Gilgamesh sees in her.
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*InASingleBound: [[spoiler:Saber Alter]] scales a tall building in a single bound to get to Gilgamesh.
* InLoveWithYourCarnage:When [[spoiler:Dark Saber]] [[spoiler:Although the sight of Saber corrupted by the Shadow offends him, Gilgamesh is also enamored with the display of her power as she wreaks carnage. Later, when she starts taking down the mountain, [[spoiler:Child Gil]] Child Gil starts to understand what Gilgamesh his adult self sees in her.her]].
* InLoveWithYourCarnage:
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** Shirou is run through by [[spoiler:Saber Alter]] from behind.
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: Type 2. [[spoiler:Lancer Alter aims at Rider and uses his noble phantasm, but sends at the last second sends it at Assassin]].
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* BaitAndSwitchGunshot: Type 2. [[spoiler:Lancer Alter aims at Rider and uses his noble phantasm, but sends at the last second sends it at Assassin]].
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** Shirou does this briefly while being dragged around [[ImpaledWithExtremePrejudice by a sword]] on a chain.
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** Rider impales [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] through the throat.
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** Shirou gets impaled by a sword being held by the Chains of Heaven and dragged around.
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** Gilgamesh intrudes on the gathering of Archer, Shirou, and [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] by killing the latter with a projectile Ig Alima.
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** Gilgamesh intrudes on the gathering of Archer, Shirou, and [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] by killing the latter with a projectile Ig Alima.Ig-Alima.
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** Gilgamesh intrudes on the gathering of Archer, Shirou, and [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] by killing the latter with a projectile Ig Alima.
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* SlasherSmile: Gilgamesh sports one of these midway through the story. It is unnerving enough to scare [[NervesOfSteel Kirei]].
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* SlasherSmile: Gilgamesh sports one of these midway through after the story.perceived insults to him pile up enough, particularly the growth of the Shadow. It is unnerving enough to scare [[NervesOfSteel Kirei]].
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* DynamicEntry: [[spoiler:Morgan le Fay]] comes into the scene by firing a [[WaveMotionGun massive beam of prana]] down on Saber and her felled opponents.
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** Several fights start when a Servant enters the scene with an ambush attack.
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** [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] tries to stab Saber from behind [[DynamicEntry to start their fight]].
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** [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] gets impaled by a spear from the Gate of Babylon's storm of weaponry.
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** [[spoiler:Lancer Alter]] gets impaled by a spear from the Gate of Babylon's storm of weaponry.
