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* HehHehYouSaidX: Scootaloo after Sonic makes up a joke about cutie marks.
-->'''Sonic:''' "Huh, so that's it. And here I thought everyone just got tattoos on their rumps as a fashion statement."
-->'''Scootaloo:''' (giggling) "He said rump..."
-->'''Sonic:''' "Huh, so that's it. And here I thought everyone just got tattoos on their rumps as a fashion statement."
-->'''Scootaloo:''' (giggling) "He said rump..."
** Princess Celestia demotes Umbra as punishment for her transgressions as a royal guard and antagonizing Sonic. She is forced to watch over and train any recruits looking to join the royal guard. Umbra sees this as the worst thing that could have happened to her.
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** [[spoiler: In chapter 10, the Egg Gila's ultimate weapon is named the power laser, coming from the two-player mode of [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 power laser an older game.]]]]
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** [[spoiler: In chapter 10, the Egg Gila's ultimate weapon is named the power laser, Power Laser, coming from the two-player mode of [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 power laser Power Laser, an older game.]]]]
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** Applejack calls Sonic Sugarhog, a nickname [[WesternAnimation/SonicTheHedgehogSatAM Bunnie Rabbot]] also called him.
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** Chapter 12 has everyone in the council room call out Captain Umbra for severely injuring ponies during a training exercise and ignoring Eggman's attack on Canterlot to fight Sonic.
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** With the help of Elements of Harmony, Sonic transforms into a form that looks like [[Anime/DragonBall Ultra Instinct]].
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** With the help of Elements of Harmony, Sonic transforms into a form that looks like [[Anime/DragonBall [[Anime/DragonBallSuper Ultra Instinct]].
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** Pinkie Pie calls Sonic by his old prototype name Mr. Needlemouse when they first meet.
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** Pinkie Pie calls Sonic by a popular mistranslation of his old prototype name Mr. Needlemouse (usually thought to be his prototype name) when they first meet.
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It can also be read [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12814775/1/ here]].
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--> '''Rainbow Dash:''' ''[[FurryConfusion "Hedgehog? What kind of hedgehog is blue, stands on two legs and talks?"]]''
--> '''Sonic:''' ''(while lifting an eyebrow) [[TomatoInTheMirror "Said the talking, rainbow-haired horse with wings?"]]''
--> '''Sonic:''' ''(while lifting an eyebrow) [[TomatoInTheMirror "Said the talking, rainbow-haired horse with wings?"]]''
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'''Sonic:''' ''(while lifting an eyebrow) [[TomatoInTheMirror "Said the talking, rainbow-haired horse with wings?"]]''
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** Eggman’s [[EvilSpeechOfEvil first big monologue]] to Sonic contains several. It mainly references Snively’s words from Issue #200 of the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie comics]], but also includes a few lines from [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 notable]], [[WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries older renditions]] of [[ComicBook/{{Darkseid}} animated villains]]. The last line of the chapter repeats Eggman’s intended final farewell to him [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 from a past adventure.]]
** Most Equestrians [[InsistentTerminology continually mistake Sonic’s species]], referring to him as a [[IAmNotWeasel rat]], which annoys him thanks to [[VideoGame/SonicStorybookSeries past experience]]. Subverted when [[DumbAssHasAPoint Garble of all creatures is the first one to get it right]].
** Most Equestrians [[InsistentTerminology continually mistake Sonic’s species]], referring to him as a [[IAmNotWeasel rat]], which annoys him thanks to [[VideoGame/SonicStorybookSeries past experience]]. Subverted when [[DumbAssHasAPoint Garble of all creatures is the first one to get it right]].
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** Eggman’s Eggman's [[EvilSpeechOfEvil first big monologue]] to Sonic contains several. It mainly references Snively’s Snively's words from Issue #200 of the [[ComicBook/SonicTheHedgehogArchieComics Archie comics]], but also includes a few lines from [[WesternAnimation/TeenageMutantNinjaTurtles2003 notable]], [[WesternAnimation/SupermanTheAnimatedSeries older renditions]] of [[ComicBook/{{Darkseid}} animated villains]]. The last line of the chapter repeats Eggman’s Eggman's intended final farewell to him [[VideoGame/SonicAdventure2 from a past adventure.]]
** Most Equestrians [[InsistentTerminology continually mistakeSonic’s Sonic's species]], referring to him as a [[IAmNotWeasel rat]], which annoys him thanks to [[VideoGame/SonicStorybookSeries past experience]]. Subverted when [[DumbAssHasAPoint Garble of all creatures is the first one to get it right]].
** Most Equestrians [[InsistentTerminology continually mistake
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** In chapter 11, Sonic chastises Rainbow Dash for thinking she can take on Doctor Eggman, pointing out that Canterlot nearly fell if he hadn't been there. Sonic states that regardless of his antics, Eggman can still be dangerous. [[spoiler:Later proven right when Celestia [[AssassinationAttempt is almost shot in the head by an E-1000]] shortly after.]]
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** In chapter 11, Sonic chastises Rainbow Dash for thinking she can take on Doctor Eggman, pointing out that Canterlot nearly fell if he hadn't been there. Sonic states that regardless of his antics, Eggman can still be dangerous. [[spoiler:Later proven right when Celestia [[AssassinationAttempt is almost shot in the head by an E-1000]] shortly after.]]]]
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** In chapter 11, Sonic chastises Rainbow Dash for thinking she can take on Doctor Eggman, pointing out that Canterlot nearly fell if he hadn't been there. Sonic states that regardless of his antics, Eggman can still be dangerous. [[spoiler:Later proven right when Celestia [[AssassinationAttemptis [[AssassinationAttempt is almost shot in the head by an E-1000]] shortly after.]]
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** In chapter 11, Sonic chastises Rainbow Dash for thinking she can take on Doctor Eggman, pointing out that Canterlot nearly fell if he hadn't been there. Sonic states that regardless of his antics, Eggman can still be dangerous. [[spoiler:Later proven right when Celestia [[AssassinationAttemptis almost shot in the head by an E-1000]] shortly after.]]]]
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** In chapter 11, Sonic chastises Rainbow Dash for thinking she can take on Doctor Eggman, pointing out that Canterlot nearly fell if he hadn't been there. Sonic states that regardless of his antics, Eggman can still be dangerous. [[spoiler:Later proven right when Celestia [[AssassinationAttemptis almost shot in the head by an E-1000]] shortly after.]]]]]]
