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Up To Eleven is being dewicked.


** Solomon. On top of already being dead historically, he took it UpToEleven by returning the gifts God gave to him, and therefore erasing his own legend. This ''should'' have erased him from the Throne of Heroes, however because Chaldea obtained one of the Ten Rings of Solomon – a physical representation of the gifts God gave to Solomon – they were able to summon him because it served as proof that a Heroic Spirit called Solomon existed as far as the Throne of Heroes was concerned.

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** Solomon. On top of already being dead historically, he took it UpToEleven up to eleven by returning the gifts God gave to him, and therefore erasing his own legend. This ''should'' have erased him from the Throne of Heroes, however because Chaldea obtained one of the Ten Rings of Solomon – a physical representation of the gifts God gave to Solomon – they were able to summon him because it served as proof that a Heroic Spirit called Solomon existed as far as the Throne of Heroes was concerned.
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These examples of Surprisingly Realistic Outcome seem to violate at least one of these rules, which disqualifies them: No character reactions (characters get angry, don't forgive, don't change their personality instantly, etc.); Too fantastical (depends on the properties of magic, powers, sci-fi tech, monsters, etc.); Not surprising (a character was warned about the outcome, it's used to provide Karma or An Aesop, or it simply follows normal conventions for this genre or medium); Plot happens (the example only describes an event, but not why audiences would expect a different, unrealistic outcome); Not an outcome (a character just explains why something wouldn't work as expected); More of a Deconstruction (the event has major, lasting effects on the plot, make something more realistic, but not completely realistic, or a parody/fanwork applies realistic consequences to the events of a different work); or fits better under a different trope. See the trope's definition for more details. If you believe a removal was a mistake, please bring it up in the cleanup thread.


* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Yang is visibly shown having trouble coordinating her body movements with her prosthetic arm, as she can only accomplish simple combat moves and combos with it. Anything more complex or fast-paced becomes more difficult for her. Getting used to a prosthetic to make up for a limb you lost months ago takes a very long time, ranging from months to possibly even ''years'', something Taiyang points out to his daughter.
** In Chapter 6, Jaune is shocked to learn that Vale is accepting refugees from the Kingdoms, in spite of the fact that communications are now back online and the Kingdoms can once again support one another. Nora points out that the CCT has been down for ''months'' – simply because everyone can communicate with each other again doesn't automatically mean the problems the Kingdoms have been facing while in the dark will just automatically become fixed.
** It's brief, but Glynda mentions that she is still currently in the middle of restoration efforts and helping repel the Grimm. As stated above, the CCT coming back online didn't magically fix all the problems and the kingdom's been in the dark for months, not to mention the fact that Vale has been relentlessly attacked by Grimm during that period of total blackout. Naturally, there will still be some lingering negativity to attract the Grimm.

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On Octobor 18, 2020, [=SkyRig=] announced that the story would enter hiatus so that he could plan out the fanfic properly after having admitted that ''Chaldea in Remnant'' had been written [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants as he went]] with only a few key details having been planned ahead of time.

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On Octobor 18, 2020, [=SkyRig=] announced that the story would enter hiatus so that he could plan out the fanfic properly after having admitted that ''Chaldea in Remnant'' had been written [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants as he went]] with only a few key details having been planned ahead of time.
time. On January 5, 2022 [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058483/11/Chaldea-in-Remnant SkyRig revealed that the outline and endgame for the story was finished and that the hiatus would extend until Cosmos in the Lostbelt was finished]]. In addition to this, he revealed his plans to rewrite the story from the ground up so that it would be canon compliant.


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* AdaptedOut: As stated [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058483/11/Chaldea-in-Remnant here]] per WordOfGod, Pepe will not be featured in the rewritten version of ''Chaldea in Remnant''.

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* RealityEnsues:
** Yang is visibly shown having trouble coordinating her body movements with her prosthetic arm, as she can only accomplish simple combat moves and combos with it. Anything more complex or fast-paced becomes more difficult for her. Getting used to a prosthetic to make up for a limb you lost months ago takes a very long time, ranging from months to possibly even ''years'', something Taiyang points out to his daughter.
** In Chapter 6, Jaune is shocked to learn that Vale is accepting refugees from the Kingdoms, in spite of the fact that communications are now back online and the Kingdoms can once again support one another. Nora points out that the CCT has been down for ''months'' – simply because everyone can communicate with each other again doesn't automatically mean the problems the Kingdoms have been facing while in the dark will just automatically become fixed.
** It's brief, but Glynda mentions that she is still currently in the middle of restoration efforts and helping repel the Grimm. As stated above, the CCT coming back online didn't magically fix all the problems and the kingdom's been in the dark for months, not to mention the fact that Vale has been relentlessly attacked by Grimm during that period of total blackout. Naturally, there will still be some lingering negativity to attract the Grimm.


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* SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome:
** Yang is visibly shown having trouble coordinating her body movements with her prosthetic arm, as she can only accomplish simple combat moves and combos with it. Anything more complex or fast-paced becomes more difficult for her. Getting used to a prosthetic to make up for a limb you lost months ago takes a very long time, ranging from months to possibly even ''years'', something Taiyang points out to his daughter.
** In Chapter 6, Jaune is shocked to learn that Vale is accepting refugees from the Kingdoms, in spite of the fact that communications are now back online and the Kingdoms can once again support one another. Nora points out that the CCT has been down for ''months'' – simply because everyone can communicate with each other again doesn't automatically mean the problems the Kingdoms have been facing while in the dark will just automatically become fixed.
** It's brief, but Glynda mentions that she is still currently in the middle of restoration efforts and helping repel the Grimm. As stated above, the CCT coming back online didn't magically fix all the problems and the kingdom's been in the dark for months, not to mention the fact that Vale has been relentlessly attacked by Grimm during that period of total blackout. Naturally, there will still be some lingering negativity to attract the Grimm.
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* AdaptationRelationshipOverhaul: In Volume 7, [[spoiler:Ironwood and Robyn Hill had a hostile relationship, with Robyn stealing supplies Ironwood needed to get the Amity Arena in the air and use as a makeshift CCT Tower and Robyn distrusting Ironwood for him keeping secrets and doing very little to offer aid to Mantle.]] Some time after Chaldea restores Vale's CCT Tower, and not wanting an opportunist like Jacques Schnee on the Council, [[spoiler:Ironwood chooses to sponsor Robyn's election campaign]].

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058483/1/Chaldea-in-Remnant Chaldea in Remnant]]'' is a {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'' and ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4746382/Starlight-s-Poet Starlight's Poet]], formerly called Demons Anarchy of Pride and of ''Fanfic/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRebellionReset'' fame.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13058483/1/Chaldea-in-Remnant Chaldea in Remnant]]'' is a {{Crossover}} {{Fanfic}} between ''VideoGame/FateGrandOrder'' and ''{{WebAnimation/RWBY}}'' written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/4746382/Starlight-s-Poet net/u/4746382/SkyRig SkyRig]], formerly called Starlight's Poet]], formerly called Poet and Demons Anarchy of Pride and of ''Fanfic/CodeGeassLelouchOfTheRebellionReset'' fame.


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On Octobor 18, 2020, [=SkyRig=] announced that the story would enter hiatus so that he could plan out the fanfic properly after having admitted that ''Chaldea in Remnant'' had been written [[WritingByTheSeatOfYourPants as he went]] with only a few key details having been planned ahead of time.
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* FixFic: For the ''Cosmos in the Lostbelt'' arc in general, as this fic features every morally-white Crypter alive and well. There's also the fact that Dr. Roman is back, even though the lore of ''Grand Order'' states any such thing isn't possible.
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* WhamShot: The end of Chapter 7, which has Pepe summon a new Servant. [[spoiler:It's Roman Torchwick, who is now a Pseudo-Servant and is being possessed by [[Literature/ArseneLupin]].]]

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* WhamShot: The end of Chapter 7, which has Pepe summon a new Servant. [[spoiler:It's Roman Torchwick, who is now a Pseudo-Servant and is being possessed by [[Literature/ArseneLupin]].Literature/ArseneLupin.]]
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* WhamShot: The end of Chapter 7, which has Pepe summon a new Servant. [[spoiler:It's Roman Torchwick, who is now a Pseudo-Servant and is being possessed by [[Literature/ArseneLupin]].]]
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** Solomon. On top of already being dead historically, he took it UpToEleven by giving the gifts God gave to him back, and therefore erase his own legend. That should have erased him from the Throne of Heroes, but because Chaldea obtained one of the Ten Rings of Solomon -- a physical representation of the gifts God gave to Solomon -- they were able to summon him because there was a trace of a Heroic Spirit called Solomon existing as far as the Throne of Heroes was concerned.
* BadassNormal: When compared to the rest of the Servants in Chaldea who are either mythological heroes, historical heroes who TookALevelInBadass thanks to their legend, gods inhabiting the body of humans and actual demi-gods, as well as fellow Remnant Servant Ozma, Pyrrha is Remnant's answer to Billy the Kid. While she was hailed as the Invincible Girl since she never once lost a match, she never accomplished anything truly noteworthy enough that would make her ascend to the Throne of Heroes aside from perhaps her death at Cinder's hands and the people of Argus, her hometown, believing she went down like the hero they thought she was. Even her skillset and weaponry reflect this. Aside from her [[MagnetismManipulation Semblance]], all she has going for her is increased endurance, speed and strength and an ordinary weapon that can change forms.
* BerserkButton: The CCT Tower's function was this to Nikola Tesla and Thomas Edison, both calling it a disgrace to technology itself. The CCT acting as a major server for the worldwide network isn't what they have a problem with, it's the towers' dependency on each other – if one tower goes down, the whole network goes down with it. When they restore Vale's CCT Tower, they make sure to remove this weakness.
* BloodKnight: A RunningGag with the Irish heroes. Pyrrha herself is also one as noted by Solomon since, in contrast to her days as a Huntress-in-training where she had little in the way of competition, Chaldea is host to countless people who can easily mop the floor with her. She loves every second of it since it doesn't make her feel like the so-called "Invincible Girl."

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** Solomon. On top of already being dead historically, he took it UpToEleven by giving returning the gifts God gave to him back, him, and therefore erase erasing his own legend. That should This ''should'' have erased him from the Throne of Heroes, but however because Chaldea obtained one of the Ten Rings of Solomon -- a physical representation of the gifts God gave to Solomon -- they were able to summon him because there was a trace of it served as proof that a Heroic Spirit called Solomon existing existed as far as the Throne of Heroes was concerned.
* BadassNormal: When compared to the rest of the Servants in Chaldea who are either mythological heroes, historical heroes who TookALevelInBadass thanks to their legend, gods inhabiting the body of humans and actual demi-gods, demigods, as well as fellow Remnant Servant Ozma, Pyrrha is Remnant's answer to Billy the Kid. While she was hailed as the Invincible Girl since she never once lost a match, she never accomplished anything truly noteworthy enough that would make her ascend to the Throne of Heroes aside from perhaps her death at Cinder's hands and the people of Argus, her hometown, believing she went down like the hero they thought she was. Even her skillset and weaponry reflect this. Aside from her [[MagnetismManipulation Semblance]], all she has going for her is increased endurance, speed speed, and strength strength, and an ordinary weapon that can change forms.
* BerserkButton: The CCT Tower's function was functionality is this to Nikola Tesla and Thomas Edison, both of them calling it a disgrace to technology itself. The CCT acting as a major server for the worldwide network isn't what they have a problem with, it's the towers' dependency on each other – if one tower goes down, the whole entire network goes down with it. When they restore Vale's CCT Tower, they explicitly make sure to remove this weakness.
* BloodKnight: A RunningGag with the Irish heroes. Pyrrha herself is also one as noted by Solomon since, in contrast to her days as a Huntress-in-training where she had little in the way of competition, Chaldea is host to countless people who can easily mop the floor with her. She loves every second of it since it doesn't make her feel like the so-called "Invincible Girl."Girl".



** Pyrrha battled Romulus, Nero and Leonidas in a three-on-one spar to test to see how powerful she was as a Servant. Though the rest of the battle is shown offscreen, its stated that Pyrrha was utterly defeated. That said, she's far from depressed on account of her reputation as the Invincible Girl being jack-shit when surrounded by people who are clearly far stronger than her by a wide margin.
** In Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Ozma decides to test his powers as a Servant in his first real battle on Remnant against Tyrian. Not only does Ozma utterly trounce Salem's enforcer with ease, but Tyrian was never once able to land so much as a single hit.]]
* DarkIsNotEvil: Chaldea is host to all sorts of Servants from less than savory backgrounds, but each and every one of them has fought for the sake of their Masters. This includes the likes of EMIYA Alter, the EvilCounterpart to everyone's favorite red bowman, who actually fulfilled his obligations as a Counter Guardian with no questions asked and Berserker Cu Chulainn.

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** Pyrrha battled Romulus, Nero Nero, and Leonidas in a three-on-one spar to test to see how powerful she was as a Servant. Though the rest of the battle is shown offscreen, its off-screen, it's stated that Pyrrha was utterly defeated. That said, she's far from depressed on account of her reputation as the Invincible Girl being jack-shit when surrounded by people who are clearly far stronger than her by a wide margin.
** In Chapter 6, [[spoiler:Ozma decides to test his powers as a Servant in his first real battle on Remnant against Tyrian. Not only does Ozma utterly trounce Salem's enforcer with ease, but Tyrian was never once even able to land so much as a single hit.]]
* DarkIsNotEvil: Chaldea is host to all sorts of Servants from less than savory backgrounds, but each and every one of them has fought for the sake of their Masters. This includes the likes of EMIYA Alter, the EvilCounterpart to everyone's favorite red bowman, who actually fulfilled his obligations as a Counter Guardian with no questions asked asked, and Berserker Cu Chulainn.



* EvilCounterpart: The "evil" part may be stretching it, since he helped Chaldea survive the Singularity and Lostbelt incidents, but EMIYA Alter's beginnings in Chaldea were anything but pleasant compared to his better self. Not only had he insulted EMIYA barely after being summoned, but when Gudako tried to get him to open up, he raised his gun at her. [[UndyingLoyalty The second he did, the entire Emiya Family defended Gudako and was in the position to kill him then and there]]. Kiritsugu notes that the only reason EMIYA Alter is still with Chaldea is because Gudako is an AllLovingHero.

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* EvilCounterpart: The "evil" part may be stretching it, since he helped Chaldea survive the Singularity and Lostbelt incidents, but EMIYA Alter's beginnings in Chaldea were anything but pleasant compared to his better self. Not only had he insulted EMIYA barely after being summoned, but when Gudako tried to get him to open up, he raised his gun at her. [[UndyingLoyalty The second he did, the entire Emiya Family defended Gudako and was in the position to kill him then and there]]. there.]] Kiritsugu notes that the only reason EMIYA Alter is still with Chaldea is because Gudako is an AllLovingHero.



** For Team RWBY, while they're all still technically Huntresses-in-Training, this is them following the events of Volume 3. Unfortunately, Yang is currently a ShellShockedVeteran, as she's still recovering from Adam cutting off her arm.

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** For Team RWBY, while they're all still technically Huntresses-in-Training, this is them following the events of Volume 3. Unfortunately, Yang is currently a ShellShockedVeteran, as she's still recovering from Adam cutting off the loss of her arm.arm to Adam.



* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Averted ''hard.'' While thinking to herself about the recent developments revolving around the CCT tower's reconstruction, Salem reveals to have forgiven Ozma for being "misguided" and following the will of the Brother Gods. The one thing she will ''never'' forgive him for is murdering their children when they were caught in the crossfire of their battle.

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* ForgivenButNotForgotten: Averted ''hard.'' ''hard''. While thinking to herself about the recent developments revolving around the CCT tower's reconstruction, Salem reveals to have forgiven Ozma for being "misguided" and following the will of the Brother Gods. The one thing she will ''never'' forgive him for for, however, is murdering their children when they were caught in the crossfire of their battle.



** Chaldea's visit to Vale hosts several nails all on its own. Not only was the CCT Tower repaired and its communication system improved to the point where it no longer needs to rely on the other towers, but they removed the petrified Grimm Dragon from Vale and took it back to their base for study, preventing Grimmm from being attracted to Vale and allow Glynda to proceed with restoration efforts. The results of the CCT being repaired are 1) Glynda getting into contact with Ironwood and Leonardo and the former two noticing Leonardo's odd behavior, 2) Ruby contacting the currently scattered Team RWBY, and 3) Ironwood not needing to impose a Dust embargo.
** During their journey on Anima in order to reunite Pyrrha with Jaune and the rest of Team JNPR plus Ruby, Ritsuka and co. encounter Tyrian who is on the hunt for Ruby as per Salem's orders. [[spoiler:They defeat him before he can encounter his targets as he did in canon, and the fight was also recorded and posted all over the net as Ruby and Jaune discover the video showcasing Ozma's CurbStompBattle with him and letting them know that their friend is now BackFromTheDead.]]
* FutureMeScaresMe: Subverted. When he's summoned by Chaldea as a Ruler-class Servant, Ozma manages to retain the memories of his present-day self Ozpin and pities what he has become, hoping that "the poor old man" can find peace.

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** Chaldea's visit to Vale hosts several nails all on its own. Not only was is the CCT Tower repaired and its communication system improved to the point where it no longer needs to rely is dependent on the other towers, but they also removed the petrified Grimm Dragon from Vale and took it back to their base for study, thus preventing more Grimmm from being attracted to Vale and allow allowing Glynda to proceed with restoration efforts. The results of the CCT being repaired CCT's repair are 1) Glynda getting into contact with Ironwood and Leonardo Leonardo, and the former two noticing Leonardo's odd behavior, 2) Ruby contacting the currently scattered currently-scattered Team RWBY, and 3) Ironwood not needing to impose a Dust embargo.
** During their journey on Anima in order to reunite Pyrrha with Jaune and the rest of Team JNPR plus Ruby, RNJR, Ritsuka and co. encounter Tyrian who is on the hunt for Ruby as per Salem's orders. [[spoiler:They defeat him before he can encounter his targets as he did in canon, and the fight was also recorded and posted all over the net as Ruby and Jaune discover the video showcasing Ozma's CurbStompBattle with him and letting them know that their friend is now BackFromTheDead.]]
* FutureMeScaresMe: Subverted.Played with. When he's summoned by Chaldea as a Ruler-class Servant, Ozma manages to retain the memories of his present-day self Ozpin and pities what he has become, hoping that "the poor old man" can find peace.



** Pyrrha accidentally inflicts one to Leonidas during their spar. She apologies to him profusely, but Leonidas claims it isn't the first time he's been hit there.

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** Pyrrha accidentally inflicts one to Leonidas during their spar. She apologies to him profusely, but Leonidas claims it isn't waves her off, saying it's not the first time he's been hit there.
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* MysteriousWaif: Shortly after Chaldea appears in Remnant, a little girl appears in their headquarters. She has amnesia and the Servants can tell that she is neither a human nor a Servant. When she sees Atalanta, she mistakes her for a Faunus before taking a closer look and realizing Atalanta and the other Servants are neither humans nor Faunus. She can also [[SpeaksFluentAnimal understand what Fou says]]. Given that she mistook Atalanta for a Faunus, it's implied she's from or connected to Remnant, but how she can understand Primate Murder at his most adorable is anyone's guess. When she meets Pyrrha, she hugs her and says she is sorry before walking away, confusing everyone.

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* MysteriousWaif: Shortly after Chaldea appears in Remnant, a little girl appears in their headquarters. She has amnesia and the Servants can tell that she is neither a human nor a Servant. When she sees Atalanta, she mistakes her for a Faunus before taking a closer look and realizing Atalanta and the other Servants are neither humans nor Faunus. She can also [[SpeaksFluentAnimal understand what Fou says]]. Given that she mistook Atalanta for a Faunus, it's implied she's from or connected to Remnant, but how she can understand Primate Murder at his most adorable is anyone's guess. When she meets Pyrrha, she hugs her and says she is sorry before walking away, confusing everyone. Theoretically speaking she ''could'' be some kind of manifestation of the Fall Maiden's powers, and considering that the F\GO side of the crossover's part of the Nasuverse, it isn't that far-fetched.
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* AlternateSelf: It's stated that the various what-if possibilities of certain Servants, such as Artoria Lancer Alter and the Lion King, plus Skadi-Scathach are confirmed to exist. Ozma for his part is greatly confused as to why there are so many Servants wearing the same face walking about, until Gilgamesh explains that each is the same Servant that is either from a different point in time or a possibility.

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* AlternateSelf: It's stated that Aside from the various what-if possibilities Servants whose legend is founded in history, Chaldea also hosts those same servants from the alternate timelines of certain Servants, such as the Singularities or the Lostbelts, including the likes of Artoria Lancer Alter and or the Lion King, plus Skadi-Scathach are confirmed to exist. King of the Camelot Singularity. Ozma for considers himself as this to his part is greatly confused as present-day self "Ozma," comparing his circumstance to why there are so many Servants wearing the same face walking about, until Gilgamesh explains that each is of Alexander, the same Servant younger incarnation of Iskander; he has Ozpin's memories and is aware of the current state of things on Remnant, but he has not experienced the events that is either from a different point in time or a possibility.shaped his future self.

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