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* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
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* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up AmazonianBeauty and brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
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* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up AmazonianBeauty and brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
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* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up AmazonianBeauty and brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
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* FemaleGaze: Coco couldn't stop staring at Jaune's ass on and off their whole date, even comparing it to Fox and [[BiTheWay Velvet's]].
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* FemaleGaze: Coco couldn't stop staring at Jaune's ass on and off their whole date, even comparing it to Fox and [[BiTheWay Velvet's]].Velvet's.
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* TheDreaded: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
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* TheDreaded: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
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* ParrotExposition: In Chapter 11, ''VideoGame/MetalGear'' is mentioned as an in-universe book series. Naturally, Blake repeats the title.
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* ParrotExposition: In Chapter 11, ''VideoGame/MetalGear'' is mentioned as an in-universe book series. Naturally, Blake repeats the title.title in question form the first time she hears it.
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* Yandere: Hilariously Raven is falling into this regarding her son, even considering coming out of her hiding spot and ''cleaving Coco in half with her Katana!'' She still considers murdering Coco her second option.
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* Yandere: {{Yandere}}: Hilariously Raven is falling into this regarding her son, even considering coming out of her hiding spot and ''cleaving Coco in half with her Katana!'' She still considers murdering Coco her second option.
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* VibroWeapon: What Raven turned Crocea Mors into. As a High-Frequency blade, not only is it even more one-of-a-kind, but can now cut through even the most durable metals and Grimm armour.
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* VibroWeapon: What Raven turned Crocea Mors into. As a High-Frequency blade, not only is it even more one-of-a-kind, but can now cut through even the most durable metals and Grimm armour.armour.
* Yandere: Hilariously Raven is falling into this regarding her son, even considering coming out of her hiding spot and ''cleaving Coco in half with her Katana!'' She still considers murdering Coco her second option.
* Yandere: Hilariously Raven is falling into this regarding her son, even considering coming out of her hiding spot and ''cleaving Coco in half with her Katana!'' She still considers murdering Coco her second option.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction title by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3675288/Seeker-Pendragon Seeker-Pendragon]] about Raven Branwen becoming Jaune Arc's mother after his family is butchered by Grimm. Seeker has done a good job of capturing Raven's personality, and how that would affect Jaune's personality and world view. Plus, under Raven's care and training, Jaune Arc (aka Jaune Branwen) becomes quite the force of nature. It is 12 chapters long currently.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction title by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3675288/Seeker-Pendragon Seeker-Pendragon]] about Raven Branwen becoming Jaune Arc's mother after his family is butchered by Grimm. Seeker has done a good job of capturing Raven's personality, and how that would affect Jaune's personality and world view. Plus, under Raven's care and training, Jaune Arc (aka Jaune Branwen) becomes quite the force of nature. It is 12 13 chapters long currently.
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* FemaleGaze: Coco couldn't stop staring at Jaune's ass on and off their whole date, even comparing it to Fox and [[BiTheWay Velvet's]].
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!! [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] provides examples of:
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* TheDreaded[=/=]TerrorHero: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
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* TheDreaded[=/=]TerrorHero: TheDreaded: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
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* ParrotExposition: In Chapter 11, ''VideoGame/MetalGear'' is mentioned as an in-universe book series. Naturally, Blake repeats the title.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] is an AlternateUniverse fanfiction title by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/3675288/Seeker-Pendragon Seeker-Pendragon]] about Raven Branwen becoming Jaune Arc's mother after his family is butchered by Grimm. Seeker has done a good job of capturing Raven's personality, and how that would affect Jaune's personality and world view. Plus, under Raven's care and training, Jaune Arc (aka Jaune Branwen) becomes quite the force of nature. It is 12 chapters long currently.
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!! [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] provides examples of:
* AbsurdlySharpBlade: What Jaune's sword Crocea Mors was before Raven got her hands on it. It has only gotten even sharper thanks to Raven's modifications; it can now slice through practically anything. Raven's red Katana also qualifies.
* ActionMom: Oh hell yes. Raven is one of the most dangerous huntresses in Remnant, and she is widely feared and respected. She is also a committed and loving mother to Jaune.
* AdaptationalBadass: Jaune Arc, known in this timeline as Jaune ''Branwen''.
* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up AmazonianBeauty and brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
* BlackKnight[=/=]TheDragon: [[spoiler:The end result after The Witch was done with Joan Arc. Joan went on to slaughter many in service to the witch, including all 4 maidens. When she died, her family continued serving as The Witch's enforcers and second hand.]]
* BullyHunter: Raven and Jaune, very much so, the former during her time in Beacon as a student, and now her son as well 15-20 years later. Raven straight up hated bullies, while Jaune loathes them because in his mind they sully the reputation of Huntsmen/Huntswomen everywhere with their cruel actions.
* CrazyPrepared: Raven modified Jaune's weapon because she knows of Grimm with armor so tough and thick that even Crocea Mors would have a hard time cutting into it, so she increased it's cutting power, thus preventing Jaune from ever having to face that problem.
* DeathByOriginStory: Jaune's entire family was slaughtered by Grimm when he was only an infant before Raven found him.
* DeathGlare: Raven has a downright horrifying one; it is so bad it made [[BringMyBrownPants a young Neo pee herself]]! Jaune seems to have adopted it as well.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Jaune has done this to Cardin Winchester twice: once as a child for trying to take his ice cream, and the second time at Beacon for picking on Velvet; specifically, Jaune ''broke Cardin's arm and leg'' not just for bullying her, but also for sullying the reputation of Huntsmen in doing so. Raven also did this when she was a student at Beacon.
* DoomedHometown: The village where Jaune's family lived was razed by a massive Grimm attack. No one but Jaune survived.
* TheDreaded[=/=]TerrorHero: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
* HappilyAdopted: Jaune by Raven. They may not be blood-related, but Raven considers him her son and a Branwen, regardless of his blood relations.
* KnightInShiningArmor: [[spoiler: What Jaune's distant Ancestor [[FallenHero Joan]] was before being corrupted by The Witch]].
* KnightInSourArmor: Raven is very much this. She is well aware she can't save everyone, and therefore will ignore a situation even she believes she could not handle it, but she still continues fighting because she wants the world to be a better place. Jaune as well, as taught to him by Raven herself.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Currently, only Ozpin, Glynda, Raven, and Qrow are privy to Jaune's true family and heritage. Jaune has absolutely no idea he's an Arc, and Raven would prefer it stay that way.
* MamaBear: Oh good god yes! Raven wouldn't hesitate to cut down anyone who threatens Jaune, and is willing to take on [[BigBad The Witch]] to save him from his [[VillainousLegacy family's dark legacy]].
* MissingMom: Raven to Yang. Raven left after Taiyang, Yang's dad, disappointed her with his "weak will", and also believes [[LikeFatherLikeSon Yang inherited her father's weakness]].
* OverprotectiveMom: Raven has a nasty tendency to scare away any of her son's potential female friends/suitors. In her mind, if they fear her, they are not good enough for Jaune.
* SoleSurvivor[=/=]LastOfHisKind: Jaune is not only the only survivor of his razed village, but the last surviving member of the Arc family as well, not that he is aware of it.
* VibroWeapon: What Raven turned Crocea Mors into. As a High-Frequency blade, not only is it even more one-of-a-kind, but can now cut through even the most durable metals and Grimm armour.
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!! [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11856540/1/Branwen Branwen]] provides examples of:
* AbsurdlySharpBlade: What Jaune's sword Crocea Mors was before Raven got her hands on it. It has only gotten even sharper thanks to Raven's modifications; it can now slice through practically anything. Raven's red Katana also qualifies.
* ActionMom: Oh hell yes. Raven is one of the most dangerous huntresses in Remnant, and she is widely feared and respected. She is also a committed and loving mother to Jaune.
* AdaptationalBadass: Jaune Arc, known in this timeline as Jaune ''Branwen''.
* BadassFamily: The Branwen/Rose family. Taiyang, Qrow and Raven were or still are Elite Huntsmen/Huntresses. And the Kids? Ruby is a hyperactive scythe-wielding speedster and FriendlySniper, Yang is a Straight-up AmazonianBeauty and brawler with a hot temper, and Jaune is calm, collected, and knows at least 10 different ways to kill you before you even hit the ground. Jaune's birth family was also this before they were wiped out.
* BlackKnight[=/=]TheDragon: [[spoiler:The end result after The Witch was done with Joan Arc. Joan went on to slaughter many in service to the witch, including all 4 maidens. When she died, her family continued serving as The Witch's enforcers and second hand.]]
* BullyHunter: Raven and Jaune, very much so, the former during her time in Beacon as a student, and now her son as well 15-20 years later. Raven straight up hated bullies, while Jaune loathes them because in his mind they sully the reputation of Huntsmen/Huntswomen everywhere with their cruel actions.
* CrazyPrepared: Raven modified Jaune's weapon because she knows of Grimm with armor so tough and thick that even Crocea Mors would have a hard time cutting into it, so she increased it's cutting power, thus preventing Jaune from ever having to face that problem.
* DeathByOriginStory: Jaune's entire family was slaughtered by Grimm when he was only an infant before Raven found him.
* DeathGlare: Raven has a downright horrifying one; it is so bad it made [[BringMyBrownPants a young Neo pee herself]]! Jaune seems to have adopted it as well.
* DisproportionateRetribution: Jaune has done this to Cardin Winchester twice: once as a child for trying to take his ice cream, and the second time at Beacon for picking on Velvet; specifically, Jaune ''broke Cardin's arm and leg'' not just for bullying her, but also for sullying the reputation of Huntsmen in doing so. Raven also did this when she was a student at Beacon.
* DoomedHometown: The village where Jaune's family lived was razed by a massive Grimm attack. No one but Jaune survived.
* TheDreaded[=/=]TerrorHero: Raven, by a country mile. She is infamous throughout Remnant for her combat prowess and merciless nature to Huntsman, civilian and criminal alike. Criminals are so afraid of her in fact, that a crook being questioned by Qrow ''died of a heart attack'' at the mention of her name! And even Qrow himself, her brother and elite Huntsman in his own right, admits to fearing her, much to her disappointment. The only people who don't fear her are her son, Ozpin, Glynda Goodwitch, Summer Rose before her death, and possibly in time, Blake Belladonna and Pyrrha Nikos.
* HappilyAdopted: Jaune by Raven. They may not be blood-related, but Raven considers him her son and a Branwen, regardless of his blood relations.
* KnightInShiningArmor: [[spoiler: What Jaune's distant Ancestor [[FallenHero Joan]] was before being corrupted by The Witch]].
* KnightInSourArmor: Raven is very much this. She is well aware she can't save everyone, and therefore will ignore a situation even she believes she could not handle it, but she still continues fighting because she wants the world to be a better place. Jaune as well, as taught to him by Raven herself.
* LockedOutOfTheLoop: Currently, only Ozpin, Glynda, Raven, and Qrow are privy to Jaune's true family and heritage. Jaune has absolutely no idea he's an Arc, and Raven would prefer it stay that way.
* MamaBear: Oh good god yes! Raven wouldn't hesitate to cut down anyone who threatens Jaune, and is willing to take on [[BigBad The Witch]] to save him from his [[VillainousLegacy family's dark legacy]].
* MissingMom: Raven to Yang. Raven left after Taiyang, Yang's dad, disappointed her with his "weak will", and also believes [[LikeFatherLikeSon Yang inherited her father's weakness]].
* OverprotectiveMom: Raven has a nasty tendency to scare away any of her son's potential female friends/suitors. In her mind, if they fear her, they are not good enough for Jaune.
* SoleSurvivor[=/=]LastOfHisKind: Jaune is not only the only survivor of his razed village, but the last surviving member of the Arc family as well, not that he is aware of it.
* VibroWeapon: What Raven turned Crocea Mors into. As a High-Frequency blade, not only is it even more one-of-a-kind, but can now cut through even the most durable metals and Grimm armour.
