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* InASingleBound: Deconstructed. Most capes either don't have the right powerset to pull this off, or choose not to do so because of the logical drawbacks of jumping farther than you can see without anyway to guarantee a safe landing.
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* InASingleBound: Deconstructed. Most capes either don't have the right powerset to pull this off, or choose not to do so because of the logical drawbacks of jumping farther than you can see without anyway a way to guarantee a safe landing.
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* SpaceMaster: Fleet's Semblance gives him the ability to ensure that he always has space where he wants to go.
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* SpaceMaster: Fleet's Semblance Semblance, Bypass, gives him the ability to ensure that he always has space where he wants to go.
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--> "You want to look after as many dogs as you can. That's a good thing to try to do, but you have to know how far you can go. How many dogs can you keep in your shelter? How many can you care for? How much food do they need and how do you transport it? How much time do you have to devote to them? How much do they need?" He gestured vaguely with one hand. "Those are the pieces that make up the problem. It's up to you to find a way through. Ignoring parts of the problem isn't going to make them go away."
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* AlphaAndBetaWolves: Discussed between Fleet and Rachel in the latter's interlude.
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: Alec gives one when asking Brian and Lisa what their plan is after [[spoiler:Somer's Rock]].
--> We never played gang politics or traded on reputation before. Where the hell is any of this headed? It's not like we can go back to hitting jewelry stores, and after Bitch's stunt I'm pretty sure most people without powers are going to run at the sight of us. And the two of you wouldn't have been stressing over this meeting if you didn't have something in the works. Well, let's have it. What did you have planned, and is any of it still on the table after that shit show?
--> We never played gang politics or traded on reputation before. Where the hell is any of this headed? It's not like we can go back to hitting jewelry stores, and after Bitch's stunt I'm pretty sure most people without powers are going to run at the sight of us. And the two of you wouldn't have been stressing over this meeting if you didn't have something in the works. Well, let's have it. What did you have planned, and is any of it still on the table after that shit show?
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: ArmorPiercingQuestion:
** Alec gives one when asking Brian and Lisa what their plan is after [[spoiler:Somer's Rock]].
--> We ---> "We never played gang politics or traded on reputation before. Where the hell is any of this headed? It's not like we can go back to hitting jewelry stores, and after Bitch's stunt I'm pretty sure most people without powers are going to run at the sight of us. And " He explained. "And the two of you wouldn't have been stressing over this meeting if you didn't have something in the works. Well, let's have it. What did you have planned, and is any of it still on the table after that shit show?show?"
** Fleet gives Rachel one after they hang out for the first time.
--> "You want to look after as many dogs as you can. That's a good thing to try to do, but you have to know how far you can go. How many dogs can you keep in your shelter? How many can you care for? How much food do they need and how do you transport it? How much time do you have to devote to them? How much do they need?" He gestured vaguely with one hand. "Those are the pieces that make up the problem. It's up to you to find a way through. Ignoring parts of the problem isn't going to make them go away."
** Alec gives one when asking Brian and Lisa what their plan is after [[spoiler:Somer's Rock]].
** Fleet gives Rachel one after they hang out for the first time.
--> "You want to look after as many dogs as you can. That's a good thing to try to do, but you have to know how far you can go. How many dogs can you keep in your shelter? How many can you care for? How much food do they need and how do you transport it? How much time do you have to devote to them? How much do they need?" He gestured vaguely with one hand. "Those are the pieces that make up the problem. It's up to you to find a way through. Ignoring parts of the problem isn't going to make them go away."
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* PrescienceByAnalysis: In addition to Survey, Fleet can also do this, though at a smaller scale.
--> '''Fleet:''' ''(asked if Survey is telling him what he's telling Rachel)'' No. She's not good at this kind of thing.\\
'''Rachel:''' What, seeing the future?\\
'''Fleet:''' Seeing the present and considering the future. Or considering a specific future. In any system you have components, responses, and results. Technically there are unlimited results, but only so many paths make sense. The more you know, the better you can understand the landscape and the paths people will take. You have to know what to focus on and what to ignore. Survey likes to know everything, which is good, but not always helpful.\\
'''Rachel:''' But it's the same, right? You can see the future?\\
'''Fleet:''' I can make predictions based on information. More information makes it easier. Longer timeframes make it harder. It's like navigating through fog. More information can make it better, and you can only see so far.
--> '''Fleet:''' ''(asked if Survey is telling him what he's telling Rachel)'' No. She's not good at this kind of thing.\\
'''Rachel:''' What, seeing the future?\\
'''Fleet:''' Seeing the present and considering the future. Or considering a specific future. In any system you have components, responses, and results. Technically there are unlimited results, but only so many paths make sense. The more you know, the better you can understand the landscape and the paths people will take. You have to know what to focus on and what to ignore. Survey likes to know everything, which is good, but not always helpful.\\
'''Rachel:''' But it's the same, right? You can see the future?\\
'''Fleet:''' I can make predictions based on information. More information makes it easier. Longer timeframes make it harder. It's like navigating through fog. More information can make it better, and you can only see so far.
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* SpaceMaster: Fleet's Semblance gives him the ability to ensure that he always has space where he wants to go.
--> Bypass. The ability to create routes free of obstacles. Effectively spatial corridors that 'bypassed' whatever was in the way. I wondered if it had any similarities to my own [[spoiler:Avoidance]] ability, but Fleet's Semblance worked on a more tangible level, meaning he could provide routes for himself and other people.\\
Frankly, it wasn't anything we couldn't accomplish with other powers or technology, though the effective creation of space where it was needed had helped in this specific situation. Plus, Semblances were personal. Apparently finding the perfect route was something foundational to Fleet's experience. It meant that he could use it more naturally and precisely than other technology based effects, and that wasn't considering what could be done with focuses or enhancement items.
--> Bypass. The ability to create routes free of obstacles. Effectively spatial corridors that 'bypassed' whatever was in the way. I wondered if it had any similarities to my own [[spoiler:Avoidance]] ability, but Fleet's Semblance worked on a more tangible level, meaning he could provide routes for himself and other people.\\
Frankly, it wasn't anything we couldn't accomplish with other powers or technology, though the effective creation of space where it was needed had helped in this specific situation. Plus, Semblances were personal. Apparently finding the perfect route was something foundational to Fleet's experience. It meant that he could use it more naturally and precisely than other technology based effects, and that wasn't considering what could be done with focuses or enhancement items.
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* InternalReveal: Joe finally finds out about the fact that his powers come from works of fiction after [[spoiler:he gets a power that gives him [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} Magic Circuits]]]].
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* InternalReveal: InternalReveal:
** Joe finally finds out about the fact that his powers come from works of fiction after [[spoiler:he gets a power that gives him [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} MagicCircuits]]]].Circuits]]]].
** [[spoiler:A couple of PRT agents accidentally discover Taylor is Lady Khepri when they check her hospital records from the January incident and read a mention of her claiming to feel and control insects.]]
** Joe finally finds out about the fact that his powers come from works of fiction after [[spoiler:he gets a power that gives him [[Franchise/{{Nasuverse}} Magic
** [[spoiler:A couple of PRT agents accidentally discover Taylor is Lady Khepri when they check her hospital records from the January incident and read a mention of her claiming to feel and control insects.]]
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* CondescendingCompassion: One of Joe's main issues with his family is their insistence that he's completely unable to live on his own, and telling him to return home in concern.
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* SpottingTheThread: Armsmaster and Dragon are able to deduce in Interlude 95.4 that Garment is connected to Apeiron thanks to studying videos of the former and recordings and scraps left behind by the latter, as this allows them to realize that similarities between Garment's advanced clothing and some of Apeiron's demonstrated capabilities.
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* SpottingTheThread: SpottingTheThread:
** Armsmaster and Dragon are able to deduce in Interlude 95.4 that Garment is connected to Apeiron thanks to studying videos of the former and recordings and scraps left behind by the latter, as this allows them to realize that similarities between Garment's advanced clothing and some of Apeiron's demonstratedcapabilities.capabilities.
** Chapter 103 reveals that Accord has realized that Apeiron is altruistic in nature and that the Celestial Forge is not only imperceptible to Thinker effects, but is providing false data to all forms of precognition. This is thanks to him relying on a mundane, if somewhat obsessive, analysis of everything the Celestial Forge has done, the effects of their actions, and the fact that models founded on precognition consistently failed when used against the Celestial Forge in a consistent manner.
** Armsmaster and Dragon are able to deduce in Interlude 95.4 that Garment is connected to Apeiron thanks to studying videos of the former and recordings and scraps left behind by the latter, as this allows them to realize that similarities between Garment's advanced clothing and some of Apeiron's demonstrated
** Chapter 103 reveals that Accord has realized that Apeiron is altruistic in nature and that the Celestial Forge is not only imperceptible to Thinker effects, but is providing false data to all forms of precognition. This is thanks to him relying on a mundane, if somewhat obsessive, analysis of everything the Celestial Forge has done, the effects of their actions, and the fact that models founded on precognition consistently failed when used against the Celestial Forge in a consistent manner.
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* RightForTheWrongReasons: Uppercrust suggests that the reason Parian was upset about him mentioning opening an LGBT bar in Brockton Bay is because of the Elite's tendency to force independent capes into the organization, which is correct... but bases it on his idea that Parian is in love with Sabah.
