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** AndStarring: With Creator/ChadwickBoseman, Creator/BenedictWong, Creator/BenedictCumberbatch, Creator/MarkRuffalo, Creator/KeithDavid, Creator/SamuelLJackson, Creator/VinDiesel, Creator/RamiMalek, Creator/JeremyRenner, Creator/ScarlettJohansson, Creator/ChrisEvans, Creator/RobertDowneyJr, Creator/JeffGoldblum, Creator/JudeLaw, and Creator/JamesSpader. [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Reggie the Cat]] gets the 'And'.
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** AndStarring: With Creator/ChadwickBoseman, Creator/BenedictWong, Creator/BenedictCumberbatch, Creator/MarkRuffalo, Creator/KeithDavid, Creator/SamuelLJackson, Creator/VinDiesel, Creator/RamiMalek, Creator/JeremyRenner, Creator/ScarlettJohansson, Creator/ChrisEvans, Creator/RobertDowneyJr, Creator/JeffGoldblum, Creator/JudeLaw, and Creator/JamesSpader. [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers [[MyFriendsAndZoidberg Reggie the Cat]] gets the 'And'.
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''Captain Marvel: Phalanx'' is a fanfiction by Dragonis Prime first published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn on June 24, 2019, and is the fourth story in his Marvel Cinematic Fanfiction Universe. It can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19287406/chapters/45872692 here]]. It is the direct sequel to his previous fanfiction, [[Fanfic/AvengersEndgameDragonisPrime Avengers: Endgame]] and part of his ongoing Marvel Cinematic Fanfiction Universe.
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''Captain Marvel: Phalanx'' is a fanfiction by Dragonis Prime first published on Website/ArchiveOfOurOwn on June 24, 2019, and is the fourth story in his Marvel Cinematic Fanfiction Universe. It can be found [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/19287406/chapters/45872692 here]]. It is the direct sequel to his previous fanfiction, [[Fanfic/AvengersEndgameDragonisPrime ''[[Fanfic/AvengersEndgameDragonisPrime Avengers: Endgame]] and part of his ongoing Marvel Cinematic Fanfiction Universe.
Endgame]]''.
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* ClosingCredits: Following [=MCFFU=] standard.
** AndStarring: With Creator/ChadwickBoseman, Creator/BenedictWong, Creator/BenedictCumberbatch, Creator/MarkRuffalo, Creator/KeithDavid, Creator/SamuelLJackson, Creator/VinDiesel, Creator/RamiMalek, Creator/JeremyRenner, Creator/ScarlettJohansson, Creator/ChrisEvans, Creator/RobertDowneyJr, Creator/JeffGoldblum, Creator/JudeLaw, and Creator/JamesSpader. [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Reggie the Cat]] gets the 'And'.
** InMemoriam: Creator/JackKirby, Creator/GeneColan, Creator/StanLee, Creator/JoeSimon, Creator/SteveDitko, Creator/DaveCockrum, and Creator/ChadwickBoseman get the treatment.
** SpecialThanks:
*** Jack Kirby, Stan Lee, Gene Colan, Joe Simon, Creator/EdBrubaker, Creator/SteveEpting, Creator/CraigKyle, Creator/ChristopherYost, Creator/RoyThomas, Creator/TonyIsabella, Creator/SalBuscema, Creator/ChrisClaremont, and Creator/DaveCockrum are all thanked for their characters.
*** [[https://artistanilu.tumblr.com/ ArtistAnilu]], a prominent artist in the Black Order fandom.
** TheStinger: As is usual for the [=MCFFU=].
*** The mid-credits scene features Stephen Strange, Wanda Maximoff, Vision, Wong, and Robbie Reyes discussing the weakening of dimensional barriers.
*** The post-credits scene is a rift to another dimension opening, followed by the emergence of Miles Morales and Gwen Stacy.
** AndStarring: With Creator/ChadwickBoseman, Creator/BenedictWong, Creator/BenedictCumberbatch, Creator/MarkRuffalo, Creator/KeithDavid, Creator/SamuelLJackson, Creator/VinDiesel, Creator/RamiMalek, Creator/JeremyRenner, Creator/ScarlettJohansson, Creator/ChrisEvans, Creator/RobertDowneyJr, Creator/JeffGoldblum, Creator/JudeLaw, and Creator/JamesSpader. [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Reggie the Cat]] gets the 'And'.
** InMemoriam: Creator/JackKirby, Creator/GeneColan, Creator/StanLee, Creator/JoeSimon, Creator/SteveDitko, Creator/DaveCockrum, and Creator/ChadwickBoseman get the treatment.
** SpecialThanks:
*** Jack Kirby, Stan Lee, Gene Colan, Joe Simon, Creator/EdBrubaker, Creator/SteveEpting, Creator/CraigKyle, Creator/ChristopherYost, Creator/RoyThomas, Creator/TonyIsabella, Creator/SalBuscema, Creator/ChrisClaremont, and Creator/DaveCockrum are all thanked for their characters.
*** [[https://artistanilu.tumblr.com/ ArtistAnilu]], a prominent artist in the Black Order fandom.
** TheStinger: As is usual for the [=MCFFU=].
*** The mid-credits scene features Stephen Strange, Wanda Maximoff, Vision, Wong, and Robbie Reyes discussing the weakening of dimensional barriers.
*** The post-credits scene is a rift to another dimension opening, followed by the emergence of Miles Morales and Gwen Stacy.
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* MentalHealthRecoveryArc: The fanfiction is one big one for Carol Danvers. She tackles her depression about Maria Rambeau's death with the help of their daughter, some anti-depressants and therapy from Vision, and the knowledge that Maria would want her to live on.
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** Beta Ray Bill decapitates Supergiant-842667.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: Carol Danvers. [[spoiler: Rhodey]] mentions the two of them having a brief fling before Carol met Maria.
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* AntagonistTitle: Not the BigBad Ultron, but his Phalanx.
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* WhamLine: Steve Rogers-842667 lists off a series of heroes that died to that world's Thanos and his forces. The list includes such powerhouses as [[{{ComicBook/Magneto}} Erik Lehnsherr]], [[ComicBook/BlackPanther T'Challa]], [[ComicBook/ProfessorX Charles Xavier]], [[{{ComicBook/Cyclops}} Scott Summers]], [[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Victor von Doom]], [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Brian Braddock, and [[ComicBook/MsMarvel2014 Kamala Khan]].
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* WhamLine: Steve Rogers-842667 lists off a series of heroes that died to that world's Thanos and his forces. The list includes such powerhouses as [[{{ComicBook/Magneto}} Erik Lehnsherr]], [[ComicBook/BlackPanther T'Challa]], [[ComicBook/ProfessorX Charles Xavier]], [[{{ComicBook/Cyclops}} Scott Summers]], [[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Victor von Doom]], [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Brian Braddock, Braddock]], and [[ComicBook/MsMarvel2014 Kamala Khan]].
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* WhamLine: Steve Rogers-842667 lists off a series of heroes that died to that world's Thanos and his forces. The list includes such powerhouses as [[[[ComicBook/Magneto]] Erik Lehnsherr]], [[ComicBook/BlackPanther T'Challa]], [[ComicBook/ProfessorX Charles Xavier]], [[[[ComicBook/Cyclops]] Scott Summers]], [[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Victor von Doom]], [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Brian Braddock, and [[ComicBook/MsMarvel2014 Kamala Khan]].
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* WhamLine: Steve Rogers-842667 lists off a series of heroes that died to that world's Thanos and his forces. The list includes such powerhouses as [[[[ComicBook/Magneto]] [[{{ComicBook/Magneto}} Erik Lehnsherr]], [[ComicBook/BlackPanther T'Challa]], [[ComicBook/ProfessorX Charles Xavier]], [[[[ComicBook/Cyclops]] [[{{ComicBook/Cyclops}} Scott Summers]], [[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Victor von Doom]], [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Brian Braddock, and [[ComicBook/MsMarvel2014 Kamala Khan]].
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* WhamLine: Steve Rogers-842667 lists off a series of heroes that died to that world's Thanos and his forces. The list includes such powerhouses as [[ComicBook/Magneto [[[[ComicBook/Magneto]] Erik Lehnsherr]], [[ComicBook/BlackPanther T'Challa]], [[ComicBook/ProfessorX Charles Xavier]], [[ComicBook/Cyclops [[[[ComicBook/Cyclops]] Scott Summers]], [[ComicBook/DoctorDoom Victor von Doom]], [[ComicBook/CaptainBritain Brian Braddock, and [[ComicBook/MsMarvel2014 Kamala Khan]].
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] '''hard''' in Chapter 7's FlashbackNightmare. [[spoiler: Carol looses an eye and a tooth, gets a massive gash sliced into her face and arm, has her nose broken, and gets impaled.]]
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* BeautyIsNeverTarnished: [[AvertedTrope Averted]] '''hard''' in Chapter 7's FlashbackNightmare. [[spoiler: Carol looses an eye and a tooth, gets a massive gash sliced into her face and arm, has her nose broken, and gets impaled.]]
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* GraveRobbing: PlayedForLaughs in Chapter 10. [[spoiler:Gamora-842667]] travels to the Mojave Desert and pulls [[spoiler:Minn-Erva's]] semi-mummified corpse from her crashed ship. The damage to the body causes it to fall into a few pieces in the robber's hands.
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* GraveRobbing: PlayedForLaughs in Chapter 10. [[spoiler:Gamora-842667]] [[spoiler: Gamora-842667]] travels to the Mojave Desert and pulls [[spoiler:Minn-Erva's]] semi-mummified corpse from her crashed ship. The damage to the body causes it to fall into a few pieces in the robber's hands.
* MyGreatestFailure: Carol's recurring guilt over Maria Rambeau's death comes across as this.
* SwordFight: Carol and Stardust engage in one that features both using [[BladeBelowTheShoulder Blades Below The Shoulder]].
** BarehandedBladeBlock: Starburst catches Carol's sword between her hands during their fight. It serves as the turning point in a fight that had, until that point, been a stalemate.
** BladeLock: The two engage in multiple over the course of the fight.
** LaserBlade: Carol's sword manifests as a photon blade.
** BarehandedBladeBlock: Starburst catches Carol's sword between her hands during their fight. It serves as the turning point in a fight that had, until that point, been a stalemate.
** BladeLock: The two engage in multiple over the course of the fight.
** LaserBlade: Carol's sword manifests as a photon blade.
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* KickTheDog: Supergiant-842667's treatment of Carol. She impersonates [[spoiler: her dead wife]] in order to obtain the Mind Stone.
